Sci-Fi Line, You really delivered with this story it was so enjoyable the binding ritual describing its shared effects on Queen Seraya and Mark was very intense, And one could easily imagine the circular chamber inscribed with the arcane symbols on the floor lighting up and floating around the enraptured couple a pivotal scene. Very exciting.
That was good but marring a queen that could have you killed at anytime and knows what you feel and think. To have a sexaul thought about anybody but the queen you could die for is scary. Most men have a sexaul thought every 14 seconds the queen would be bombarded with his thought all day.
Sci-Fi Line, You really delivered with this story it was so enjoyable the binding ritual describing its shared effects on Queen Seraya and Mark was very intense, And one could easily imagine the circular chamber inscribed with the arcane symbols on the floor lighting up and floating around the enraptured couple a pivotal scene. Very exciting.
Thank you for your valuable comment ❤️
The connection dragged on for so long I was hoping it would end before I grew old or at least before I had to shave again.
That was good but marring a queen that could have you killed at anytime and knows what you feel and think. To have a sexaul thought about anybody but the queen you could die for is scary. Most men have a sexaul thought every 14 seconds the queen would be bombarded with his thought all day.
@@carlmanis879 I never thought of that. You're great 👍
Yeah so he was bound and blindfolded. But he could see all those details? Huh
You are right, there may be some flaws, thank you for noticing and reporting our mistake ❤️
❤❤❤ alarm stories to make interesting story hear more of it more storage 0:31
❤️
👍🏻🆙❣️👍🏻
❤️
The repetition of the same stated emotional sequence over and over made it bland in my opinion. Needed more action and I dont mean sexual.
Thank you for sharing your opinion
Totally agree. Too much repetition.
@@ramonalejano671 We will pay more attention to this issue
@@Sci-fiLine thanks. hoped u will