This isn’t a prison, this is alien summer camp. And the inmates are the equivalent of nerdy city kids struggling to light a fire for the first time. I guess weather would be scary if you grew up on a space station
So just imagine how those aliens would react seeing a fully grown grizzly bear or a swarm of wasps or fuck even mosquitos, and dont even get me started on what artic, ocean, desert, rainforest conditions are like.
Us humans are a savage breed born to adapt and overwhelm we also have various mindsets we may seem vicious but we do strive to impress i for one a retired vet who lives in the rockies 12,000 feet up live to help those in need
I just picture like earth is a deathworld with heavy gravity and became a prison for aliens and when they arrived they're all skinny and weak and sometimes fell down do to the gravity and when they're prison days are over and head back to their planet they're muscular and bulky with their monster strength and ends up heading back to earth cause they made another crime which was a accident and live the rest of their lives peacefully on earth.
7:20 You gotta fight disaster somehow, and you can't stab or shoot a hurricane, you can't conquer a thunderstorm with armies. You have to do it with care for each other, with kindness and cooperation. A shame how many humans forget that these days...
Great writing, Sarge. Excellent descriptions and limited distracting verbiage. The plot flows and is not inhibited by confusing banter and attempts to win the vocabulary prize. Great transition from hopelessness to victorious accomplishment. Quite an enjoyable read.
5:10 Therefore it is, the Dark Souls mindset. Challenge isn't just an obstacle, it's an opportunity for growth. And that's why we should always look forward to it.
I'd think they're guards for the prison, and a possible test to see how the prisoners react to our predators under a controlled environment. To determine if they could handle stress without panic. Don't want a prisoner on work duty seeing a wild animal and freaking out possibly causing issues.
You know, I could picture Warden Johnson having a secret crush on the alien girl, only he's smart enough to not allow his feelings get in the way of his job. Maybe they do hook up some years later, when the whole mess of whatever landed her in prison in the 1st place has been sorted out. Here's my follow-up idea: It turns out our alien inmate was wrongfully accused of the crime placed on her, the real offender was sent to Earth years later, not to the same prison as our main character but an even tougher one run by less sympathetic guards. These guards know of the offender's shady background & won't go easy no matter what. Next we hear of the offender is him going mad & attacking the other prisoners & several guards, he is then transferred to a mental ward in the prison, Earth CERTAINLY BROKE HIM!
I enjoyed this story. Not quite sure if it's human made or AI made. I'm leaning towards AI, as there's a lot of repetition. But it's a damned good one.
F it let's do this. Yep we definitely say that on a bad day on job sites. I've had times were people melted and left the site and it's like well f it I gotta some how do a two man task alone f it is definitely the thing
This isn’t a prison, this is alien summer camp. And the inmates are the equivalent of nerdy city kids struggling to light a fire for the first time. I guess weather would be scary if you grew up on a space station
Problems and experiences are relative. There are people who grew up in situations right here on Earth that would think you're as soft as marshmallow.
So just imagine how those aliens would react seeing a fully grown grizzly bear or a swarm of wasps or fuck even mosquitos, and dont even get me started on what artic, ocean, desert, rainforest conditions are like.
The first warden in fiction who isn't a bad guy.
Fiction.
All Australians are laughing.
Oi!
And the Canadians are chortling in Polar Bear.
And the Emus are watching
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The rest of Earth is a level 7 death world. Australia moves the 7 to 10.
First time I have seen this type of story line and not too many clichés. A good story thank you and well done!
It sucked
Us humans are a savage breed born to adapt and overwhelm we also have various mindsets we may seem vicious but we do strive to impress i for one a retired vet who lives in the rockies 12,000 feet up live to help those in need
I just picture like earth is a deathworld with heavy gravity and became a prison for aliens and when they arrived they're all skinny and weak and sometimes fell down do to the gravity and when they're prison days are over and head back to their planet they're muscular and bulky with their monster strength and ends up heading back to earth cause they made another crime which was a accident and live the rest of their lives peacefully on earth.
7:20 You gotta fight disaster somehow, and you can't stab or shoot a hurricane, you can't conquer a thunderstorm with armies. You have to do it with care for each other, with kindness and cooperation.
A shame how many humans forget that these days...
Great writing, Sarge. Excellent descriptions and limited distracting verbiage. The plot flows and is not inhibited by confusing banter and attempts to win the vocabulary prize. Great transition from hopelessness to victorious accomplishment. Quite an enjoyable read.
1:48 "You're here because you're f*cked up"
me: he's not wrong
Its cute. Earth is adopting the rehabilitated former criminals of the galaxy.
Live life. Father Time never looses.
5:10 Therefore it is, the Dark Souls mindset. Challenge isn't just an obstacle, it's an opportunity for growth. And that's why we should always look forward to it.
This is a really good short story and it doesn't have all the magic of adverb pronouns and over wordy s***
So where do the direwolves come from??
I'd think they're guards for the prison, and a possible test to see how the prisoners react to our predators under a controlled environment. To determine if they could handle stress without panic. Don't want a prisoner on work duty seeing a wild animal and freaking out possibly causing issues.
Re-evolution is a thing that has been documented. Maybe the grey wolves of Yellowstone evolved again.
Yeah, that one caught me off-guard.
So when does Krisnaxia change his name to Nakia Deathworlder?
Wait, this is fiction? I beg to differ. I've been saying for awhile that Earth is another planet's hell...
what do you mean another planets, pretty sure its ours to.
This sounds more Boy Scout Camp than prison.
Really enjoyed this story. Thanks alot.
Great story❤❤
You know, I could picture Warden Johnson having a secret crush on the alien girl, only he's smart enough to not allow his feelings get in the way of his job. Maybe they do hook up some years later, when the whole mess of whatever landed her in prison in the 1st place has been sorted out. Here's my follow-up idea:
It turns out our alien inmate was wrongfully accused of the crime placed on her, the real offender was sent to Earth years later, not to the same prison as our main character but an even tougher one run by less sympathetic guards. These guards know of the offender's shady background & won't go easy no matter what. Next we hear of the offender is him going mad & attacking the other prisoners & several guards, he is then transferred to a mental ward in the prison, Earth CERTAINLY BROKE HIM!
I enjoyed this story.
Not quite sure if it's human made or AI made.
I'm leaning towards AI, as there's a lot of repetition.
But it's a damned good one.
F it let's do this. Yep we definitely say that on a bad day on job sites. I've had times were people melted and left the site and it's like well f it I gotta some how do a two man task alone f it is definitely the thing
Sometimes you just have to tank it and power through. It's what humans do.
Deathworld = Lifeworld
Dire wolves? Why not?
Yeah, like regular wolves weren't bad enough, Nocursewn.
Direwolves probs came from a deextinction lab
In the future,
Yeah a revived escapee pack of direwolves doesn't seem that far off
AKA Marine Corps boot camp.
I was thinking that after the MC is 'rehabilitated' he gets enrolled in the USMC.
Is the description the ai prompt used?
END CARDS! USE THEM!
Good story. 🎉🎉
Muscula.... TURRR..
So where's the alien girl?
The narrator sounds a bit like Kevin Sorbo.
Yep cool
Not bad..
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