A song from my hometown says something similar. "When men live on love, there will be no more misery, soldiers will be troubadours and we will be dead, my brother."
Ive git tears in my eyes. thank you so much. somenight, i m dreaming of a mankind living and doinig like the one in your story. thanks so much. have no more words.
Good story and I liked it a lot plus I like the picture you used and I like how the shock the slimes had when they found out the ship was a military vessel but got turned into a museum
Glad you liked it, and I'm extra glad that you liked the picture too! I spent a while getting just the right one for it, usually doesn't take me as long as this one took. Glad it was worth my struggle.
@@Teardehawkee Well, good luck with your creating! :) If you ever start a channel to share those stories, let me know! I'll check them out, and, hopefully, give you a shoutout here!
Most of the hfy has 2 real issues 1. Size of forces, too many vessels 2. Size of casualties and fleet and ground forces (billions and the for every killed alien 2 more appear
Ugh, sorry about that! Somehow it didn't get fixed as I went through for edits. Like gillriet said, it's because the period. So I gotta go through the story and change everything over. Looks like I missed them in this video like an idiot! ...In me defense, this was the last one I did for the channel for that day after going at it for at least 14 hours straight. We now know the limit of how long I can sit and do edits. Hahaha
Nope, sorry about that one. It was the end of a long day when I was doing edits and I managed to forget to change Dr............. Bob. Lol Glad you liked the story though! :)
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A song from my hometown says something similar. "When men live on love, there will be no more misery, soldiers will be troubadours and we will be dead, my brother."
I like it!
A nice story where nobody is trying kill each other, thank you. I liked the names of the Holups.
Glad you liked it! :)
Ive git tears in my eyes. thank you so much. somenight, i m dreaming of a mankind living and doinig like the one in your story. thanks so much. have no more words.
Glad you liked this story so much! :D
The Captain is not concerned about his ship? After seeing to his crew, his ship and cargo would have been his first concern.
Well crafted tale with believable characters and lessons especially relevant today! Liked it a lot!
Awesome, glad you liked it! :)
Good story and I liked it a lot plus I like the picture you used and I like how the shock the slimes had when they found out the ship was a military vessel but got turned into a museum
Glad you liked it, and I'm extra glad that you liked the picture too! I spent a while getting just the right one for it, usually doesn't take me as long as this one took. Glad it was worth my struggle.
Quite a twist ... not an active war ship and not even a diplomatic mission but civilians helping those in need.
Made the story a little more interesting! I liked it. :)
@Sci-FiVault always nice to have a story with a twist
excellent
Thanks!
I thought this story was going to amount to something when I started reading it but it turned into a kumbaya story.
If you want the pew pew version of this story, there are several like it on this channel too! :) I like to put up a bit of a variety for my viewers.
Very good story but the narrative needs more work!
Sorry about that, trying to improve things on that front as best and as fast as I can! :)
Glad you liked the story!
AI doesn't recognise the difference between a full stop at the end of a sentence and one after an abbreviation.
awesome story!
Glad you liked it! :)
Simply Kudos. AI still needs to learn the period after Dr. but GREAT!
Sorry about that one, I normally catch it before I send it off to Mr. ... AI. (I put in the pause there to poke fun at it. Lol)
@@Sci-FiVault No big deal - good one
God does exist and it is the humans. Peace, love and jubilee.
This was a great story.
I'd love to create a story like this.
Interaction of species. Of learning and not war.
Glad you liked it!
No better way to write than to just start! Write fan fiction, short stories, random ideas, we all have to start somewhere.
@Sci-FiVault
I do a lot of fantasy stories myself.
And stories dealing with nice guys.
And always, in the end, what happens to us, nice guys.
Sigh!
@@Teardehawkee Well, good luck with your creating! :) If you ever start a channel to share those stories, let me know! I'll check them out, and, hopefully, give you a shoutout here!
Most of the hfy has 2 real issues 1. Size of forces, too many vessels 2. Size of casualties and fleet and ground forces (billions and the for every killed alien 2 more appear
it is some time a lot better dipomatic as use war ships and if you help other it will be she com and help you wen you need help
True!
Why is there a gap between Dr. and the Dr's name it sounds silly
The robot reads Dr. as the end of a sentence because theres a period. 😅 robots suck lol
Ugh, sorry about that! Somehow it didn't get fixed as I went through for edits. Like gillriet said, it's because the period. So I gotta go through the story and change everything over. Looks like I missed them in this video like an idiot!
...In me defense, this was the last one I did for the channel for that day after going at it for at least 14 hours straight. We now know the limit of how long I can sit and do edits. Hahaha
It's being read by an ai
@@gillriet773how dare you disrespect your robot overlords.
@@CountryAndProud LOL!!!
Look the story is good but this AI speaking I mean is this a joke? Dr...
Nope, sorry about that one. It was the end of a long day when I was doing edits and I managed to forget to change Dr............. Bob. Lol
Glad you liked the story though! :)