Thanks for sharing. The plotline was good. Not hearing the keys locking the doors and a librarian not doing a final sweep of the library is odd since the young ladies heard keys opening the library door. I have also worked in two separate libraries, one large university with 6 floors and a basement. The check out desk for this large university library closes at 10p.m. if I remember correctly, but the door where the guard is 24 hours. The second library I worked in was on the second floor of my community college I had a work study in. It closes completely at 9 or 10p.m. I don't remember... all of these employment was during my undergraduate college years over 20+ years ago. The front desk for check out is not barred up after closing hours as it is not left unattended for students in after staff has gone home to get behind unlike the much larger 7 floor library with a guard at the one door. Why the above details? Other than the two libraries I worked in, I been to other libraries and all the libraries I have been to, the smaller the library, the most likely, there is a phone available to the staff members to use. This means that these girls should have had access to the staff phone as this library didn't strike me as a large library. Something that would get rid of this discrepancy would be whoever opened the door, the discovery of the girls should be a shock to them. Then, pointing out there is a staff phone they could have used to call for help was present. Then both girls blushing at not thinking about this. The size of the building could have been expanded on that the girls were probably in the basement part of the library and an announcement was made... but either the girls were too into their own world and didn't hear or the Public Announcement system was on the fritz and the staff was not aware of this and thus why the girls were locked in through a series of believable event. A staff member accidentally locking people in the library though is quite problematic, this means the person was not doing their job properly. The story as it stands is complete. If you choose to do a part 2, it is truly your choice. I have stated this previously, whether this channel or another, less pictures are better. All these different pictures with the two young ladies physical features perpetually changing is distracting. One picture is enough. I prefer those stories background with one picture throughout than unrelated pictures of the main characters. Overall, I enjoyed the plot of the story. I share constructive feedback on areas that could use improvement. Overall 8.7 out of 10. Thanks for your creative work shared with us.
A part two would be great!
Hi 🙂
Evelyn and Lila, first friends then after a fight, enemies and now locked in together, friends again, and maybe a lot more.
A lovely story.
Keep going!!
Thanks for sharing. The plotline was good. Not hearing the keys locking the doors and a librarian not doing a final sweep of the library is odd since the young ladies heard keys opening the library door.
I have also worked in two separate libraries, one large university with 6 floors and a basement. The check out desk for this large university library closes at 10p.m. if I remember correctly, but the door where the guard is 24 hours.
The second library I worked in was on the second floor of my community college I had a work study in. It closes completely at 9 or 10p.m. I don't remember... all of these employment was during my undergraduate college years over 20+ years ago. The front desk for check out is not barred up after closing hours as it is not left unattended for students in after staff has gone home to get behind unlike the much larger 7 floor library with a guard at the one door.
Why the above details? Other than the two libraries I worked in, I been to other libraries and all the libraries I have been to, the smaller the library, the most likely, there is a phone available to the staff members to use. This means that these girls should have had access to the staff phone as this library didn't strike me as a large library. Something that would get rid of this discrepancy would be whoever opened the door, the discovery of the girls should be a shock to them. Then, pointing out there is a staff phone they could have used to call for help was present. Then both girls blushing at not thinking about this. The size of the building could have been expanded on that the girls were probably in the basement part of the library and an announcement was made... but either the girls were too into their own world and didn't hear or the Public Announcement system was on the fritz and the staff was not aware of this and thus why the girls were locked in through a series of believable event. A staff member accidentally locking people in the library though is quite problematic, this means the person was not doing their job properly.
The story as it stands is complete. If you choose to do a part 2, it is truly your choice. I have stated this previously, whether this channel or another, less pictures are better. All these different pictures with the two young ladies physical features perpetually changing is distracting. One picture is enough. I prefer those stories background with one picture throughout than unrelated pictures of the main characters.
Overall, I enjoyed the plot of the story. I share constructive feedback on areas that could use improvement. Overall 8.7 out of 10. Thanks for your creative work shared with us.
Thank you!!
I'll take "Shit that NEVER happened" for $500, Alex. DAILY DOUBLE!!!
This level of insight must have taken years of practice. Congrats dude
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