Brokenstar vs Mapleshade. Epic Rap Battles of Warriors #15
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- Опубликовано: 29 сен 2024
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Brokenstar - KorrEVA
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Mapleshade- Moon Boots
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Rap Written by: Blixemi
Audio Mixing, Video editing, & Background art: Blixemi
Instrumental: • Scary Rap Hip Hop Beat... (LICENSED WITH FULL PERMISSIONS)
Characters from the "Warrior Cats" series by Erin Hunter
Inspired by; Epic Rap Battles of History!
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Brokenstar:
Mapleshade: I'm about to end this whole man's career.
SerenityJam too late yellowfang did it first twice
Ikr
agreed
Tyler Jones oof
Tyler Jones lol
the note hit in that intro has me SHOOK
maria carey is QUAKING
i love your username XD
@Madison Umana XD true
also hi thanks for liking my comment again love ya 💕💕
I CLICKED SO FAST I BROKE MY FINGER
SAME
Which one
Lil MidnightTiger I JUST SLAMMED MY THUMBS ON THE SCREEN WHILE SCREECHING LIKE CRAZY
I clicked so fast I broke my mouse!
Cams. O SAAAAAAME
Sometimes Brokens voice goes from normal to insane it sounds like he’s fighting with himself
It’s cool
Yes.
I like it when his voice drops to the lowest point, and I like Mapleshade's voice in general, both voice actors did so well
No questions asked for Brokenstar's Mustache
Edit:
No one asked for this...
Please do...
The prophecies V.S The power of three
I saw someone asking for it and I'm gonna ask too :) But I think It's too late to comment :(
omg I can NEVER unsee that now!
lmao starclan will just be accused of killing cats for the prophecies
Mapleshade: I'm the deadliest cat to walk this shadowy floor, you sit and cower behind your power sending kittens to war!
Me: Dang, Maple is a savage, she won!
@@rachelwalker3019 I wholeheartedly agree.
She was made to be a savage Lol
Shes right though. Easy to talk tough when you send children to fight your battles
No one:
Literally NO ONE:
Mapleshade fans: OHHHHHH MAPLESHADES A SAVAGE!
Mapleshade won ;)
Im not a fan of her but she murdered brokenstar
hi umbreon
Hello, sorry but who are you🥺?
I'm not a big fan of Mapleshade (never read her novella, just picked up information off of videos) but uh...yeah she killed it. I feel like she also had several points while Brokenstar basically said the same thing with different words.
So right MapleShade are type of girls who no need a man
Mapleshade won but t may I suggest
Scourge/Firestar)
Scourge/Tigerstar)
Leopardstar/Tigerstar)
Leopardstar/Blackfoot)
Firestar/Leopardstar)
Firestar/Darkstrip)
Firestar/Tigerstar)
Firestar/Hawkfrost
Stonefur/Blackfoot)
Bramblestar/tigerstar)
Bramblestar/Hawkfrost)
Mothwing/Hawkfrost)
Ivypool/Dovewing)
Ivypool/Hawkfrost)
Ivypool/Mapleshade)
Tallstar/Brokenstar)
Tallstar/Shruwclaw)
Tallstar,jack/Barley, Ravenpaw)
Tallstar/Sparrow)
Nutmeg/whoever scourge's mom is?)
Thrushpelt/Oakheart)
Tigerheart/Bumblestripe)
Hollyleaf/Ashfur)
Hollyleaf/Squirrelflight)
Hollyleaf/Breezepelt)
Breezepelt/Crowfeather)
Leafpool/Nightcloud/Feathertail)
Cloudtail/Swiftpaw
And I have so many more but I'm not going to name them because I feel like my fingers are going to fall off
Hollyleaf vs Hawkfrost
MooNhound Productions scourge’s moms name is quince
NO; DO A CROWFEATHER, NIGHTCLOUD, FEATHERTAIL AND LEAFPOOL
Darkstripe*
Scourge mothers name is Quince.
Shrewclaw*
Blackstar*
Jake*
I vote the scourge ones!
Dude I was literally JUST thinking “I wonder when Blix will release the next rap”...
Edit: SENPAI NOTICED ME; LOVE YA BLIX ❤️
Echo At the bottom of the comment box, there’s three dots. Click on them and there’s an edit option.
You get noticed
Echo Animates I wish she would notice me but it’s ok if she doesn’t
do Talltail (tallstar) & Jake VS Ravenpaw & Barley!
Cutezilla YASSS
oH YEAH THE GAY BOIS
but what would they een battle about? ravenpaw liked windclan,,
@@milqiisworld who's the better uncanon couple :3
YES!!!!!!!
It has to be said. I'd like to see "Scourge" in one of these villain battles.
Me to
Brokenstar: *"Nothing out here could even stop me in my power to devour all of those who wouldn't cower!"*
Me: *Yellowfang did*
Oof brokenstar oof
:o "treat from your mommy" BRUTAL!
About the Deathberry right??
@@avsendhilkumar yes
Both of them are so awesome in their own way!!
Brokestar sounds so rough and messy in a cool away, and Mapleshade is so graceful and chill, but also evil at the same time!
„Nothing out here could ever even stop me” Dude, you were called Brokentail and you got blinded by your old af mom 😭
And mapleshade died bleeding out with out anyone knowing nor caring
Great timing! Halloween is almost here! Edit: It may not seem like I'm freaking out, but I'm literally dieing on the inside. Senpai noticed me...
PSHHHH IM TOTALLY NOT CRYING BC BLIXEMI POSTED AN ERBOW HHAAAAAAA
mapleshade : here have a treat, its from your mommy.
brokenstar : what do you mean by that?
: mapleshade : just eat it!
: brokenstar eats the deathberry :
: brokenstar, choking and dieing : now I know what you mean! ( XD )
The intro says “I’m recording at 3 a.m, my parents are asleep!” 😂
"Hungry? Here's a treat, It's from your mummy"
THE SAVAGERY
Lyrics!
Brokenstar:
Well! If it isn’t thunders greatest come to face me with her graces?
I’ll set the pace with ways which that’ll leave you fazed and dazed but it seems your night of fear is and I hear your kittens cry! When they watch their mother dearest loose in a fight of bad guys! Only I will stand alone a top of darkness mighty throne and before you interrupt my dear take and look and you will see I’m the stuff of mothers nightmares something lurking in your dreams. I rose to the top! Nothing out here could ever stop me and my power to devour all of those who wouldn’t cower! To my name! My fame!..well my infamy I’ll live for centuries all while your a faded memory. So step aside this battle isn’t even worth the breath with the OG villain against old motherhood of death your no match for me your facing someone clearly twice your size your better of instead to give that raging river on more try.
Maple shade:
Watch your tongue son! When it comes to legends your among one I was the one who had begun to start this revolution! You can trace me back babe to the base roots of each brutes region I’m the mother like no other bringing pain and terror once again I look my time there and I created and army your took the same time up there and got blinded by our mommy! While I keep plotting you keep rotting wasting away your infamy. Sure I’m faded but I’m playing the long game to supremacy. Sneak attack! A snake trap throats a gashed oh my! Got a slaughter list with a boarder grip than your lackies combined. This fool thinks he can school old maple in the ways of nightmares boy I’m the first teacher original dreamer of every fight and despair and I’m aware that you kill your own man but that’s nothing in comparison to my grand plan! They’ve sent us both down here only one has a life sentence cause your truly be broken when I share maple vengeance!
Brokenstar:
My old man stood between me and greatness now your standing in my way just spitting bars of baseless accusations of how you orangized this nation and started this whole operation? Oh please you lead nothing! Expect a march of kittens feet to rivers running. While your of running your mouth I’ll be off running the south I got more important thing than queens and schemes to frinking worry about I’m shaking evil to its roots! And I won’t loose to someone from a Novella! Your no legend your a token your forgotten so just go! You’ll remember broken cuss I serve revenge cold!
Mapleshade:
True evil has to have a villains grace which means you shouldn’t have to drag on just filling space! With your claims of glory actions speak for themselves now your overblown story’s getting drowned in your mouth in the deadliest cat to walk this shadowy floor you sit and cower behind your power sending kittens to war! I’ve got no more to say. So take a lesson dummy. Felling hungry have a treat! It’s from your mummy.
There ya go! I had to write this on a piece of paper than copy on phone TYPING so it was hard but ty guys!! 😈
Thx!
Not to be rude at all, but you missed some lines. Please don't hate me
Yessss I needed this!
Edit: OMG a heart?!! Thank you so much Blix!
He kept bringing up her kittens while shes like "bro no one knows who you are lol" she won in my eyes but Brokenstar was pretty good competition!
Did anyone notice the Mapleshade stayed fading halfway through?
I was in class and I got a notification
At first I was like “eh whatever”
Then I saw what it was
“HELL YES”
Oh, Mapleshade won for sure. But I really dig the artwork and voices for both cats a lot!
I’ve always felt like Mapleshade would absolutely despise Brokenstar. She went insane cause her kits died- he killed kits.
"I took the time here and created an army, you spent the same time up there and got blinded by your mommy" she ate
It’s ironic cause I totally forgot Brokenstar existed until now and one of my fav characters is Mapleshade.
Well i mean did you not read omen of the stars; he was the main villain in the dark forest
It must be Darkstripe vs Dustpelt...
Or the two patrol guys Rainwhisker vs Thornclaw
Who’s agrees?
Thornclaw will win. He is the true patrol guy.
How about Dustpelt vs Tigerstar?
Love how Blixemi was like:
*WHISPERS OUTRO VERY QUICKLY SO SHE CAN GET AS FAR AWAY AS POSSIBLE*
My favourite rap battle.
Imo both were great but I favour Brokenstar in this one.
You should do tiger star vs scourge! Or some couple from Vision of Shadows.
did anyone notice that mapleshade slowly became a tad faded ( you could see the background behind her through her )
Brokenstar: Exists
Maple shade: That's illegal.
Mapleshade destroyed Brokenstar.
Yes, Mapleshade created an army, but she wasn't the first Dark Forest cat. One Eye was, sadly NOBODY remembers.
They meant how she was the first person to start training cats
Could you do Fireheart Vs. Tigerpaw, or longtail? Oh, what about Sandpaw vs. Greypaw
Once again she amazes me with her amazing skills......I love you , it and all ur songs.plz make hawk frost vs mothwing. Also mapleshade definetly won
She probably won't because she already made a song about them.
Oh I just realized Maple is slowly fading!
Maple totally BURNED him
“Broken star vs.. 🪰🪰🪰🪰”
mapleshade won
"Feeling hungry? Have a treat! It's from your mummy."
Oof maple there goes my villain
Everyone: No Mapleshade is more evil, no Broken star is more evil
Me: CAT IS CAT
Broken: "..All the while you're a faded memory."
The entirety of the WC fandom: *_BRUH_*
These still slap un 2021
maple shade wins so Mapleshade and tigerstar
Maple shade: “here hungry? Have a treat…it’s from your mummy”
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
Dang...
Emily Myers well..yeah Yellowfang Poisended Brokenstar by Deathberries...
• DarkShade • I mean, Maple ain’t wrong-
That is funny Yellowfang gave him death berries
Poor brokenstar got rekt...I wonder if his brains worked properly to send kits to war.
mapleshade won,, but can we just talk about how well brokenstar’s voice actor did??
Yeah! He was realy good
It's my idea of how he would sound :)
Ikr, this is my headcanon of his voice when i read his lines
It's exactly how I've imagined his voice while reading the books, heh.
I agree.
Brokenstar: Youll fade away forgotten
*Entire fandom making MAP after MAP about mapleshade*
Where's broken star's map agin havent seen one no really haven't seen one
Lmao XD
@@eros1702 i have, along came a spider was a good brokenstar map. And if i remember a mama map was made about him, and a yellowfang tributed wayward son animation
Yeah he has like 4 maps about him
While
Mapleshade has 22 or23 maps about her
And pmv's and amv's and ect
Mapleshade is probably one of the most loved charecters
"I won't lose to someone from a novella!"
Brokenstar you don't even have a book-
ooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!
💀💀
He needs one
@Shadowtail agreed
@Shadowtail
Brokenstar's Infamy
Brokenstar's Choice
Brokenstar's Legacy
Brokenstar's Justice
Idk, a lot of names to be called for his hopefully soon super edition
Brokenstar: you'll fade away forgotten
ENTIRE FANDOM MAKING HUNDREDS OF MAPLESHADE MAPS
Shit how dos this get so many likes?
69th like
There's like - one popular Brokenstar M.A.P. I think 😹
Made it 200 lol
DAMN Maple roasted Broken at the end. XD
Edit: How the heck did I get this many likes,this comment is late. XD
I know it was so savage
Someone call the fire department because Brokenstar has third degree burns after that one!!
Kittycat Jazz34
*Ring Ring Ring*
Fireman: Hello, Fire department.
Me: GET HERE QUICK NOW A MAPLESHADE SET BROKENSTAR ON FIRE AHH IT'S BURNING
Fireman: Okay miss calm down and tell me the address
*Ring Ring Ring*
Nurse: Hello, GoodMorning Hospital. How may I-
Me: QUICK GET AN AMBULANCE OVER HERE BROKENSTAR HAS THREE DEGREE BURNS ALL OVER HIS BODY... Oh wait that's one less Dark Forest cat. Nevermind, have a good day
I like how the roast fits the season mommy mummy
Seriously maple u go
Character: Brokenstar
Death by: *Mapleshade*
B a z i n g a XD
True
True. That's all iamma say
XD definitely Rip brokenstar
I agree
jeeze maples a savage
also who won
like= mapleshade
comment= broken star
I think we all know who won tho-
both
i liked and commented
Both???
Maple is always a savage
Anthony Murdock im a the only one who is gonna only comment
Maple ROASTED Brokenstar! Get my girl to the winner podium.
MAPLE WINS EVERYTHING
Maple wins!!
NOPE broken-star sooo won and roated her
@@Aiexplainsitall roated??
MAPLE WINNED ISNT IT OBVIOUS
HAWKFROST AND HOLLYLEAF
YASSS
YAAAAAS
Heck yeah!
OMFG YESS!
YASSSSS PLEASE
Damn that end though, she killed him
ikr I was like dayum mapleshade chill
Yop
That’s one more kill added to Mama Maple’s list!
Just like his own mom did
"Feeling hungry? Have a treat! It's from your mommy~"
Me: OOOOH ROASTEDDDD
Lol true
@Ariel Koistinen but mapleshade was the one who started the dark forest training operation....
Maple shade!
The last line: We’ll I have nothing to say so take a lesson dummy feeling hungry have a treat! It’s from you mummy. 😈
Me: OOOooooOooooOoooOooOoooOoo THAT’S MY DAUGHTER
Maple: MoOoOm
Me: ;3
Lol I just finished reading the book when brokenstar dies he gets killed by yellowfang by eating death berries but mapleshade gets killed by a gash in her neck
Omg I get it XD the death berries XD
Mapleshade wins
Alpha Wolff13 not sure what’s worse
Omg- I just realized MapleShade's picture is slowly fading throughout the song!
Wait WHAT
Why(
Why is she?
@@howlingcreations3619 Blix has a song/rap on their channel about Mapleshade called “Fading” so I believe it’s like a subtle reference to that! :)
@@asher1basher or a reference to the fact that the more a cat is forgotten, the more they fade, maple shade being pretty forgotten by the time of season 4
Like: Mapleshade won
Comment: Brokenstar won
Which one?
Brokenstar
Brokenstar
Brokenstar
haha funny! Mapleshade won
...
ooooOOOh i was supposed to like
i’ll do that 🙊
Maple shade
Brokenstar
Gender: Male
Age: Dead Leader
How he died: -His mother killed him with deathberries- He was killed in a rap battle by Mapleshade
Brokenstar
Gender: Dead
Age: Dead
Clan: Dead
Religion: Dead
Appearance: Dead
Personality: Dead
Cause of death: Rap battle with Mapleshade
Parallel yup 😂😂😂😂
LOL
also how cross it out???
Gage Ladd u go like - - after ur comment -like this-
Maple: Feeling hungry? Have treat! *It's from your mommy* .
I first thought it was sth like a rap thing
but now I think that it's a reference
of the death berries??
Yep
Oh that’s smart
Yeah.....
Yeppp
It is
MapleShade, Definitely. Including that' she's my favorite dark forest cat
_i am random, you never know when I'll type something._
I don't know why, but I love the evil characters and it's kinda getting me worried lol
AquaIce 016 I mean Mapleshade wasn’t truly evil I think she just went insane-
If I said I didn’t love evil characters, I’d be a liar.
*Stares at all my evil OCs*
Sammmmmeeee
@Tea Time Same
Blixemi uploaded a video
*perks up*
Epic Rap Ba-
*ungodly screech of excitement*
*literally throws phone on the floor and starts jumping around like an actual psychopath*
Blix sounds so scared in the intro and outro XD
Edit: IVE BEEN NOTICED
I LOVE YOU BLIX ❤️
SAME
ficklepickle9421 r.i.p phone
SAAAAAME 😂😂
Blixmei's fear is me when someone says i have a math test
I think she’s scared by Brokenstar and Mapleshade because they are the bad guys that cats fear you know
"Feeling hungry? Have a treat
It's from your mummy..."
OOOOOOOOFFFFFF
Mapleshade won
Ikr
If you knew what it means you'd find it even more savage XD
When yellowfang fed him deathberrys 😝
*The treat was a deathberry*
*eats it*
mmm yummy
*gags and starts dying*
Am I the only one that re-listens to all of them every time a new one comes out?
Jade Eyed Calico I do the exact same thing you do
I listen to them all the time lmao
Only my favs
I memorized the Jayfeather vs Yellowfang
Nope XD
I’ve always imagined maple shade with a British accent but this sounds much better.
Also maple won
british accent? ok sure
also Maple definitly won
Rill Is A Word I usually imagine her with a Russian accent, but British fits too!
Rill Is A Word I actually always imagined her with a voice pretty similar to this.
I imagined Sparkpelt with a British accent.
I imagine the whole of ShadowClan with russian and german accents and Blackstar just has a British accent
I vote Mapleshade for the win.
Idea: Brightheart vs Daisy???
Ooohhh!
I bet brightheart would roast daisy so bad and she would probably talk about how bad her kits were lol
Please exchange so Brightheart will win.
Daisy V.S Brightheart
Because if Brightheart is the first one she will be roasted by daisy.
@@purpleforks861 Daisy is so nice to her
@@commandersane3161 n a a a h daisy tried to steal cloud from bright
"I took my time wisely and created a army while you were up there getting blinded by your mommy" OOHHHH MAPLESHADE
Blix, you okay, Did you get out of there quickly, I'm worried.. Do I need to send some cat to make sure you're alright?
I will send lionblaze.
@@canthony4623 wouldn't it be better to send jayfeather or cinderpelt
@@rachaelconcessio3019 well, lionblaze is invincible, but it would help to send them too.
I'll Send MothWing
coming to the realization that Brokenstar is pretty much Adolf Hitler
Nah Tigerstar was, after all he did want the “perfect clan”
Skyfeather holy crap you're right
Juniper Cloud yes
Hit it miss,
I guess they never miss, huh!
You got a boyfriend,
I BET HE ISN’T HITLER
Yeah
Blixemi: *Says MapleShade with squeaking noise*
Me: .-.
Why is it when I see anybody using the “.-.” face it’s a Gachatuber? It’s like, you can tell if somebody is a Gachatuber or not by checking If they use that face,
@@endmeeeeeeeee1836 well, i dont exactly consider myself a gachatuber, i only use it when im too lazy to draw or dont have time, and need to give my channel some content. I dont think you should consider someone something before asking them
@@gingerhaterr most of your content is gacha lol. If somebody posts Gacha videos they’re TECHNICALLY a Gachatuber. Damn, you got offended easily though- I wasn’t even sayin anything offensive lmao.
@@endmeeeeeeeee1836 i didnt even get offended-
@@gingerhaterr I agree with astra u post dacha content which makes u a gachatuber
Broken: Phahh-
Mapleshade: *a lot of rap*
Broken: MOOOM!! >0
Yellowfang: *BROKENSTAR SHUT UPPP!!!*
Brokenstar: NO
mOo°O0oOoOOoOooO°M!!!! She said something meeeean!
@Hayley Wu Thx :)
How about Firestar vs Tigerstar, or Brokenstar vs Yellowfang
James Smith Now those are good ideas! I recently suggested Clear Sky v. Gray Wing
I really want a
Bluestar and Snowfur VS Firestar and Princess
But I know it might never happen oof
Hm....
RavenPaw vs Ashfur
The_Queen_Of_Fandoms Senpai THAT WOULD BE THE COOLEST THING EVERRRRR
Nawww, Ashfur vs Mapleshade
Is it me, or did the narrator seem scared? xD
She even said 'Mapleshade' very scared voice.
I think the mapleshade saw the narrator
The narrator is blixemi
Totally
@AirRoDynamix- Yes, I know.
Like= mapleshade wins
Comment= Brokenstar wins
Damn this was awesome, this is probably one of, if not my favourite, rap battle yet!! The art looks incredible and both singers did an amazing job fitting their voices to the characters aswell as the rapping, I especially like Brokenstar's/KorrEVA's rasp!
I'm honestly having trouble who actually won though haha. I like how the rap didn't just focus on the characters but their overall power in the Dark Forest showing how strong and ferocious these cats really are! My favourite character is Maplsshade so I may be inclined to go with her side in the event of a tie but ehhh I don't know haha. The last line was pretty good though!
It so rare to find another with the favourite Mapleshade!!
Ayela Ruiz Haha I'm glad I've found another fan of her too! Book Of Shadows is my favourite book out of the whole Warrior Cats franchise, even the main series, and Mapleshade's Vengeance is my absolute favourite!
My favorite so far has been Crowfeather vs Ashfur. It was very catchy and I memorized almost the entire thing! My top three favorite songs from Blixemi are
1. What you cannot see
2. And he runs
3. One not two
They are all wonderful and I love your videos Blixemi! Keep being awesome!
I loved BrokenStar's voice! I feel like it fits him perfectly!
I see why people like Mapleshade so much but personally I don’t care for her and think she’s really overrated as a villain? The person who did her rap was good!! But I feel because everyone likes Maple they’re gonna vote for her without even thinking about the great job the other singer did!!
My vote is firmly for Brokenstar on this one!
Mapleshade totally won, Brokenstar's just *blind* to how much better she is
Literally.
OH NICE!
Brokenstar is literally blind so...
Oh haha
Meowing Agreed
"I took my time down here and i created an army, You took the same time up there and got blinded by you're mommy!"
Me: *i smell a good roast*
Mapleshade dESTORYED BROKENSTAR,
Can we also just appreciate how maple was fading?
Lizzie Purr You caught that too?
I had to go back and check, but you're right! That's fcking awsome!
Why was she fading?
Ivypool the cat In the books, she was described as fading bc of her time being dead. Your namesake(AKA Ivypool), in her POV, noted how Mapleshade got more transparent as nights passed in cat hell.
Wow Brokenstar was actually winning until the end when Mapleshade just roasted him.
Yep
Shadowfang64009 excactly
Thank you for 80 likes guys, I never suspected to have so many people agree with me for once. I am use to getting the negative comments. XD
Mapleshade: Okay everyone, we're having a barbeque party.
Hawkfrost (just thought up another random villain off the top of my head): Ooh, what are we having?
Mapleshade: Roasted Brokenstar.
yeah
Mapleshade won definitely, but I feel like she should have had a rougher voice.
She sounded a little too young and gentle.
I mean when you think about it she DID die young. And correct me if I'm wrong but didn't she try and play a sort of foster mother role to Crookedstar? Which requires some degree of gentle smoothness.
actually, i thought her voice was perfect. what shinyshine said was true too
Nah it was perfect
yttrium well, she’s really dangerous, cunning, smart, and she sounded cocky so it was perfect (spoilers)
And I also think brokenstars voice shouldn’t be so rough. He was pretty young I think, comparing to tigerstar. He was probably a little older than sleekwhisker, when she joined the rouges and tried to take over the clan, when they ruled shadowclan and newly riverclan.
sapphire Wolf nah I think his was perfect two exactly how I imagined it
Onestar vs mudclaw
Bramblestar vs hawkfrost
Longtail vs Mousefur
Purdy vs smudge
Princess vs Firestar
Crookedstar vs leopardstar
Why long vs mouse?
Maybe they were elders together? Dunno xD
@@ktmjoslin9588
Yea, they were thunderclan elders.
How about both Cinders
Ash v Squirrel !
So I was bored so I decided I should have a go at a rap battle, so here she is.
Hawkfrost Vs Hollyleaf
Begin!!
Hawkfrost:
Come back to die again??
Or to run away like a scared wren?
Last time we met I flattened you, easy as a leaf,
Now all your precious clanmates are drowning in their grief,
You were lied to by your mother,
And when you learned the truth you made a runner,
Your birth was a mistake,
And all you’ve caused is trouble and heartache,
Your father doesn’t care ‘bout you,
Or the other “special” two,
You led half your life down a stupid tunnel,
Then you got your heart stuck in a puzzle,
I had Firestar pinned to the ground,
While you almost drowned underground,
I’m the fiercest cat around, apart from my father,
You had to get found, by your weak little brother,
You left your mother a trail of false hope, that she would be your mentor,
But you couldn’t stand the pain of seeing cats injured and sore,
So you moaned and whined and took your time to make a decision,
Then your useless blind brother took your position,
Because of a vision,
From a stupid Starclan fiction,
I am the only true villain to walk this path,
For my life is a total bloodbath!
Hollyleaf:
So you think your the best villain out there?
Well go and think, before you come back here,
Even Broken freakin accomplished more,
And I thought he was downright poor,
You killed one cat and your talking to her now!!
Even my father managed to get his crown,
Down in those tunnels, I found true love,
You only managed to give dove’s sis a shove,
All you dark cats afraid of death,
I sacrificed myself without a second breath,
You talk about me giving false hope,
Well, I don’t know how your sister can cope,
When you made her walk the tightrope,
You throw your sister down deep for your ambition,
Your father won’t’ve been happy when you came back with a failed mission!
You're always picking silly fights with Misty,
Don’t you think that’s a little bit risky?
And oh, you wanna talk about Firestar?
And how you got killed by a twoleg bar?
And how Bramble slipped through your paws and left a scar,
And what’s more bizarre,
You’ve faded far,
Died twice!
Bramble must’ve cut you like a slice,
Spun you like a dice,
And cracked you like ice,
Boy, Bramble made you pay the price!
Hawkfrost:
Listen you brat of a tunnel mole,
I think you’ve taken a big roll,
My sis is a wispy mouse,
Nothing more than a dowse,
She let me play with her mind,
And she was rather blind,
To what I was doing behind her back,
She barely knew how to fight!
Just like you,
You were as easy to kill as a shrew,
And when little Ashy threatened to spill the beans,
You practically threw him in a stream!!
Now, who are you calling mean?
Then after you’d done that dreadful dead,
You announced it as if it was a plead,
Than left your mothers to sit and bleed,
And you left and fled,
Leaving your brothers sick with dread,
Your heart and head is filled with greed,
I think your mind’s starting to grow weeds,
You seem to have lost your ‘authority’
Oh boy, it must have been horribly-
Hollyleaf:
Oh stop filling space with your pitiful words,
You're as full of chit-chat as a bunch of birds,
It hurts my ears to hear you screech,
While you try and fail to teach,
Your dreadful methods,
That leave cats neckless,
How can you be so careless,
I would shut up about me being half-clan,
When you're just a scam,
Without a plan,
Your half-rogue,
And you're trying to sew,
Back what you owe,
But what you don’t know,
Is your great show,
Got completely thrown,
It got kicked away,
It flew away like a jay,
Up and away,
And your great father Tiger,
Lost his fiber,
And tipped off his tedious wire,
And met his demise!
He’s dead!
Your nothing more than a silk thread,
That’s finally snapped,
And trapped,
So go back to the shade,
Cause you’ve already started to fade!
Who won?
Who's next
Thanks for reading it, this is one of my first rap battles so please no hate in the comments and feel free to leave ideas for my next rap in the comments.
this is freaking awesome
Yeet!!! Definitely one to go with. I can't even think of a battle to start out with lol. Love ur idea!!!
@@willywonkajohnnydepp3658 thanks :)
@@foreverdreaming Thanks for the support, I might do another one I just need to get some ideas.
@@Monsterfourfourfour thanks for your support greatly appreciated :)
Have never clicked faster this is gonna be bomb
Loved it but I gotta say maple won XD
Mapleshade being a savage:
“You’ll truly be broken when i share maple’s veangence”
“Feeling hungry? have a treat! its from ur mummy”
“I spent the time down here and created a army, you spent the same time up there and got blinded by ur mommy”
“So take a lesson dummy”
I find it off she says she started it- one eye (dawn of the clans) was the first cat in the place of no stars, while she was a leader in the dark forest but that was after tigerstar found a loophole of being left to walk through a dark forest and maggottail seems more likely to be one of the first ones to start the place of no stars getting into live cats dreams seeing as he was called the oldest
@@anarchistcocktail3455
I don’t think you understand what they mean
Yes mapleshade wasn’t the first person to end up in the dark forest but she was the one who started the whole training ordeal in the first place
@@Peikkey it never said she was the first one, im willing to bet an older cat in the dark forest like ripplestar or ancient one like bee wouls have been doing it much longer, also if she started the operation why did she put her self in a subordinate role to tigerstar and brokenstar in omen of the stars, hell her being a major ooo spooky villain in novelas and than her being a 2nd rate dark forest 'leader' in omen of the stars just dosent make all that much sense
@@anarchistcocktail3455 I feel like by the time Mapleshade died, the other cats in the Dark forest disappeared because of their stories. Over time the Dark Forest cats fade because cats in the living world forget about them, that is why we never seen Ripplestar nor bee were mentioned in the big fight which could mean they faded long time ago. There weren't many evil cats at the time so a lot of warriors forgot about them, Mapleshade is one of the most memorable since she killed of 3 cats. A medicine cat and 2 warriors which one of them was from her old clan and the other from riverclan. Not to mention that but Crookedstar was technically an apprentice to her so he remembered her well, telling the same story to his daughter. //Then the great battle and you have another batch of cats that remember the Dark forest warriors. Interestingly enough, Mapleshade is Propably one of the surviving ones since she wasn't killed in the "Great Battle"//
@@anarchistcocktail3455 Tigerstar didn't find the loophole actually. According to Goosefeather's and Spottedleaf's novellas, thr Dark Forest cats already had them. Mapleshade found ways to even vist cats like Goose feather and Crooked star as they were awake. Thistleclaw also trained in the Dark Forest.
I made this please see it Blixemi
TIGERSTAR V RAVENPAW
BEGIN
TIGERSTAR
Really? Him? The apprentice who couldn’t even win? While I was fighting for my clan you we're running like a kit, man
No wonder you went, my power was too great so little raven couldn’t even scent,
My full potential
While he got fat on mice I starved myself for my clan, sacrifice
I was respected, I was protected and you needed fire and gray to go, undected
I may of failed to kill ol blue but at least I did more than you
So I’m evil, yeah? At least I’m fair-ah!
You acted like a kittypet while your clan was in danger yet
You refuse to show your face I bet your mother thinks you we're a disgrace
You couldn’t live up to lil bro dust
You are as annoying as fox musk
Stop, wait I’m not done, this is way too much fun
I was trusted, boom, deputy, thrusted
Away from my fame, but who could blame?
I’m a legend leader, it'll always be the same
And who’s name will remain,
Until my kiddies will be on canes?
Beat that!
RAVENPAW
Ha, what a joke!
The great leader of Shadow couldn’t swallow,
His jealousy of fire
As you upped and expired
At least I died helping a clan
While you we're cut during your evil plan
Even after death you don’t give in
Relying on cats who sinned
Even the “greatest” warriors couldn’t beat fire
He beat you and shredded you into a wire!
While I will be remembered for guiding and helping , you will be for failing and yelping!
It’s the power of StarClan, bastard, now look who’s the master?
WHO WON WHOS NEXT
Even if you don’t use at least read it
This is my first try I know it’s not good but whatever
Wait, 135 likes???? You actually like it???? 🤯
I think it's great for a beginner
I love this
Yeet. This is good
I know its short, but I wanted to get this done. (Also didn't have enough time to put anymore time)
Claps
MAPLE! Maple shade totally won! Love your content!
Mapleshade would essentially hate Brokenstar because of what hes done, shes a bad cat but shes also a caring mother
That's actually a really good point lol
True
And Mapleshade ENDED Brokenstar!
Not ture because firestar chased him out then yellow fang killed him.
Miner Matt68225 He isn’t talking about how Brokenstar died, he’s talking about the actual rap battle. It’s pretty easy to tell, ffs
Mapleshade *DESTROYED* Brokenstar at the end lol
She BROKED broken star
Why IS BrokenStar so broken?
Oh yeah..! *points to MapleShade*
lol i died at this
Im dying lol
Oof, broken start with trained by Maple Shade as a kit, that’s basically the whole point of the comment, I don’t know if I should say wooooosh or not
YES
edit: Mapleshade definitely won
maybe Tigerclaw vs Scourge?
Y-E-S !!!!!!!!!!
Holy hell I love Brokenstar’s voice
Sameeeeee!!!
Sameee
sameee
Sameeeeee
SAMEEEEE
"Feelin hungry? Have a treat! It's from your mummy."
Mapleshade won because of the line holy bajesus!
So I saw the rap between Goldenflower and Sasha in my recommendation. I watched some raps in the past that were not really good but yours definitely nailed everything ! Thumbs up !!!