Pretty decent stuff, although it could use some improvements: -00:44 using notatget doesn't make the clip look good if the enemies aren't reacting to your shots, I think you could've created a different scenario here instead or just allow them to react by turning off notarget -I think the part displaying the marines fighting could have the audio adjusted a bit or changed to not be so loud, it ruins the immersion in my opinion. Other than that I see a lot of potential in your work, keep going !
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Pretty decent stuff, although it could use some improvements:
-00:44 using notatget doesn't make the clip look good if the enemies aren't reacting to your shots, I think you could've created a different scenario here instead or just allow them to react by turning off notarget
-I think the part displaying the marines fighting could have the audio adjusted a bit or changed to not be so loud, it ruins the immersion in my opinion.
Other than that I see a lot of potential in your work, keep going !
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