@@ambercarey-morgan879 my parents come in my room and I was purposely screeching it out of tune… they instantly walked out and my mom said: I think she needs mental help
Oh my GOD they’re so adorable. My heart can’t take it. Their relationship is the purist and I absolutely love it. Ezekiel’s friends are also cool and supportive which I also rly love. I can tell ur channel is gonna go far. 🫶
Amazing first video❤❤😊😊! Characters had good designs and were so relatable and the overall plot was also good for a first video ❤❤❤. I'd love a part 2 and keep up the good work ❤😊
This video was sooo good! There’s no way it’s your first video, I thought you had a ton of videos based on how good everything was! Great job and keep ip the great work ❤❤
I have a few words, both positive and negative. This is polite constructive criticism as I have been writing and making Gacha videos for over six years now. And yes, I'm from the early Gacha era, so I've seen good, bad and the ugly when it comes to Mini Movies. So first, the good. The character designs felt natural and not odd for kids their age. They wore school-appropriate clothing and nothing so short you can see their panties like **some** Gacha creators do. The scenes were all completely necessary for the plot-line, which was smooth and didn't go by so quick that you have to pause, but not so slow you have to skip through it. And the relationship between Ezekiel and Gabriel was one of the most natural I've seen. They met through a little accident that didn't topple the both of them over. Ezekiel saves Gabriel from some bullies and casually asks if he'd like to have lunch together. Now knowing Gabriel's personality a bit better and vise versa, they start hanging outside of school as well as inside. Then eventually, Ezekiel and Gabriel develops feelings for each other in a nice, not overly dramatic way. Ezekiel's friends are cool with it, not overly energetic and support the both of them, even helping the pair to confess to each other. Now, Bianca. She may be considered an antagonist for this movie, but she is actually quite a decent one compared to some "rival lovers" in romance Mini Movies. All she does is ask Ezekiel to be her boyfriend. Sure, she's a bit annoying about it, but she's not hurting Ezekiel for rejecting her, she's not hurting Gabriel for "taking her man" and she doesn't violate any boundaries by attempting to kiss Ezekiel while Gabriel is watching. She's quite respectful and seems a little sensitive to rejection. All in all, well done. Now, the bad. You don't have to listen to what I say, this is just my opinion. When it comes to plot-line, this was nice and clean and stuck to the goal: Ezekiel and Gabriel getting together. However, I feel like it could've added a few more scenes. Such as, the pair going out on walks or dates, or just generally hanging out, bonding. That would've been nice. I know they care for each-other a lot, which is why I think you should've added a few negative things. Such as petty fighting or even an argument over a disagreement. Nothing crazy, but enough so that they could work through something together, therefore bonding them even closer. One thing about the final scene that I didn't really like was Gabriel's reaction to Bianca's confession. He didn't stay to hear the reply, he just jumped to conclusions. And I get it. In certain states of mind, you wouldn't want to hear it. But it's good to hear the entire conversation. I do wish the confession scene between Ezekiel and Gabriel was a little nicer, them dressed in something other than casual-wear, not a suit per-say, but something a bit nicer. It could've taken place during a sun-set at the park they love to go to together (A call-back to their time out-side of school). They could be having a picnic or just watching the sunset, and one (preferably Gabriel) could turn to the other and just say it. No dramatic *gasp* reactions, just a little look into each other's eyes before a reply, which would ultimately be a yes. Then, since they're in high school, they could either graduate together, with them holding hands in the final photo or go to prom, revealing that the "popular boy" is dating "the freak" of the school. But no-one boos. No-one jeers. Instead, they begin to clap, showing their support for the couple. I'm sorry this is so long, I just see so much potential in you and I want to help you perfect your craft into something you can be truly proud of. And you should be right now! I loved this Mini Movie and I can't wait to see what other stories you'll be putting on the silver screen for us to view. You've earned a very loyal subscriber. (P.S, I know I said I do Gacha as well but only have one video. I lost my phone and I overthink a lot)
"Watch where you're going"
2 seconds later
Bump to someone
"I bumped into my crush"
Gabriel has got to be the cutest thing I’ve ever seen. He is so adorable. It’s making me upset. 💕😩
YOU ARE THE ONLY EXCEPTIONNNN
There’s got to be someone else who thought of a song when seeing the title
YES i started singing “because you are the only exception”
For me: Nickelback - Gotta be Somebody
@@ambercarey-morgan879 my parents come in my room and I was purposely screeching it out of tune… they instantly walked out and my mom said: I think she needs mental help
OMGG I didn’t even watch it yet but I saw the comment while singing it after clicking and seeing the title
I actually sang it before watching the video
5:00 LMAO PPL CANT SMILE NOW 😭😭
AHHHHHHHH I LOVED ITTT!!!! THIS WAS WORTH EVERY MOMENT OF MY TIME!!
@@aligacha123 thank youuu!!
Oh my GOD they’re so adorable. My heart can’t take it. Their relationship is the purist and I absolutely love it. Ezekiel’s friends are also cool and supportive which I also rly love. I can tell ur channel is gonna go far. 🫶
thank youuuu!!
@@zihao_w0nzzy You’re welcome!!!! :)
You: Should I make a part 2??
Me: Is that even a question? 🤨🤨 YESSIR!! 😩😩✋🏼✋🏼
First time making a Gcmm?! Woah this is amazing!!
It's full of feeling, it's well crafted and I wish you'd make a part 2
I love this! And i love how you gaved all your efforts to this gacha bl story love it all!
thank youuu!!!
Amazing first video❤❤😊😊! Characters had good designs and were so relatable and the overall plot was also good for a first video ❤❤❤. I'd love a part 2 and keep up the good work ❤😊
thank youuu!! ❤️
This video was sooo good! There’s no way it’s your first video, I thought you had a ton of videos based on how good everything was! Great job and keep ip the great work ❤❤
THANK YOU SO MUCH!!! ❤️❤️❤️
@@zihao_w0nzzy OFC!! ❤️
It's sooo good, I loved it amazing work, plz do a part 2❤❤❤
thank youuu, I will! ❤
Awww the ending was so cute
Bruh there's part 2 its not the ending but nice video i guess... what IM I THINKING?!!
OMG THIS IS AMAZING‼️ AND U SHOULD DEF DO A PART 2‼️
I loved this! Mostly people start quite new to reactions or movements, but you did very good! New subscriber ❤🎀
thank youuuuu!! ❤️
Part 2 plsssssss you just earned a subscribe
thank youuu! ❤
Yo también me suscribi :D ame la historia❤@@zihao_w0nzzy
U deserve so much more istg-
(Great vid for a first gcmm)
awww thank youuu!!!
This is so good i hope to see more amazing videos and btw im your 12th sub!☺️❤️
awwww thank you so much!!! ❤️❤️❤️
I’m their 88th
@@VictoriaDunn-jy2gj awww thank youuu!! ❤️❤️❤️
This history is so beautiful, I can't! I love it! 💕
givin u that 100subs!!!!ALSO YES PART 2!!!
thank youuuso much, I really appreciate it!!
@@zihao_w0nzzy yes yes ^^
Wahhhh Beautiful❤
thank youu!
This is so good!!💕
thank youuuu!! ❤
7:50 NOT GABRIEL😭😭😭😭
O, Gabriel… now dawns thy reckoning…
THE SHIP NAME SOUNDS WEIRD - EZEBRIEL😭
@@IDK.343 HAHAHA
Best thing ever.
Me gusta la historia de love gay✅✅✅❤❤❤❤❤
It's a beautiful video ❤ love it
thank youu!
Woah that video so nice good work❤🌸🌸🌸
thank youu!
My heart is exploding with cuteness🥹🥹🥹 2:30
This was amazing 🥹🥹
you are so talented its a sweet bl story i give 10/100 thats my fav couple ♡❤🌈👬😊
aww thank youu!! ❤️
@@zihao_w0nzzy your welcome you deserve this♡♡
I gave them the best voices ngl
WE GON NEED A BONUS PART
@@ఌMiduchan there's a part 2 :DD
This slayyy
Love in first sight 😻😻💝💝😘💕🥇❣️❤️💓😍 it is so adorable 😍😍🥰🥰 i love 😘 this video 😍📸😍📷
wow Ezekiel is name too 🤩✨
you: should i make a pt2 me: YESS PT2 PT2 PT2 😆😆😆😆
Gabriel is my spirit animal, My name is also Gabriel irl ;-;
Omggggg part 2 pleaseeeee 😭💜
I hope they get married and have a baby or two. Or they can adopt a baby or two.☺️💗🫠
Hi can I dub some of your mini films?
(Always leave credits!!)
Most of the gay glmm that I’ve seen were like so fricking cringy but I actually like this one so congrats it’s awesome!!
thank youu!
𝙔𝙊𝙐 𝘿𝙀𝙎𝙀𝙍𝙑𝙀 𝙈𝙊𝙍𝙀 𝙎𝙐𝘽𝙎
aww thank you!!
Yess pls make a part 2
I have a few words, both positive and negative. This is polite constructive criticism as I have been writing and making Gacha videos for over six years now. And yes, I'm from the early Gacha era, so I've seen good, bad and the ugly when it comes to Mini Movies.
So first, the good. The character designs felt natural and not odd for kids their age. They wore school-appropriate clothing and nothing so short you can see their panties like **some** Gacha creators do. The scenes were all completely necessary for the plot-line, which was smooth and didn't go by so quick that you have to pause, but not so slow you have to skip through it. And the relationship between Ezekiel and Gabriel was one of the most natural I've seen. They met through a little accident that didn't topple the both of them over. Ezekiel saves Gabriel from some bullies and casually asks if he'd like to have lunch together. Now knowing Gabriel's personality a bit better and vise versa, they start hanging outside of school as well as inside. Then eventually, Ezekiel and Gabriel develops feelings for each other in a nice, not overly dramatic way. Ezekiel's friends are cool with it, not overly energetic and support the both of them, even helping the pair to confess to each other. Now, Bianca. She may be considered an antagonist for this movie, but she is actually quite a decent one compared to some "rival lovers" in romance Mini Movies. All she does is ask Ezekiel to be her boyfriend. Sure, she's a bit annoying about it, but she's not hurting Ezekiel for rejecting her, she's not hurting Gabriel for "taking her man" and she doesn't violate any boundaries by attempting to kiss Ezekiel while Gabriel is watching. She's quite respectful and seems a little sensitive to rejection. All in all, well done.
Now, the bad. You don't have to listen to what I say, this is just my opinion. When it comes to plot-line, this was nice and clean and stuck to the goal: Ezekiel and Gabriel getting together. However, I feel like it could've added a few more scenes. Such as, the pair going out on walks or dates, or just generally hanging out, bonding. That would've been nice. I know they care for each-other a lot, which is why I think you should've added a few negative things. Such as petty fighting or even an argument over a disagreement. Nothing crazy, but enough so that they could work through something together, therefore bonding them even closer. One thing about the final scene that I didn't really like was Gabriel's reaction to Bianca's confession. He didn't stay to hear the reply, he just jumped to conclusions. And I get it. In certain states of mind, you wouldn't want to hear it. But it's good to hear the entire conversation. I do wish the confession scene between Ezekiel and Gabriel was a little nicer, them dressed in something other than casual-wear, not a suit per-say, but something a bit nicer. It could've taken place during a sun-set at the park they love to go to together (A call-back to their time out-side of school). They could be having a picnic or just watching the sunset, and one (preferably Gabriel) could turn to the other and just say it. No dramatic *gasp* reactions, just a little look into each other's eyes before a reply, which would ultimately be a yes. Then, since they're in high school, they could either graduate together, with them holding hands in the final photo or go to prom, revealing that the "popular boy" is dating "the freak" of the school. But no-one boos. No-one jeers. Instead, they begin to clap, showing their support for the couple.
I'm sorry this is so long, I just see so much potential in you and I want to help you perfect your craft into something you can be truly proud of. And you should be right now! I loved this Mini Movie and I can't wait to see what other stories you'll be putting on the silver screen for us to view.
You've earned a very loyal subscriber.
(P.S, I know I said I do Gacha as well but only have one video. I lost my phone and I overthink a lot)
Thank youuuu so muchhh! I really really appreciate it, and I'll take your advice! I have no words, I can't thank you enough💗💗💗
Do a Part 2
Please make a part two🙏🙏🙏🙏
Yes part 2 please?!
Nooo am i late please tell me I’m early😭
You're not late, don't worry.
We NEED a part 2
Who's watching this in 2025
Yes please
Yes i hope part 2 is made
Cute ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
Boy grabe real is so cute
I happy your not talking to the no what
Pt 2!!! Please!!
NOOO DON'T MAKE PART 2 PLEASEE 😫😫😫😫
Part 2
❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
Yesssssssssesssssssss 😆😆😆
😍😍😍😍😍😍
AM I THE ONLY ONE WHO THOUGHT OF TEK IT
This video is 𝓢𝓞 𝓢𝓛𝓐𝓨
𝖄𝕰𝕾 𝕻𝕷𝕰𝕼𝕳𝕿 𝖄𝕺𝖀 can 𝕸a𝕶E part 2
𝓔𝓥𝓔𝓝 𝓘𝓕 𝓘𝓣𝓢 𝓤𝓡 𝓕𝓡𝓘𝓢𝓣 ever V̆̈ĭ̈d̆̈ĕ̈ŏ̈ y̆̈ŏ̈ŭ̈ d̆̈ĭ̈d̆̈ w̆̈ĕ̈l̆̈l̆̈
K̆̈ĕ̈ĕ̈p̆̈ m̆̈ă̈k̆̈ĭ̈n̆̈ğ̈ m̆̈ŏ̈r̆̈ĕ̈ v̆̈ĭ̈d̆̈ĕ̈ŏ̈s̆̈
Im bianca thats mÿyyyy name
AHHHHHHHH I LOVED ITTT!!!! THIS WAS WORTH EVERY MOMENT OF MY TIME!!
Hi can I dub some of your mini films? (Always leave credits!!)
Part 2