Hopefully there will be a part 2? Nice little bit of politics in there...how humans somehow survived because of 'protection' without knowing they were mortgaging their futures in the process. This trope has come up in other stories too and i always feel like saying we are new to the galaxy but we have been fighting for 50,000 years. And we're still here. Little bit of gangs in the hood. I DO look forward to a part 2. and as many parts as are necessary to complete the story. This is HFY, so there is only one way it can end, but how we get there, well. That is up to you. Yes I subscribed. If it continues to feel like this is human-written, good. Please don't feel in a hurry. actual writing is preposterously difficult sometimes. You write a thousand words, roll your eyes, and then just start over because it's easier than trying to rewrite that bit of nonsense. Can you believe there was a time when it was with a quill? Or a typewriter?
"Thanks for the awesome feedback! 🙌 Definitely glad you enjoyed the politics and the twist of humans surviving because of 'protection'-it adds a real layer to the story. 💭 I love the idea of tying it to the concept of 'mortgaging the future'-really makes you think! 🔮 And the 'gangs in the hood' vibe was intentional to show the grit and resilience humans have, even when they’re faced with the toughest odds. 💪 Stay tuned for part 2! It's coming soon! 🚀"
"Thanks for the feedback! 🙏 I appreciate your point, and I’ll definitely keep it in mind for future content. It’s all about finding the right balance-too much fluff can take away from the story. ✍️ I’m always working to improve, so your thoughts are valuable! 💡 Stay tuned for more! 🚀"
Hopefully there will be a part 2?
Nice little bit of politics in there...how humans somehow survived because of 'protection' without knowing they were mortgaging their futures in the process.
This trope has come up in other stories too and i always feel like saying we are new to the galaxy but we have been fighting for 50,000 years. And we're still here.
Little bit of gangs in the hood.
I DO look forward to a part 2. and as many parts as are necessary to complete the story.
This is HFY, so there is only one way it can end, but how we get there, well. That is up to you.
Yes I subscribed. If it continues to feel like this is human-written, good. Please don't feel in a hurry. actual writing is preposterously difficult sometimes. You write a thousand words, roll your eyes, and then just start over because it's easier than trying to rewrite that bit of nonsense. Can you believe there was a time when it was with a quill? Or a typewriter?
"Thanks for the awesome feedback! 🙌 Definitely glad you enjoyed the politics and the twist of humans surviving because of 'protection'-it adds a real layer to the story. 💭 I love the idea of tying it to the concept of 'mortgaging the future'-really makes you think! 🔮 And the 'gangs in the hood' vibe was intentional to show the grit and resilience humans have, even when they’re faced with the toughest odds. 💪 Stay tuned for part 2! It's coming soon! 🚀"
AI software just can’t help inserting unnecessary adjectives and adverbs. Programmers really should take creative writing classes
"Thanks for the feedback! 🙏 I appreciate your point, and I’ll definitely keep it in mind for future content. It’s all about finding the right balance-too much fluff can take away from the story. ✍️ I’m always working to improve, so your thoughts are valuable! 💡 Stay tuned for more! 🚀"