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  • Опубликовано: 18 ноя 2024

Комментарии • 16

  • @Heeseungs_fungal-toenail
    @Heeseungs_fungal-toenail Год назад +18

    nobody gon talk abt how she ran out of air in the first 5 seconds of being in the bathroom-

  • @sarahxlov3
    @sarahxlov3 Год назад +9

    HOW DOES THIS NOT HAVE MORE LIKES? ITS AMAZING ❤❤

    • @SimonaNigro-yp4vu
      @SimonaNigro-yp4vu Год назад +1

      Some times people are forgetful and forget to like(I think)🤷🏽‍♀

  • @ChristinaSihombing-de3om
    @ChristinaSihombing-de3om 10 месяцев назад

    What scared me is that Nina is what my friends call me 😭 great ff btw

  • @aanyashah6338
    @aanyashah6338 Год назад +2

    Me just reading it ends with us and seeing alyssa

  • @sameehamuddasiryasin1697
    @sameehamuddasiryasin1697 9 месяцев назад

    My girly fr ran out of air in like not even 3 seconds of being in the bathroom.

  • @rayansari_
    @rayansari_ Год назад +16

    Heyy! The storyline to this was js amazing!! But i think u moved a bit fast with the story.. so maybe u could js take ur time with it and slow it down a bit maybe add more description of the characters feelings and setting description this would be top notch! Loved this ff just a bit of advice 💗

    • @dreamieee_3
      @dreamieee_3  Год назад +5

      Thankyou very much for the advice!❤️

    • @rayansari_
      @rayansari_ Год назад +1

      @@dreamieee_3 anytime! 💗💗💗

  • @defnotyoursss
    @defnotyoursss Год назад

    3:46 *kinilig*

  • @fairyfernando2009
    @fairyfernando2009 Год назад +1

    Nah bc there's this really rude girl in my class called Alyssa💀💀😭

  • @born_in_christ
    @born_in_christ Год назад +1

    Hii, your Story is AMAZING but pls don't use the Name of our Lord in vain 😊
    Jesus loves you❤