A better ending would be : “If you carried Medusa’s curse, I would still stare at your eyes, and be content with the fact that the last thing I saw was perfection” or something like that idk
My favorite one I saw: “If this world were to extinguish the flame that burned so brightly in your heart, I’d burn the world to the ground to feel the warmth once more”
In your heart, a flame burns bright and true, A beacon of hope, a love so pure and new. If this world were to extinguish that light, I'd fight the darkness with all my might. I'd burn the world to the ground, if I must, To feel the warmth of your love, to trust. For in your fire, my soul finds its home, In your embrace, I'll never be alone. So, let the world tremble, let it fall apart, I'd sacrifice all, just to mend your heart. "If this world were to extinguish the flame that burned so brightly in your heart, I'd burn the world to the ground to feel the warmth once more." -nickfolino1817
If I had to wait my entire life to experience your love, I would, for when I’ve withered away I’ll be glad I got to experience heaven before I’ve even reached it.
like a sunflower blooming in the snow, you bring color to a gray world. and even in the darkest times, i see you and know life must be inherently good. (with poetic rizz)
“I wrote your name in the sky, but the winds blew it away. I then wrote your name in the sand, but the waves washed it up. So I wrote your name in my soul, so it can stay there for eternity.”
Her smile is like the sun, her hair ivory like linen, her beauty so unrivaled it allows me to stay driven, her voice warm like a campfire, such so that people crowd to listen, and thus she shines like the stars, so beautiful she glistens.
people travel across the world, climb mountains and visit exotic countries to seek beautiful sights, im lucky enough to just walk across the street to see the universes beauty
Your shine wouldn't fade, As beautiful as the tide, Your beauty would remain, Like the sun and the moon, You'dn't refrain, no matter the time. As if ever time was enough to bear my gazes at you. (Poetic rizz)
My love for you is like a flame, Burning bright, never the same. It lights up the darkness of my soul, Filling me with warmth, making me whole. Your touch is like a gentle breeze, Sweeping me off my feet with ease. Your voice is like music to my ears, Soothing my heart, easing my fears. I cherish every moment spent with you, Each one a memory, forever true. I thank the stars above for bringing you my way, For loving you more and more each passing day. My heart is yours, forevermore, With you by my side, I have everything in store. I promise to love you with all my might, Till the end of time, till the end of night.
I’ve travelled through eternity, to figure what the universe holds place. With the warmth of the sun, there’s another with warmer embrace. With the beauty of milky way, there’s one higher of grace. Lie’s there, a nebulae. Not a waste of space. Even yet when your beauty is blinding, I can still envision your face. Truth beholds, you are something, I simply can’t replace.
I searched google so I could find the author and nothing popped up, you wrote this yourself? Great job, I love your poem. I don't know if you wrote this as a joke or not, but regardless, please keep writing!
@@harmony8278 I wrote this to my girlfriend as I was listening to this song lmao, I really appreciate what you think, but I guess that’s what you get for writing so many poems in English class.
Waking up early where the sun is still not reminding me how lonely I can be, is one of the things that give me brief joy. For when all people wake up, I become a stone, I become something that people just passes by.
The time when the winter season ends, the time when your smile makes my heart bloom like the flowers in the spring. The time when your body shines brighter than the summer sun. Will be the time where reside in your presence to see the beauty of the autumn coloured sky.
“If the sun was your eyes I would stare at them endlessly acknowledging and accepting the pain, as to look at your eyes would be more then make up for my blindness”
"If you were a movie scene, I'd repeat the same scene endlessly, never bore to death at the sight of you. Because you, my dear, are the star of the show. As someone as humbled as me to be able to have the privilege to grasp your beauty through the screen."
I have been travelling for eternity seeking for perfection, never resting, came across deities and was still not satisfied with the outcome. I thought I will never be able to see what perfection is about, till the day I met you.
"Are you a shooting star in the sky, Or a diamond that caught my eye? Perhaps you're the sun on a perfect day, That takes my breath and steals it away." "Your beauty leaves me in a daze, I'm lost in your hypnotic gaze, So can I be your satellite, And orbit you day and night?" "For in this vast and endless space, You're the one I want to embrace, So let's align our paths tonight, And chase the stars with all our might."
If I confess my feelings for you, you will be the one will judge my sins, if I die and fall from hell, I will climb back just too see your flaming beauty.
"Mario is Red. Sonic is blue. Press start to join and be my player 2" "If you where Monday, I'd want to be Tuesday so I could follow you forever." "I need three things: the sun for the day, the moon for the night, and you for my whole life.""
Your like the weather some times bad but whenever you show the sun Im mesmerized because all the thing's you show are like emotions and I accept every part of it
From her Smile to her Jewel like Eyes 💎 Was more then enough to make me Cry💧 Every single Minute of that Devastating hour Felt like my heart was being torn💔 Like a pedal being ripped from a Flower🌸
I'll play this song when I tell her, All the forest echos her name with every sweet wind blow, All the snow falls to the ground to trace the track of her beauty. The spring sheds herself as she can never be that graceful. My love I hold you with all my breath with dying hope
I thought perfection was impossible to find in this cruel world, But when I saw you, I thought why were you here, You were like a star in the night sky, Far from my reach, A shining bright light that gave me hope for eternity
I have been travelling for eternity to capture the stars, only to find you under the moon with the universe in your eyes
Wow that's really good 👍
when she says "you look good" but Kurt Gar said this:
Thx for the drawing idea
Cringe
@@levelup2014ur mad
"Sometimes I feel great, sometimes I feel small, but only if I am by your side I feel like I am in heaven."
YOOO
NAH that one gets it
This go hard
TOP THREE
They say beauty is in the eyes of the beholder, but the way you sway me with your warm embrace even the blind could picture your grace.
This is the best comment I've seen here
@@Afoxwithahat thank you😭
DAAAMMNNNN
@@elaurne 🤭js built diff
I love this.
"your presence alone would make the angels question their own perfection."
Nice one but angels ain’t perfect look at lucifer for example
@@MurdererOfRaypists you pull no one
@@MurdererOfRaypists where yo biths at
@@MurdererOfRaypistsno rizz? 🤨
@@MurdererOfRaypists I dont see you doing better
“Unlike most people, I love my life. My life is beautiful, and full of surprises. After all, you are my life.”
🤭Stoppp omg... *laughing like a virgin ghost*
GIGGLES
@@fayehearts shits
If you carried medusa's curse, i would still stare at your eyes, so my stone body could gaze at perfection for eternity.
Masteroogway it is..
Medusa can still move though
@@Rayzen2077 sshhh don't ruin the moment 😞
A better ending would be : “If you carried Medusa’s curse, I would still stare at your eyes, and be content with the fact that the last thing I saw was perfection” or something like that idk
Medusa ain’t staying still for eternity though 💀
"she is a writer that wrote memories I can erase she is a painter that painted colors that I can't replace"
missed the 't in the first 'can'..
@@leskmdk4292 🤓
That’s a bar
Cringe
My favorite one I saw: “If this world were to extinguish the flame that burned so brightly in your heart, I’d burn the world to the ground to feel the warmth once more”
I'm going to use this. wish me luck.
Ima use dis
@@defaultuser6959how did it go
In your heart, a flame burns bright and true,
A beacon of hope, a love so pure and new.
If this world were to extinguish that light,
I'd fight the darkness with all my might.
I'd burn the world to the ground, if I must,
To feel the warmth of your love, to trust.
For in your fire, my soul finds its home,
In your embrace, I'll never be alone.
So, let the world tremble, let it fall apart,
I'd sacrifice all, just to mend your heart.
"If this world were to extinguish the flame that burned so brightly in your heart,
I'd burn the world to the ground to feel the warmth once more."
-nickfolino1817
That was perfect 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
I prefer having my bones broken one by one than seeing your tears falling on the ground. As my body may be repaired but your heart never again. .
You were the reason poetry was created, because no simple words could come within a mile of describing your beauty.
Of all the things that I hold dear, My love for you is crystal clear. From the moment that we met, I knew my heart was set♡
If I had to wait my entire life to experience your love, I would, for when I’ve withered away I’ll be glad I got to experience heaven before I’ve even reached it.
I'm a guy but thx
@@Gogeta.dxclan and I’m Kanye west
@@infernic5216 im joe
@@khanplayz6802 whos joe??
@@jellofroggo8568 JOE MAMAAAAAA
one of the most beautiful comment sections ever.
like a sunflower blooming in the snow, you bring color to a gray world. and even in the darkest times, i see you and know life must be inherently good. (with poetic rizz)
If I'd a flower for everytime you made me smile, I'd have a garden to walk in forever
that's right yo face ugly i wear a mask to conceal my smile
underrated fr
Listening the audio and reading the comments feels like to raise my both hands and stand at the open balcony and graze at the whole universe
"if loving you was a sin, then I'm glad to be a sinner."
When I look up at the stars at night, they don't believe me when I tell them I found someone more beautiful than them.
All these poetic comments can't express how much beauty you behold upon our eyes...
“I wrote your name in the sky, but the winds blew it away. I then wrote your name in the sand, but the waves washed it up. So I wrote your name in my soul, so it can stay there for eternity.”
i dance on the rooftops at night, i dance with the wind as it whispers the sweet melody of your name in my ears
Her smile is like the sun, her hair ivory like linen, her beauty so unrivaled it allows me to stay driven, her voice warm like a campfire, such so that people crowd to listen, and thus she shines like the stars, so beautiful she glistens.
Dont be surprised when the moon looks at you and asks for your light, I tell it every single night of how you shine brighter than the sun.
people travel across the world, climb mountains and visit exotic countries to seek beautiful sights, im lucky enough to just walk across the street to see the universes beauty
Your shine wouldn't fade,
As beautiful as the tide,
Your beauty would remain,
Like the sun and the moon,
You'dn't refrain, no matter the time. As if ever time was enough to bear my gazes at you. (Poetic rizz)
Might use this on a tiktok
she's not a beauty but a masterpiece, Her imperfections make her complete.She's imperfect yet prefectly whole and with her. I've foound my soul.
Your laughter is like a melody that sings within my heart, I want to hear it always and never be apart.
"If this feeling can be potrayed as a flame, even the seven seas will evaporated by the heat it emitted"
the rizz gods are here
If I received a rose everytime I thought of you, the mountains would be covered in petals instead of the morning dew
“If I was presented with ten thousand diamonds shining as bright as the moonlight, none would compare to your soul.”
Every glimpse of you overwhelms me, for I am unfamiliar with such beauty, that one can only feel blessed in your presence
this is exactly what ive been waiting for
Ur welcome
my heart has been full of you i can hardly call it mine
You deserve more
No camera in this world could capture the beauty that the human eye can witness
"For when I die, I shall see your beauty once more, for you are my one and only heaven".
My love for you is like a flame,
Burning bright, never the same.
It lights up the darkness of my soul,
Filling me with warmth, making me whole.
Your touch is like a gentle breeze,
Sweeping me off my feet with ease.
Your voice is like music to my ears,
Soothing my heart, easing my fears.
I cherish every moment spent with you,
Each one a memory, forever true.
I thank the stars above for bringing you my way,
For loving you more and more each passing day.
My heart is yours, forevermore,
With you by my side, I have everything in store.
I promise to love you with all my might,
Till the end of time, till the end of night.
FIREE!!
Nice
A
this is so awesome
1:26 heavenly drop
The stars could gleam so bright and beautiful and yet I’d still prefer to look at them through your eyes
But I'd like to look at you.. For stars and sun may illuminate the world but my world still craves the shine of your eyes to illuminate.
I've traveled many places around the world and yet none of them were as beautiful and majestic as you
Nah man this is the vibe that choroll is into ♥️🌟😌 nice and calming
They say no one is perfect, but you, you are beyond perfection. Your eyes glisten in the moonlight and simile brings me happiness
I'm envious of the wind that blows through ur hair and the rain that falls on ur skin; I wish i could be that close to you
Even if I could speak every language and could talk to anyone your beauty makes me speechless
I’ve travelled through eternity, to figure what the universe holds place. With the warmth of the sun, there’s another with warmer embrace. With the beauty of milky way, there’s one higher of grace. Lie’s there, a nebulae. Not a waste of space. Even yet when your beauty is blinding, I can still envision your face.
Truth beholds, you are something, I simply can’t replace.
I searched google so I could find the author and nothing popped up, you wrote this yourself? Great job, I love your poem. I don't know if you wrote this as a joke or not, but regardless, please keep writing!
@@harmony8278 I wrote this to my girlfriend as I was listening to this song lmao, I really appreciate what you think, but I guess that’s what you get for writing so many poems in English class.
@@omi6750 Lmao so poetic rizz really does work. I try to write some when I'm feeling motivated but they end up sounding like Dr. Seuss type rhymes.
Waking up early where the sun is still not reminding me how lonely I can be, is one of the things that give me brief joy. For when all people wake up, I become a stone, I become something that people just passes by.
This is a dimensionally deep masterpiece.
You may not have Medusa’s curse, but your ability to make me rock solid is far greater than hers…
Underrated
"Even if I had a shard of my soul to remain, I would sacrifice it to see your smile again."
" Even if the night is shinning with beautiful stars i would still gaze them through your eyes "
"you're a summary of everything good that has ever happened to me
“The warm embrace of your arms, could melt away even the coldest of souls”
The scars you gave me were just like flowers on grave 😭💔
for years people had used stars to guide them through they're journey. but when i look in to your eyes i get lost.
i dont need to search dictionary for words to write a poem about beauty of this universe. i just have to explain ur eyes and smile.
"She was the Sun and i was her Icarus
I melted with her presence and fell in to the depths of love"
i saw storm in her eyes that took my whole self with it but my heart felt the peace when she smiled
Even with bitter in my heart I still turn to you to show me the light through darkness
Your smile defines perfection, I wonder how better it could get if I am the reason for such art of yours.
"The worst thing about betrayal is that, it never comes from your enemies"
If I was blinded the moment I laid eyes on you, I would not grieve for in that instance, I truly gazed upon perfection.
She is poet . I am her poem . She wrote about love,memories ,joy , happy and closes it with tears
The time when the winter season ends, the time when your smile makes my heart bloom like the flowers in the spring. The time when your body shines brighter than the summer sun. Will be the time where reside in your presence to see the beauty of the autumn coloured sky.
"If the moon 🌕 calls u by ur name dont be surprised. I tell her about u every night "
this song is as perfect as her the beats the meaning everything about this song is perfect
"You are altogether beautiful,my love, there's no flaw in you"
-King Solomon.
“If the sun was your eyes I would stare at them endlessly acknowledging and accepting the pain, as to look at your eyes would be more then make up for my blindness”
"As the clock ticks my life away, I fade in happiness. Knowing that I had the chance of meeting you, even for only a glimpse of a moment."
"If beauty was a crime you would be pure" ( poetic disrespect)
I wonder why do we have to leave earth to view the whole world, when I can see my world in front of my eyes
Boa mano🗿
"If you were a movie scene, I'd repeat the same scene endlessly, never bore to death at the sight of you. Because you, my dear, are the star of the show. As someone as humbled as me to be able to have the privilege to grasp your beauty through the screen."
Guys, Rizz-meter broke down with this Aura
Even if I lost my vision
Even if I lost my sense of smell
Even if j lost my sense of touch
I will still feel your raidient, pure aura by my side
"Even if the sky was clear and it started to snow, I would still be more amazed that you smiled at me."
how I look at bro in the theater as the mario movie credits play:
I don't love you with my heart or mind , I love you with my soul Incase my mind forgets and my heart stops beating so I can love you eternally
I have been travelling for eternity seeking for perfection, never resting, came across deities and was still not satisfied with the outcome. I thought I will never be able to see what perfection is about, till the day I met you.
"If I Were To Look At You I Would Go Blind By Your Radiating Beauty"
With Rizz
If I had a flower everytime i think of you, i would only have one. Because you never left.
I feel like a broken villain on top of a building reflecting on why I became a villain
Bro's on his villain arc
@@truethunder_gaming8494Bro’s on his hero arc
If once you cry like the beach, please, let me be the sand that clears up your tears.
No other light can blind me apart from your radiance, you shine brighter than the sun and I am Icarus
For not even Blindness could make me fall for you
"Are you a shooting star in the sky, Or a diamond that caught my eye? Perhaps you're the sun on a perfect day, That takes my breath and steals it away."
"Your beauty leaves me in a daze, I'm lost in your hypnotic gaze, So can I be your satellite, And orbit you day and night?"
"For in this vast and endless space, You're the one I want to embrace, So let's align our paths tonight, And chase the stars with all our might."
If I confess my feelings for you, you will be the one will judge my sins, if I die and fall from hell, I will climb back just too see your flaming beauty.
"Mario is Red. Sonic is blue. Press start to join and be my player 2"
"If you where Monday, I'd want to be Tuesday so I could follow you forever."
"I need three things: the sun for the day, the moon for the night, and you for my whole life.""
"Did you just fart? Cuz you blew me away."
😂
Your like the weather some times bad but whenever you show the sun Im mesmerized because all the thing's you show are like emotions and I accept every part of it
By the way Im 13
From her Smile to her Jewel like Eyes 💎
Was more then enough to make me Cry💧
Every single Minute of that Devastating hour
Felt like my heart was being torn💔
Like a pedal being ripped from a Flower🌸
If the world hated you for who you are, we'll love each other and travel through endless time and space passing the stars.
"As I walk through the valley of the shadow of death
I take a look at my life and realize there's nothin' left"
🥲majestic
As i take a walk through the shadow of death, i took a closer look of my life and realize, there is nothing left in it
You may fall from the sky You may fall from a tree But the best way to fall Is in love with me (w poetic rizz)
“Fame is temporary but my love for you is limitless”
I'll play this song when I tell her, All the forest echos her name with every sweet wind blow, All the snow falls to the ground to trace the track of her beauty. The spring sheds herself as she can never be that graceful. My love I hold you with all my breath with dying hope
God said he'd never made people with mistakes, i didnt believe that until i saw you
There is nothing that could stop me from staying beside you, your eyes alone bind me to a cell I never want to escape.
The fact that this is a French song just seems so right to me
Here it comes..... - If I were a singer I would dedicate a song to you, but since I'm not, I dedicate my my heart to you.
At the end of the day I just have to rhyme the end word like fart start art but regardless u are the only one who stole my heart.
"There was 7 planets but when I saw you god made the 8th for just me and you"
DAM
I thought perfection was impossible to find in this cruel world,
But when I saw you, I thought why were you here,
You were like a star in the night sky,
Far from my reach,
A shining bright light that gave me hope for eternity