Hmm. No plotholes, great vocabulary, lack of ressesive use of phrases/sentences, and very lively characters. There was even enough details for the main stars of the story and the environment to imagine the scenes unfolding if this is one's first time reading this. I actually think this is one of the rare stories that didn't use AI. And if they did... then that was better than what others have done. Great story! I hope there are more stories of the same quality on this channel I can explore.
@hfyuniversee And you have succeeded in making someone who isn't too deep into sci-fi(not exactly a tech savvy person) enjoy your story. I will do better with writing fanficion than sci-fi, haha.
Loved this story. Fast paced, good details, good characters and plot most importantly it had been edited so that there wasn’t anything to jar the reader out of the story. No cliche words or horrible grammar, thank you.
This was the funniest/ most dis respectful video of this kind I've seen. Keep up the great work. As always, all the best to everyone. Chef Scott 👨🏻🍳
Another Martinez well at least it wasn't another Chen, what's happened to the rest of the civilisation of Earth are they all gone.
Of course, they are gone. Why else are there only 6 names left?
Hmm. No plotholes, great vocabulary, lack of ressesive use of phrases/sentences, and very lively characters. There was even enough details for the main stars of the story and the environment to imagine the scenes unfolding if this is one's first time reading this.
I actually think this is one of the rare stories that didn't use AI. And if they did... then that was better than what others have done. Great story! I hope there are more stories of the same quality on this channel I can explore.
Thanks for the kind words! I'm always striving for originality, and I'm glad you noticed!
@hfyuniversee And you have succeeded in making someone who isn't too deep into sci-fi(not exactly a tech savvy person) enjoy your story. I will do better with writing fanficion than sci-fi, haha.
Loved this story. Fast paced, good details, good characters and plot most importantly it had been edited so that there wasn’t anything to jar the reader out of the story. No cliche words or horrible grammar, thank you.
That's my kind of girl! ❤
I suppose that someone that that grown up in an artfical environment "light rain" could be considered a danger. 😅