I hope you all Enjoy! This was definitely a hard episode to make with the end of school year and with lots of stuff going on in my life. But I thank you all for waiting!
I honestly have no idea. Each scene I do separately because on the app once it gets close to 2 mins the animation looks choppy when you play it back. But whenever you save it or upload it it looks fine
Hi, it’s yohan_jjp again! You continue to impress me with each passing episode. The audio clarity is much more consistent and clear (for the most part), the dialogue is improving, and the character and plot development are building up fairly nicely. The Megatron and Starscream scene was very well done. I had to check the TFP version that you obviously pulled this from, but they were different enough that you established your own identity with it. The beginning scene with the girls helping Bee and Jazz helped make them all feel human. And lol at Ironhide playing cards. I have some problems with the mise-en-scene, though. The pacing has improved, but the fights can still have some more frames in them. Maybe some more emphasis and fluid movements. Also, it was hard to watch that last scene due to the quick cuts. I think showing that car mode before Soundwave scanned it would’ve paced that better. All in all, a very good episode. I already know episode 4 will be even better.
Ok thank you for the feedback! I definitely thought by not showing the car it would add a little more “mystery” per say to what he scanned. But you are the second person that brought this point up so maybe it wasn’t the best idea 🤷🏻♂️😂. And I’m glad you noticed them playing cards lol. It’s a game I liked to call Cybercard. A game that was played during the golden age of Cybertron.
That last line was my 'just woke up' last minute voice XD Glad it turned out the same as the rest. Well done man! It was baddass! Satisfied with my voice work too! It was rough but you still managed to get it done! Looking forward to next episodes!
I gotta say, this was really fucking good. Love the voice of Arcee and the animation has greatly improved. I also like the explanation as to how the energon was on Earth and i'd like to see a flashback scene of that in future episodes. But I do have some complaints, one of them is the voice of Ratchet. I think the voice actor needs to work on his line delivery. Also the scene where Soundwave scans his mercedes alt mode was really off, the Car wasn't shown when he was scanning it. Also the editing has improved greatly and is consistent aside from some slight errors. Overall, this was incredibly enjoyable
Thanks man! I always look forward to your reviews. And I guess for the Soundwave scene I wanted it to be a “mystery” till he scans. I hope you guys can hear the car driving in the background when he’s looking at it before he scans
Alright! Now this is my favourite episode. That's how the movies would be like. You gave more respects for the sisters that the movies weren't. I like them. 😄 Great job!
Not really feeling Megatron’s and Optimus’ voice actors ngl. Can’t put my finger on why tho. The animation has vastly improved, so I applaud you for that. Loved Soundwaves alt mode change. That was really well done. Overall 7/10
Best stop motion ever because know days stopmotion is less and boring in my opinion and u made fun for. Me again love ur work u should have more subs and can u do a face reveal
Not to offend the script, but cybertronians before were here and suddenly they are in mines mountains as an ore? It quite doesnt make sense. If I Got it wrong, please explain it to me. Great video btw
krzyslav ? I sorta get what your meaning but Cybertronians were on earth long before the events of this series. In fact on basically every planet in our solar system they have buried energon
This story is hard to under stand and I was hoping a litlle more movie inspiration and a new story and this just reminded me of prime without you know the best charecters cliff and Jackie but other tha. That I hope you can improve
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I hope you all Enjoy! This was definitely a hard episode to make with the end of school year and with lots of stuff going on in my life. But I thank you all for waiting!
Smitty Plays GOD DAM YOU ARE AMAZING KEEP IT UP can’t wait for next episode
loved it and how it reminds me of prime, but with the bayverse desgins
this reminds me of transfrmers prime
I honestly have no idea. Each scene I do separately because on the app once it gets close to 2 mins the animation looks choppy when you play it back. But whenever you save it or upload it it looks fine
Wheres Mirage? did he die in the first scene?
Arcee: Careful, slow steps.
Bumblebee: Easy for you to say, you don’t even walk!
🤣😂
Haha
ha ha ha ha haaaa
😂🤣
Fr
1:06 that’s gotta be the smoothest transformation of that figure I’ve ever seen!
This show continues to get more interesting and the animation gets better and better. Good work man. Keep it up.
I'm loving this show rewatching it again, it really is like tfp but with bayverse figures!
You have improved so much with the animation! My favorite episode in this amazing series so far! Keep up the great work my friend!
Damn, that Soundwave's rescan scene was very cool
Very good, the best fan fiction I've seen, soundwave 's voice is amazing
Thank you!
This is amazing
Hi, it’s yohan_jjp again! You continue to impress me with each passing episode. The audio clarity is much more consistent and clear (for the most part), the dialogue is improving, and the character and plot development are building up fairly nicely.
The Megatron and Starscream scene was very well done. I had to check the TFP version that you obviously pulled this from, but they were different enough that you established your own identity with it. The beginning scene with the girls helping Bee and Jazz helped make them all feel human. And lol at Ironhide playing cards.
I have some problems with the mise-en-scene, though. The pacing has improved, but the fights can still have some more frames in them. Maybe some more emphasis and fluid movements. Also, it was hard to watch that last scene due to the quick cuts. I think showing that car mode before Soundwave scanned it would’ve paced that better.
All in all, a very good episode. I already know episode 4 will be even better.
Ok thank you for the feedback! I definitely thought by not showing the car it would add a little more “mystery” per say to what he scanned. But you are the second person that brought this point up so maybe it wasn’t the best idea 🤷🏻♂️😂. And I’m glad you noticed them playing cards lol. It’s a game I liked to call Cybercard. A game that was played during the golden age of Cybertron.
1:45 had me dying. Looking forward to the next episode.
That last line was my 'just woke up' last minute voice XD Glad it turned out the same as the rest.
Well done man! It was baddass! Satisfied with my voice work too!
It was rough but you still managed to get it done! Looking forward to next episodes!
I gotta say, this was really fucking good. Love the voice of Arcee and the animation has greatly improved. I also like the explanation as to how the energon was on Earth and i'd like to see a flashback scene of that in future episodes. But I do have some complaints, one of them is the voice of Ratchet. I think the voice actor needs to work on his line delivery. Also the scene where Soundwave scans his mercedes alt mode was really off, the Car wasn't shown when he was scanning it. Also the editing has improved greatly and is consistent aside from some slight errors. Overall, this was incredibly enjoyable
I voice Arcee and reading this means a lot. Thanks very much!
Thanks man! I always look forward to your reviews. And I guess for the Soundwave scene I wanted it to be a “mystery” till he scans. I hope you guys can hear the car driving in the background when he’s looking at it before he scans
Alright! Now this is my favourite episode. That's how the movies would be like. You gave more respects for the sisters that the movies weren't. I like them. 😄 Great job!
Wow you did a very great job I like this episode it may not be good but it was great even arcee elita-one and chrome are better now
This is an awesome show, I love this, keep up the awesome work man
Finally episode 3! Thanks smitty for this Transformers masterpiece!
This is transformer prime all over again
Is that a good or bad thing? 😂 I do take inspiration from it. But I’m hoping some of the new ish concepts I’ve come up with will be cool
@@smittyprime04 how 'bout both
transformars prime is my faverater trnsformer seris but the movies are the best
Remember when Bumblebee killed Megatron?
Megatron voice... spot on bro
I'm glad I could be part of this series☺
Wow I really like that cool stop motion and fight too
Not really feeling Megatron’s and Optimus’ voice actors ngl. Can’t put my finger on why tho. The animation has vastly improved, so I applaud you for that. Loved Soundwaves alt mode change. That was really well done. Overall 7/10
Oh my God!, dude this episode was awesome!! The stop motion was so smooth!!! Keep up the good work!!
Thank you!
It’s becoming increasingly authentic! Keep up the good work man
Between this, HLH Studio’s series, Panda Jack new series, and a few others, we content for DAYS.
I like the improved animation in this so good and the story is better you thought very well when making the story for this series
This is great i love it cant wait for more, gave me transformers prime vibes
Wow the animation is near perfect great job looking forward to the next episode
Another great episode! Good work ^^
Awesome work bro!
More interesting, I like how this is going so far
Yes! Finally I've been waiting for the next 1
Cool video
Just a suggestion but would love to see bumblebee and Megatron have a rematch but by themselves without any help amazing work keep up the good work
Thank you man! I guess we’ll have to wait and see if that ever happens
This is really good!
I wish I'd gotten more of those Studio Series figures. I see no reason to get the Bayverse ones because I can't find Ironhide.
LegoAWC Stopmotioner I’ve heard he’s very hard to find
Nice bro 😎👍
I love the story so far keep it up 👍
Haha I love how even in fan animations like this megatron still hates starscream
awesome!!
amazing
Nice Animation
Waited for this I have
Is that a SW reference?
Plot twist: *He is yoda*
👌🏾
Me forgetting to turn on my notifications
Why do I get the feeling that Drift might still be alive?
now you have a new sub, excellent job
Very cool.
Cool.
Long have I waited😁
Hehehe ⚡️⚡️
Dang this is epic,
New sub bruh
ImpusleTF thanks!
I personally think you should direct they transformers bay verse
Haha thank you. It would be an absolute honour to just even be apart of a transformers film let alone direct one
Best stop motion ever because know days stopmotion is less and boring in my opinion and u made fun for. Me again love ur work u should have more subs and can u do a face reveal
Thank you. And I think it would be a while before I’d do a face reveal
@@smittyprime04 np
Megatron at 2:36 ended me 🤣
Optimus is still upsad with the death of Sandstorm and Breakaway.
Transformer movie better than real movie transformer
You can do your transformers stop motion every week
Them transformers prime refrerences.
At 2:35 Megatron looked at Starscream like "rly" or "was I asking you" 😂
Amazing series man, this is the best series of transformers stop motion I've ever seen.
José Daniel Chaves Campos thank you!
Not to offend the script, but cybertronians before were here and suddenly they are in mines mountains as an ore? It quite doesnt make sense. If I Got it wrong, please explain it to me. Great video btw
krzyslav ? I sorta get what your meaning but Cybertronians were on earth long before the events of this series. In fact on basically every planet in our solar system they have buried energon
@@smittyprime04 oooh, that makes sense
WOW
Not gonna lie but this was EPIC AND I MEAN EPIC
This story is hard to under stand and I was hoping a litlle more movie inspiration and a new story and this just reminded me of prime without you know the best charecters cliff and Jackie but other tha. That I hope you can improve
The story is just getting started. It’s pretty simplistic for the moment. And I have drawn inspiration from TFP
Is this based on transformers prime
wait why is Optimus joining them? I thought this was _Sisters In Arms_
*laugh track cues*
Is there a way I could voice any characters?
Wheelie and Arcee Follow me on Instagram @OptimusPrimeProductions where I post casting calls for characters that I need
who's the KSI Boss as
Bruh megatron sounds like tfp megatron
Désolé je ne comprends pas ľanglais trop comment vous bouger les figurine sans con les voit
Can anyone tell me how to add thumbnails to videos
I recommend downloading RUclips Studio. Then it’s pretty easy to figure it out from there
@@smittyprime04 ok thanks
First or second lol
Lol it’s like a tie
Di
This guy needs to be sued
Why?
Cool video