This song is alright. The instrumental is just not that great. Chromatics aren't bad but can be tuned better especially ES's like damn they are loud. The instrumental would be better if it was better mixed and had more bass so it doesn't feel empty and maybe some drums to spice it up. Like go for a Darkstep vibe. Inspiration : UNAMI - Parallel (Darkstep) It's a good song and that style would fit this song well ;).
@@Sgeenchladmire That fast paced more dark DNB style would fit better than this odd waltz style. Because this is supposed to be a fight with Retep and Eiwets and I feel like a more fast paced and melodic instrumental with chaotic energy would fit better. Also all the chromatics need is slightly better tuning and better placements. Besides that the mixing needs work but mastering is surprisingly not bad.
Btw do check out Parallel it's a banger song. Also if you're epileptic don't watch the original version just listen to the planets crashing one. Channel : Asier ValtoFax2
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retep you gotta save him the little one is dead this is your chance if you want to fight the darkness again
This song is alright. The instrumental is just not that great. Chromatics aren't bad but can be tuned better especially ES's like damn they are loud. The instrumental would be better if it was better mixed and had more bass so it doesn't feel empty and maybe some drums to spice it up. Like go for a Darkstep vibe.
Inspiration : UNAMI - Parallel (Darkstep)
It's a good song and that style would fit this song well ;).
Thank you for the criticism
Its nice actually getting advice for once
I will consider this if I make a freedom revamp (the original FLM file is gone)
@@Sgeenchladmire That fast paced more dark DNB style would fit better than this odd waltz style. Because this is supposed to be a fight with Retep and Eiwets and I feel like a more fast paced and melodic instrumental with chaotic energy would fit better. Also all the chromatics need is slightly better tuning and better placements. Besides that the mixing needs work but mastering is surprisingly not bad.
Btw do check out Parallel it's a banger song. Also if you're epileptic don't watch the original version just listen to the planets crashing one.
Channel : Asier ValtoFax2
This is going to be peak🔥🔥🔥
wow
HOLY SHIT RETEP QLS REAL
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Cool
oh wait this aged well