Your voice is getting even better, Marika. The melodies are sort-of confusing to someone older though, and Toby seems to be playing something different instead of echoing your hooks. I miss your sister's drums here. Your former across-the-street neighbor in Seattle who also moved...to Shoreline. Toby, don't misunderstand, you're great on lead and rhythum; but try listening back to Melanie "Brand New Key" or "Look What They Done To My Song" or even "Midnight at the Oasis" by Maria Muldaur, there' are a lot shorter lines and very much repetition, that gets a song charted (in my opinion). Thanks for all you do, happy 2024!
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Your voice is getting even better, Marika. The melodies are sort-of confusing to someone older though, and Toby seems to be playing something different instead of echoing your hooks. I miss your sister's drums here. Your former across-the-street neighbor in Seattle who also moved...to Shoreline. Toby, don't misunderstand, you're great on lead and rhythum; but try listening back to Melanie "Brand New Key" or "Look What They Done To My Song" or even "Midnight at the Oasis" by Maria Muldaur, there' are a lot shorter lines and very much repetition, that gets a song charted (in my opinion). Thanks for all you do, happy 2024!