Ok, you wanted some feedback. Since this is a bit longer I can’t mention everything though Starting with the plane: there was not enough light in the scene, the plane was totally unlight and so you could not really see anything of it Then the crash: actually the crash was anpreite good idea, but the parts have to Fall way faster. Usually after a crash like this the whole building falls apart (9 Eleven at example) The animation (said it would be rough) Now that’s something a lot of beginners struggle with: your movements looked a bit like islands. What do I mean? Well, when there was movement you animated it, but even if there is no main movement bodies should still move. You didn’t animate in those breaks between the movements. Also the animation had no offset. Think of offset like this: when you move your head it’s not just the head, but you also move torso and pelvis. The think about this is, that the pelvis always takes the longest, then torso and then head. Some poses also seemed a bit stiff and unnatural (I remember my posing which also looked bad when I started) Story The story was at some point hard to understand. The only pattern I could see was that humans suffer. But it was kinda hard to make out what it actually is about. Conclusion: Now these points seem to destroy the animation. But that’s not the case. It’s always nice when you animate. Practice will come when you practice. My advice is to not make animations that are super long. Can’t say it often enough: 1. it’s easier to give feedback (so you can learn) when there is less material to watch 2. you can focus on animation and lighting instead of thinking about render time 3. stories can be more detailed 4. you spend more time animating shorter scenes = higher quality Stay motivated and keep going, you’re definitely on a good way (probably on a better one than I was) ;)
Ok, you wanted some feedback.
Since this is a bit longer I can’t mention everything though
Starting with the plane: there was not enough light in the scene, the plane was totally unlight and so you could not really see anything of it
Then the crash: actually the crash was anpreite good idea, but the parts have to Fall way faster.
Usually after a crash like this the whole building falls apart (9 Eleven at example)
The animation (said it would be rough)
Now that’s something a lot of beginners struggle with: your movements looked a bit like islands. What do I mean? Well, when there was movement you animated it, but even if there is no main movement bodies should still move. You didn’t animate in those breaks between the movements.
Also the animation had no offset. Think of offset like this: when you move your head it’s not just the head, but you also move torso and pelvis. The think about this is, that the pelvis always takes the longest, then torso and then head.
Some poses also seemed a bit stiff and unnatural (I remember my posing which also looked bad when I started)
Story
The story was at some point hard to understand. The only pattern I could see was that humans suffer. But it was kinda hard to make out what it actually is about.
Conclusion:
Now these points seem to destroy the animation. But that’s not the case. It’s always nice when you animate. Practice will come when you practice.
My advice is to not make animations that are super long. Can’t say it often enough:
1. it’s easier to give feedback (so you can learn) when there is less material to watch
2. you can focus on animation and lighting instead of thinking about render time
3. stories can be more detailed
4. you spend more time animating shorter scenes = higher quality
Stay motivated and keep going, you’re definitely on a good way (probably on a better one than I was) ;)
I did it again, wrote an whole essay xd
I really appreciate it thanks so much for giving ur feedback i read every single word and as you said I am still learning