Needs an instrumental breakdown maybe like a chorus with a build up and bridge dunno if that’s correct terminology as I dont make beats. it’s just a big loop it feels like. The vibes sick tho! Could write for hours to it got that freestyle vibe
Peace champ Keep at it 💪🏿💪🏿and if you want to make it more sinister leave the bass out ,and all those sounds before the bass drop keep those ,merely just a suggestion either way keep it up your talent is evident .
Chances are, you won’t read this how I rap it/ If I take her on a picnic , I’m eating out her basket/ Fresh head like cabbage/ less stress, less baggage/ Less hoes, less traffic/ Less foes, less passion Yeah.. Uh I don’t want their eyes on me/ You fucking with a dying breed/ I am what you try to be/ And I don’t have to lie to be/ I’m locked in and I’m loaded, Shots strong they poured up/ Full mag of that coca/
Bow down and kiss the rings because the Master is back/ Sho nuff the cleanest and the meanest out the rest of the pack/ Them other starters is all cap, bet they fathers was all whack, I'm yellin it on wax/ Ain't nothing out my manuscript manufactured, its all facts, In fact/ I can leave you fractured for for less than fuckin round with my cash In fact, I can use the same tool to brutalize you or put your thoughts on the dash/ If you ever thought that you was monster and considered crossing my path/ I'm Top_notcH, my good sir, it's hella rude for you not to ask/ Smokin the most potent lotus, fragrance like potpourri mixed with gas In a foreign Lotus Espirit with just over a 1/4 tank of gas Neutral drop and floor it in front Police, smashin the gas, sip from flask You was busy being a clown in the back of the class, while I was doing the math/ I ain't do the homework but the work at home, it got me counting cash Fucking up the count gotta redo it cause I'm counting fast/ Partly because I can't believe that this the amount we made already, this can't last/ Like going too hard in the last lap like you cain't crash/ Like blowing a whole bag on a broad and then cain't smash/ All I know is I'm not smoking yo dro that shit straight trash, pull off in the sedan so quick man, you just seen smoke and ash
Lord keep thine enemies away. 🙏🏽
If yall got any feedback feel free to comment down below! It would really help me. Thank you!!!
Needs an instrumental breakdown maybe like a chorus with a build up and bridge dunno if that’s correct terminology as I dont make beats. it’s just a big loop it feels like. The vibes sick tho! Could write for hours to it got that freestyle vibe
Even just some scratches and a voice sample to break it uo
Apart from that straight fire my man 🔥🔥🔥🔥
Thanks for the advice man!!! You a real one for that🔥@@BEERUZ_1
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This beat freaking dope mate ! 💫🔥
I would leave the galaxy on this shit!!!
Son, hearing tracks like this its like what's the use of a fires station...let that shit burn my guy...🔥🔥🔥
Dirty instrumental my guy🔥🔥🔥
Thank You!!!
This my shiiii!!
Pfff, man, dirty dirty Instrumental 🔥🔥
Thank you man!!!
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Nice beats man
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Thanks bro!!!
Maaaaan I love it this is so unique!
Keep it up man. You rockin
Thank youn man!!!
Peace champ
Keep at it 💪🏿💪🏿and if you want to make it more sinister leave the bass out ,and all those sounds before the bass drop keep those ,merely just a suggestion either way keep it up your talent is evident .
Thank you bro Imma try it next time!!!
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Chances are, you won’t read this how I rap it/
If I take her on a picnic , I’m eating out her basket/
Fresh head like cabbage/ less stress,
less baggage/
Less hoes, less traffic/
Less foes, less passion
Yeah..
Uh
I don’t want their eyes on me/
You fucking with a dying breed/
I am what you try to be/
And I don’t have to lie to be/
I’m locked in and I’m loaded,
Shots strong they poured up/
Full mag of that coca/
Bow down and kiss the rings because the Master is back/
Sho nuff the cleanest and the meanest out the rest of the pack/
Them other starters is all cap, bet they fathers was all whack, I'm yellin it on wax/
Ain't nothing out my manuscript manufactured, its all facts, In fact/
I can leave you fractured for for less than fuckin round with my cash
In fact, I can use the same tool to brutalize you or put your thoughts on the dash/
If you ever thought that you was monster and considered crossing my path/
I'm Top_notcH, my good sir, it's hella rude for you not to ask/
Smokin the most potent lotus, fragrance like potpourri mixed with gas
In a foreign Lotus Espirit with just over a 1/4 tank of gas
Neutral drop and floor it in front Police, smashin the gas, sip from flask
You was busy being a clown in the back of the class, while I was doing the math/
I ain't do the homework but the work at home, it got me counting cash
Fucking up the count gotta redo it cause I'm counting fast/
Partly because I can't believe that this the amount we made already, this can't last/
Like going too hard in the last lap like you cain't crash/
Like blowing a whole bag on a broad and then cain't smash/
All I know is I'm not smoking yo dro that shit straight trash,
pull off in the sedan so quick man, you just seen smoke and ash
link not working in bio brodie
You have to copy it!
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