I like your video, as a fan of the nerd any retrospective is appreciated, especially halloween themed and I like your critique of the individual episodes in relation to the film making style, but I do some constructive critism that I hope you don't take personally. The introduction was way too long. There was no need to talk about the quality of the show as least at that point. You could have incorporated that into the later specials with a different feel or "less quality productions" and it would be more natural. I don't know if this was the pad the video length but at 7 and half minutes explaining the story of the nerd was way too long. You said yourself that we know all this, so why is it included? A brief 2/3 minute history would be sufficient. I nearly switched off but instead chose to fast-forward through it all. In addition, you had a monotone recording voice, there was no feeling behind what you were saying. Apart from that though, it was enjoyable to watch.
Hey, thanks for the feedback. Yeah, so, was dragged into a vacation where I got given the flu just after fighting another illness for a month straight, so I was a little low on time to give the video a second pass. Definitely could've trimmed the explanation but was out of time. I think the reason I initially made it that way was I was anxious about leaving anyone out of the know and the text saying "you already know this" as a bandaid lol You're definitely right, though, and if I had more forethought, I could've trimmed it down. As for my monotone voice, I've been told it's funny and that people see my persona as a sleep deprived professor and that they liked that, so my updated model has tiredness lines added to the eye. I'm always shooting for something kind of subdued and pensive, I guess? But maybe being subdued and pensive at all times is too much lol Anyhow, I super appreciate the feedback! I typically try to keep catch-up segments short and will continue to outside of this one blunder, and I'll start considering when and how to emote more in these reads.
@Professor-Preston no problem dude. Your monotone voice didn't turn me off at all I just thought I'd mention it. If that's what you're going for, then you've certainly achieved it, and as new viewer I didn't think about the correlation between voice and persona, it makes a lot of sense. Anwyay keep it up dude, you've gained a sub from me.
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Great video 👍
Thanks!
pretty cool vid
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u got my sub
Thanks! I appreciate that a ton!
I like your video, as a fan of the nerd any retrospective is appreciated, especially halloween themed and I like your critique of the individual episodes in relation to the film making style, but I do some constructive critism that I hope you don't take personally.
The introduction was way too long. There was no need to talk about the quality of the show as least at that point. You could have incorporated that into the later specials with a different feel or "less quality productions" and it would be more natural. I don't know if this was the pad the video length but at 7 and half minutes explaining the story of the nerd was way too long. You said yourself that we know all this, so why is it included? A brief 2/3 minute history would be sufficient. I nearly switched off but instead chose to fast-forward through it all. In addition, you had a monotone recording voice, there was no feeling behind what you were saying.
Apart from that though, it was enjoyable to watch.
Hey, thanks for the feedback.
Yeah, so, was dragged into a vacation where I got given the flu just after fighting another illness for a month straight, so I was a little low on time to give the video a second pass. Definitely could've trimmed the explanation but was out of time. I think the reason I initially made it that way was I was anxious about leaving anyone out of the know and the text saying "you already know this" as a bandaid lol
You're definitely right, though, and if I had more forethought, I could've trimmed it down.
As for my monotone voice, I've been told it's funny and that people see my persona as a sleep deprived professor and that they liked that, so my updated model has tiredness lines added to the eye. I'm always shooting for something kind of subdued and pensive, I guess? But maybe being subdued and pensive at all times is too much lol
Anyhow, I super appreciate the feedback! I typically try to keep catch-up segments short and will continue to outside of this one blunder, and I'll start considering when and how to emote more in these reads.
@Professor-Preston no problem dude. Your monotone voice didn't turn me off at all I just thought I'd mention it. If that's what you're going for, then you've certainly achieved it, and as new viewer I didn't think about the correlation between voice and persona, it makes a lot of sense.
Anwyay keep it up dude, you've gained a sub from me.
Well, I appreciate that very greatly friend! I hope you enjoy what I make into the future.