told her leave the crystals with the cards and the sage, got a mind full of art i can leave on the page, got these lines filled with bars i should be on a stage, smoke a blunt in my car while i drive through haze… im not normal hands like to shake when i have to act cordial know my shoes too loose, i could never be a corporal and my hearts on my sleeve but the jackets on floral and my minds in the sky but the colors look coral i should dive to the reef just to see if im immortal poppin shrooms off the dome like a gnome in a portal i just told her light the sage in the sheets im paranormal blow a ghost through my teeth, then i peace, need morals idk
You should restructure your writing. Just make them all like the first one is. Makes it easier to read. I put one up, you can see how if you use the comma and two lines. Separates the thoughts better... it'll help you too. Better to scroll a lil bit then get lost halfway through a line because the words are so dense in places. Like visually bunched up. Anyway. Bars! 🤌🤙👉👌
@@zaydapsychonaut6051 nah! El Topo. Let other people decide which positive criticism they do and don't take. You're cheerleading... but it ain't making anyone better. 🤷 If he doesn't like what I said then fine but I'll bet you could use some fuckin pointers every once in a while... or not probably not, right? You talk like the guy who shows up the first day at work and wants to do it "his way"... actually, it's more like that guys wife cheering him on. "They can't talk to you like that, baby!" That's cool tho. It's just, some people write their raps down. Some people just cheer for the people who do it. You do you. Since you didn't read that. Here No one insulted him. I kinda insulted you though. Should check it out. Edit: 💯
@N8thegr8. you really think this a diss or sum? 😭💀 I aint "cheerleading" lmao. You just lowkey sounded like a hater so I told bro fuck that and do him. Dick riding tho right? 😂 You sound goofy af, like one of them people who try and tell people how they should do something, that you yourself never had the balls to do. For future reference, if you gotta explain a joke or a "diss"... (if you call it that idk, you do you.) It makes that shit 10 times not as good 💯
Crystals sparkle in the light, Get my chakras real aligned. I can get down with some heady shit, why. Because that frown get you down infinite amount of time. And im tired of getting clowned in my experience of life. Can't we live in a town with no criminals or crime. There should be a fuckin law that make sure everyone alright.
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Sound like a early 2000s joint fr🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
Stoic is short for heroic! 💪🏾
this beat saved my life
This beat killed my cat
In a good way
told her leave the crystals
with the cards and the sage,
got a mind full of art i can leave on the page, got these lines filled with bars
i should be on a stage, smoke a blunt in my car while i drive through haze…
im not normal
hands like to shake when i have to act cordial
know my shoes too loose, i could never be a corporal
and my hearts on my sleeve but the jackets on floral
and my minds in the sky
but the colors look coral
i should dive to the reef just to see if im immortal
poppin shrooms off the dome like a gnome in a portal
i just told her light the sage
in the sheets im paranormal
blow a ghost through my teeth, then i peace, need morals idk
You should restructure your writing. Just make them all like the first one is.
Makes it easier to read. I put one up, you can see how if you use the comma and two lines. Separates the thoughts better... it'll help you too. Better to scroll a lil bit then get lost halfway through a line because the words are so dense in places. Like visually bunched up. Anyway.
Bars!
🤌🤙👉👌
@murph4125 nah fuck that this shit go crazy 👌 don't ever let someone tell you how you should or shouldn't write 💯
@@zaydapsychonaut6051 nah! El Topo. Let other people decide which positive criticism they do and don't take.
You're cheerleading... but it ain't making anyone better. 🤷 If he doesn't like what I said then fine but I'll bet you could use some fuckin pointers every once in a while... or not probably not, right? You talk like the guy who shows up the first day at work and wants to do it "his way"... actually, it's more like that guys wife cheering him on. "They can't talk to you like that, baby!"
That's cool tho. It's just, some people write their raps down. Some people just cheer for the people who do it. You do you.
Since you didn't read that. Here
No one insulted him. I kinda insulted you though. Should check it out.
Edit: 💯
@N8thegr8. you really think this a diss or sum? 😭💀 I aint "cheerleading" lmao. You just lowkey sounded like a hater so I told bro fuck that and do him. Dick riding tho right? 😂
You sound goofy af, like one of them people who try and tell people how they should do something, that you yourself never had the balls to do.
For future reference, if you gotta explain a joke or a "diss"... (if you call it that idk, you do you.) It makes that shit 10 times not as good 💯
@@zaydapsychonaut6051 thanks bro! I appreciate it ✌
Broooo those chops
Dope ahh beat, man guy.
Yep I gotta stop playing around 🔥🔥🔥🔥
YK IM HERE
Awesome Beat.
Shit crazy
Crystals sparkle in the light,
Get my chakras real aligned.
I can get down with some heady shit, why.
Because that frown get you down infinite amount of time.
And im tired of getting clowned in my experience of life.
Can't we live in a town with no criminals or crime.
There should be a fuckin law that make sure everyone alright.
Need a new action bronson beat big bro
Was tryna figure out why i liked mick jenkins beat soo much then i saw that ish said STOIC 🫱🏻🫲🏽🤌🏽🤌🏽