Have just found it,just after this one, I was beginning to think I'd imagined it He slaps him with out knowing full story (misunderstanding) you really improved on your original concept, it was excellent story, sorry I spelt tae's name wrong I knew I was doing it but had a bit of a mental block all the best keep writing 💜
Seemed kind of confusing, not much of a back story and rushed. Jungkook was a jerk and hurt Jimin then says oh I love you and all is ok? My opinion but it left me unsatisfied.
I agree with you I totally agree with you But s there still time left to apologize? I just wanted to finish it today and wanted it done the starting was fine but in the end my Grandmom rushed me I am so sorry I promise I will do better.
@@JikookEntertainment dude u really do make amazing stories and don't worry or feel sorry PPL r worried coz jm was such a forgiving and baby soul thts fine tht was his charector u did really nice job it was a nice time pass looking forward to ur new masterpieces💝💝💝❤️💥
Btw it should have more scene, like the bedroom it didn't show when he found jimin there, i mean is not that bad but it need more scene to tell you the true, besides that i like it really 😊
It's great and all but I'm confused, was jisoo supposed to insult him or jungkook? Isn't jungkook his profesor, why jisoo outta no where being mean to him, I'm so confused, sorry 😅 i just i haven't see a oneshot in a long time, but it was great 👍
Have you written this again? I read this a few weeks ago jisso wants to break them up and keeps giving him lots of work when Jimin tries to tell him Jungkook gets mad because he is blaming a teacher, but Tia jimin's friend tells him what has been going on in fact when she said "know one else complained" Tia tells him it was Jimin who stopped him not wanting his bff to get into trouble. If I'm right take this off and put the other one back up 💜
The other one is also on my chanel this one is also on my chanel both of them are. This one had a rushed ending so I made another one but both had different plots with almost the same title
![When you get locked in school's dark room with your cold professor (husband) [Jungkook Oneshot]](http://i.ytimg.com/vi/DBbhk8-jlbE/mqdefault.jpg)
This was good but ending seems a bit rush like jungkook saying ily out of nowhere and jm forgiving him easily but story was really good ❤❤❤❤
Yesss I noticed that too when I was reading it again but I was suddenly in a rush and wanted to complete it..I'm so sorry 😔
@@JikookEntertainment hey it was a great story overall ❤️💥
@@angelsaira2154 THANKss
jk was not a jerk...just a lil rude person. Is proven by 2:39 and 3:42
Have just found it,just after this one, I was beginning to think I'd imagined it He slaps him with out knowing full story (misunderstanding) you really improved on your original concept, it was excellent story, sorry I spelt tae's name wrong I knew I was doing it but had a bit of a mental block all the best keep writing 💜
Okie thankuuu
You did geart bae i love it don't be discouraged ita soo amazing
thanks but i can do better thaks again
@@JikookEntertainment yes you can but this was amazing
Seemed kind of confusing, not much of a back story and rushed. Jungkook was a jerk and hurt Jimin then says oh I love you and all is ok? My opinion but it left me unsatisfied.
I agree with you I totally agree with you But s there still time left to apologize? I just wanted to finish it today and wanted it done the starting was fine but in the end my Grandmom rushed me I am so sorry I promise I will do better.
@@JikookEntertainment That's ok, things happen in life that can throw us off course. It was a good storyline though, it just needed more of it.
@@earlenegillespie317 Thanku Ill make a better one I promise hehe
@@JikookEntertainment dude u really do make amazing stories and don't worry or feel sorry PPL r worried coz jm was such a forgiving and baby soul thts fine tht was his charector u did really nice job it was a nice time pass looking forward to ur new masterpieces💝💝💝❤️💥
@@angelsaira2154 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡💛💛💛💛🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡💛💛Thnx
Its rushed a bit but still cutee💗
I told you na.... 👀👀...hehe
Btw it should have more scene, like the bedroom it didn't show when he found jimin there, i mean is not that bad but it need more scene to tell you the true, besides that i like it really 😊
Ohhh I'm sorry that it's bad but I improved a lil
@@JikookEntertainment no is not bad, it's cool though 😅🙏
It's great and all but I'm confused, was jisoo supposed to insult him or jungkook? Isn't jungkook his profesor, why jisoo outta no where being mean to him, I'm so confused, sorry 😅 i just i haven't see a oneshot in a long time, but it was great 👍
Insult Jimin just that she was a mean Teacher
@@JikookEntertainment 𝐨𝐨𝐡 𝐨𝐤𝐚𝐲 𝐭𝐡𝐤𝐬
It dosent sit right with that he fogave him with a kiss
@@mercybelenpiamonte6072 ik i was too naïve at that time
Have you written this again? I read this a few weeks ago jisso wants to break them up and keeps giving him lots of work when Jimin tries to tell him Jungkook gets mad because he is blaming a teacher, but Tia jimin's friend tells him what has been going on in fact when she said "know one else complained" Tia tells him it was Jimin who stopped him not wanting his bff to get into trouble. If I'm right take this off and put the other one back up 💜
The other one is also on my chanel this one is also on my chanel both of them are. This one had a rushed ending so I made another one but both had different plots with almost the same title
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Thankuuu 💖💖💖💖💖
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