It’s not really a first draft. This is probably the first draft after they worked on it for ages. Like an essay. The first draft is basically the finished essay, but better.
We understand by this point that she’s a great songwriter, but can we also mention how amazing of a melody maker she is? Like okey Miss you wrote this masterpiece but u ALSO came up with this beautiful melody??😭😭
It's better in that version. The lyrics are not forced. Her passion sounds natural. Only a few piano and vocal polishes are needed in this song, we don't synths for this.
Hey, so, um, this is kind of an abnormal structure, but I think it could be really cool this way. And just, it sounds sad 'cause it's on piano, um, and, I'm sad in general. But um, it's gotta have, like, a driving synth beat, or whatever Oh, here we go again The voices in his head Ring out louder than our midnight sighs The sickest army doll Purchased at the mall Rivulets descend my plastic smile But you should've seen him when he first got me My boy only breaks his favorite toys, toys, oh I'm queen of sand castles he destroys, oh, oh 'Cause it fit too right, puzzle pieces in the dead of night Should'vе known it was a matter of time, oh, oh My boy only breaks his favoritе toys, oh There was a litany of reasons why It could've been different this time I know I'm just repeating myself Put me back on my shelf But first, pull the string I'll tell you that he runs Because he loves me 'Cause you should've seen him when he first saw me My boy only breaks his favorite toys, toys, oh I'm queen of the kingdoms he destroys, oh, oh 'Cause I knew too much, there was danger in the heat of my touch Said forever, then he blew it up , oh, oh My boy only breaks his favorite toys, toys Just say when, I'd play again He was my best friend and that was the worst part I felt more then in brief moments Than with all the Kens 'Cause he took me out of my box Left all these broken parts And kept my tortured heart And told me I'm better off But I'm not And I think you can just end it like that
Oh, here we go again. The voices in his head Called the rain to end our days of wild The sickest army doll Purchased at the mall Rivulets descend my plastic smile But you should've seen him When he first got me My boy only breaks his favorite toys I'm queen of sand castles he destroys Cause it fit too right Puzzle pieces in the dead of night Should've known it was a matter of time Oh, my boy only breaks his favorite toys There was a litany of reasons why We could've played for keeps this time I know I'm just repeating myself Put me back on my shelf But first - Pull the string And I'll tell you that he runs Because he loves me. Cause you should've seen him When he first saw me. My boy only breaks his favorite toys I'm queen of sand castles he destroys Cause I knew too much There was danger in the heat of my touch He saw forever so he smashed it up Oh, my boy only breaks his favorite toys Once I fix me, he's gonna miss me Once I fix me, he's gonna miss me Just say when, I'd play again He was my best friend Down at the sandlot I felt more when we played pretend Than with all the Kens Cause he took me out of my box Stole my tortured heart Left all these broken parts Told me I'm better off But I'm not I'm not I'm not.
I actually like the edits she made to it. It keeps better with the theme of playing and toys, so I understand why those choices were made. Absolutely beautiful. 🤍🤍🤍
Oh, here we go again. The voices in his head Called the rain to end our days of wild The sickest army doll Purchased at the mall Rivulets descend my plastic smile But you should've seen him When he first got me My boy only breaks his favorite toys I'm queen of sand castles he destroys Cause it fit too right Puzzle pieces in the dead of night Should've known it was a matter of time Oh, my boy only breaks his favorite toys There was a litany of reasons why We could've played for keeps this time I know I'm just repeating myself Put me back on my shelf But first - Pull the string And I'll tell you that he runs Because he loves me. Cause you should've seen him When he first saw me. My boy only breaks his favorite toys I'm queen of sand castles he destroys Cause I knew too much There was danger in the heat of my touch He saw forever so he smashed it up Oh, my boy only breaks his favorite toys Once I fix me, he's gonna miss me Once I fix me, he's gonna miss me Just say when, I'd play again He was my best friend Down at the sandlot I felt more when we played pretend Than with all the Kens Cause he took me out of my box Stole my tortured heart Left all these broken parts Told me I'm better off But I'm not I'm not I'm not.
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"And im sad in general"
😭
😭 when I heard this I was like “I’m soooo sorry Taylor 😢”
She was trying to said “im sad in general in the whole song”😊
@@sam_taylorshe was saying she's sad because she was. You can literally hear her crying
It’s the most relatable thing I’ve heard all day😞 sadly😭😭
SOMEONE *GIVE* TAYLOR A *HUG*RN
This is a first draft? She’s a genius.
It’s not really a first draft. This is probably the first draft after they worked on it for ages. Like an essay. The first draft is basically the finished essay, but better.
It’s criminal that “and that was the worst part” was cut. It’s crazy how much the music changes the song.
Ikrrr
“there was a litany of reasons why IT COULD’VE BEEN DIFFERENT THIS TIME” 😭😭😭✋✋✋
“he was my best, and that was the worst part” dying.
it hits harder when u just went thru a breakup and your ex was your best friend
@@theoreorange exactly what i went though
He was the King of her Heart and then he destroyed that kingdom.
GIRL UR A GENIUS
And they were dancing with Their hands tied but they Learned the right steps to different dances
you can tell she was crying before this☹️
Yeah and she was sniffing in the beginning 🙁
We understand by this point that she’s a great songwriter, but can we also mention how amazing of a melody maker she is? Like okey Miss you wrote this masterpiece but u ALSO came up with this beautiful melody??😭😭
like a three note melody
With the piano it’s heartbreaking.
It's better in that version. The lyrics are not forced. Her passion sounds natural. Only a few piano and vocal polishes are needed in this song, we don't synths for this.
"But I'm not" on the end got me
Yesssss! How do you not cry while watching this? 😭💔 She can do it with a broken heart that’s for sure
“I’m sad in general”
Gurl, SAME! 😭🙌🏼
She's a genius. This is a first draft and it's almost identical to the final result. She's truly a genius
That’s how drafts work
Hey, so, um, this is kind of an abnormal structure, but I think it could be really cool this way. And just, it sounds sad 'cause it's on piano, um, and, I'm sad in general. But um, it's gotta have, like, a driving synth beat, or whatever
Oh, here we go again
The voices in his head
Ring out louder than our midnight sighs
The sickest army doll
Purchased at the mall
Rivulets descend my plastic smile
But you should've seen him when he first got me
My boy only breaks his favorite toys, toys, oh
I'm queen of sand castles he destroys, oh, oh
'Cause it fit too right, puzzle pieces in the dead of night
Should'vе known it was a matter of time, oh, oh
My boy only breaks his favoritе toys, oh
There was a litany of reasons why
It could've been different this time
I know I'm just repeating myself
Put me back on my shelf
But first, pull the string
I'll tell you that he runs
Because he loves me
'Cause you should've seen him when he first saw me
My boy only breaks his favorite toys, toys, oh
I'm queen of the kingdoms
he destroys, oh, oh
'Cause I knew too much, there was danger in the heat of my touch
Said forever, then he blew it up
, oh, oh
My boy only breaks his favorite toys, toys
Just say when, I'd play again
He was my best friend and that was the worst part
I felt more then in brief
moments
Than with all the Kens
'Cause he took me out of my box
Left all these broken parts
And kept my tortured heart
And told me I'm better off
But I'm not
And I think you can just end it like that
Thank you!
Thank you so much i got it thx
MBOBHFT is my favorite song from TTPD and I love so much this memo, she really sounds sad:(
I literally sing the chorus throughout the day. The chorus is so catchy and upbeat sounding, but the meaning of this song is so sad 😭
“He was my best friend and thar was the worst part” im in shambles actually
There should be the acoustic version, the piano is amazing 🥲
ruclips.net/video/u58VTBLaLKI/видео.html
The way the piano playing was so sad and how she said “I’m sad” 😭😭
She is literally crying 😭
Nope
@@fernando2917 I meant that the lyrics are genuinely sad.
This give me chills and my soul almost left
my body… and… was only a draft? was almost the whole song 🤷♂️
I’ve been waiting for this. Thank you!!
No problem!! It’s so good! 😢
I love both version!!
"And that's was the worst part" It's crazy how one part of the sng can change all the song.
Ouch.
"He saw forever then he blew it up"
This is one of my favorite songs from the album, but this phone memo made me fall apart!
This is so much sadder! I love both versions ❤️🩹
Midnight sighs 🫶💞🌌
this NEEDS to be on spotify!!!!
Oh, here we go again.
The voices in his head
Called the rain to end our days of wild
The sickest army doll
Purchased at the mall
Rivulets descend my plastic smile
But you should've seen him
When he first got me
My boy only breaks his favorite toys
I'm queen of sand castles he destroys
Cause it fit too right
Puzzle pieces in the dead of night
Should've known it was a matter of time
Oh, my boy only breaks his favorite toys
There was a litany of reasons why
We could've played for keeps this time
I know I'm just repeating myself
Put me back on my shelf
But first - Pull the string
And I'll tell you that he runs
Because he loves me.
Cause you should've seen him
When he first saw me.
My boy only breaks his favorite toys
I'm queen of sand castles he destroys
Cause I knew too much
There was danger in the heat of my touch
He saw forever so he smashed it up
Oh, my boy only breaks his favorite toys
Once I fix me, he's gonna miss me
Once I fix me, he's gonna miss me
Just say when, I'd play again
He was my best friend
Down at the sandlot
I felt more when we played pretend
Than with all the Kens
Cause he took me out of my box
Stole my tortured heart
Left all these broken parts
Told me I'm better off
But I'm not
I'm not
I'm not.
The “I’m sad in general” though. 😭
Queen of kingdoms WAS BETTER😢😢😢😢
I think she wanted to go with this whole childhood thing and kids play in sand castles
Taylor 😭💔
SHE JUST DESTROYED ME
Taylor R u ok?
THANK UU!!
Why is this better then the ATCUAL song
Thank god she chose to make it an upbeat song cause i wouldn't make it
Thank you so much! 🥰
So fragile 🥺
Indeed I keep breaking my favourite toys
❤ ich danke dir und hoffe auf Frieden bis bald❤❤❤❤❤
Can you please upload other voice memo
Heyyy when u bought this did u get it like immediatley after you bought it? I bought mine the day it was released n still havent gotten an email :(
This is 🔥🔥🔥
Where are you guys finding these?? Like where did she post?
Her store. She sells them as special digital edition
you’ve gotta pay for them. cause she doesn’t have enough money already
Miss Americana 🇺🇸 in her tower 🏰 I pulled my sword to defend the castle long time ago ⚔️ Lucky those o still have toys to brake 🤷♂️
Omg Taylor are you ok 😭😭😭
Damnnn
❤❤❤❤ ich danke dir es ist ein schöner Song😂😂😂❤❤❤😂❤😂❤
how did you not get copyright?
❤❤❤❤❤Danke für. Diesen Song ❤❤❤❤😂😂😂😂❤😂❤😂😂
"He saw forever so he blew it up" 💔🧎
How do u guys get these
Ich wünsche Dir noch einen schönen Tag ❤❤❤😂😂😂😂❤❤
How you not get copyrighted I did😢😢😢
Idk! When I tried posting Cassandra and WAOLOM I got copyrighted! It’s honestly so annoying!
@@Kailagreenberg77 yea I tried WAOLOM it did that imma try this one and see
this is skibidi toilet 😂❤❤❤
wtf
chat what does this mean
Where did you spawn from? 😂
"I am queen of the kingdoms he destroys" 💔🧎
I actually like the edits she made to it. It keeps better with the theme of playing and toys, so I understand why those choices were made. Absolutely beautiful. 🤍🤍🤍
Oh, here we go again.
The voices in his head
Called the rain to end our days of wild
The sickest army doll
Purchased at the mall
Rivulets descend my plastic smile
But you should've seen him
When he first got me
My boy only breaks his favorite toys
I'm queen of sand castles he destroys
Cause it fit too right
Puzzle pieces in the dead of night
Should've known it was a matter of time
Oh, my boy only breaks his favorite toys
There was a litany of reasons why
We could've played for keeps this time
I know I'm just repeating myself
Put me back on my shelf
But first - Pull the string
And I'll tell you that he runs
Because he loves me.
Cause you should've seen him
When he first saw me.
My boy only breaks his favorite toys
I'm queen of sand castles he destroys
Cause I knew too much
There was danger in the heat of my touch
He saw forever so he smashed it up
Oh, my boy only breaks his favorite toys
Once I fix me, he's gonna miss me
Once I fix me, he's gonna miss me
Just say when, I'd play again
He was my best friend
Down at the sandlot
I felt more when we played pretend
Than with all the Kens
Cause he took me out of my box
Stole my tortured heart
Left all these broken parts
Told me I'm better off
But I'm not
I'm not
I'm not.