Heyy! The storyline to this was js amazing!! But i think u moved a bit fast with the story.. so maybe u could js take ur time with it and slow it down a bit maybe add more description of the characters feelings and setting description this would be top notch! Loved this ff just a bit of advice 💗
nobody gon talk abt how she ran out of air in the first 5 seconds of being in the bathroom-
Hahahaha
No literally 💀
Fr that makes zero sece 💀
HOW DOES THIS NOT HAVE MORE LIKES? ITS AMAZING ❤❤
Some times people are forgetful and forget to like(I think)🤷🏽♀
What scared me is that Nina is what my friends call me 😭 great ff btw
Me just reading it ends with us and seeing alyssa
My girly fr ran out of air in like not even 3 seconds of being in the bathroom.
Heyy! The storyline to this was js amazing!! But i think u moved a bit fast with the story.. so maybe u could js take ur time with it and slow it down a bit maybe add more description of the characters feelings and setting description this would be top notch! Loved this ff just a bit of advice 💗
Thankyou very much for the advice!❤️
@@dreamieee_3 anytime! 💗💗💗
3:46 *kinilig*
Omg im blushing
Nah bc there's this really rude girl in my class called Alyssa💀💀😭
Hii, your Story is AMAZING but pls don't use the Name of our Lord in vain 😊
Jesus loves you❤