The Unforeseen Consequences of Deathworlder Intervention | HFY | Sci Fi Stories

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  • Опубликовано: 14 дек 2024

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  • @RayRatchford
    @RayRatchford 20 часов назад

    Interesting plot basis, and was hoping well until, at 27-30, it all went ordure-shaped.
    That's when the first midsentence hiatus, followed by a restart, happened.
    After that it went all tooth-sideways, eventually stopping 2m10s short of the posted duration.
    Overall mark 22%
    Comments: started well..... then eeeeuuugh!