Interesting point! I think using 'protagonist' here emphasizes her role as the central figure in the story, showing her growth and strength. But I see where you're coming from-calling her a 'wife' or 'husband' might feel more personal in certain contexts. What do you think? Does 'protagonist' create more distance, or does it highlight her journey better?
For me without question it does create distance and I'm not necessarily saying that's bad or good or even so obviously others will have their point of view this is just my take.
Thanks for pointing that out! I see where you're coming from-it does sound a bit off without a name. Giving him a name and referring to him as 'her husband' could definitely make the story flow more naturally. I'll make a note of it!
It’s not normal for the not to accompany his wife to these events , that should be a rare occurrence for extreme reasons. The only reason she could be staying with him financial and/or convenience.
"Wow, that's such a creative twist! A poltergeist as the main character could totally shake things up. Imagine the chaos and humor that could bring-love the idea! 🔥👻"
Thanks for sharing your thoughts! I totally get where you’re coming from-giving characters names can make their stories feel even more personal. I appreciate your perspective, and it’s something to keep in mind for future stories. What kind of name would you have chosen for this character?
Hey there! Thanks for sharing your thoughts-I really appreciate your honesty. I can see how the ending might have felt like a step back for some readers. Stories can hit differently depending on how we connect with them. I'd love to hear more about what you think could have made it stronger! Your perspective is super valuable. 😊
Thank you for the honest feedback! It seems the repetition really stood out to you, and I get how that could pull you out of the experience. I'll definitely take note of this for future content to keep it more engaging. If you stuck with it for 8 minutes, though, I truly appreciate your time! What could have made it more enjoyable for you? I'd love to hear your thoughts.
What's the deal with the use of the term protagonist? Is husband a dirty word?
Interesting point! I think using 'protagonist' here emphasizes her role as the central figure in the story, showing her growth and strength. But I see where you're coming from-calling her a 'wife' or 'husband' might feel more personal in certain contexts. What do you think? Does 'protagonist' create more distance, or does it highlight her journey better?
For me without question it does create distance and I'm not necessarily saying that's bad or good or even so obviously others will have their point of view this is just my take.
The protagonist? Don’t do that. I stopped listening after the 4th one
The protegonist ???
You should not say this , it sounds strange !
Give him a name and call him „her husband“ instead.
Thanks for pointing that out! I see where you're coming from-it does sound a bit off without a name. Giving him a name and referring to him as 'her husband' could definitely make the story flow more naturally. I'll make a note of it!
What happened to the STD Issue incomplete story. Revised the Title
Did she have
to pay the protagonist the cost of the doctor, tests and antibiotics from getting her STD treated ? 😅
It’s not normal for the not to accompany his wife to these events , that should be a rare occurrence for extreme reasons. The only reason she could be staying with him financial and/or convenience.
Instead of the word protagonist, why not use poltergeist? That'd be fun.
"Wow, that's such a creative twist! A poltergeist as the main character could totally shake things up. Imagine the chaos and humor that could bring-love the idea! 🔥👻"
I hope your not gonna used the term Protagonist in other stories, you could have just gave him a name.
Thanks for sharing your thoughts! I totally get where you’re coming from-giving characters names can make their stories feel even more personal. I appreciate your perspective, and it’s something to keep in mind for future stories. What kind of name would you have chosen for this character?
Is the blonde your wife?
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really crappy story and for those determined ones the story took a large jump backwards at the end.
Hey there! Thanks for sharing your thoughts-I really appreciate your honesty. I can see how the ending might have felt like a step back for some readers. Stories can hit differently depending on how we connect with them. I'd love to hear more about what you think could have made it stronger! Your perspective is super valuable. 😊
used protagonist toooooo many times. i.m out at 8 min
Thank you for the honest feedback! It seems the repetition really stood out to you, and I get how that could pull you out of the experience. I'll definitely take note of this for future content to keep it more engaging. If you stuck with it for 8 minutes, though, I truly appreciate your time! What could have made it more enjoyable for you? I'd love to hear your thoughts.
Don’t bother, unoriginal and lame, move on to another story