Nah see, cuz I’m the LIGHTEST sleeper. One sound and I’m awake. You move my blanket, I’m awake. You TOUCH my skin, I’m most DEF awake! lol so jus from the jump, ol dude woulda got knocked out 😂 I woulda heard the stairs creaking before he even got up em! 😂 on top of that, the acting was horrid. At first I was like ‘meh, it’s not too bad’ but the further it moved through the short the worse it got! By 21:35 I was like ‘my god…acting wise this is insufferably bad’ and the story was all over the place. This was slightly mediocre at best. I think even sayin it’s mediocre is giving it more credit then it deserves tbh
it's driving me crazy.... Towards the end He's wearing a black t-shirt. He's then walks out of the shot. Next you see him walking into her room to see her bags packed Bur he's wearing a white long sleeve shirt, Then he goes back to the kitchen. He's wearing the black t-shirt again. Uggggg
Ha ha. Yes, and he went outside right after she'd opened the window yet a few seconds later you see him walking down the hallway to the same door. He should have still been outside. Well, unless he moves at Warp Speed!.
Poor sound mixing compounded with absolutely dull and flat-toned dialogue. Concept is kinda done to death but there is something here I think could be polished up for a better overall take. Never be afraid to leave dead weight on the cutting room floor.
If I'm to be frank, this film was just "meh" at best. The acting was just okay, the story line just okay, but no tension...it just dragged. There is no way a person wouldn't awaken if her feet were kissed unless she was impaired and there was no indication that she was. There was no real reason to like the tenant; she was boring at best. I'm a little surprised over the other much better reviews. JMO.
@merlotvisionproductions love your willingness to hear more! Sound could be better. He was much easier to hear. Her character could have been more interesting. She was too flat. No zip there. No disrespect meant, but she wasn't as good of an actor. I need to "fall into" the story and the foot kiss wasn't believable. I would like to see more of your work. Again, very cool that you reached out. That's a great quality!
@@SusanSez1 I want to grow and be better. I don’t take anyone’s criticism as disrespect. I appreciate the success this film has been receiving, but I know I can be better. So I appreciate your perspective and I hope you enjoy the new projects to come
When he says, "No. STAY!"Sometimes you better just listen and stay.
This should be a movie! Really enjoyed it
No dought this should be a movie or series
STOP
Bravo Bravo, Great job 10 Stars great acting from both Thank you
Nah see, cuz I’m the LIGHTEST sleeper. One sound and I’m awake. You move my blanket, I’m awake. You TOUCH my skin, I’m most DEF awake! lol so jus from the jump, ol dude woulda got knocked out 😂 I woulda heard the stairs creaking before he even got up em! 😂 on top of that, the acting was horrid. At first I was like ‘meh, it’s not too bad’ but the further it moved through the short the worse it got! By 21:35 I was like ‘my god…acting wise this is insufferably bad’ and the story was all over the place. This was slightly mediocre at best. I think even sayin it’s mediocre is giving it more credit then it deserves tbh
What a coincidence that I stopped at 31:24 to read the comments! Flat. Predictable.
Looks like I'm going vegan again... 😅
Wow that was pretty good, thanks for sharing 😮
1:51 I CANT STOP REPLAYING THIS PART I LOVE HOW SHE GOT STARTLED 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Is it me, or is the sound really poor?
I am legitimately struggling.
I can’t hear sh*t all🤦🏻♀️
Sounds bad....
This reminds me of the movie Barbarian 2022 .
Definitely drew some inspiration from that film
That was an amazing movie!
it's driving me crazy....
Towards the end He's wearing a black t-shirt. He's then walks out of the shot. Next you see him walking into her room to see her bags packed Bur he's wearing a white long sleeve shirt, Then he goes back to the kitchen. He's wearing the black t-shirt again.
Uggggg
Ha ha. Yes, and he went outside right after she'd opened the window yet a few seconds later you see him walking down the hallway to the same door. He should have still been outside. Well, unless he moves at Warp Speed!.
Amazing film!! I didnt she would be a meal..but I thought maybe he would keep her in the basement..notceat her!!
Great job! But pay attention to sound!
Thanks, will do!
Poor sound mixing compounded with absolutely dull and flat-toned dialogue. Concept is kinda done to death but there is something here I think could be polished up for a better overall take. Never be afraid to leave dead weight on the cutting room floor.
Thank you for the feedback, much appreciated
Very creepy, but this could be real. Our minds are so sick.
Agreed dear
Great film
This was decent 👍🏾
Eww, feet creep 😂
😂 yeah I feel the same way about butt creeps 🤣
Even if I'm the only one, the acting was wooden. Story had real scares and this was creepy but not a good way.
Omg the acting sucked lol
Promo-SM
If I'm to be frank, this film was just "meh" at best. The acting was just okay, the story line just okay, but no tension...it just dragged. There is no way a person wouldn't awaken if her feet were kissed unless she was impaired and there was no indication that she was. There was no real reason to like the tenant; she was boring at best. I'm a little surprised over the other much better reviews. JMO.
@@SusanSez1 I agree on some of your points there’s definitely room for improvement. In your opinion, what improvements can I make for future films?
@merlotvisionproductions love your willingness to hear more! Sound could be better. He was much easier to hear. Her character could have been more interesting. She was too flat. No zip there. No disrespect meant, but she wasn't as good of an actor. I need to "fall into" the story and the foot kiss wasn't believable. I would like to see more of your work. Again, very cool that you reached out. That's a great quality!
@@SusanSez1 I want to grow and be better. I don’t take anyone’s criticism as disrespect. I appreciate the success this film has been receiving, but I know I can be better. So I appreciate your perspective and I hope you enjoy the new projects to come
This is very sick and criminal. I'm appalled RUclips accepted such a psycho film. 💍
very sloppy, not even interesting
It was good I thought 😢