Also this is one hell of a long letter Pastel guy shows up k time to die Dad "let me just write my whole life story for my son to read." Pastel guy "you mean to use their not there
How nice of the Pastel Man to give the main character time to write this letter and give it to the boy's aunt with instructions on what to do with it BEFORE showing up and killing him. :)
evilwaffle Yeah. Plus, he's SUPPOSED to have given to the people who raised his son and told them to hold it until he was eighteen or whatever (I'm forgetting the details since it's been a bit since I listened to it). I nearly had a similar issue with the end of "Penpal" until the story explained the issue.
Thanks for not putting 20 ads in the middle, it’s really frustrating when you listen to these to help you sleep, and 50 ads play and make you wake up to skip them💀🖤
Watched this with 7 friends, when he said "If you say his name out loud it will summon the beast" we all shouted: "My name is Jeff" Then the pastel man showed up and we all had to apologise for time wasting.
I thought that the drunk driver was going to be Mr. Flannigan, having turned to self-medicating to ease the hurt of having lost his son. Would've been a bit more believable than "oh he's a kid so I' choose horrible slimy bug death."
As interesting as that would have been, the message here is not to do to people what you wouldn't want them to do to you. Either that or that no matter what the person may have done, taking their life doesn't make you any better than them.
I like how everybody thinks of this "Pastel man" as a total dick, but remember he saved their lives and the interaction was totally voluntary, he could have disregarded the pastel man and just let them die. It was also the main characters fault that Walter died, like he said, he was the one to pull the trigger. Misunderstood Pastel Man is crying in a corner.
I never thought The Pastel Man was a dick. I think he's like a shadowy hero kind. It really depends on the person and their deal. The jock was a dick and I understand that he was a kid but I'd also understand if he felt no guilt even though he knew his dad, it still wouldn't affect me if I was him. But it is good that he let the drunk driver go. He mad the stupidest decision to drive drunk and he will regret it. Idk I can be a really nice person but I'm also pretty cold sometimes.
A lot of people say that they would kill somebody for the pastel man if they had the chance. But come on, yknow and I know youd be at least a little freaked out. I mean your taking someone's life.
The only freaky parts to me would be, watching someone die because of me, since ive never experienced that, unless you count hunting animals but thats got less emotional baggage, and the fact that a fucking demon is contacting me
I listened to this by accident when I had youtube on autoplay when I was going to sleep one night. I didn't sleep cause I just loved this story and had to hear it to the end. Excellent narration.
"And for what? Because he pushed me around in school?" The words of someone who was never bullied and has no fcking idea what it is like and just how far exactly they can go with it.
@@Stanutuleee People have been bullied into killing themselves. Any drama is the bully's fault. And clearly the bully's father sucked as a father if his son felt the need to bully, humiliate and abuse others.
Didn't knew you could know the author's life with just one sentence. As someone who has been bullied myself I still think that killing a bully isnt the right thing to do, two wrongs don't make a right. I'm surprised the MC of the story didn't talked to the guy's dad to solve the issue since he's described as a great person .
Still pretty funny in Spanish, but for reasons I can't explain (you would need to know what a pastel is in Brazil) "Homem do Pastel' sounds funnier than "Hombre del Pastel"
MAN OH MAN! Freakin' loved your version of this! x) That said, I'm not sure if I loved it more than MCP's, but I think your style is different than his anyway, so... I love both for their own merits! ;)
Story 10/10 kept you on your toes was not easily figured out. Though there are some plot twists I would recommend. Scare 3/5 Good visual description of the monster and very nice way of voicing the monster.
This is honestly my favorite creepypasta of all times and the thing is it took me a year to listen to it because it done been done by Mr creepypasta but after hearing Junior do it it was my favorite automatically
Absolutely Amazing story and narration. However, there is one logical error in this Story. Any man can relate: Walter didn't deserve to die..and no matter how much I believe in second chances...I wouldn't have stopped in front of the man/boy that has just killed my wife and, if it wasn't for this generous monster, my only son as well. Nope. Anyone would've gotten through with that. Leaving myself alone...also nope. Heck...when your wife just got killed...99% of all Men wouldn't even need a Monster to kill that dude...seriously.
This reminds me so much about... An RPG game which I don't remember the name. Same situation where someone has to die in someone else's place... This one is pretty good, but surprisingly long... Oh well, it's still good!
According to my father, someone having a stroke really is just "another day at the office", but he has a hard time handling stress, making him seemingly unfit for the job he's in. So, yeah, it's a little usual for them to answer like that. *Just sayin'*
Uh 911 operators are trying to control the tempo of the conversation...2 people panicking on the phone won't help the person who needs IMMEDIATE services......
I like your readings of these stories. I listen to them as I work. Everytime I have to leave my desk for something, I try to pause it. That's why I wanted to leave the feedback here, that the link to your channel in the centre of the video is bothersome. Everytime I try to unpauze/pause, it first takes me to your channel, which I have to click away before clicking a different part of the vid. I don't mind linking your channel in the vid, but maybe it would be better on the side of the video somewhere. Keep posting these. They're delightfull to hear.
The moral lamenting is something i couldnt get behind in this work. Self contradictory, at times the writer having no idea what he is talking about clearly never experiencing things like bullying and how far it can go. I also dislike the self contradictory nature of the entire thing, taking the deal twice, but lamenting over the repercussions, not wanting to pass up the trade but also not wanting to pay for it.
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Also this is one hell of a long letter
Pastel guy shows up k time to die
Dad "let me just write my whole life story for my son to read."
Pastel guy "you mean to use their not there
Right...
How nice of the Pastel Man to give the main character time to write this letter and give it to the boy's aunt with instructions on what to do with it BEFORE showing up and killing him. :)
Chris McWilliams
*claps* i thought i was the only one who noticed that
evilwaffle It is kind of weird that he would wait around long enough for him to write a letter to his son. :)
The fact that he wrote about up until he died seems odd
evilwaffle Yeah. Plus, he's SUPPOSED to have given to the people who raised his son and told them to hold it until he was eighteen or whatever (I'm forgetting the details since it's been a bit since I listened to it).
I nearly had a similar issue with the end of "Penpal" until the story explained the issue.
Chris McWilliams Maybe it's a benefit scheme for repeat customers ;)
That was sad, rather than scary, and yet somehow beautiful. Brilliant work on the story and the narration. I got a little teary-eyed at the end.
Thanks for not putting 20 ads in the middle, it’s really frustrating when you listen to these to help you sleep, and 50 ads play and make you wake up to skip them💀🖤
Crystal Blue sounds like clancypasta lol
Glitch Ninja That’s exactly who I was talking about lol
Oh I know I have the same issue falling asleep to his videos lol
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You use these to sleep? damn😅 what do you dream about... Oh wait I know the pastel man😂
I clapped at the end. 🌟👏🌟👏🌟👏 one of the best creepypastas ever.
Yo soul eater is so dank I love it
Collin Bailey and then they all clapped
ikr
The discription of the beast sounds like me in the morning
+Matthew H you arent????
...So, who picked up the Death Note?
DBZKS Ender more like who called the millenium earl
DBZKS Ender black what are you doing here
I thought the same thing
The aunt was left it when the kid was in hospital. Atleast I’m pretty sure the aunt is the one who gave him the letter.
Wouldn't mind meeting this pastel man myself, quite a few people in my life I could go without.
Viper Changed tha game wtf
YFG T O x I c what seems to be the problem>
Same lol, and quite a lot of people I wouldnt mind safeguarding
Same
* slowly backing away * (.-_.-;[
I keep imagining the shinigami Ryuk as the pastel man.
YAAAASS!!!!
oh my god that's perfect!!
that's what i thought of
same
ME TOO
This has to be one of the best creepypastas ive come across
v cava is very skilled
Watched this with 7 friends, when he said "If you say his name out loud it will summon the beast" we all shouted:
"My name is Jeff"
Then the pastel man showed up and we all had to apologise for time wasting.
beautiful
the perfect comment
I remember when my name a Jeff was hot
Really? lol we're gonna do that
Jude Riverol Hughes lolol i laughed 3 time each time I read it
it's ya boi skinny penis do you
I thought this was about a postal man lol
Lol me too
Too funny lol ha
If sue is I had a post man like this lol Make sure he didn't get paid
same lol
+Millie Bowater lol
I thought that the drunk driver was going to be Mr. Flannigan, having turned to self-medicating to ease the hurt of having lost his son. Would've been a bit more believable than "oh he's a kid so I' choose horrible slimy bug death."
As interesting as that would have been, the message here is not to do to people what you wouldn't want them to do to you. Either that or that no matter what the person may have done, taking their life doesn't make you any better than them.
Death? Vengeful Spirit? Gabriel's horn? Someone has been watching a lot of Supernatural.
I like how everybody thinks of this "Pastel man" as a total dick, but remember he saved their lives and the interaction was totally voluntary, he could have disregarded the pastel man and just let them die. It was also the main characters fault that Walter died, like he said, he was the one to pull the trigger.
Misunderstood Pastel Man is crying in a corner.
I never thought The Pastel Man was a dick. I think he's like a shadowy hero kind. It really depends on the person and their deal. The jock was a dick and I understand that he was a kid but I'd also understand if he felt no guilt even though he knew his dad, it still wouldn't affect me if I was him. But it is good that he let the drunk driver go. He mad the stupidest decision to drive drunk and he will regret it. Idk I can be a really nice person but I'm also pretty cold sometimes.
miss understood isnt that a kelly clarkson song?
Great Power Wow, quite the derp, fixed now.
nah i thought itwas cool. also im kinda scared of you now, 'cause your avatar has blue skin.
no hard feelings, right? :)
A lot of people say that they would kill somebody for the pastel man if they had the chance. But come on, yknow and I know youd be at least a little freaked out. I mean your taking someone's life.
Yeah, to be honest id be freaked out but still i have a long, long list of people i can go without
The only freaky parts to me would be, watching someone die because of me, since ive never experienced that, unless you count hunting animals but thats got less emotional baggage, and the fact that a fucking demon is contacting me
@Icof onoldpeople tell that to a judge nigga
I listened to this by accident when I had youtube on autoplay when I was going to sleep one night. I didn't sleep cause I just loved this story and had to hear it to the end. Excellent narration.
Pastel Men don't kill people, people kill people
+Selina Cruz we live in a society
Woah, that did hit pretty hard.
Pastal Men is the gun, the people behind it decide whether to shoot or keep away.
Am I the only one that thinks this would be an awesome movie?
Obviously not
It would be great but i'm too worried they would ruin it tbh
In his father's stroke gibberish I wonder if he uttered the pastel man's name.
the beginning reminds me of spiderman
domfrombelair THATS WHAT I WAS THINKING
Just imagine hanging out with the Pastel Man watching a comedy movie. 11:22 is what you will always hear lol.
Hahahah xD
Beautiful
I really don't want to imagine that. I'd be scared to death at that laugh.
I would actually like to make a deal with this guy if I lose someone.
Anyone else notice a recurring use of bugs in Vincent V cava stories?
Now I have.
He probably thinks they're scary - captain obvious
Also carrls jr
This is actually a secret ad against drunk driving. Nice going Pastel Man.
"And for what? Because he pushed me around in school?"
The words of someone who was never bullied and has no fcking idea what it is like and just how far exactly they can go with it.
Oh please drama queen
@@Stanutuleee People have been bullied into killing themselves. Any drama is the bully's fault. And clearly the bully's father sucked as a father if his son felt the need to bully, humiliate and abuse others.
Didn't knew you could know the author's life with just one sentence. As someone who has been bullied myself I still think that killing a bully isnt the right thing to do, two wrongs don't make a right.
I'm surprised the MC of the story didn't talked to the guy's dad to solve the issue since he's described as a great person .
@@elpretender1357 exactly!You are so right dude
I thought it said postal Mann. I was like...my mail man is a creepypasta?
Pastel man? Hahaha, in Brasil pastel is a type of salty pie
Salty Pie Man?
Lil Spoopy Krissy :3 Dat pic and dat comment
in Spanish means Cake LOL
Still pretty funny in Spanish, but for reasons I can't explain (you would need to know what a pastel is in Brazil) "Homem do Pastel' sounds funnier than "Hombre del Pastel"
Croktor The Dragonborn birthday remember?
Great job man. Keep it up. I really enjoy listening to the longer videos.
One day I will animate this...one day
been 10 months still waiting
YES PLEASE
If you won't, I'm sure RCM will or some animator.
Hurry the fuck up
ofc u won't
I know I'm late to the game but this is seriously one of my favorite creepypastas and I'm so psyched to hear you read it
Pastel Man?
I believe you mean
Easter Satan
This was amazing! The mix of fear and sadness is a great touch! I gotta say, one if the best creepypastas I've listened too.
I like how Cp. Jr sounded the Pastel Man's voice, it does sound strongly calming. :3
the irony is the ambulance would've save the dad eitherways lol
As a Finnish person myself. Sauna's climate (or warmth or something) should never be comparable to the Amazon rainforest climate.
I'm tired if y'all talking about the pastel man letting him write it. He wrote it after.. think about it lol
My dyslectic ass read the title as "The pasta man" and now I feel stupid...
It does not feel like a creppypasta at, but much more like a well written story of a novel. Excellent narration, excellent story.
If I were the pastel man at the end of the letter I would've put, "AAYYEE"
So, a young boy, with dead parents, who lives with his aunt, has an uncle called Ben, and the background image is a bug... hmmm...
Great narration, but I have to confess something: "I love Comic Sans!!!"
Stroivan comic sans (sans ut) or comic sans (font type)
Nyaaaaaa
Thanks
Nien
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MAN OH MAN! Freakin' loved your version of this! x) That said, I'm not sure if I loved it more than MCP's, but I think your style is different than his anyway, so... I love both for their own merits! ;)
Father: don't say yes to the pastel man
Pastel man: wanna smash
Son: yes
Uncle Ben? Does he, perchance, make and sell rice? :)
Chris McWilliams lol, I totally missed that XD
Shadanza Bonanza It's kind of really silly thing I ALWAYS notice. :)
I thought this was about a evil mailman
facts
"You were eight so I don't know how much you'll remember."
Probably the whole thing.
Great work CPJ. You've got to love Master VenaCava.
I’m not gonna lie. The end got me. I’m in tears in the middle of work. Praying no one comes by and see me.
This was an excellent horror story! You're a fantastic writer, Vincent.
"I choose Pastel Man"
Aha🤣✂️🤪😑💜😂🖕🏽😍😅😅😘😘🚬
Story 10/10 kept you on your toes was not easily figured out. Though there are some plot twists I would recommend.
Scare 3/5
Good visual description of the monster and very nice way of voicing the monster.
Wow! Outstanding work! I vividly imagined this whole story while you narrated it! Amazing!
This is probably one of my more favorite creepypasta creatures. Kinda like the Song and Dance Man.
At the end when he said Love dad I was mindblown
This is honestly my favorite creepypasta of all times and the thing is it took me a year to listen to it because it done been done by Mr creepypasta but after hearing Junior do it it was my favorite automatically
This one is one of my favorites next to the Christmas calendar story! Simply amazing. 🤩
Absolutely Amazing story and narration. However, there is one logical error in this Story. Any man can relate: Walter didn't deserve to die..and no matter how much I believe in second chances...I wouldn't have stopped in front of the man/boy that has just killed my wife and, if it wasn't for this generous monster, my only son as well. Nope. Anyone would've gotten through with that. Leaving myself alone...also nope. Heck...when your wife just got killed...99% of all Men wouldn't even need a Monster to kill that dude...seriously.
Best story I've heard in forever. I keep opening my eyes half expecting something to be standing over me
To save oneself is a act greater than any a sane man can do.
Me: you believe that bullshit?
Pastel man next to me: nah man... lets continue playing minecraft.
This by far is my favourite creepypasta
Am I the only one who saw the Pastel Man as Ryuk? No? I'll stop
*Why does "The Pastel Man" make me think of Ryuuk/Ryuk from Death Note?*
Oh it's Voldermort
Would have thought lol
Imma star making a list of people i can use for this.
Amanda bruh😂😂😂😂
I think this is my favorite creepypasta
Wow, this is the best thing I have ever heard. Really good
Well I like that... guy/thing's voice a lot ~
How can u not like this creepy pasta
Stopped working right at the best bit so far! Damn you RUclips.
I loved this one! Go Vincent V. Cava!
this has got to be my favourite
This was so good, I listened twice!!
this video came out on my birthday :D
i just watched a bug on a loop for 48 min but i felt i had to when i look away
This reminds me so much about... An RPG game which I don't remember the name. Same situation where someone has to die in someone else's place... This one is pretty good, but surprisingly long... Oh well, it's still good!
WELL, THE INTRO FUCKING HIT HOME. My Dad had a stroke too...
He's gone now...
Another amazing read. Thanks CreepyPastaJr
This is a really good creepy pasta. Nice reading of it. This is my second favorite creepy pasta. My first is the Russian sleep experiment.
According to my father, someone having a stroke really is just "another day at the office", but he has a hard time handling stress, making him seemingly unfit for the job he's in. So, yeah, it's a little usual for them to answer like that.
*Just sayin'*
Kinda moving, really. A father sacrifices himself for his son... A nice tale.
I LOVED IT!!! especially pastel man's voice o3o
He said that he would do everything, but then he told the narrator to do stuff for him
Nice to hear that the Badge Seller from A Hat in Time is still getting work
"All of my attention and focus was on one...thang" I don't think he meant to say thang but I almost died laughing XD
I teared up and I had a tear roll down my face Bcuz of this story
i love this story and i like the changes he made
Yay :D fresh meat! I love ur pastas
And I love pasta
Beetlejuice! Beetlejuice! Beetlejuice!
The strangers and this are 2 of my fave creepypastas
Story would have been much better had the driven been the grieving father... but excellent narration on your part !
Uh 911 operators are trying to control the tempo of the conversation...2 people panicking on the phone won't help the person who needs IMMEDIATE services......
Love the descriptions
I like your readings of these stories. I listen to them as I work. Everytime I have to leave my desk for something, I try to pause it. That's why I wanted to leave the feedback here, that the link to your channel in the centre of the video is bothersome. Everytime I try to unpauze/pause, it first takes me to your channel, which I have to click away before clicking a different part of the vid. I don't mind linking your channel in the vid, but maybe it would be better on the side of the video somewhere.
Keep posting these. They're delightfull to hear.
Wow this is my favorite story so far!
Pastel Man > Slenderman, Jeff, Laughing Jack, Smile Dog, Ben, and then some.
that sexy image of that insect though but seriously I was on the edge of my seat beginning to end
Damn this was a very well made story...
...But hell, its ALWAYS scary when in a CreepyPasta like this. Your actual name shows up.
The moral lamenting is something i couldnt get behind in this work. Self contradictory, at times the writer having no idea what he is talking about clearly never experiencing things like bullying and how far it can go. I also dislike the self contradictory nature of the entire thing, taking the deal twice, but lamenting over the repercussions, not wanting to pass up the trade but also not wanting to pay for it.
Ikr...that drove me nuts.
I was thinking, 'Dude make up you mind and stick to it'.
All of the waffling at the crucial moment was so maddening.