[Final Chapter] Mommy’s Tender Love - Friedrich der Große - Final : Part 1 | Azur Lane Fanfiction

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  • Опубликовано: 22 окт 2024

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  • @RyumaBrunestud
    @RyumaBrunestud  Год назад +51

    Hello my friends, how have you been?
    I apologize for starting the message this way, but the situation has gotten a bit worse and if anyone wants to support me, at least just for Christmas, I would appreciate it.
    www.patreon.com/RyumaBrunestud - With the new sessions, medical prescriptions and family problems, my economic situation is not looking good, actually I was already in the red in previous months, but now it's worse. I am trying to sell things that I had for years to support some expenses, but I see the situation as more difficult than usual.
    Even though I say this, please don't force yourself to support me like this if you are not in a stable situation, don't worry, it's okay, I don't want you to have problems because of me.
    Remember.. You can support me by sharing the video, with a like and leaving your comment. =)
    Well, now I am going to talk about this chapter. This is the first part, at first I wanted to do everything in one video, but after reading the script, I realized that it would be about two hours of video, so I decided to do it in two parts. Which will be published from the 25th of this month. I hope you liked the development, I spent some time considering how this could be applied to her and I think this has been the best possible way. At least from a rational point.. xD
    I was also debating about the ending, I must say that what is to come will be completely emotional for the participants of this story. I hope that this development has been to your liking and that this story has been able to make you smile at least at some point, thanks for sharing this time with us. n__n
    Regarding the upcoming fanfictions, I would like to bring you a Christmas special, which I am currently writing. (Friedrich part 2 is almost finished and is currently being checked)
    Regarding Enterprise, her story will end in January, I apologize, I wanted to finish both stories this month, but unfortunately I couldn't, sorry.
    All the other stories will continue in January, I have already been preparing part of the scripts to be able to bring endings, both for Amagi and Shinano. (I haven't forgotten about the Yandere story)
    Regarding my situation, things have not gone very well. The problems related to my health, my family and my economic situation have stressed me to the point of needing medical attention in this regard. I try to be positive about it, but there were days when the depression was too much and I couldn't do much.
    It really is difficult. But I thank you for being here, I'm really glad to have this community, despite being a simple RUclips channel, I thank you from the bottom of my heart for your comments and your support.
    I'll leave my message here, my friend. If you want to write me something, don't worry and do it, I'll be preparing the other scripts, but I'll be taking some time to read your comment. =)
    I hope you are well and I wish you a good weekend! n___n
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    • @comradewyvern1150
      @comradewyvern1150 Год назад +5

      This isn’t much, but i’m praying for you, and I hope you feel better.

    • @kacperpodeszwa3747
      @kacperpodeszwa3747 Год назад +4

      Stay strong my man and i wish Good Łuck and fair days ahead!

    • @t-80u16
      @t-80u16 Год назад +2

      I don't know what say but I wish you the best of luck

    • @hernanmme520
      @hernanmme520 Год назад +4

      U better keep doing ur very best to overcome this or my body will colapse due to a lack of sugar form this wholesome series. I wish u the very best of wishes and a soon recovery

    • @jaylowlp6181
      @jaylowlp6181 Год назад

      I am good thanks! A recap would be nice, I am a bit lost to what exactly happened in the end in the last episode

  • @jamesscalzo3033
    @jamesscalzo3033 Год назад +2

    Loved the video @Ryuma Brunestud! Can't wait for the Second Half of the Final Chapter for Friedrich! Also can't wait to see how "Mütter Größe" and "Sophie" (thankfully not Dee.... Nothing *SUS* about that! *AHEM* ) fight in Enterprise's Fanfic, let alone how things go with Amagi-Sama and Shinano-Sama (Best Floof's in their Own Rights)... Or the Yandere's Day Storyline. I have been somewhat busy myself within the Azur Lane Community over in the Comments section below @Kyzer Gahan's videos (yes, @2024 KG changed the channel name back to Kyzer Gahan). Convoy GD 184, which was Carrying Supplies and Snacks that I Made for the Ship Girls of Azur Lane, Arrived at Azur Lane's HQ albeit Somewhat Late at around 18:30 Hours Eastern Standard Time December 1st, 2022 (6:30 p.m. Eastern Standard Time; 3:30 p.m. Pacific Standard Time, 11:30 p.m. London Time and 12:30 a.m. December 2nd Berlin Time) along with My Fleet. Sadly, I have not received any word from Kyzer or @Altamir de Marz about their Mission to Pearl Harbor (aka PH Harbor) to have Missouri and Clevelad reunited with New Jersey and Cleveland.
    New Jersey's 80th Launch Day didn't go without any Hitches over on Kyzer's Channel, as Friedrich started a Fight with Jersey only for Iowa to get right in the Line of Fire and take all 12 20.5" Rounds meant for Jersey. How things played out will depend on whether you go with the Storyline that Kyzer went with or My "Fighting Friedrich on Jersey's Launch Day" Fanfic, and for this I'm going to try and make it as easy as possible for the Two Storylines to be Understood....
    • In Kyzer's Storyline, the Next video had Jersey Talking to an effectively Comatose Iowa with SSN-769 New Jersey from the Newer Virginia-class Submarines (Block IV or V) (aka Lil' Jersey), USS Enterprise from the Gerald R. Ford-class Nuclear Powered Aircraft Carriers (CVN-80) and HMS Belfast (F92) from the British Royal Navy's Type 26 Frigate (Batch 1) nearby to support her. Meanwhile, Friedrich was outside wanting to Apologize for what happened though Super-class Ferry Yakima and GS-3 class Steam Engine SP 4449 were guarding the Area telling her to leave, eventually Tirpitz shows up and tells Friedrich that it'd be best to just do as the GS-3 class Steam Engine and Super-class Ferry said.
    • In My "Fighting Friedrich on Jersey's Launch Day" Fanfic, I had to Fight "Mütter Größe" 3 Times in as many Parts, each to the Tune of "Bloodshed" from "Metal Gear Rising: Revengence", "Devil Trigger" and "Bury The Light" from the "Devil May Cry" Series. All with Guest Appearances by Dante, Virgil and Nero from "Devil May Cry" and Senator Stephen Armstrong, Jetstream Sam and Jack Raiden from "Metal Gear Rising: Revengence" as well as Several Members of Kyzer's own Community like Fellow Azur Lane and Touhou Gacha Club RUclips Content Creator @AnimBoy55YT, @Imperial Universe and @Enterprise Momobami to name a Few. Even though all the Other Ship Girls were Telling me not to Fight Friedrich, yes Even Tirpitz, Enterprise (CV-6), Bismarck and Eugen (Mein Leibe.....) were all telling me not to Fight Friedrich at all, Friedrich still wouldn't give up. USS Georgia had to leap in between the two of us (Myself and Friedrich) to keep us from killing each other. Even though you had Reasonably punished the both of us (confining Friedrich to quarters for 6 Months and Myself for 3 days) Prinz Eugen, being the Good Woman that she turned out to be, Decided that 3 Days Confinment wasn't enough and so she Not only Kicked me out of the Bedroom but kicked me out of our own House for an Entire Month. So now I'm sleeping on the Benches outside of the Main Hall for the next Month or so.
    Either way, things turned out Pretty good since Iowa is recovering from taking a Salvo of 12 20.5" Rounds meant for Jersey thanks to the Best Nurse in Azur Lane, USS Vestal (AR-4).
    I did recently grab some Christmas presents for Eugen and Little Eugen if you're interested in what I got for them. Don't tell them about it though because I don't want to spoil the Surprise!
    Hope you liked the news man, I spent about 2 hours typing this up. Also, I hope that things get better for you soon man!

  • @cellbuilder2
    @cellbuilder2 Год назад +25

    I would've made a suggestion for a new story, but after reading your pinned comment I think I shouldn't.
    Instead I hope your situation improves in the near future. And don't stress yourself over making these stories for us. Put yourself first.
    I just completed my own Azur Lane fanfic today on Wattpad, and it took me over a year to do it. I had to take long breaks from time to time, and that enabled me to finish it relatively stress-free.
    So take care and pace yourself!

    • @RyumaBrunestud
      @RyumaBrunestud  Год назад +3

      Don't worry, you can leave me your suggestion and I'll read it.
      Regarding stress, it's not really related to stories/fanfictions, but to problems.
      Oh.. That sounds interesting... o_O!
      Thank you for your words. n__n

    • @lordoblivion8038
      @lordoblivion8038 Год назад

      Mind telling what azur lane fanfiction story you make and link?

    • @cellbuilder2
      @cellbuilder2 Год назад

      @@RyumaBrunestud My idea was for a story about Hornet. She's my favorite ship in Azur Lane and I don't see much about her at all, so I have a feeling you could make a great story about her.

    • @cellbuilder2
      @cellbuilder2 Год назад

      @@lordoblivion8038 It's a fanfiction about USS Oregon being in Azur Lane. Finally finished it a couple of days ago. Look up "A Bulldog's Legacy".

    • @jdubs__01
      @jdubs__01 Год назад

      @@cellbuilder2 Holy shit dude, I read that one!

  • @FlyingTooFast
    @FlyingTooFast Год назад +27

    “Tirpitz looks to the sky”
    *FOOLS! I was in the air all along*

    • @friendlyfire3412
      @friendlyfire3412 Год назад +3

      Fredirch decided to become B-29 Bomber Called Enola Gei

    • @Finstoniamap
      @Finstoniamap Год назад

      Germany pls fund by civil war against to turn in to true Democratic Federation

  • @siltstridersftw
    @siltstridersftw Год назад +13

    This was a great one, loved every second of it. I've been falling for Friedrich every since I oathed her in the game and the way you write her is amazing. This one melted my heart and I wish I had someone like Friedrich in my life

    • @RyumaBrunestud
      @RyumaBrunestud  Год назад +5

      I would also like to have someone like Friedrich by my side, however, I once had someone like Roon by my side, although that was a long time ago and things didn't end well.. Sad story...

    • @siltstridersftw
      @siltstridersftw Год назад +1

      @@RyumaBrunestud Same here, I'll be honest.

  • @corbynsmith4482
    @corbynsmith4482 Год назад +12

    Merry Christmas Ryuma. Good luck on your pulls for the event. I wish you the best of luck for 2023. You and your content, just like the game itself, have brought me great happiness and I reckon I will continue to do so. Everyday I get to come home and view your content is a good day and nothing but.
    Thank you. Thank you so much.
    -Corbyn

    • @RyumaBrunestud
      @RyumaBrunestud  Год назад +3

      I'm glad to hear that and thank you for your words.
      Merry Christmas and New Year in advance, although I think I'll be able to bring a video to wish Merry Christmas, I'll still write it in case something unexpected happens. n_nU

  • @haydenbartling5126
    @haydenbartling5126 Год назад +10

    I have waited for this my whole 1st semester! Hope it's as good as the others.

  • @cdp124
    @cdp124 Год назад +16

    A BLAST of a story! I loved the sudden change of pace for Friederich, as it was really needed for the characters. Very well Done Ryuma, Hope things get better!!

    • @RyumaBrunestud
      @RyumaBrunestud  Год назад +4

      Thank you. To be honest, I spent some time thinking about how Friedrich should change her way of treating the Commander, even Tirpitz as well. At that point in the relationship, I thought it was best for her to recognize them differently.

    • @cdp124
      @cdp124 Год назад +1

      @@RyumaBrunestud And what bigger change than Friedrich treating the Commander...like a close friend. I love it!

  • @kevinmolina2878
    @kevinmolina2878 Год назад +3

    I LOVE THIS STORY!!! It have momets so funny and others so sweats. The music of background make it even better.

  • @xviiiryusei
    @xviiiryusei Год назад +7

    How lovely, phenomenal job as always!

  • @timeforgottenprince8271
    @timeforgottenprince8271 Год назад +6

    I hope things get better for you soon Ryuma.

  • @ShadowJojoXAzumaSenpai4423
    @ShadowJojoXAzumaSenpai4423 Год назад +2

    *SLRPP* HAHAHAHAHAHAHA
    (Drink mineral watter before operation for my fatty heart started)
    Wish me luck thanks Admin for making the stories

  • @marchiori800
    @marchiori800 Год назад +5

    Ryuma please do more fan fiction but with different character of azur lane

    • @RyumaBrunestud
      @RyumaBrunestud  Год назад +9

      I have thought about it, but I want to finish the stories that have already started and although it is taking me time to finish them, if I abandon them, it would be disrespectful to those people who are waiting for an end. So for my part I can't currently focus on writing stories for other characters, at least not for now.

    • @carlospomares3225
      @carlospomares3225 Год назад +1

      @@RyumaBrunestud I hope you continue Amagi's storyline

    • @marchiori800
      @marchiori800 Год назад +1

      @@RyumaBrunestudno problem finish the story you already started and then start the new . Thank you for your fan fiction

  • @ZarfeStein
    @ZarfeStein Год назад +2

    Merry christmas, Ryuma. I hope your situation get better to you, my friend. Every time that i see your channel always make my day better. And since Friedrich is one of my favorite characters, is like a extra to me apart from all the content you make. Thank you.

  • @Kai_Hendrickson
    @Kai_Hendrickson Год назад +1

    Wholesome moment at the end there, got me doubting at first tho coz of the music cutting out and the situation seemed to be leading somewhere else, a very nice story overall

  • @Holydude
    @Holydude Год назад +2

    I am so happy that they are connecting

  • @ElDeLasMonedas
    @ElDeLasMonedas Год назад +1

    Cine🚬🗿

  • @friendlyfire3412
    @friendlyfire3412 Год назад +5

    "dont put in d crazy bro dont put your d in crazy"
    Its fredirich dude
    "Ok now you have right to put in Crazy."

  • @raidenfrizz
    @raidenfrizz Год назад +1

    Ryuma ! First of all, I’m sorry for whatever is going on in your life right now, I’m planning on supporting you by the end of this month hopefully if I have the expenses so please dont go disappearing on me ! Your videos are great ╰(*´︶`*)╯♡
    Second, I’m so looking forward to the final final chapter, the development is so heartwarming and I cant wait to see what happens in the end (〃ω〃)
    As always, stay strong and dont give up !!

  • @U.V.Hutten
    @U.V.Hutten Год назад +1

    Sigh.. (so thats what you been up to.)

  • @darkviniek6917
    @darkviniek6917 Год назад +1

    Hell yeah im early asf

  • @nahuelsebastian3529
    @nahuelsebastian3529 Год назад

    ha llegado el tan ansiado momento

  • @generalgabrielsatori
    @generalgabrielsatori Год назад

    I knew it was Roon, only her can cause such a massive destruction.
    Anyway, honestly, this story is a masterpiece, I love it since the very first episode, I like the concept of it, and it takes viewers on an emotion rollercoaster, it's heartwarming and also has some climax and dramatic moments along, I love this.

  • @Finstoniamap
    @Finstoniamap Год назад

    Bozo was capping for months

  • @emanueleenricovairani492
    @emanueleenricovairani492 Год назад

    Will you make a fic on One of the Sardegna ships??

  • @adistyacnugroho7583
    @adistyacnugroho7583 Год назад +6

    Did anyone say mom? MOOOOOOOM!

  • @marcuskorson8
    @marcuskorson8 Год назад

    Ryuma don't push yourself man. Seriously, we will still be here if you need a break alright. Love the videos either way. Take care of yourself and I wish you all the best. ❤❤❤❤❤

  • @jherome95
    @jherome95 Год назад

    Aww how wholesome

  • @poisonkiller8106
    @poisonkiller8106 Год назад

    I was half right that Roon & Akagi are super duper jelly of Friedrich
    Ok, You carried us now its our turn carry our lovely wife
    My god, the ending is so, so heart of gold.
    I'm so excited for more of Mommy- I mean, Friedrich der groose
    Part 2, here we come!

  • @collinkopacki3738
    @collinkopacki3738 Год назад

    I CALL IT! I Know this would happen

  • @tommcglone2867
    @tommcglone2867 2 месяца назад +1

    I kept going *AWWWWWWWWWWWWW* at all Freidrich's lovey dovey actions. Especially falling asleep on SKK's shoulder after working her stockings off as secretary.

  • @jaylowlp6181
    @jaylowlp6181 Год назад

    wow its so good... portraying the sadness of wanting to call her wife and submitting to her love but than needing to abandon all the others, making them feel pain, sadness and despair of not being with them. Its truly sad... if you think about the reality. Being happy alone for the cost of others...