The more I listen to this the more I love it!!!! I mean.... 4 ships in one conversation!!! Not many writers can pull that off as well as you did!!! You have captured the emotion of this story beautifully, we are right there feeling it all with them Love the references to season 4 as well!!
@@dawnchoruswrites-miraculousI think something really special about your fanfics is that you take canon events/elements and integrate them into the story, and make an even better storyline with them! 🤩
Okay.. Let me tell u Dawn I've been listening to Miraculous audiofics since the beginning And Mira's miraculous, Mireille Tanaka, Lyradasical and Stacey Holts were the top most generic and most awesome audiobookers. Even at this time.. u and Rose writes are head to head. But what makes u stand out is that "U" all alone manage to voice dum the clumsy mari and the playful chat. But today... This audiobook..really stole my heart and for everyone who will listen to it. This audiobook will change all perceptions about other channels with miraculous audiobooks on them and this one oneshot of yours will stand out. I swear...promote this video on all media.. cause though to get the inside jokes and other secret garden n engagements and other parts are known to the subscribed users.. But this oneshot was your best ever work and easily the best audiobook anyone made ever. Mannn...the song fits in perfectly Though the lyrics were repeated now n then But to get all the dynamics of the love square and soooooo intense.... I'm literally in seventh heaven right now. Please...we do need a part 2 for this🥺🥺🥺😭😭😭 Dawn! Continue the good work.
Wow, I am truly blown away Preet by your comment, it really does mean the world to me to receive such a compliment and comparison. It helps to give me the confidence and encouragement to keep producing the stories and video. So thank you 😊 💓 And yes, I am going to continue to add more continuing oneshots to this story line, so stay tune. Hope you have a lovely day 🐞😺😁
This song is famous for so long that I wasn't expecting to be affected that much by this chapter but you hit me with your words... I CRIED!! I'm not believing this. Their dynamic, honesty, love... It will take time for me to recover
I've been listening to the same story for 3 times or more but I still love it!! Can't wait for how she will announce it to their family and friends about engaging to Adrian
I love how you voice the puns! Great job! It cracks me up picturing what happens next because telling anyone they know that they’re engaged will essentially reveal that Adrian is Chat….
This was amazing thank you in hope you make another continuation where adrien and marinette figure out how to explain this situation to their friends and family
I also love the song all of me and was hyped to see it incorporated into a fic. However as a jazz musician I know 2 other songs with title all of me and romantic lyrics so I was confused as to what lyrics to expect included in the fic. Was beautifully executed in the end though!
@@Will-mk5pj yep. Although the other ones I'm thinking of are older than the one used in the fic they'd also be harder to use in a fic so I'm glad they used the version that they did.
Heyyy! I love every single videos you do and get excited every time you upload one. I wanna request a song, “Just a Friend to you” by Meghan Trainor or “An Art Gallery Could Never Be As Unique As You” by mrld ^_^
Ive only just run across your videos and love them. But I was wondering what other videos is this one connected to so i can listen to it from the beginning.
I like how some of these lines are from the song from the background HAHAHA anyways good to see more people doing audiofics I will listen to more and I wont be able to reply because I listen to it at night when I sleep
Sqeee! So cute! Enjoyed the musical background and your story and reading! But Marinette will wish she kept the dating relationship with cat private now that she knows who cat is. ;)
"...how is she going to explain this to her friends and family?" Well, get earplugs, girl. When a certain redhead finds out, her shrieks are going to hit high decibels!!!
Listened just before bed, now I can't sleep. Won't be long before I have listened to all your stories. Your vocabulary is already contaminating my daily conversations 😅.
Hello Dawn I love the way you turn songs into miraculous stories. I do have a request there is this song from Shania Twain called "still the one" don't know if you've heard it and if you could work and doing a one shot lyrical and don't worry if you don't have the time what ever you write I'm sure there are just as good as always. thank you for taking the time to entertain so many of us.
I'll check out the lyrics and see if they will work, some times it takes longer for an idea to form but I'm always happy to take requests and thank you for your kind words of support, they mean a lot. 😊
Sorry I wasn't focused earlier. I like this because the quality is almost the same as Rose. I love writer. Sorry not to compare but this is much better than Ladrien's story.
Hi Dawn! I really like your stories!😁 I’ve got a request for you. What do you think of writing a lyric one shot based off the song “Love Will Find a Way” from Lion king 2? No pressure if you don’t want to take this request.🙂 I was just wondering how would you write the story.
Hello Jessica and I'm so pleased you like my stories. Thank you for the request and I will check out the song and lyrics and see if a story comes to mind. I'll check back with you soon, all the best. 😊💖
Ok, I know this is fast but just listened to it and I can see a sweet lyrical linked to it. Do you have a favourite ship, as it could apply to Adrienette, LadyNoir or Marichat.
@@dawnchoruswrites-miraculous That is awesome! 😆 Thank you for checking out the song!😁 Honestly, ladynoir was the first ship that came to my mind but it’s totally up to you.😊
It me your buttercup....... One really have to wonder tho ONE REALLY HAVE TO WONDER THO who's side of the Adrien "Get" it from. Logically would be his mother.......YET......you never this thing full for life a have weird sense of rumor IT COULD BE HIS FATHER SIDE OF THE FAMILY
@@dawnchoruswrites-miraculous it could be called Hard line confusion. Their is a secret that can't be told but have to tell everyone what and why, and how that happened.
Okay we need a another part of this when she tells every one that she is the one engaged to adrien
Yes I totally agree
YAAS!!!
Agreeeddd
This is truth
YES I WAS THINKING THATT
"Sugarcubeee!"
"Plagg! You stinky sock!" 🤣
😂 The amount of takes I need to do, maybe I should do a Kwami blooper reel?! lol
@@dawnchoruswrites-miraculousLol yes pleasee 😂
The more I listen to this the more I love it!!!!
I mean.... 4 ships in one conversation!!! Not many writers can pull that off as well as you did!!!
You have captured the emotion of this story beautifully, we are right there feeling it all with them
Love the references to season 4 as well!!
Thank you and yeah, it naturally flowed out that way. There will more interlinked oneshots around this pair coming Soon! 😉
Loved the reference to Buttercup from Glaciator 2! :D
This was so beautiful I cannot express how much I loved it
Awww thank you and yeah, couldn't help myself it was too tempting not to reference our lovely Buttercup, bless his wee heart. 😍
@@dawnchoruswrites-miraculousI think something really special about your fanfics is that you take canon events/elements and integrate them into the story, and make an even better storyline with them! 🤩
Okay..
Let me tell u Dawn
I've been listening to Miraculous audiofics since the beginning And Mira's miraculous, Mireille Tanaka, Lyradasical and Stacey Holts were the top most generic and most awesome audiobookers.
Even at this time.. u and Rose writes are head to head.
But what makes u stand out is that "U" all alone manage to voice dum the clumsy mari and the playful chat.
But today... This audiobook..really stole my heart and for everyone who will listen to it.
This audiobook will change all perceptions about other channels with miraculous audiobooks on them and this one oneshot of yours will stand out.
I swear...promote this video on all media.. cause though to get the inside jokes and other secret garden n engagements and other parts are known to the subscribed users..
But this oneshot was your best ever work and easily the best audiobook anyone made ever.
Mannn...the song fits in perfectly
Though the lyrics were repeated now n then
But to get all the dynamics of the love square and soooooo intense....
I'm literally in seventh heaven right now.
Please...we do need a part 2 for this🥺🥺🥺😭😭😭
Dawn! Continue the good work.
Wow, I am truly blown away Preet by your comment, it really does mean the world to me to receive such a compliment and comparison. It helps to give me the confidence and encouragement to keep producing the stories and video. So thank you 😊 💓
And yes, I am going to continue to add more continuing oneshots to this story line, so stay tune. Hope you have a lovely day 🐞😺😁
Mrs Kitty! This is a much better reveal than Ephemeral!
lol Cheers 😊😏😍😆
right!
@@dawnchoruswrites-miraculous PLEASE!!!!! Please have her have to explain the Buttercup name to him! That would be hilarious!
Mrs. Kitty 👰♀ 🐈⬛
This was adorable! Also this song! 💕 And nice way to connect it to a couple of your other stories! 🥰
Glad you liked it!! 😊
This song is famous for so long that I wasn't expecting to be affected that much by this chapter but you hit me with your words... I CRIED!! I'm not believing this. Their dynamic, honesty, love... It will take time for me to recover
Aww bless you. 🤗💖
I've been listening to the same story for 3 times or more but I still love it!! Can't wait for how she will announce it to their family and friends about engaging to Adrian
I love how you voice the puns! Great job! It cracks me up picturing what happens next because telling anyone they know that they’re engaged will essentially reveal that Adrian is Chat….
This was amazing thank you in hope you make another continuation where adrien and marinette figure out how to explain this situation to their friends and family
Thank you and I think there will quiet few additional linked one-shot to this one and the previous other two. 🤔😊
Mrs. Kitty. The perfect song choice, especially with the music playing in the background.
I love the song “All of Me” and I can’t wait to see how you incorporate it!
I also love the song all of me and was hyped to see it incorporated into a fic. However as a jazz musician I know 2 other songs with title all of me and romantic lyrics so I was confused as to what lyrics to expect included in the fic. Was beautifully executed in the end though!
@@donanthebarbarian5177 Thats fair, all of me has a few songs that share the title
@@Will-mk5pj yep. Although the other ones I'm thinking of are older than the one used in the fic they'd also be harder to use in a fic so I'm glad they used the version that they did.
@@donanthebarbarian5177 Intriguing, but that makes sense
Fricking dying this one shot has to be one of my favourite. It was very beautiful thank you very much. Healed my heart right up.
1st: This was amazing!
2nd: let’s take a sec to Love the thumbnail art! It’s beautiful!
Oh thanks! and yes, love the artist Shani!!! 💖
Heyyy! I love every single videos you do and get excited every time you upload one. I wanna request a song, “Just a Friend to you” by Meghan Trainor or “An Art Gallery Could Never Be As Unique As You” by mrld ^_^
Thank you, I'll check out the lyrics and see what idea forms in my head, I'll let you know and cheers for all the support 😀
Dawn this was amazingg😭✨
Thank you so much 😊
You did a great job, bravo 👏 👏 👏... Can't wait to hear more from you... you earn a subscriber, keep up the good work
Thank you so much! 😊
I LOVE IT.
The end is so- oh my god, how are they going to explain everything?!
You had me wheeze laughing toward the end.
Ive only just run across your videos and love them. But I was wondering what other videos is this one connected to so i can listen to it from the beginning.
It starts with secret first date and then followed with A Love Like This. Thank you and glad you're enjoying them.
@@dawnchoruswrites-miraculous thank you!
Another instalment!!! 😍😍😍😍
Love the song choice!!!
The emotions I felt though out this story is insane , PERFECTION ❤
❤❤❤❤ whaauw!!! Oh, you had me realy hung at all of your words!! I loved the story!! ❤❤
Keep it going we need to know how she tells everyone or how they get married
I love it. I want a part 2 lol 😆
I like how some of these lines are from the song from the background HAHAHA anyways good to see more people doing audiofics I will listen to more and I wont be able to reply because I listen to it at night when I sleep
Glad you enjoyed it ☺
We need the engagement announcement and the wedding
Another amazing story and I found a song that would be great lyrical one shot. It's called Soldier by Before You Exit. Can't wait for the next video.
So good, love all your stories.
Thank you so much!! 💓
Sqeee! So cute! Enjoyed the musical background and your story and reading! But Marinette will wish she kept the dating relationship with cat private now that she knows who cat is. ;)
"...how is she going to explain this to her friends and family?"
Well, get earplugs, girl. When a certain redhead finds out, her shrieks are going to hit high decibels!!!
Listened just before bed, now I can't sleep. Won't be long before I have listened to all your stories. Your vocabulary is already contaminating my daily conversations 😅.
Lol I hope in a good way but I know I have a couple of bad habits or you might sound a little English 😅
@@dawnchoruswrites-miraculous Yeah, it is quite different than the "English” we speak here in USA.
@@robertthompson3447 😄😏💖😅
Hello Dawn I love the way you turn songs into miraculous stories. I do have a request there is this song from Shania Twain called "still the one" don't know if you've heard it and if you could work and doing a one shot lyrical and don't worry if you don't have the time what ever you write I'm sure there are just as good as always. thank you for taking the time to entertain so many of us.
I'll check out the lyrics and see if they will work, some times it takes longer for an idea to form but I'm always happy to take requests and thank you for your kind words of support, they mean a lot. 😊
Sorry I wasn't focused earlier. I like this because the quality is almost the same as Rose. I love writer. Sorry not to compare but this is much better than Ladrien's story.
I love it.
You HAVE to do one with the conversation between these 2 and alya and nino!!!!! 😂😂😂😂
lol you can just imagine how that conversation is going to go... GIRL!! 😆😉
You have to make it happen 😂😂😂
Gabriel's reaction is the same
I’m obsessed with this story I have listened so many times
I would also love…to know how she will explain it to her friends and family 😂
You should find out soon. 😉😏🌟
This is amazing just don’t end this story plzz
Thank you and there will be several more interlinked oneshots around this couple coming soon. 😊😉🐞😺
❤❤loved ! Misses kity
Hi Dawn! I really like your stories!😁 I’ve got a request for you. What do you think of writing a lyric one shot based off the song “Love Will Find a Way” from Lion king 2? No pressure if you don’t want to take this request.🙂 I was just wondering how would you write the story.
Hello Jessica and I'm so pleased you like my stories. Thank you for the request and I will check out the song and lyrics and see if a story comes to mind. I'll check back with you soon, all the best. 😊💖
Ok, I know this is fast but just listened to it and I can see a sweet lyrical linked to it. Do you have a favourite ship, as it could apply to Adrienette, LadyNoir or Marichat.
@@dawnchoruswrites-miraculous That is awesome! 😆 Thank you for checking out the song!😁 Honestly, ladynoir was the first ship that came to my mind but it’s totally up to you.😊
Everyone on here. Can you guys pray for me starting today and until I get out of the hospital?
You will be in our thoughts. Hope you have a speedy recovery. 💖
Love it
I was thinking the glory of love would be a good 1 shot
Omg adorable!!!!! ♡
Friends and family.... How about just explaining to Alya?
😆 Oh this is going to fun to write!! lol 😉
Okay now I want to see the show of them explaining this to their friend's xD
Coming soon! Waiting on a commission piece of art. 😄👍
Ohoo❤so lovely ❤😊
I was listening to on the street where u live from my fair lady and made me think of Marichat just throwing idea out there
1. Secret Valentine
2.all of me.
3. I have loved you since we were 18.
How IS she going to explain this to her friends and family? GOTTA KNOW!!!
Listen for like the millionth time love this
hmmm sounds like the other marichat vid, save ur tears 🤭
We need another part all the time 😢😢😢😢😢😢
There are more stories which will continue this series on their way. I'm waiting on artwork for the next part to this. 😊
It took me a sec to realize the song in the back and the title
OH MY POOR BABY HEART!!!!!! 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Perfect 🥰
😊 cheers.
I kept screaming because of the song, it was a great story though
Glad you enjoyed it 😺🌠
Was listening to numb by linkin park would be good one shot was thinking
I will take a look at it, thanks for the suggestion. 😃
It me
your buttercup.......
One really have to wonder tho
ONE REALLY HAVE TO WONDER THO
who's side of the Adrien "Get" it from. Logically would be his mother.......YET......you never this thing full for life a have weird sense of rumor IT COULD BE HIS FATHER SIDE OF THE FAMILY
And that is a conversation I'm staying out of
♡♡♡♡♡ 😍😍😍😍 awwwww
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Secret first date and a love like this?
Awwww
May I request a Ladrien story? I know it's not the favorite ship of anyone but it'd be cool to see it.
Hey GoGuy, yes I'm planning on more Ladrien stories. 🙂
@@dawnchoruswrites-miraculous Awesome, thanks! (Sorry for my overwhelming amount of comments lol)
I would see how she explained everything
That oneshot is coming soon, I am just waiting on a commissioned piece of art for the thumbnail. 😉🌟
@@dawnchoruswrites-miraculous it could be called Hard line confusion. Their is a secret that can't be told but have to tell everyone what and why, and how that happened.
can you make a story Titl my girl my women my friend. By Jose Marie chan
Thanks for the suggestion, I'll check out the lyrics and come up with a story. 😊
Jajajaja 💙💙
Mrs kitty
You sound like you have a British accent
🥹🥹🥹🥹
This is cringe
Love it