When I found this page throw one of my friends, I got more motivation to take my IELTS exam, I will start to learn and practice all the tasks here, And take the exam in the next months, Thanks a lot.
What do you guys think of the below? I got a different idea on the general trend. The table illustrates information on underground train systems in London, Paris, Tokyo, Washington D.C., Kyoto and Los Angeles. Figures show the number of kilometres, year that it was opened and total annual passengers in millions. Overall, underground railway systems that were built before the 1950’s carry more passengers and run longer routes compared to train systems established after the mid 20th century. Pertaining to the London, Paris and Tokyo rail systems, their commuters collectively make up to about a whopping four billion annually with Tokyo alone serving 1928 billion passengers. The tube and rail system for London runs at a great distance of 394 kilometres followed by Paris and Tokyo at 199 kilometres and 155 kilometres respectively. As for Washington D.C., Kyoto and Los Angeles, these newer train rails carry a combined total of almost 250 million a year paling in comparison to that of the older train systems. The city of Washington D.C. runs up to 126 kilometres in route while Kyoto and Los Angeles are even shorter at less than 40 kilometres combined.
Her perspective towards the essay is totally different to that of other teachers. She just blows my mind. Thanks a bunch for putting that much effort in it for us.
not sure if 20 minutes is actually enough to write all of this info. Especially when it takes 2-3 minutes to analyze the data alone let along make notes about it. Really appreciate this approach though makes the concept very easy to grasp.
can you assess my intro The given table displays information about different underground railway systems of several countries from Europe, America and Asia. The opening dates, roads kilometers and the annual figure of passengers (millions) are provided as well within the visual.
Thank you. Just a quick question, where did you get 'the Helsinki' has more than four times as much snow as any other city (Body Para 1). How did you get it?? Pls share.. thank you
The table provided compares the collected data about train stations in six vital cities, regarding the opening date, the distance by kilometres, and the annual passenger numbers in millions. Old train stations which were established before the year 1950, were faster than trains built afterwards. As a result, the number of people using old trains is considerably higher than those using newly established trains. Regarding the London railway station, although it was opened in 1863, its underground train travels 349 kilometres per hour, which is the longest distance any train travels in comparison with the other stations. On the other hand, Tokyo railway station which was opened after London station in the year 1927, aside from being slower than the London train, with only 155 kilometres, it transports the highest number of travellers with 1928 million, exceeding the number of London train passengers which is only 775 million people. Concerning new railway stations, Kyoto train station has the slowest railway train, which only travels 11 km per hour, with only 45 million users per year. The case is similar for Los Angeles station which was built in the year 2001, and its train only travels 28 kilometres per hour, even though it is faster than the Kyoto train, but it only has five million more passengers than Kyoto station
For the 2nd one, as all the information given are in past, only simple past or past perfect should be used. But in this video you've used few present perfect words. Isn't that wrong ?
Thanks for this question! From the prompt, we can assume that these underground railway systems still exist in the present. This is why the present tense is used when explaining how many route kilometers and passengers they have: because they still exist. Then, the simple past tense is correctly used when referring to the exact date that each railroad was opened because it is a specific moment in the past. Keep in mind that this prompt is not asking you to describe something that happened before something else (which is when the Past Perfect would be used) -- we are just describing the specific past dates of each railroad station's opening and making relevant comparisons. Hope this answers your question!
hello ma'am, the second body paragraph you used the present perfect. actually i thought it should be in past or past perfect because the year are in the past.please explain me
i would be careful using all the strategies and structures frome these lessons, because its anyways 4 years old, and if you give it to gpt it will asses it pretty low, about 6.5
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Could someone plz help ! Had a query In the overview paragraph why aren't we using had instead we are using has . For reference see the lst line of the para .
I’m not clear how she came up with 28 degrees for Helsinki and 26 for Casablanca. The lowest temperature in Helsinki is -10 and highest +18 and Casablanca its 9 to 35. Why did she subtract 9 from 35. Someone explain this for me pls .
Overall, it can be clearly seen that London has the oldest railway system in comparison with the other five countries. Additionally, Kyoto has the most mediorce annual number of commuters and route kilometers.
Best video ever, worth it to watched. I hope you can teach cycle/pictorial?as well. Thank you so much. My exam is on September , my vocabulary is poor maybe I can memorize the structure but I don't know the vocab. I think I wanna go back in preschool to learn again.
u gotta practice u know, it only takes 5 minutes if u get used to this type of task 1, and the next 15 min just write them all down so i think summary is needed
Would it be wrong to group the body paragraphs according to cities (one for Edinburgh, Paris and Helsinki and one for Casablanca)? I thought of this since Casablanca is the only one that stands out in terms of heat
When I found this page throw one of my friends, I got more motivation to take my IELTS exam, I will start to learn and practice all the tasks here, And take the exam in the next months, Thanks a lot.
i will pass my ielts exam soon and preparing with your videos. Hope I will achive 7.5+ on task 1!
What do you guys think of the below? I got a different idea on the general trend.
The table illustrates information on underground train systems in London, Paris, Tokyo, Washington D.C., Kyoto and Los Angeles. Figures show the number of kilometres, year that it was opened and total annual passengers in millions.
Overall, underground railway systems that were built before the 1950’s carry more passengers and run longer routes compared to train systems established after the mid 20th century.
Pertaining to the London, Paris and Tokyo rail systems, their commuters collectively make up to about a whopping four billion annually with Tokyo alone serving 1928 billion passengers. The tube and rail system for London runs at a great distance of 394 kilometres followed by Paris and Tokyo at 199 kilometres and 155 kilometres respectively.
As for Washington D.C., Kyoto and Los Angeles, these newer train rails carry a combined total of almost 250 million a year paling in comparison to that of the older train systems. The city of Washington D.C. runs up to 126 kilometres in route while Kyoto and Los Angeles are even shorter at less than 40 kilometres combined.
i like the side by side form of presentation which allows students to quickly refer back to the chart and data,
Her perspective towards the essay is totally different to that of other teachers. She just blows my mind. Thanks a bunch for putting that much effort in it for us.
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not sure if 20 minutes is actually enough to write all of this info. Especially when it takes 2-3 minutes to analyze the data alone let along make notes about it. Really appreciate this approach though makes the concept very easy to grasp.
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Clear information with range of ideas required for task. Excellent explanation and I am super happy to see this anyway. Thank you mam!🙂
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Helsinki has more than four times as much snow as any other city? Comparing to Edinburgh- yes but not with every other cities
Obviously,the calculations are wrong. It has about 6x of one city and over 40x another. Again,the heat difference,Helsinki is not 28C. It’s 8
Its 28
can you assess my intro
The given table displays information about different underground railway systems of several countries from Europe, America and Asia. The opening dates, roads kilometers and the annual figure of passengers (millions) are provided as well within the visual.
Thanks for your helpful explanations.I’ve got a question :
The analysis time gives me around 10 minutes 😢! I need more practise?
Sure.
Thank you. Just a quick question, where did you get 'the Helsinki' has more than four times as much snow as any other city (Body Para 1). How did you get it?? Pls share.. thank you
100×4=400 and because it is 450 so she said it more then 4 times
You are simply the best thanks for this lovely video
The table provided compares the collected data about train stations in six vital cities, regarding the opening date, the distance by kilometres, and the annual passenger numbers in millions. Old train stations which were established before the year 1950, were faster than trains built afterwards. As a result, the number of people using old trains is considerably higher than those using newly established trains. Regarding the London railway station, although it was opened in 1863, its underground train travels 349 kilometres per hour, which is the longest distance any train travels in comparison with the other stations. On the other hand, Tokyo railway station which was opened after London station in the year 1927, aside from being slower than the London train, with only 155 kilometres, it transports the highest number of travellers with 1928 million, exceeding the number of London train passengers which is only 775 million people. Concerning new railway stations, Kyoto train station has the slowest railway train, which only travels 11 km per hour, with only 45 million users per year. The case is similar for Los Angeles station which was built in the year 2001, and its train only travels 28 kilometres per hour, even though it is faster than the Kyoto train, but it only has five million more passengers than Kyoto station
Thanks for detail explanation
Is it alright If the word count for my IELTS Task 1 passage exceeds 200? (206, to be precise)
For the 2nd one, as all the information given are in past, only simple past or past perfect should be used. But in this video you've used few present perfect words. Isn't that wrong ?
Thanks for this question! From the prompt, we can assume that these underground railway systems still exist in the present. This is why the present tense is used when explaining how many route kilometers and passengers they have: because they still exist. Then, the simple past tense is correctly used when referring to the exact date that each railroad was opened because it is a specific moment in the past. Keep in mind that this prompt is not asking you to describe something that happened before something else (which is when the Past Perfect would be used) -- we are just describing the specific past dates of each railroad station's opening and making relevant comparisons. Hope this answers your question!
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hello ma'am, the second body paragraph you used the present perfect. actually i thought it should be in past or past perfect because the year are in the past.please explain me
I also thought about the tense..and after became tensed
Thank you Ma'am
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i would be careful using all the strategies and structures frome these lessons, because its anyways 4 years old, and if you give it to gpt it will asses it pretty low, about 6.5
@@Rdxhgv well 6.5 was exactly my score for the writing lol but it’s okay because the overall score was a 7.5
Isn't this overall too longggg?
i will pass my ielts exam soon and preparing with your videos. Hope I will achive 7.5+ on task 1!
How was your IELTS score in tsk 1
@@kaurdhaliwal8286 i don’t know, but it was 6.5 for writing and 7.0 overall.
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thank you tremendously. although the channel has so few subscribers, you still keep teaching and give us the quality lesson. It helps me a lot in writing essays and improves my skill organization. much love. Mucha gracias... amor amor
how is only 4 times snow , it should be 45 times more than any other city
I was wondering why this broken-up essay got few views
In detail description. Thanks
Could someone plz help !
Had a query
In the overview paragraph why aren't we using had instead we are using has .
For reference see the lst line of the para .
I’m not clear how she came up with 28 degrees for Helsinki and 26 for Casablanca. The lowest temperature in Helsinki is -10 and highest +18 and Casablanca its 9 to 35. Why did she subtract 9 from 35. Someone explain this for me pls .
because it is range, you need to find the difference btw them
Same doubt I have. If she adds -10* +18= 28 how come she added in what terms ?
fascinating grouping and really admirable explanation,Thank you mam!🙂🙂
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Overall, it can be clearly seen that London has the oldest railway system in comparison with the other five countries. Additionally, Kyoto has the most mediorce annual number of commuters and route kilometers.
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Best video ever, worth it to watched. I hope you can teach cycle/pictorial?as well. Thank you so much. My exam is on September , my vocabulary is poor maybe I can memorize the structure but I don't know the vocab. I think I wanna go back in preschool to learn again.
Hoped u would make more videos:< Nevertheless tnx for ur videos!
damn this table style is so difficult but your video provides many useful information!!
Helsinki has 40 times more snowfall than other cities, not 4 times!
thank you you really made task 1 very easy for me and tips to group ideas!
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task 1 is only inn 20 mins we have not time to summarize all of this
u gotta practice u know, it only takes 5 minutes if u get used to this type of task 1, and the next 15 min just write them all down so i think summary is needed
I find it very useful.thanks alot
Thank u very much ,while I see your video ,I boost my confidence in writing task 1. It's really helpfull for me
Would it be wrong to group the body paragraphs according to cities (one for Edinburgh, Paris and Helsinki and one for Casablanca)? I thought of this since Casablanca is the only one that stands out in terms of heat
you can do that it still correct
but try to involve comparisons as well
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