Meow, you made my day. Misty is second best to Willow :D And you made a system story with a different premise and plot, that really came out as great! The only problem was the first several minutes, the whole explanation of the past was confusing. My bet? Male lead was George and female lead was Willow 🤣 11/10 !
30:08 "The sturdy's hard bed wouldn't be kind to my back" damn that's one hell of a vicious woman he got. Good luck dude and try to remain in one piece 😂
as the saying goes actions have consequences she read the novel and not once thought her actions where like the book its like the saying that people would shun the actions of others but when doing those same actions they see no fault in it the meaning of being a hypocrite
Even though I’ve seen a few similar stories like this, the mc has to find his old ‘love’ and child to sort out the problem that is but this one was kinda of different…I liked it
Damn. I'm fully on the MC's side, but I do feel a bit bad for Paul. He got hurt, and there was no making things right. Sins of the mother visited on the son, in some respects.
Paul was the most unlucky. no one loved him, everyone just blame him. He don't get anyone's love nor his mother or his father. He was a child and he craved for love but only got everyones hate. Most unfortunate character in the story.
His father loved him. Became a stay at home father just be with him. But he didn’t care for him until he no longer could be with him. The love he craved he threw away.
@@Ribbonzarkuraspear TBH he was a kid at that time and kids learn from there surroundings, if MC woul have shown this guts at the beginning maybe paul would have been a different person.
@ So being a kid gives the excuse to purposely hurt your father who takes care of you. To encourage with mothers desire to be with her first love. The only reason why the kid wanted him back was because dude went back to his former wife. Kid values were instilled by grandfather like the MC said actions have consequences. He made an adult decision can’t go back to being a kid when it doesn’t work out.
@@Ribbonzarkuraspear in real life, we as individuals make mistakes, because of it, people will get hurt from the people they love and care for. People harm each other without realizing what they have done. I'm sure we hurt our family, friends, loved ones and other people without a single thought but in return, it can be vice versa to us when receiving from them as well. We sometimes don't hold accountable and responsibility before it's too late. For example, when we have conflict with our parents and when they passed away we felt negative and conflicted emotions. We sometimes ask and wish we could have done differently when they were alive. At the same time it's up to you to be willing to forgive or be forgiven. There are some scenarios, this ends up being single parents with children because parents are unable to revolve their differences. Neither parents are willing to mend their differences, the bond is shattered causing the children unable to experience a harmonious family structure and the outcomes are determined by their actions including the children as well. This will affect the children's upbringing and outcome when reaching adulthood. However regardless of the reason, life moves on.
@@Ribbonzarkuraspear it happens in real life too. We sometimes hurt our family, friends, loved ones and other people without realizing it. It's up to you, are willing to forgive or be forgiven. There are times we hurt our parents and when they are no longer here anymore, we ask and wish things could be different. In return, we will have to experience it just as our parents. Life moves on.
This story is interesting but it's a very difficult situation to be in. Two worlds collide and coexist at the end which unexpected. It's kinda suck to be in Paul's shoes especially he wants to be with his dad. Despite Paul had a mean streak because of his upbringing by his mom(Carolina) and grandfather. He really wants to be forgiven and redemption from MC. It's sad for Paul to never get a chance to have a father figure. There is a sense of jealousy in Paul when interacting with his half sister and later on Paul end up in despair without a father who love his daughter more than him. In this scenario, it can happen in the real life because there are times, tensions in the family can or can't resolve on its own. There are times family bonds can be dissolved and forgotten. At the same time, life moves on. Sometimes one parent will leave beyond and start a new family. While the old family is struggling to cope and adjusted over time. This will cause the old family to feel abandoned and resentment. There seems to be a sibling rivalry in this story that can be related in reality. Competition and favoritism is common in the family. It can leave a scar on the person. It's kinda sad story in a way but at the same time it's understandable what MC have to go through.
Next time there should be a small flow-chart of different universes to explain ML transmigration properly. Although I Know Carolina won't give up Paul but still he should have tried to make adopt him and make them siblings. Carolina is your typical trash, she was rooting for ML when he was in old novel world but when he returned, she treated him same. That intradimenstional trade thing is good addition, imagine MC who went to three worlds for mission getting his ass handed over to him by all the FL's cuz he was fooling around. After that please make Makoto an intradimenstonal entity with Hive brain.
A very flawed story so if that's something you would like to avoid then this isn't for you. We got a system based narrative, two worlds that somehow merged safely together, female leads that aren't afraid to go where it hurts, and children paying for others deeds. Despite all that I would absolutely recommend this story, the AI may have gone out there but whoa if the concept isn't worth delving into. Will definitely be enjoying this story multiple times, here's hoping for the next one they get the worlds sorted and for another female lead that are kind but dangerous to show up again.
Seriously, why do all these MCs continue acting like horrible fathers? While I understand the mother and son should deal with the consequences of their actions and behavior, especially in the beginning, if you continue to always push your own child away forever, then they're no better than those who treated them wrong in the beginning. As a father, you should always push your children to become better than yourself by actually being in and a part of their life. Always trying to teach them right from wrong, even more so after they have made mistakes. Unfortunately, it seems every MC just wants to pretend they're better than their own child and ex and don't owe them anything, yet that's still your child, and they act like they shouldn't even try to help support the child, and usually force the mother into horrible relationships because they're based on her trying to survive without anyone and take care of their child alone. When Mr. Chen started talking badly about his son's mother. He should have ended that man's career and reputation on the spot. Then put them into an actual safe home and environment, even if he wants nothing to do with them or ever wants to see them, it'll always be the best option to be the better person. That way, both children could understand and learn how to behave and treat others because of poor Paul, even though he was an unruly child. That's still his son, and he's a shit father.
dude the concept was amazing and the story really based on this quote - you reap what you sows
I love that Misty xD She has the quality of a great wife and mother :D
A kind woman who is not afraid to hurt people when violence arises. Definitely a woman I would want.
Meow, you made my day. Misty is second best to Willow :D
And you made a system story with a different premise and plot, that really came out as great!
The only problem was the first several minutes, the whole explanation of the past was confusing.
My bet? Male lead was George and female lead was Willow 🤣
11/10 !
I love this story. This should be a movie.
Wait so he was first in the fiction world,then transported to the real world and back to the fiction world?!
Maybe both worlds are fictional
That’s confusing
Da hell
First in a fictional world then in the real then back in the fictional one which as started to merge with the real one
1st was fiction
2nd was real world
3rd he went back to the fiction world. However both world was colliding
30:08 "The sturdy's hard bed wouldn't be kind to my back" damn that's one hell of a vicious woman he got. Good luck dude and try to remain in one piece 😂
If Misty was the one who decorated the home, then she definitely knew what she was doing.
as the saying goes actions have consequences she read the novel and not once thought her actions where like the book its like the saying that people would shun the actions of others but when doing those same actions they see no fault in it the meaning of being a hypocrite
Even though I’ve seen a few similar stories like this, the mc has to find his old ‘love’ and child to sort out the problem that is but this one was kinda of different…I liked it
Good one but if he had taken Paul in and made Eva and Paul live like siblings that would have been great
Damn. I'm fully on the MC's side, but I do feel a bit bad for Paul. He got hurt, and there was no making things right. Sins of the mother visited on the son, in some respects.
Makes you wonder if he had warned the MC about what his mom was up to, would things had turned out differently? At least for little Paul?
I'm pretty sure Paul will be either a villain or a male lead in the future. MC had quite a bad luck, but eventually it became good...
Paul was the most unlucky. no one loved him, everyone just blame him. He don't get anyone's love nor his mother or his father. He was a child and he craved for love but only got everyones hate. Most unfortunate character in the story.
His father loved him. Became a stay at home father just be with him. But he didn’t care for him until he no longer could be with him. The love he craved he threw away.
@@Ribbonzarkuraspear TBH he was a kid at that time and kids learn from there surroundings, if MC woul have shown this guts at the beginning maybe paul would have been a different person.
@ So being a kid gives the excuse to purposely hurt your father who takes care of you. To encourage with mothers desire to be with her first love. The only reason why the kid wanted him back was because dude went back to his former wife. Kid values were instilled by grandfather like the MC said actions have consequences. He made an adult decision can’t go back to being a kid when it doesn’t work out.
@@Ribbonzarkuraspear in real life, we as individuals make mistakes, because of it, people will get hurt from the people they love and care for. People harm each other without realizing what they have done. I'm sure we hurt our family, friends, loved ones and other people without a single thought but in return, it can be vice versa to us when receiving from them as well. We sometimes don't hold accountable and responsibility before it's too late. For example, when we have conflict with our parents and when they passed away we felt negative and conflicted emotions. We sometimes ask and wish we could have done differently when they were alive.
At the same time it's up to you to be willing to forgive or be forgiven.
There are some scenarios, this ends up being single parents with children because parents are unable to revolve their differences. Neither parents are willing to mend their differences, the bond is shattered causing the children unable to experience a harmonious family structure and the outcomes are determined by their actions including the children as well. This will affect the children's upbringing and outcome when reaching adulthood. However regardless of the reason, life moves on.
@@Ribbonzarkuraspear it happens in real life too. We sometimes hurt our family, friends, loved ones and other people without realizing it. It's up to you, are willing to forgive or be forgiven. There are times we hurt our parents and when they are no longer here anymore, we ask and wish things could be different. In return, we will have to experience it just as our parents. Life moves on.
This story is interesting but it's a very difficult situation to be in. Two worlds collide and coexist at the end which unexpected.
It's kinda suck to be in Paul's shoes especially he wants to be with his dad. Despite Paul had a mean streak because of his upbringing by his mom(Carolina) and grandfather. He really wants to be forgiven and redemption from MC. It's sad for Paul to never get a chance to have a father figure. There is a sense of jealousy in Paul when interacting with his half sister and later on Paul end up in despair without a father who love his daughter more than him.
In this scenario, it can happen in the real life because there are times, tensions in the family can or can't resolve on its own. There are times family bonds can be dissolved and forgotten. At the same time, life moves on.
Sometimes one parent will leave beyond and start a new family. While the old family is struggling to cope and adjusted over time. This will cause the old family to feel abandoned and resentment.
There seems to be a sibling rivalry in this story that can be related in reality. Competition and favoritism is common in the family. It can leave a scar on the person. It's kinda sad story in a way but at the same time it's understandable what MC have to go through.
the System so evil it keep making MC choose the Simping/Stand-in path, MC just want pure love and to be loved.
System gave him a 2nd chance.
I like stories like this.
Next time there should be a small flow-chart of different universes to explain ML transmigration properly. Although I Know Carolina won't give up Paul but still he should have tried to make adopt him and make them siblings.
Carolina is your typical trash, she was rooting for ML when he was in old novel world but when he returned, she treated him same. That intradimenstional trade thing is good addition, imagine MC who went to three worlds for mission getting his ass handed over to him by all the FL's cuz he was fooling around.
After that please make Makoto an intradimenstonal entity with Hive brain.
poor Paul 😞
Good story
"After the two World connected, the cross-world trade commerce has began."
Wow its just like the Multiverse of Madness 😮
So Carilina was rooting for him when he's on the book, but treating him the same as book FL?
So she naturally a sh-tty person.
A very flawed story so if that's something you would like to avoid then this isn't for you. We got a system based narrative, two worlds that somehow merged safely together, female leads that aren't afraid to go where it hurts, and children paying for others deeds.
Despite all that I would absolutely recommend this story, the AI may have gone out there but whoa if the concept isn't worth delving into. Will definitely be enjoying this story multiple times, here's hoping for the next one they get the worlds sorted and for another female lead that are kind but dangerous to show up again.
Seriously, why do all these MCs continue acting like horrible fathers? While I understand the mother and son should deal with the consequences of their actions and behavior, especially in the beginning, if you continue to always push your own child away forever, then they're no better than those who treated them wrong in the beginning. As a father, you should always push your children to become better than yourself by actually being in and a part of their life. Always trying to teach them right from wrong, even more so after they have made mistakes. Unfortunately, it seems every MC just wants to pretend they're better than their own child and ex and don't owe them anything, yet that's still your child, and they act like they shouldn't even try to help support the child, and usually force the mother into horrible relationships because they're based on her trying to survive without anyone and take care of their child alone. When Mr. Chen started talking badly about his son's mother. He should have ended that man's career and reputation on the spot. Then put them into an actual safe home and environment, even if he wants nothing to do with them or ever wants to see them, it'll always be the best option to be the better person. That way, both children could understand and learn how to behave and treat others because of poor Paul, even though he was an unruly child. That's still his son, and he's a shit father.
this story sounds familiar
yeah
20/20
First
Suiiiiiiiiiii 😲