This was long and unnecessary and the main part was too rushed . We needed to see taehyung pov of emotions and his regret at certains things which wasnt shown . Only yn emotions were shown which didnt sit right . Pls make a short bonus showing taehyung pov and what he does which actually shows he regrets his behaviour and genuinely loves yn because i cant trust him on this oneshot😊
Poor y/n the bad name she was labelled with and no one believed her or took her side until she took such a rash decision to end her life. It is toxic people that Jisung that destroy innocent people's life like y/n in this ff in the name of blackmail and labelled her with names that only brought shame for her and affected her Tae by this association . So annoyed in what way did Jisung got punished ,i see Tae has insecurity of past cheating but to not listen to his wife when she tried multiple times to talk to him just added to her anxiety and se would have felt so alone society blaming her ,her colleagues not trusting her and even her husband giving her a cold shoulder i get he was mad but she was close to ending it all as that disgusting Jisung said this bad name will haunt til death .
It's really annoying how easily yn forgive thv and forget everything...I'm sorry if I sound rude bt when I read the story it's really annoying me like I thought I'm in yn position and ufff I can't explain 😅😅😅
From a three months old relationship we expect respect and priority above any of his staffs! Surely it takes time to build trust in a relationship but the situation here is completely different. It's a matter of yn's self respect, value and life's worth for tae which I guess is zero as portrayed here!
It's a amazing story but I'm a bit lost, can anyone tell me what action does taehyung take towards jisung? Because of his action, yn almost lost her life. Thank you.
Wtf? Why she is so pathetic? Like after all this she doesn't even after all this drama she can't even tell her husband about the situation and his fault in this marriage... Author we need it's bonus part where they are getting divorce and please portrait a powerful image of Y/N Please
@@fictionalworldof7kings we all know that author... I am not saying anything bad to you nor am trying to prove anything but it's just you know in this time we need to be strong and we are inspired to like strong and brave who took Stan for themselves so don't get me wrong... I have been following you fro a decent amount of time, I really appreciate you work...☺️
@@bobgurung1096 I didn't take anything in wrong way. I just ask casually to know what is powerful women's image according to you expect divorce 🙃🙃 I just asked casually...to know what changes you want to see in her.
@@fictionalworldof7kingsHaving self respect and dignity that is powerful a woman who knows her worth it's powerful a woman leaving men who treat her trash is powerful you sound like you internal misogyny mindset the self hating women you always portray women in your ff pathetic no hate but don't you think you should at try powerful women ff
Huh what type of husband he is ? Y/n such a pathetic and her husband never noticed her situation how was she ?? And not trust her once only when after she was about to end her life 😂😂😂 he only care about his reputation Divorce is better than this
What you expect from a three months old relationship? It takes time in building up trust in an arranged marriage specially when a person has already face heartbreak. And Divorce is not always an option....if things can get solve then there is nothing wrong in giving second chance. Marriage is not joke.......it's my opinion.
All I got to say is , the story needs a bit correction. That's not how someone treat their wife. Yes divorce isn't an option. But being too forgiving is also not a wise choice. You are doing great❤ but still have alot to learn about relationship ethics. Its not a hate comment. But just an advice. Good luck❤
man you seriously made me cry when tar was angry on y/n and she was so lonely no one was testing he 😢 but that was amezing i really enjoyed it thank you very much❤❤❤
I'm sorry author for discussion this here. But does anyone know what happened to the *layover fiction* ? I mean where is she? Does anyone know anything about her???
I know little bit ,,,, her RUclips channel face some issue nd she already told that she create new RUclips channel ahhh I don't remember her new channel name sry
Please ignore the comment section... its really annoying to see so many immature comments on ur work... he cleared everything before marriage... so she understands he needs time.... n jisung was the one who did that to him previously too... then y won't he be jelous? N marriage is not a game where a small misunderstanding or less talks and quit it! People should understand that... n loving someone you need to forgive! He isn't abusive as people here are describing! How does self respect come to play!? Even in start as we see she asked him permission to talk he did keep his phone asside... but seeing cold face she decided not to continue.... i bet if this was the other way round and if yn was in his place... people would not comment like this!
Hope this happens with you in future and see urself how will you keep ur dignity,SELFRESPECT,ur months of pain,disappointment, hurt and injustice from him aside and even after being torchered by ur ex How You still will try to prove ur hUsBaNd ur loyalty Ha!
@@ShaktiPatil-tk1ec yes but Today is my 3rd day so I am feeling better. Now the pain is a little less but earlier the pain was so severe that I couldn't even go to the bathroom to change pad
Hello angel ❤️.... Well I have my maths exam next which I hate the most and I am not good at it but I try my best to score good, anyways leave this I want to say something very important, like very important.... I love you soooooo much to the core of my heart...❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
Ummmm...... Usually your story was good..... But this one is little childish coded..... I won't judge you for this one story coz i have read your all stories and i know you ..... I think this story is written by someone else not you ...... There is no maturity in this story........ I think this story needs correction....
![Your secret Husband shouted at you in front everyone in office without knowing... [Taehyung oneshot]](http://i.ytimg.com/vi/kQHQrYJj3jA/mqdefault.jpg)
![Your secret Husband shouted at you in front everyone in office without knowing... [Taehyung oneshot]](/img/tr.png)
![When you’re FORCED to marry a cold billionaire just for a baby but his family HATES you [KTH FF]](http://i.ytimg.com/vi/6WlN4J4EEvc/mqdefault.jpg)
![Your sister run away with her boyfriend and you end up marrying her fiance who is [Jimin oneshot]](http://i.ytimg.com/vi/ee8jrkOQwIo/mqdefault.jpg)
![You decided to avoid your crush after seeing him getting close with new girl....[ Taehyung oneshot]](/img/1.gif)
Author nim, please make a bonus part as Jisung needs to regret...
This was long and unnecessary and the main part was too rushed . We needed to see taehyung pov of emotions and his regret at certains things which wasnt shown . Only yn emotions were shown which didnt sit right . Pls make a short bonus showing taehyung pov and what he does which actually shows he regrets his behaviour and genuinely loves yn because i cant trust him on this oneshot😊
Poor y/n the bad name she was labelled with and no one believed her or took her side until she took such a rash decision to end her life. It is toxic people that Jisung that destroy innocent people's life like y/n in this ff in the name of blackmail and labelled her with names that only brought shame for her and affected her Tae by this association . So annoyed in what way did Jisung got punished ,i see Tae has insecurity of past cheating but to not listen to his wife when she tried multiple times to talk to him just added to her anxiety and se would have felt so alone society blaming her ,her colleagues not trusting her and even her husband giving her a cold shoulder i get he was mad but she was close to ending it all as that disgusting Jisung said this bad name will haunt til death .
It's really annoying how easily yn forgive thv and forget everything...I'm sorry if I sound rude bt when I read the story it's really annoying me like I thought I'm in yn position and ufff I can't explain 😅😅😅
same girl. like how can she forgive him that easily
Cause she is yn and she have to be love stuck Brian and male pleaser
I just cried while watching this😢😢😢
From a three months old relationship we expect respect and priority above any of his staffs! Surely it takes time to build trust in a relationship but the situation here is completely different. It's a matter of yn's self respect, value and life's worth for tae which I guess is zero as portrayed here!
It's a amazing story but I'm a bit lost, can anyone tell me what action does taehyung take towards jisung? Because of his action, yn almost lost her life. Thank you.
Wtf? Why she is so pathetic? Like after all this she doesn't even after all this drama she can't even tell her husband about the situation and his fault in this marriage...
Author we need it's bonus part where they are getting divorce and please portrait a powerful image of Y/N
Please
What is a powerful image of women?
@@fictionalworldof7kings we all know that author...
I am not saying anything bad to you nor am trying to prove anything but it's just you know in this time we need to be strong and we are inspired to like strong and brave who took Stan for themselves so don't get me wrong...
I have been following you fro a decent amount of time, I really appreciate you work...☺️
@@bobgurung1096 I didn't take anything in wrong way. I just ask casually to know what is powerful women's image according to you expect divorce 🙃🙃
I just asked casually...to know what changes you want to see in her.
@@fictionalworldof7kingsHaving self respect and dignity that is powerful a woman who knows her worth it's powerful a woman leaving men who treat her trash is powerful you sound like you internal misogyny mindset the self hating women you always portray women in your ff pathetic no hate but don't you think you should at try powerful women ff
@@fictionalworldof7kingsA woman filling for divorce after this is powerful she knows her worth that is what she is saying
Thank you for lifting my mood❤️💜💜
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@@fictionalworldof7kings 💜💜💜
Please make a bonus part as ji sung needs to regret
Thanks to comment section, u guys saved my 35 minutes❤
Which means u didn't watch yn being pathetic as always
Right we saved ur time
Huh what type of husband he is ? Y/n such a pathetic and her husband never noticed her situation how was she ?? And not trust her once only when after she was about to end her
life 😂😂😂 he only care about his reputation
Divorce is better than this
Fr. Quite disappointed tbh
Agree
I also feel same nd I agree 👍
Totally agree
What you expect from a three months old relationship? It takes time in building up trust in an arranged marriage specially when a person has already face heartbreak.
And Divorce is not always an option....if things can get solve then there is nothing wrong in giving second chance. Marriage is not joke.......it's my opinion.
Amazing but more amazing it will be a bonus part.
All I got to say is , the story needs a bit correction. That's not how someone treat their wife. Yes divorce isn't an option. But being too forgiving is also not a wise choice. You are doing great❤ but still have alot to learn about relationship ethics. Its not a hate comment. But just an advice. Good luck❤
man you seriously made me cry when tar was angry on y/n and she was so lonely no one was testing he 😢 but that was amezing i really enjoyed it thank you very much❤❤❤
You are the best story writter❤✨ your every story is the masterpiece and this video as the next level 🔥..
I really really love it 💫😘💜
It was amazing as always ❤💜
This is nice Unnie 💜 btw I want bonus 😁😁
Unnie this was amazing as always and when will you start the series you were talking about?
Not now....and I'm not even sure if I'll make that ff.
@@fictionalworldof7kings basically it's your choice unnnie but your FF are seriously great
Unsatisfied ending 😭 how she forgive him so easily
Unnieeee we want bonus parts of bodyguard husband and love trap pluesssssssssssssss❤❤❤
Like always it was amazing..💗💗unnie can you please make a bonus part of your previous jimin mafia ff please 🥺💖💗🥺
Why I'm not satisfied after investing my 35mins here.
Masterpiece
Author plzz make a bonus part 🤧😭😢
The ending is a bit rush...its really incomplete
Am i the only one who get offended whenever someone ordering around like this jisung .......ooooh goshh i literally hate it.😒
Please bonus part
حتى الاجانب🫠😯😭
I'm sorry author for discussion this here.
But does anyone know what happened to the *layover fiction* ? I mean where is she? Does anyone know anything about her???
I know little bit ,,,, her RUclips channel face some issue nd she already told that she create new RUclips channel ahhh I don't remember her new channel name sry
@@shamabano1700 if you find please tell me the name of her account
@@taescastle._5478 dear,, i forgot nd I also miss her
@@shamabano1700 ohh it's ok. I Miss her too
@taescastle._5478 heyy dear I got her new channel!!!!! 🎊🎊🎊🎊Her new channel name is Myfanfic
Please ignore the comment section... its really annoying to see so many immature comments on ur work... he cleared everything before marriage... so she understands he needs time.... n jisung was the one who did that to him previously too... then y won't he be jelous? N marriage is not a game where a small misunderstanding or less talks and quit it! People should understand that... n loving someone you need to forgive! He isn't abusive as people here are describing! How does self respect come to play!? Even in start as we see she asked him permission to talk he did keep his phone asside... but seeing cold face she decided not to continue.... i bet if this was the other way round and if yn was in his place... people would not comment like this!
Hope this happens with you in future and see urself how will you keep ur dignity,SELFRESPECT,ur months of pain,disappointment, hurt and injustice from him aside and even after being torchered by ur ex
How You still will try to prove ur hUsBaNd ur loyalty
Ha!
OMG I am on my period today and was very bored thanks for lightening my mood.
I am sure you cried tears as mood swings hit hard,girl...
Take care dear💝💝
@@fictionalworldof7kings thank you
@@ShaktiPatil-tk1ec yes but Today is my 3rd day so I am feeling better. Now the pain is a little less but earlier the pain was so severe that I couldn't even go to the bathroom to change pad
@@krishnaarmy1246 hope you are okay now and don't worry queens can fight this pain.. love you ❤️❤️❤️❤️💜💜💜💜
Please bonus for bad people.
Hello angel ❤️....
Well I have my maths exam next which I hate the most and I am not good at it but I try my best to score good, anyways leave this I want to say something very important, like very important....
I love you soooooo much to the core of my heart...❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
All the best 👍
@@KrishnendhuKNair thank you so much sis...
All the best 👍🏻 I'm sure you will give ur best☺️☺️ loveu2💝💝
@@fictionalworldof7kings thank you so much love ❤️❤️❤️❤️ love you too baby girl...💖💖💕💕💕❤️❤️❤️❤️❣️❣️❣️
@@ShaktiPatil-tk1ec 🫠
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All I gotta say is that this was highly disappointing.
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Ummmm...... Usually your story was good..... But this one is little childish coded..... I won't judge you for this one story coz i have read your all stories and i know you .....
I think this story is written by someone else not you ...... There is no maturity in this story........ I think this story needs correction....
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Why did you write this kind of FF I didn't like it and I am sorry for that
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