Thank you so much to all of you who are enjoying this video and my AU! Answers to a few commonly asked questions: 1. What happened to Tinyfrost at the end?/Who was Tigerstar attacking at the end when Boon and Tinyfrost teamed up? Tigerstar is attacking Redstar. Tinyfrost dies saving Redstar's life from Tigerstar (again), and this act of self sacrifice redeems him in StarClan's eyes and he joins StarClan. 2. Who did Tinyfrost murder? Bluestar. She was in the height of her distrustful/crazy arc, and Tinyfrost decided ThunderClan needed Redtail to be leader. He drowns her (fulfilling her water will destroy you prophecy) and stages it to look like the dogs killed her. Other questions, such as "What happened to ____ character in the AU?" I am happy to answer in the comments, and many already HAVE been answered if you look!
Ooo that makes a lot of sense! Just curious, I'm assuming around the end, Redtail was mourning/paying his respects to Tinyfrost? I assume that both Boon and Tinyfrost aren't aware that they're half brothers? Since during their small confrontation, Boon seems to talk Tinyfrost out of it as they both defend Redtail. Who were the cats that Boon saw when he was in StarClan? Just random cats possibly? Including Tinyfrost and Bluestar? Curious as to what happened to WindClan and Greypaw/stripe! Considering how Rusty never joined ThunderClan, he never had the opportunity to meet Greypaw or let alone save WindClan. Just want to say that this animatic is freaking beautifully made as well as this AU you've made! This AU is genuinely interesting and the fact that you decided to switch the roles, but didn't do the"Rusty turns evil and Tiny becomes the hero" gives a lot of nostalgia to Rusty/Fire/Boon keeping his personality to the end!
@@whitesoulr He got lost. Ran too far, in the dark, through a lot of unfamiliar smells and sights...he's only 6 moons old at the time, he's practically a kitten with no tracking training. He spent some time trying to find his way back, but when he finds Yellowfang is about when he decides he'll stay in the city and make it his home. He DOES reconnect with his old home later, when Smudge finds him after hearing about FireClan! Smudge doesn't join, but the two remain friends, and Boon is happy to hear that his old Twoleg is doing fine. ^^
I like AU's where the characters stay the same type of people, but the courses of their lives change. Makes it interesting to deconstruct what they would do with their new circumstances :)
I debated keeping the spiked collars - without Scourge finding a dog's tooth, there isn't really a plot-related reason for Boon to wear one. But it's such good visual iconography - you see Firestar in a spiked collar and you immediately get the premise of the AU! So I had to have it in there somewhere, and Bone coming up with the idea because it would "look cool and tough" feels like something he would do to help support his little leader. XD He's a good big brother to Boon!
I saw somebody else say this, but i am a HUGE fan of fire maintaining his original personality here. I always found the AUs that desicrate his original moral compass to be a bit unfounded (I always thought that even scourge's origin story was a bit silly, and when replaced with Firepaw, it makes it even less founded, seeing as how strongly morally good he is! I doubt a claw swipe would've perpetually damaged his view on the clans to a vengeful extent). Firestar's lawful goodness was a driving point of the story, and it has been beautifully repurposed here. I rarely feel fond of warriors AUs, simply because I am picky, but everything clicks in this AU and adds something to the characters, rather than taking away from them! The things that you kept within the story had INFINITELY more signifance than in the original story (Firepaw still having Yellowfang as a foundation, "Bloodclan" serving more of a purpose than anything, etc..). I feel as though Yellowfang serving as Firepaw's guardian figure had a significant purpose in contrast to the original series; not only was she someone Boon looked up to, but she probably curbed any misgivings that he held toward the clans after his initial introduction to them. She provided perspective on the clans' existence, and not only mentored Boon, but inspired him to create something larger than himself despite any negative connotations associated with the clans. This act of forgiveness from Boon felt really significant to me in contrast to the turning point that Scourge would've had in his place. It's really cool how you expanded on a series that fell rather flat despite its nostalgia. I would've loved to read something like this in place of the original. Not to mention how beautifully storyboarded this is. I hope to claim a part when/if the creation of a MAP for this comes! Amazing work, I will be thinking about this for the rest of time as my favorite AU I've ever seen constructed! Extra note: I'm a huge Yellowfang fan, and I just think that the role she played in this AU was so cool.. If this AU were her legacy, I would've been INFINITELY more attached to her. Imagine how loved she would've been by Boon's clan for generations to come as one of the founding member's, and the one who inspired its existence in the first place. Like the mother of all the clan! Agh.. Her death would've held even more significance than in the original series. It makes my heart swell!
Thank you so much for the amazing comment!! You picked up everything I was laying down in this story and I'm so glad. A big part of making this AU, was moving the pieces the Erin's wrote around in a way that felt more emotionally grounded and interesting. Really exploring motivations and how characters would respond, all tying into overarching themes ^^ I am also a huge Yellowfang fan, so the moment I had the idea for her to become the beloved matriarch of FireClan I fell in love with it :D I have another video planned someday that shows just how loved she is by her clan of street cats!
i can’t explain it but this au feels so real. like in another universe THIS is exactly the direction the erins would have taken firestar’s story. if that makes sense??? anyway, to say i GASPED when boon got his nine lives is an understatement! your storytelling skills are so strong and i loved this animatic so much!!!
i adore how you didn’t straight up swap their roles. even with different outcomes their personalities would have been too different. rusty isn’t a maniacal leader, instead he makes the city better to live in and is a great leader. amazing and beautiful
right that's what bugs me with most of this aus is that they end up writing both tiny and rusty as being extremely out of character. rusty enjoys fighting but he has such a strong sense of justice and he wouldn't become a maniacal, cold and cruel leader like his half brother. i know they're aus for a reason but it just feels? kind of lazy.
WHAT?? WHAT??? THIS IS INSANELY COOL WHAT???? HOLY COW... WHAT ??? IM SPEECHLESS I love how you captured the emotions and when yellowfang tells him about the clans you can see that kinda childlike wonder come rushing back 😭 boon is also literally so cute Also ajr 👀 if this ever becomes a map lemme GET IN ON THAT 👀👀
Thank you so much!!! The plan is definitely to host it as a MAP sometime in the future - I've got a lot of designs, sets and color palettes to sort out first, but it's gonna be great!!
@@BlackieSootfur Oh I could talk your ear off with the WHOLE story I have written out - it's mostly written as notes and ideas, not as an actual script or novel. But it's a lot and I hope to do more videos covering different facets of this AU, and how the butterfly effect of the swapped characters radiates out!
@@DragonwolfRooke DO MAKE IT INTO A MAP AAAAAAAA I WOULD JOIN BUT MY ANIMATING SKILLS ARE SUPER BAD BUT I WOULD WATCH THE FUCK OUT OF THAT MAP WHOOPS SORRY I CUSSED I AM VERY EXCITED
i really love roleswap/big change aus where ppl dont forget that firestar's defining character trait is his unwavering goodness, i did not expect to get so emotional over this but i did. ohh his bond with yellowfang is so important. you did an amazing job
After watching this video, I have to say this: this could've been a book series of warriors we wanted. Unlike that cash-cows warrior series, this au has actual plot and characterization from point a to point b. Imagine if this au was a book and many fans would come crawling for more genuine & authentic storytelling such as this. You have my praises here, Sarah Sellers!
WOW WOW WOW!!! THIS IS SO COOL!!! i love that this is a roleswap but not an evil!fire au, its such a hopeful version of the story and that makes my heart warm
Thanks owlipoppen!!! Yeah I like AU's where characters are given different experiences or end up in different places, but are the same type of person so you can see how they'd deal :) And of COURSE our Rusty boy would be kind and still help Yellowfang and believe in StarClan and all else!
this is probably one of the MOST unique takes i've seen on the "tiny and rusty swap places" au. bravo! this entire thing is so well put together and was a joy to watch
I like that they didn't switch places just like that. That is, as many do - Now Fire is a villain and Tiny is kind. No. Here they really showed how it could all be. The fire made the cats respect themselves with their deeds, he really did something great. Tiny forced himself to be respected only by fear. Now the first one has adapted again, and the second one has just got a normal life without eternal fear and with the opportunity to prove himself from the best side. ((((((Sorry, I don't speak English well)
I love how instead of Fire (Boon) being bad, you keep his role in being the hero and such a great guy. I adore this au soso much!!!! I hope to see more content of it in the future, this is incredible!!
Woah I absolutely love this!! It’s such a great take on a role swap au between those two, I love how he keeps his sweet personality rather than becoming evil or something. Also I love that his rogue name is Boon as a contrast for Scourge, it’s so cute!
I love everything in this AU! Especially the fact that they don't just magically swap their personalities, it's especially interesting to see how the story might have turned if Scourge and Firestar swapped the opportunities each of them gotten, and the fact that you kept Redtail alive is awesome!
I absolutely adore this concept. This makes so so much sense. SO often I see in swap AUs that Fireheart becomes evil, when that's just not in his nature at all. Seeing the city cats thrive, form their own clan and then BECOME an actual clan, become acknowledged by Starclan??? Literal chills. Your storytelling is top-notch, I was able to understand the whole story without any words spoken. Your timings and expressions are great! This AU as a whole definitely deserves to be expanded upon. I love Boon so much, maybe even more than his life as Firestar. (Ooh, also, question! Redtail is alive in this and Bluestar is, I assume, with Starclan. What happened differently at Sunningrocks for this to be the case?)
@@foxycritter Thank you so much for the comment! And yes, good catch! Tiny is the one that stopped Tiger killing Redtail - it's how he gets into the Clan, because Redtail and Ravenpaw vouch for him :) Fun fact though, Tiny actually met with Warriors long before that moment. The canon event of baby-Tiny running away into the woods and coming upon a ThunderClan patrol still happens - except instead of Thistleclaw and Tigerpaw finding him and beating him up, little Tiny meets Sunstar, Bluefur and Whitepaw. And Sunstar is like "we obviously can't take this kittypet kit into the Clan but we can't abandon a lost kit??" so he takes Tiny to the only kittypet he knows - Pine, the ex-leader of ThunderClan :) Pine raises Tiny like a son, and teaches him warrior moves, and when he is about to die of old age he tells Tiny to go to ThunderClan and say Pine believes he can be a warrior. Which just so happened to be the night of the Sunningrocks battle, so Tiny saw what was happening with Redtail and Tigerclaw and intervened. ^^
I think one of the main reasons that they got acknowledged by starclan is that the "Fire alone will save our clan" prophecy still existed, or at least a version of it, cause all the starclan cats staring at him in the beginning when he's under the dumpster. He and his clan still saved the forest, just without joining thunderclan. (Lol when Boon was under the dumpster I bet the starclan cats were like, "Oh- well what now?")
@@DragonwolfRooke I love the fact that starclan or whatever is higher power then starclan (becuase its pretty clear that starclan gains power through cats joined in their religion and other then the moon thing they dont have much direct power in the first series) Just franticlly looking through their notes like "Wait- NO NO THIS IS NOT WHAT HAPPENS!", Then taking one look at whats happening in the clans then and- "SEND IN THE OLD CAT!"
This is INSANELY awesome and your talent is off the scale. The story is truly heartwarming and full of emotion, which is something everyone will look for in a story. It’s SO well constructed, I genuinely cried at this because my emotions are an absolute scramble. Your storytelling is beautiful!
If I’m not mistaken, did Tiny save Redtail?! I’ve honestly never seen that before! I’d really love to see what happened there! LOVE the choice of music, it really adds to the sense of triumph and belonging that develops as Boon builds his own clan! The beats of the story - how each scene transitions like the music does - is captivating, and I keep replaying it over and over. I love Yellowfang’s role (and her design!), how she is so loved and obviously respected, how she dies surrounded by people who love her. I love the friendship between Ravenpaw and Barley and Boon. Everything feels so perfect - the way that Starclan ACCEPTS Fireclan and celebrates in triumph, the way they give Boon more lives, even the way Tiny in this attacks Tigerclaw along with Boon! I couldn’t tell if Tiny died during that but I hope not, I’d love for him and Boon to build a friendship.
Thank you so much! Yes, Tiny saved Redtail! It's how he is given the chance to join ThunderClan (since he didn't have a prophecy making Bluestar give him a chance lol.) At the end sadly Tinyfrost DOES die - but he dies saving his love Redstar, which is the best way he could imagine to go. ^^
@@wolfhunt8400 Barley and Ravenpaw meet! If you noticed, when Redstar went to get help from FireClan, Ravenpaw was with him. ;) He meets Barley and eventually joins FireClan to be with him.
I haven't seen anyone comments on the clouds yet so i will I love the symbolism of starclan watching through them, like in the last shot and at 1:00 . It's a super nice touch! Also, the structure of this AU is so different to other ones and Ii love it for that !! Most AU's (specifically roleswaps with fire and scourge) have the beginnings changed as well. This on the other hand, begins as normal and progresses the story with the characters not being changed, just the circumstance. I utterly adore these types of AU's, and am very happy to see others agree that this is an absolute MASTERPIECE
Love that he keeps his personality!! He's always been my favorite character in warriors, so its nice to see him in something interesting, like an AU, while still keeping the qualities that make him firestar-y :)
This story is AWESOME. Ok this is probably my favourite AU now. I love Firestar and this is exactly why! No matter the hardships, he won't get corrupted by them, and instead makes things better. Might be cheesy, but that's it.
Well, cheesy doesn't really mean bad. I feel sometimes people need a little naive idealism to push through things. It's only an AU, but I'm kind of tired of people claiming that if something isn't really dark, brooding and deep, then it's worthless. xD
I’ve fallen out of warrior cats but this brought my love back for it. I love that you kept Firestar’s personality and didn’t just end his story with finding Barley and Violet (I love that you included them btw) and instead brought yellowfang in to deepen the story and bring him to the knowledge of starclan etc. I also adore that he got a life from knowing yellowfang, overall I absolutely LOVE how you drew everything. ♥️♥️♥️♥️
This was the most beautiful swap and storytelling I have ever seen for Firestar. I can imagine him officially being named Firestar by Starclan after that too and Tinyfrost being Shadowclan’s Tinystar. I love how the community together in the city can bind because of Yellowfang’s knowledge of herbs. A city cat could also take her knowledge to heart and become a medicine cat…Barley? (Sorry Ravenpaw 😢) This is just gorgeous. I LOVE how Scourge rules with fear but Boon rules with generosity and inspiration. I can see Bone as his deputy. And I LOVE the idea of Starclan granting Firestar his 9 lives RIGHT in the middle of the war and stripping Tigerstar of his. Like not only a kittypet can lead a clan but create one with Starclan blessing. Shock. Loves. Favorite AU ever
Thank you so much!! One fun fact, FireClan doesn't ascribe to the full warrior code. They kinda made one up, based on Yellowfang's descriptions and their own needs. As such, medicine cat knowledge is shared freely with all - all FireClan cats have SOME basic first aid knowledge, and a few like it enough to be official medicine cats. But even then, medicine cats can have mates! That was a suggestion from Yellowfang, she considered that rule to have caused more harm than good. ;)
This. This video is everything I love about this fandom. The ability to take an original work, put your own twist on it, and bring it to life through combining art, storytelling, and music that touches everyone who sees it. Absolutely stunning work, I don’t need to hope for a colored piece, what you’ve given us already feels completed and full of life.
Woa . . . This is awesome!! I really like the idea of this AU! Like the person below said, I really like how Firestar's personality doesn't change here, as I think it's great to see a different take on if he were in Scourge's place. Now excuse me while this becomes one of the things I rewatch way more than I need to.
I don't know if it's just this day I'm having, but this hit me so much harder than anything has in quite awhile. You were able to pack so much emotion into this animatic, it's truly inspiring! I love that in this au Yellowfang fills a role Bluestar normally does in WC videos, their relationship feels so genuine full of love here- it really tugs at your heart strings. Also love how Boon has an unwavering stance on mercy, like he sees the value of life and the potential for good in everybody and everything
This is genuinely one of my favourite aus now, it's one of the only ones that actually feels like it could be an actual book or plot in Warrior cats, plus the choice of song is spectacular, I've always connected those into and outro choruses as Starclan when I've listened to the song in my free time, so I am very happy to see this
If Tiny was to come to the clans, if he were to be accepted, I feel as though he still would've been kind because his whole motivation was revenge on Tigerpaw, and if he never went through that, he wouldn't have been pushed the way he was
i am absolutely delighted by this au, its such a unique take on the swap and i LOVE it!!!!! i adore boon and great big family of street cats. also i love the scene where boon saves bone(?) from the fire and then he joins the clan, its so sweet
Yes Boon is saving Bone from the fire! They were going to fight it out for leadership of his little band of cats, but then the fire happened and Boon was like "well I can't let you DIE" lol. Bone of course joined his Clan out of loyalty for saving his life after that. Thank you so much!!
I FRICKEN LOVE THIS AU!! I always wanted to see something like bloodclan but wholesome (I love idea of instead of killing other cats, the clan in the city helps cats because living in the city is so hard) I need to make fanart of this AU,,
this is absolutely incredible!!! love the concept so much and you executed the storytelling and pacing so well. i got actual chills at the starclan part, it's such a fantastic and effective emotional climax. overall just such an impressive and emotional storyboard, i'm so intrigued by this au and cant wait to see what else you do with it! awesome work!
This is such an awesome role swap!! I think a lot of them time they kinda function as a design swap, but I like how this one maintains the personalities so well!! The storyboard is also fantastic and really easy to follow (even if I hadn’t already read the description!! I teared up watching, and I’m really excited for the map if it happens!!!
AAAAAAAAAA!!!!! OMG THIS IS JUST PERFECT! I can't believe that someone actually took time to study the characters for an AU... usually people just write the same story even with different characters... THIS GAVE ME THE CHILLS I- *dead*
@@DragonwolfRooke I have a question tho... who killed Bluestar in this AU? At first I thought Tinyfrost did it for Redtail so that Red will become leader and he becomes the deputy ( cuz at the end he seemed to care about redtail ) but then I thought it kinda didn't make sense... tiny will have a few problems if he was in the forest too ( collar that represent him as a kittypet, his tiny body with no dog claw/teeth to protect him and his problem of taking everything to heart) he might've been worse than tigerclaw in the forest due to him being bulled a lot.. it might remind him of his siblings too.
@@pinkbat. It WAS Tinyfrost who killed Bluestar - and you're right, he did it for Redtail. Like in canon, Tinyfrost is self conscious about his size and very intent on becoming stronger. This was tempered as a kid by his adopted father Pine, who Sunstar took him to after Bluefur ran into Tiny. Pine helped him train to his strengths and by the time he arrived in the forest he was a decent enough fighter, even without dog claws. He struggled during his apprenticeship to catch up in other areas like hunting, due to his size, but his pals Ravenpaw and Dustpaw helped him improve. ^^ He and Redtail became close after he saved Redtail from Tigerclaw. Over time they actually fell in love. Like how Scourge was fiercely loyal to BloodClan and rigidly devoted to the BloodClan "code" of strength being all that matters, likewise Tinyfrost is loyal to Redtail, ThunderClan and the warrior code. He's pretty strict about it, even going so far as outing Graystripe when he discovered his secret romance with Silverstream. So when Bluestar went crazier and crazier, Tinyfrost was convinced that ThunderClan would truly be better off with Redtail as leader. So he took matters into his own paws, for the good of the Clan and for his love Redtail.
This was so interesting! I love how this wasn't just a simple role-swap AU, but that there was thought and effort and dedication put into this. And it paid off so well! I absolutely adore this animatic! Subbed!
what a crazy idea!! And this animatic is insane! Like, this is so creative and you still some how pull all the strings perfectly together in the end! The whole story of swapping roles with Tiny was already in interesting idea, and you just expanded on it so far! I just love all the expressions, and just the story telling you were able to get across! If this ever becomes a map, I am MORE than excited to see this!
this is really cool! I love when people actually put in the work to make AU's feel official and complete even when they dont necessarily have to. I know that some times it can get boring half way through, and usually you will just hand wave it or skip over the hard to write parts, because its not like your writing a real book, its just some silly fan work that probably nobody is going to see. But its really important to deal with those parts and push forward, not just because it makes a better finale result, but also as practice for if you ever will make something professionally. So it takes some real dedication to see an idea through to the end like this, and its something I associate with promising up and coming artists! Your hard work has gained you a sub my friend!
Oh.. my god… this is definitely the BEST warriors animatic I’ve seen. So many shots in this were so powerful. I’ve been thinking about this animatic all day. I just cannot PUT into words how INSANE this animatic is, I just moon over it so much. I love the many little details in this such as things like the clouds looking over Boon, how instead of Tigerpaw and thistleclaw airs ravenpaw and tigerclaw to fit the timeline, how Raven is playing with rusty instead of attacking him like gray paw did, just ARHGHGH!! I could find so many little things in this story!! It’s so Also, I love how (if this is intentional) you can see the Big Ben in the background!! ARGHHH!! So much attention to detail, it’s so great! I hope this goes wild! If this becomes a MAP, I would literally try and improve my bg skills to join this, and post all art and animation examples I have just to join this thing. It’s insane!! I hope this does SUPER well! Thanks for taking ur time to make this!! Subscribed and liked this as soon as the starclan shot happened. 10/10 animatic
Thank you so so much!!! Fun fact, the whole reason this AU happens is because I tweaked the encounters that Rusty and Tiny have :) When Tiny runs into the woods as a baby kitten, he doesn't meet Thistleclaw and Tigerpaw - he instead meets Sunstar and Whitepaw, and Sunstar takes the lost kit to the only kittypet he knows - Pine! Pine then raises him and tells him warrior stories, until Tiny strikes out on his on to join the Clans (and happens upon the Sunningrocks battle where he saves Redtail.) And instead of Graypaw being on a patrol mission that night with Rusty, it's Ravenpaw and his mentor Tigerclaw. :) Ravenpaw doesn't really remember Boon when they meet again, later in life, but Boon tells him the story of what happened lol.
this is an absolutely beautiful animatic!! seeing boon turn out the way he does here is rlly satisfying and it’s such an uplifting read of this rolewap :) also i love bone’s role here a lot so much
This is amazing! It is clear that you put a lot of time into animation and story! I like to see how certain characters have their own story, like Redtail, Barley, Ravenpaw and Yellowfang. Not to mention Boon's relationship with Yellowfang and the other members of the clan! It's so great and refreshing! I can't wait for this to blow up!
I know I already commented this on the MAP call but I’m so in love with the fact that Firestar and Scourge both keep their personalities here and the way it balances out. Oh man. Oh man!!
I absolutely adore this AU! it is so well planned! I know the comments said this like a million times, but i love how Boon/Rusty/Fire keeps is still a hero and did not turn evil although he is in Scourge/Tiny's place. the storyboard itself is stunning! i cant wait for this to be turned into a MAP!
I love the cat clouds in the background, and overall, this is one of my favorite role swaps. I don't see much of how Rusty's life could have changed in other videos.
THIS IS SO GOOD???? next up forever. oh my god I really love how this roleswap differs from a lot of the other ones !! fire still being sweet and noble is so so nice I love how he helps build up his community and his relationship with yellowfang. I’d totally apply for this map dude this is so fun!!
This is so incredible, I think I've re-watched it six times a day the past week, wow. I love absolutely everything about it, but especially the detail of the sometimes cat-shaped clouds throughout the video. It's such a small but impactful thing, and I love it
I love this so much!! It's so lovely to see an AU like this where Rusty keeps that personality- where he still is just awed by all there is and still wants to be a part of that, helping others. It's always so forced when people turn him into this big mean villain.
I rlly love this & upon rewatching it again super appreciate how much this au leans into the importance of yellowfang & having her being this huge core thruline that holds strong in both iterations of the character. Esp cuz, & I'm sure I'm not alone in this, Yellowfang was a massive highlight of the first book/series for me. She is rlly a good illustration of Firestar/Boon's character as well as her friendship w/ him cements him as compassionate & steadfast when it comes to extending kindness & understanding to others. It's like his reaching out to her is the ember that become this roaring fire later in his life when he defies Bluestar & saves the antagonistic rogue from the burning building!
oh dude this is SO insanely well done. even without reading the description i could tell what was happening just fine, which how you Know something's super well told. all of the visuals are done super beautifully, and i especially really like how - and i kno a lot of ppl have said this before lol - boon kept his original personality, instead of just becoming Orange Scourge
I absolutely love this au! I love that rusty took the stories to help cats in the streets, I like how the fight with Tigerstar went down, I like the whole fire and yellow fang situation. Just loved all of it! Great working story boarding too! The expressions and designs are awesome!
I am relly happy that this Au turned to be bittersweet and Rusty kept his attitude! I think this became one of my favourite Au's XD and the storyboarding is amazing! You really can follow the story with it!!
This right here, all alone deserves a sub. The emotion and art alone is amazing! It's been said countless times before but I like how Rusty didn't become bad like og Scourge. I'll definatkey be subbed to see more of this amazing art ^^
I love this AU so much, I legit got emotional when Yellowfang died T_T Also, everything feels really organic here, of course Firestar being the soft boi that he is would manage to have a ton of cats liking him. Any advice on making storyboards? Because this one is amazing!
Thank you so much! I've got plenty of advice on storyboards, from visual storytelling to camera choices to which tools to use... I'd be happy to offer any advice you're looking for!
@@DragonwolfRooke that's so nice, thank you! My main issue is that I don't know how to manage time on scenes, I either have too many things at the same time (and people don't get what's happening) or I make a scene way too long. In this video, it's really easy to see what's happening, even without colors. And that would be it! Sorry if I explained badly, English isn't my first language. Thanks for taking time to read this, have an awesome week! :D
@@bluesheep7 Your English is perfect, no worries! Time management in a video has a lot to do with what FEELS long or short enough - it's something that develops with practice and with consuming a lot of media, studying videos you like, etc. It's actually something I also struggle with at times. Working within set boundaries can help a lot, such as using sound! A song or a piece of voice acting is going to restrict how much time you have, so then it becomes an exercise in priorities. What is MOST important to show the audience, and why? Each shot you pick is going to share SOMETHING with the audience - whether that's important storytelling information, a character's emotions, an emotion you want the audience to feel, etc. There were a lot of spots in this video that I wrestled with for weeks on end, because I had a very short window of time to communicate a lot of info, so I had to boil it down to what was most important and the best way to communicate it. Outside of timing, clarity in boards is helpful so folks will understand what's happening. Each shot should have a focal point - where it is that you want your audience to be LOOKING. And lining up focal points between shots can help smooth the transition - for example, the shot where Rusty is crouching in front of Ravenpaw. The focal point is the left side, Rusty's face. And then in the next shot, Rusty and Raven circling each other appears in about the same area of the screen. Then our eyes move to Tigerclaw as he enters screen - new focal point. So then when it switches to showing Raven cowering in front of friendly Rusty, our eyes are already there on Raven to get his emotional change. Does that make sense? It's kind of a firehose of information, sorry ^^
@@DragonwolfRooke it does make sense, it's just what I needed to hear! The focal point is something I never had in mind, it's good to know. Thank you so much for answering, I've seen your videos since 9 years from now and it's great to see that you're ok :] if you end up hosting the MAP, I'll apply to help with anything I can. Again, thanks a lot, you're a great artist X]
I lOVEE this AU so much!! im glad it isnt just a swap of scourge and firestar where they do the same things, because they are different characters and putting them in the same situations will have different outcomes!! Also wow the storytelling in this is so great!! I didnt even have to read the description to know exactly what was going on!! Im super excited to see this finished if it gets turned into a map!
This is so good! The atmosphere + build up is so good! Absolutely in love with all of your AU’s!! Gotta get that found family next I swear it’s precious >:0!!
I can’t stop watching this. The story is so amazing and all the poses and emotions shown in all the characters is awesome. Like the characters in the background for 2:24 and 2:41 you can still tell their emotions even if they’re made out of a couple of lines. And the part with the fire is epic, especially the part where he passes out in front of the fire. I love his confidence through the whole animatic and the outcome is amazing as well. It’s so creative instead of just making Rusty evil. Awesome job!!
Wow this is such a awesome AU!! Has to be one of the neatest takes on Fire and Scourge’s roles being swapped! It’s so cool to see a thriving, caring clan in the city! I’d definitely apply to join a map abt this AU!!
Ive rewatched this about 4 times now, I'm gonna say this is my favourite scourgeswap AU because there is so much more thought put into it than just changing the colour of their pelts I can see this being a more collaborative focused MAP if it were to ever release, kinda like manch's "this is halloween" MAP but more split into background artists and animators working together?? my god the sceneries that can come out of this one would look so gorgeous
Oh that would look so cool!! Yeah I definitely put a lot of emphasis on the environments in this storyboard, I wanted the city to really have a feeling to it
Genuinely teared up toward the end. I was so worried Yellowfang was there to take him to StarClan, not give him a life! I would love to be a part of this MAP if it ever comes to be. This idea is soo creative and I absolutely love it.
this is amazing and other people are saying its cool boon (fire) keeps his kindness and gentle but strong personality here! this is one of my favourite videos, like, in the whole fandom ! keep it going!
By far my new favourite Warriors AU. Actually nearly had me in tears from how well you made this animatic too. I'd love to see this if it ever got finished.
I absolutely love this concept it's such a cute au! And I enjoy how instead of the typical making firestar evil and stuff in the swap you considered his personality and it's great! I love how sweet this is and I want to see more of this for sure :D (also if it was a map I would run headfirst into it)
normally I’m pretty impartial to Warriors AUs but this one is amazing, reading through the comments you really took the time to understand the characters! if you make an MAP out of this i’ll definitely have to consider trying for a part!
GOSH THIS IDEA IS SO GOOD!! you mapped this all out so well and the expressions, story, and everything looks fantastic. looking forward to seeing more of this AU!!
this is so cool oh my god!!! gotta admit this had me choking up. The music is great and the story is told so beautifully. I am so gonna throw my hat in the ring if you get to hosting this as a map someday. Great job!!
When I saw that they named it FireClan my heart broke with adoration. Literally tho how do people come up with such amazing things as this? I could never.
this concept is actually gonna be all thats in my brain for the next 48 hours at LEAST i love thinking about how firestar and scourge are just, opportunity vs scorn basically
I teared up watching this AAA!!! This is such incredible work! I'm so in love with the story you told with it and how you constructed this au, it's SO fascinating and it made my heart all melty and warm!! :'')) I love this so much!! Amazing amazing work!!!
If any sort of continuationof this AU, the song "Final" also by AJR would fit perfectly into this universe, i meam like the song is a direct continuation of Next Up Forever. Also just amazing idea for an AU! I cant qait to see the compleated nap :)
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Thank you so much to all of you who are enjoying this video and my AU!
Answers to a few commonly asked questions:
1. What happened to Tinyfrost at the end?/Who was Tigerstar attacking at the end when Boon and Tinyfrost teamed up?
Tigerstar is attacking Redstar. Tinyfrost dies saving Redstar's life from Tigerstar (again), and this act of self sacrifice redeems him in StarClan's eyes and he joins StarClan.
2. Who did Tinyfrost murder?
Bluestar. She was in the height of her distrustful/crazy arc, and Tinyfrost decided ThunderClan needed Redtail to be leader. He drowns her (fulfilling her water will destroy you prophecy) and stages it to look like the dogs killed her.
Other questions, such as "What happened to ____ character in the AU?" I am happy to answer in the comments, and many already HAVE been answered if you look!
Ooo that makes a lot of sense! Just curious, I'm assuming around the end, Redtail was mourning/paying his respects to Tinyfrost?
I assume that both Boon and Tinyfrost aren't aware that they're half brothers? Since during their small confrontation, Boon seems to talk Tinyfrost out of it as they both defend Redtail.
Who were the cats that Boon saw when he was in StarClan? Just random cats possibly? Including Tinyfrost and Bluestar?
Curious as to what happened to WindClan and Greypaw/stripe! Considering how Rusty never joined ThunderClan, he never had the opportunity to meet Greypaw or let alone save WindClan.
Just want to say that this animatic is freaking beautifully made as well as this AU you've made! This AU is genuinely interesting and the fact that you decided to switch the roles, but didn't do the"Rusty turns evil and Tiny becomes the hero" gives a lot of nostalgia to Rusty/Fire/Boon keeping his personality to the end!
@@whitesoulr Yep, in that shot near the end after the battle you can se Redstar bowed over Tinyfrost with Goldenflower comforting him.
@@DragonwolfRooke Ooo! That makes a lot of sense! Again, thank you for creating an amazing work of story! ❤
Oh right, before I forget, is there a reason as to why Rusty didn't return back to his twoleg place when Tigerclaw attacked him?
@@whitesoulr He got lost. Ran too far, in the dark, through a lot of unfamiliar smells and sights...he's only 6 moons old at the time, he's practically a kitten with no tracking training. He spent some time trying to find his way back, but when he finds Yellowfang is about when he decides he'll stay in the city and make it his home.
He DOES reconnect with his old home later, when Smudge finds him after hearing about FireClan! Smudge doesn't join, but the two remain friends, and Boon is happy to hear that his old Twoleg is doing fine. ^^
I like how Fire keeps his personality here! I usually see him become evil in these kinds of roleswaps
I like AU's where the characters stay the same type of people, but the courses of their lives change. Makes it interesting to deconstruct what they would do with their new circumstances :)
I was gonna say! I agree!!
Me too! Thats why I absolutely love this au!
@@DragonwolfRooke same!!
Same
Bone giving him a spiked collar was absolutely precious. I love the idea of Bone just looking at Boon and going “yes. I shall be this child’s brother”
I debated keeping the spiked collars - without Scourge finding a dog's tooth, there isn't really a plot-related reason for Boon to wear one. But it's such good visual iconography - you see Firestar in a spiked collar and you immediately get the premise of the AU! So I had to have it in there somewhere, and Bone coming up with the idea because it would "look cool and tough" feels like something he would do to help support his little leader. XD He's a good big brother to Boon!
@@DragonwolfRooke maybe they were sharp rocks?
@@axoltheartist Could have been! My working theory is that they are either sharp chips of wood, or shed cat claws. ^^
@@DragonwolfRooke I like that a lot!
YES
I saw somebody else say this, but i am a HUGE fan of fire maintaining his original personality here. I always found the AUs that desicrate his original moral compass to be a bit unfounded (I always thought that even scourge's origin story was a bit silly, and when replaced with Firepaw, it makes it even less founded, seeing as how strongly morally good he is! I doubt a claw swipe would've perpetually damaged his view on the clans to a vengeful extent). Firestar's lawful goodness was a driving point of the story, and it has been beautifully repurposed here. I rarely feel fond of warriors AUs, simply because I am picky, but everything clicks in this AU and adds something to the characters, rather than taking away from them! The things that you kept within the story had INFINITELY more signifance than in the original story (Firepaw still having Yellowfang as a foundation, "Bloodclan" serving more of a purpose than anything, etc..). I feel as though Yellowfang serving as Firepaw's guardian figure had a significant purpose in contrast to the original series; not only was she someone Boon looked up to, but she probably curbed any misgivings that he held toward the clans after his initial introduction to them. She provided perspective on the clans' existence, and not only mentored Boon, but inspired him to create something larger than himself despite any negative connotations associated with the clans. This act of forgiveness from Boon felt really significant to me in contrast to the turning point that Scourge would've had in his place. It's really cool how you expanded on a series that fell rather flat despite its nostalgia. I would've loved to read something like this in place of the original. Not to mention how beautifully storyboarded this is. I hope to claim a part when/if the creation of a MAP for this comes! Amazing work, I will be thinking about this for the rest of time as my favorite AU I've ever seen constructed!
Extra note: I'm a huge Yellowfang fan, and I just think that the role she played in this AU was so cool.. If this AU were her legacy, I would've been INFINITELY more attached to her. Imagine how loved she would've been by Boon's clan for generations to come as one of the founding member's, and the one who inspired its existence in the first place. Like the mother of all the clan! Agh.. Her death would've held even more significance than in the original series. It makes my heart swell!
Thank you so much for the amazing comment!! You picked up everything I was laying down in this story and I'm so glad. A big part of making this AU, was moving the pieces the Erin's wrote around in a way that felt more emotionally grounded and interesting. Really exploring motivations and how characters would respond, all tying into overarching themes ^^
I am also a huge Yellowfang fan, so the moment I had the idea for her to become the beloved matriarch of FireClan I fell in love with it :D I have another video planned someday that shows just how loved she is by her clan of street cats!
Yes! I totally agree! This is definitely my favorite AU of all time
i can’t explain it but this au feels so real. like in another universe THIS is exactly the direction the erins would have taken firestar’s story. if that makes sense??? anyway, to say i GASPED when boon got his nine lives is an understatement! your storytelling skills are so strong and i loved this animatic so much!!!
Thank you so much!!
i adore how you didn’t straight up swap their roles.
even with different outcomes their personalities would have been too different. rusty isn’t a maniacal leader, instead he makes the city better to live in and is a great leader.
amazing and beautiful
right that's what bugs me with most of this aus is that they end up writing both tiny and rusty as being extremely out of character. rusty enjoys fighting but he has such a strong sense of justice and he wouldn't become a maniacal, cold and cruel leader like his half brother. i know they're aus for a reason but it just feels? kind of lazy.
Thank you so much!! I agree, it's definitely more interesting to see how characters would react to a new timeline, while staying in character
WHAT?? WHAT??? THIS IS INSANELY COOL WHAT???? HOLY COW... WHAT
??? IM SPEECHLESS
I love how you captured the emotions and when yellowfang tells him about the clans you can see that kinda childlike wonder come rushing back 😭 boon is also literally so cute
Also ajr 👀 if this ever becomes a map lemme GET IN ON THAT 👀👀
Thank you so much!!! The plan is definitely to host it as a MAP sometime in the future - I've got a lot of designs, sets and color palettes to sort out first, but it's gonna be great!!
@@DragonwolfRooke im like. Obsessed with this concept. I would read the hell out of this
@@BlackieSootfur Oh I could talk your ear off with the WHOLE story I have written out - it's mostly written as notes and ideas, not as an actual script or novel. But it's a lot and I hope to do more videos covering different facets of this AU, and how the butterfly effect of the swapped characters radiates out!
Hi :3
@@DragonwolfRooke DO MAKE IT INTO A MAP AAAAAAAA I WOULD JOIN BUT MY ANIMATING SKILLS ARE SUPER BAD BUT I WOULD WATCH THE FUCK OUT OF THAT MAP WHOOPS SORRY I CUSSED I AM VERY EXCITED
Don't get me wrong: I love me some evil Firestar.
But this? This fuels my soul in a new way entirely.
Aaaa thank you
i really love roleswap/big change aus where ppl dont forget that firestar's defining character trait is his unwavering goodness, i did not expect to get so emotional over this but i did. ohh his bond with yellowfang is so important. you did an amazing job
Thank you
After watching this video, I have to say this: this could've been a book series of warriors we wanted. Unlike that cash-cows warrior series, this au has actual plot and characterization from point a to point b. Imagine if this au was a book and many fans would come crawling for more genuine & authentic storytelling such as this. You have my praises here, Sarah Sellers!
Thank you so much!!
Ikr? Like- The Erins Care More About MONEY Than Their Fucking Fanbase, And That Drives Me Crazy.. THIS, THIS IS PASSIONATE.
WOW WOW WOW!!! THIS IS SO COOL!!! i love that this is a roleswap but not an evil!fire au, its such a hopeful version of the story and that makes my heart warm
Thanks owlipoppen!!! Yeah I like AU's where characters are given different experiences or end up in different places, but are the same type of person so you can see how they'd deal :) And of COURSE our Rusty boy would be kind and still help Yellowfang and believe in StarClan and all else!
this is probably one of the MOST unique takes i've seen on the "tiny and rusty swap places" au. bravo! this entire thing is so well put together and was a joy to watch
Thank you!!
I like that they didn't switch places just like that. That is, as many do - Now Fire is a villain and Tiny is kind. No. Here they really showed how it could all be. The fire made the cats respect themselves with their deeds, he really did something great. Tiny forced himself to be respected only by fear. Now the first one has adapted again, and the second one has just got a normal life without eternal fear and with the opportunity to prove himself from the best side. ((((((Sorry, I don't speak English well)
Exactly!! Thank you so much, and don't worry your English is great!
О. Привет. Кажется я видела тебе в беседах по вару, но не уверена ты ли это
@@clouder8651 Да я часта завивсала в вароских беседах. Сейчас когда поменяла там аву то стали узнавать в разы меньше.
I love how instead of Fire (Boon) being bad, you keep his role in being the hero and such a great guy. I adore this au soso much!!!! I hope to see more content of it in the future, this is incredible!!
Thank you!
this au is so cool!!! i love how you kept rusty/boon as a heroic cat and tiny/tinyfrost as a power-hungry cat despite the different circumstances
Thank you!
Woah I absolutely love this!! It’s such a great take on a role swap au between those two, I love how he keeps his sweet personality rather than becoming evil or something.
Also I love that his rogue name is Boon as a contrast for Scourge, it’s so cute!
I feel like Barley gives it to him as a nickname after he starts helping so many cats, and it sticks :D
I love everything in this AU! Especially the fact that they don't just magically swap their personalities, it's especially interesting to see how the story might have turned if Scourge and Firestar swapped the opportunities each of them gotten, and the fact that you kept Redtail alive is awesome!
Thank you!!
I absolutely adore this concept. This makes so so much sense. SO often I see in swap AUs that Fireheart becomes evil, when that's just not in his nature at all. Seeing the city cats thrive, form their own clan and then BECOME an actual clan, become acknowledged by Starclan??? Literal chills.
Your storytelling is top-notch, I was able to understand the whole story without any words spoken. Your timings and expressions are great!
This AU as a whole definitely deserves to be expanded upon. I love Boon so much, maybe even more than his life as Firestar.
(Ooh, also, question! Redtail is alive in this and Bluestar is, I assume, with Starclan. What happened differently at Sunningrocks for this to be the case?)
Oh wait, I just rewatched the opening again! I saw that it was Tiny that stopped Tigerclaw from killing Redtail!)
@@foxycritter Thank you so much for the comment! And yes, good catch! Tiny is the one that stopped Tiger killing Redtail - it's how he gets into the Clan, because Redtail and Ravenpaw vouch for him :) Fun fact though, Tiny actually met with Warriors long before that moment. The canon event of baby-Tiny running away into the woods and coming upon a ThunderClan patrol still happens - except instead of Thistleclaw and Tigerpaw finding him and beating him up, little Tiny meets Sunstar, Bluefur and Whitepaw. And Sunstar is like "we obviously can't take this kittypet kit into the Clan but we can't abandon a lost kit??" so he takes Tiny to the only kittypet he knows - Pine, the ex-leader of ThunderClan :) Pine raises Tiny like a son, and teaches him warrior moves, and when he is about to die of old age he tells Tiny to go to ThunderClan and say Pine believes he can be a warrior. Which just so happened to be the night of the Sunningrocks battle, so Tiny saw what was happening with Redtail and Tigerclaw and intervened. ^^
I think one of the main reasons that they got acknowledged by starclan is that the "Fire alone will save our clan" prophecy still existed, or at least a version of it, cause all the starclan cats staring at him in the beginning when he's under the dumpster. He and his clan still saved the forest, just without joining thunderclan. (Lol when Boon was under the dumpster I bet the starclan cats were like, "Oh- well what now?")
@@indesiciveeevee9053 Lol exactly :D StarClan kept a close eye on him in the city, even if he didn't know it at the time!
@@DragonwolfRooke I love the fact that starclan or whatever is higher power then starclan (becuase its pretty clear that starclan gains power through cats joined in their religion and other then the moon thing they dont have much direct power in the first series) Just franticlly looking through their notes like "Wait- NO NO THIS IS NOT WHAT HAPPENS!", Then taking one look at whats happening in the clans then and- "SEND IN THE OLD CAT!"
This is INSANELY awesome and your talent is off the scale. The story is truly heartwarming and full of emotion, which is something everyone will look for in a story. It’s SO well constructed, I genuinely cried at this because my emotions are an absolute scramble. Your storytelling is beautiful!
Awww thank you so much!!!
@@DragonwolfRooke Question, Without yellowfang or Firestar there, what happens to brokenstar, who defeats him and who tracked the kits?.
@@wolfhunt8400 Redtail does, since he's alive, along with Tinypaw (AU Scourge) Dustpaw and Ravenpaw at the time.
If I’m not mistaken, did Tiny save Redtail?! I’ve honestly never seen that before! I’d really love to see what happened there!
LOVE the choice of music, it really adds to the sense of triumph and belonging that develops as Boon builds his own clan! The beats of the story - how each scene transitions like the music does - is captivating, and I keep replaying it over and over. I love Yellowfang’s role (and her design!), how she is so loved and obviously respected, how she dies surrounded by people who love her. I love the friendship between Ravenpaw and Barley and Boon. Everything feels so perfect - the way that Starclan ACCEPTS Fireclan and celebrates in triumph, the way they give Boon more lives, even the way Tiny in this attacks Tigerclaw along with Boon! I couldn’t tell if Tiny died during that but I hope not, I’d love for him and Boon to build a friendship.
Thank you so much! Yes, Tiny saved Redtail! It's how he is given the chance to join ThunderClan (since he didn't have a prophecy making Bluestar give him a chance lol.) At the end sadly Tinyfrost DOES die - but he dies saving his love Redstar, which is the best way he could imagine to go. ^^
@@DragonwolfRooke WAIT, If Barley is with boon....Does that mean that ravenpaw and barley never meet? NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
@@wolfhunt8400 Barley and Ravenpaw meet! If you noticed, when Redstar went to get help from FireClan, Ravenpaw was with him. ;) He meets Barley and eventually joins FireClan to be with him.
@@DragonwolfRookewait, sorry this comment is so old, his LOVE? are redtail and tinyfrost in love in this au?! ooooo 👀👀
@@sugarrmoon They are!
two years later this video still makes me tear up every time
I haven't seen anyone comments on the clouds yet so i will
I love the symbolism of starclan watching through them, like in the last shot and at 1:00 . It's a super nice touch! Also, the structure of this AU is so different to other ones and Ii love it for that !! Most AU's (specifically roleswaps with fire and scourge) have the beginnings changed as well. This on the other hand, begins as normal and progresses the story with the characters not being changed, just the circumstance. I utterly adore these types of AU's, and am very happy to see others agree that this is an absolute MASTERPIECE
Thank you so much! I'm glad you caught the clouds detail :D
Yeah, I committed that part, too! It really caught me off guard lol
Love that he keeps his personality!! He's always been my favorite character in warriors, so its nice to see him in something interesting, like an AU, while still keeping the qualities that make him firestar-y :)
This story is AWESOME. Ok this is probably my favourite AU now. I love Firestar and this is exactly why! No matter the hardships, he won't get corrupted by them, and instead makes things better. Might be cheesy, but that's it.
Firestar's the OG good boy.
Well, cheesy doesn't really mean bad. I feel sometimes people need a little naive idealism to push through things. It's only an AU, but I'm kind of tired of people claiming that if something isn't really dark, brooding and deep, then it's worthless. xD
@@najpotenicewolf934 totally!!
I’ve fallen out of warrior cats but this brought my love back for it. I love that you kept Firestar’s personality and didn’t just end his story with finding Barley and Violet (I love that you included them btw) and instead brought yellowfang in to deepen the story and bring him to the knowledge of starclan etc. I also adore that he got a life from knowing yellowfang, overall I absolutely LOVE how you drew everything. ♥️♥️♥️♥️
Thank you so much!!!
This was the most beautiful swap and storytelling I have ever seen for Firestar. I can imagine him officially being named Firestar by Starclan after that too and Tinyfrost being Shadowclan’s Tinystar. I love how the community together in the city can bind because of Yellowfang’s knowledge of herbs. A city cat could also take her knowledge to heart and become a medicine cat…Barley? (Sorry Ravenpaw 😢)
This is just gorgeous. I LOVE how Scourge rules with fear but Boon rules with generosity and inspiration. I can see Bone as his deputy. And I LOVE the idea of Starclan granting Firestar his 9 lives RIGHT in the middle of the war and stripping Tigerstar of his. Like not only a kittypet can lead a clan but create one with Starclan blessing. Shock. Loves. Favorite AU ever
Thank you so much!! One fun fact, FireClan doesn't ascribe to the full warrior code. They kinda made one up, based on Yellowfang's descriptions and their own needs. As such, medicine cat knowledge is shared freely with all - all FireClan cats have SOME basic first aid knowledge, and a few like it enough to be official medicine cats. But even then, medicine cats can have mates! That was a suggestion from Yellowfang, she considered that rule to have caused more harm than good. ;)
This. This video is everything I love about this fandom. The ability to take an original work, put your own twist on it, and bring it to life through combining art, storytelling, and music that touches everyone who sees it. Absolutely stunning work, I don’t need to hope for a colored piece, what you’ve given us already feels completed and full of life.
Thank you!!!
Woa . . . This is awesome!! I really like the idea of this AU! Like the person below said, I really like how Firestar's personality doesn't change here, as I think it's great to see a different take on if he were in Scourge's place. Now excuse me while this becomes one of the things I rewatch way more than I need to.
Thank you!!!
I just read the description. You plan to make a MAP with this idea? That would be so cool! Very excited for when that happens.
@@DragonwolfRooke You're welcome!
@@kybee48 Once I have some other projects cleared up, that's the plan!
I don't know if it's just this day I'm having, but this hit me so much harder than anything has in quite awhile. You were able to pack so much emotion into this animatic, it's truly inspiring!
I love that in this au Yellowfang fills a role Bluestar normally does in WC videos, their relationship feels so genuine full of love here- it really tugs at your heart strings. Also love how Boon has an unwavering stance on mercy, like he sees the value of life and the potential for good in everybody and everything
Thank you so much!! I love the relationship between Yellowfang and Boon
This is one of the best warriors swap aus I have seen my word it's like a full on different story and not just simple swap outs it's amazing
Thank you so much!!
This is genuinely one of my favourite aus now, it's one of the only ones that actually feels like it could be an actual book or plot in Warrior cats, plus the choice of song is spectacular, I've always connected those into and outro choruses as Starclan when I've listened to the song in my free time, so I am very happy to see this
If Tiny was to come to the clans, if he were to be accepted, I feel as though he still would've been kind because his whole motivation was revenge on Tigerpaw, and if he never went through that, he wouldn't have been pushed the way he was
But holy shit this actually made me cry, well done
@@cookiecraftfriend1051 Tinyfrost's story js definitely not without nuance, and he always felt like he was doing the right thing ;)
@@DragonwolfRooke tiny
i am absolutely delighted by this au, its such a unique take on the swap and i LOVE it!!!!! i adore boon and great big family of street cats. also i love the scene where boon saves bone(?) from the fire and then he joins the clan, its so sweet
Yes Boon is saving Bone from the fire! They were going to fight it out for leadership of his little band of cats, but then the fire happened and Boon was like "well I can't let you DIE" lol. Bone of course joined his Clan out of loyalty for saving his life after that. Thank you so much!!
I FRICKEN LOVE THIS AU!! I always wanted to see something like bloodclan but wholesome (I love idea of instead of killing other cats, the clan in the city helps cats because living in the city is so hard) I need to make fanart of this AU,,
Aaa thank you!!
this is absolutely incredible!!! love the concept so much and you executed the storytelling and pacing so well. i got actual chills at the starclan part, it's such a fantastic and effective emotional climax. overall just such an impressive and emotional storyboard, i'm so intrigued by this au and cant wait to see what else you do with it! awesome work!
Thank you so much!!
This is such an awesome role swap!! I think a lot of them time they kinda function as a design swap, but I like how this one maintains the personalities so well!! The storyboard is also fantastic and really easy to follow (even if I hadn’t already read the description!! I teared up watching, and I’m really excited for the map if it happens!!!
Thank you!!
AAAAAAAAAA!!!!! OMG THIS IS JUST PERFECT!
I can't believe that someone actually took time to study the characters for an AU... usually people just write the same story even with different characters...
THIS GAVE ME THE CHILLS I- *dead*
Thank you!!
@@DragonwolfRooke Keep up the amazing work ^v^
@@DragonwolfRooke I have a question tho... who killed Bluestar in this AU? At first I thought Tinyfrost did it for Redtail so that Red will become leader and he becomes the deputy ( cuz at the end he seemed to care about redtail )
but then I thought it kinda didn't make sense...
tiny will have a few problems if he was in the forest too ( collar that represent him as a kittypet, his tiny body with no dog claw/teeth to protect him and his problem of taking everything to heart) he might've been worse than tigerclaw in the forest due to him being bulled a lot..
it might remind him of his siblings too.
@@pinkbat. It WAS Tinyfrost who killed Bluestar - and you're right, he did it for Redtail.
Like in canon, Tinyfrost is self conscious about his size and very intent on becoming stronger. This was tempered as a kid by his adopted father Pine, who Sunstar took him to after Bluefur ran into Tiny. Pine helped him train to his strengths and by the time he arrived in the forest he was a decent enough fighter, even without dog claws. He struggled during his apprenticeship to catch up in other areas like hunting, due to his size, but his pals Ravenpaw and Dustpaw helped him improve. ^^
He and Redtail became close after he saved Redtail from Tigerclaw. Over time they actually fell in love. Like how Scourge was fiercely loyal to BloodClan and rigidly devoted to the BloodClan "code" of strength being all that matters, likewise Tinyfrost is loyal to Redtail, ThunderClan and the warrior code. He's pretty strict about it, even going so far as outing Graystripe when he discovered his secret romance with Silverstream.
So when Bluestar went crazier and crazier, Tinyfrost was convinced that ThunderClan would truly be better off with Redtail as leader. So he took matters into his own paws, for the good of the Clan and for his love Redtail.
This was so interesting! I love how this wasn't just a simple role-swap AU, but that there was thought and effort and dedication put into this. And it paid off so well! I absolutely adore this animatic! Subbed!
Thank you!!
what a crazy idea!! And this animatic is insane! Like, this is so creative and you still some how pull all the strings perfectly together in the end! The whole story of swapping roles with Tiny was already in interesting idea, and you just expanded on it so far!
I just love all the expressions, and just the story telling you were able to get across! If this ever becomes a map, I am MORE than excited to see this!
Thank you!!
this is really cool! I love when people actually put in the work to make AU's feel official and complete even when they dont necessarily have to.
I know that some times it can get boring half way through, and usually you will just hand wave it or skip over the hard to write parts, because its not like your writing a real book, its just some silly fan work that probably nobody is going to see.
But its really important to deal with those parts and push forward, not just because it makes a better finale result, but also as practice for if you ever will make something professionally. So it takes some real dedication to see an idea through to the end like this, and its something I associate with promising up and coming artists! Your hard work has gained you a sub my friend!
Thank you so much, I appreciate it!
Oh.. my god… this is definitely the BEST warriors animatic I’ve seen. So many shots in this were so powerful. I’ve been thinking about this animatic all day. I just cannot PUT into words how INSANE this animatic is, I just moon over it so much. I love the many little details in this such as things like the clouds looking over Boon, how instead of Tigerpaw and thistleclaw airs ravenpaw and tigerclaw to fit the timeline, how Raven is playing with rusty instead of attacking him like gray paw did, just ARHGHGH!! I could find so many little things in this story!! It’s so Also, I love how (if this is intentional) you can see the Big Ben in the background!! ARGHHH!! So much attention to detail, it’s so great! I hope this goes wild! If this becomes a MAP, I would literally try and improve my bg skills to join this, and post all art and animation examples I have just to join this thing. It’s insane!! I hope this does SUPER well! Thanks for taking ur time to make this!! Subscribed and liked this as soon as the starclan shot happened. 10/10 animatic
Thank you so so much!!! Fun fact, the whole reason this AU happens is because I tweaked the encounters that Rusty and Tiny have :) When Tiny runs into the woods as a baby kitten, he doesn't meet Thistleclaw and Tigerpaw - he instead meets Sunstar and Whitepaw, and Sunstar takes the lost kit to the only kittypet he knows - Pine! Pine then raises him and tells him warrior stories, until Tiny strikes out on his on to join the Clans (and happens upon the Sunningrocks battle where he saves Redtail.)
And instead of Graypaw being on a patrol mission that night with Rusty, it's Ravenpaw and his mentor Tigerclaw. :) Ravenpaw doesn't really remember Boon when they meet again, later in life, but Boon tells him the story of what happened lol.
@@DragonwolfRooke I absoloutely love the storyline you got going on! It’s so creative and I love it SO MUCHHH!!!! Thanks for responding!! :0
@@funkyfelineonthecase Thank you!!!
this is an absolutely beautiful animatic!! seeing boon turn out the way he does here is rlly satisfying and it’s such an uplifting read of this rolewap :) also i love bone’s role here a lot so much
Bone is 100% loyal when he chooses to be, and after Boon saves his life Bone is ALL IN on serving him. He has big himbo energy XD
This is amazing! It is clear that you put a lot of time into animation and story! I like to see how certain characters have their own story, like Redtail, Barley, Ravenpaw and Yellowfang. Not to mention Boon's relationship with Yellowfang and the other members of the clan! It's so great and refreshing! I can't wait for this to blow up!
Thank you so much!
I know I already commented this on the MAP call but I’m so in love with the fact that Firestar and Scourge both keep their personalities here and the way it balances out. Oh man. Oh man!!
I absolutely adore this AU! it is so well planned! I know the comments said this like a million times, but i love how Boon/Rusty/Fire keeps is still a hero and did not turn evil although he is in Scourge/Tiny's place. the storyboard itself is stunning! i cant wait for this to be turned into a MAP!
I have watched this a million times and I still can't get over how BIG tiger is. Huge kitty
HOW does this not have more attention? One of the best AUs I've ever seen. Can't wait for more from this universe.
I love the cat clouds in the background, and overall, this is one of my favorite role swaps. I don't see much of how Rusty's life could have changed in other videos.
Thank you!
Omg this is so good, I love how he loses his collar at the end...
Whether in canon or this AU, Rusty loses his collar the moment he becomes a true warrior cat. ;)
@@DragonwolfRooke thats such a great idea you had there, props to you
THIS IS SO GOOD???? next up forever. oh my god
I really love how this roleswap differs from a lot of the other ones !! fire still being sweet and noble is so so nice I love how he helps build up his community and his relationship with yellowfang. I’d totally apply for this map dude this is so fun!!
Thank you so much!!! I love Fireheart and Yellowfang's friendship mother/son dynamic so much, I just had to have it and amp it up in my AU
This is so incredible, I think I've re-watched it six times a day the past week, wow. I love absolutely everything about it, but especially the detail of the sometimes cat-shaped clouds throughout the video. It's such a small but impactful thing, and I love it
Thank you!!
I love this so much!! It's so lovely to see an AU like this where Rusty keeps that personality- where he still is just awed by all there is and still wants to be a part of that, helping others. It's always so forced when people turn him into this big mean villain.
I agree! He is a sweet boy and would try to be a good bean regardless of where he ends up. ^^
this was the first warrior cats related video i ever saw... ty for making this, now i know this beautiful book
This is so cool! I love the concept of Boon and Fireclan so much!! So happy he has barley violet and yellowfang there for him
They are a wonderful found family
So true
I love that even in an alternate universe Yellow Fang raises Rusty
I rlly love this & upon rewatching it again super appreciate how much this au leans into the importance of yellowfang & having her being this huge core thruline that holds strong in both iterations of the character. Esp cuz, & I'm sure I'm not alone in this, Yellowfang was a massive highlight of the first book/series for me. She is rlly a good illustration of Firestar/Boon's character as well as her friendship w/ him cements him as compassionate & steadfast when it comes to extending kindness & understanding to others. It's like his reaching out to her is the ember that become this roaring fire later in his life when he defies Bluestar & saves the antagonistic rogue from the burning building!
THIS IS AMAZING! :O
I love this version, Firestar is so awesome in this one and I love how Yellowfang is still in the story! Love her.
Thank you!!
this is so adoreable!! I lvoe how he still stays the same cat even when his lfie goes different. it really shows how different they are!
oh dude this is SO insanely well done. even without reading the description i could tell what was happening just fine, which how you Know something's super well told. all of the visuals are done super beautifully, and i especially really like how - and i kno a lot of ppl have said this before lol - boon kept his original personality, instead of just becoming Orange Scourge
Thank you so much!!
I absolutely love this au! I love that rusty took the stories to help cats in the streets, I like how the fight with Tigerstar went down, I like the whole fire and yellow fang situation. Just loved all of it! Great working story boarding too! The expressions and designs are awesome!
Thank you!
This gave me chills while watching it! I love how you did with this and I'd be excited if a map was held.
Thank you!!
now I review it very often, and I see a very well-developed WHOLE STORY, JUST UNBELIEVABLY
Holy smokes! The emotion you captured in this was AMAZING! This is definetly my favourite warriors animatic!
I am relly happy that this Au turned to be bittersweet and Rusty kept his attitude! I think this became one of my favourite Au's XD and the storyboarding is amazing! You really can follow the story with it!!
Thank you!!
I loved every second of this! such a good au
Thank you!
This right here, all alone deserves a sub. The emotion and art alone is amazing! It's been said countless times before but I like how Rusty didn't become bad like og Scourge. I'll definatkey be subbed to see more of this amazing art ^^
Thank you!!
I love this AU so much, I legit got emotional when Yellowfang died T_T Also, everything feels really organic here, of course Firestar being the soft boi that he is would manage to have a ton of cats liking him.
Any advice on making storyboards? Because this one is amazing!
Thank you so much! I've got plenty of advice on storyboards, from visual storytelling to camera choices to which tools to use... I'd be happy to offer any advice you're looking for!
@@DragonwolfRooke that's so nice, thank you!
My main issue is that I don't know how to manage time on scenes, I either have too many things at the same time (and people don't get what's happening) or I make a scene way too long. In this video, it's really easy to see what's happening, even without colors.
And that would be it! Sorry if I explained badly, English isn't my first language. Thanks for taking time to read this, have an awesome week! :D
@@bluesheep7 Your English is perfect, no worries! Time management in a video has a lot to do with what FEELS long or short enough - it's something that develops with practice and with consuming a lot of media, studying videos you like, etc. It's actually something I also struggle with at times.
Working within set boundaries can help a lot, such as using sound! A song or a piece of voice acting is going to restrict how much time you have, so then it becomes an exercise in priorities. What is MOST important to show the audience, and why? Each shot you pick is going to share SOMETHING with the audience - whether that's important storytelling information, a character's emotions, an emotion you want the audience to feel, etc. There were a lot of spots in this video that I wrestled with for weeks on end, because I had a very short window of time to communicate a lot of info, so I had to boil it down to what was most important and the best way to communicate it.
Outside of timing, clarity in boards is helpful so folks will understand what's happening. Each shot should have a focal point - where it is that you want your audience to be LOOKING. And lining up focal points between shots can help smooth the transition - for example, the shot where Rusty is crouching in front of Ravenpaw. The focal point is the left side, Rusty's face. And then in the next shot, Rusty and Raven circling each other appears in about the same area of the screen. Then our eyes move to Tigerclaw as he enters screen - new focal point. So then when it switches to showing Raven cowering in front of friendly Rusty, our eyes are already there on Raven to get his emotional change.
Does that make sense? It's kind of a firehose of information, sorry ^^
@@DragonwolfRooke it does make sense, it's just what I needed to hear! The focal point is something I never had in mind, it's good to know.
Thank you so much for answering, I've seen your videos since 9 years from now and it's great to see that you're ok :] if you end up hosting the MAP, I'll apply to help with anything I can.
Again, thanks a lot, you're a great artist X]
@@bluesheep7 Aww thank you so much!!!
This is my new favorite warriors Amv. I like the role reversal, but it’s interesting cuz the personality doesn’t change!
Oh gosh this was so wholesome, left such a fuzzy nice feeling in my heart!!
Thank you!
I lOVEE this AU so much!! im glad it isnt just a swap of scourge and firestar where they do the same things, because they are different characters and putting them in the same situations will have different outcomes!! Also wow the storytelling in this is so great!! I didnt even have to read the description to know exactly what was going on!! Im super excited to see this finished if it gets turned into a map!
Thank you so much! I love your work :D
This is one of the best AUs I‘ve seen so far! I really like the idea! Great work, also with animating and the storyboard over all!
Oh my god I’m literally obsessed with this au, it’s fantastic!
Thank you!!
This is so good! The atmosphere + build up is so good! Absolutely in love with all of your AU’s!! Gotta get that found family next I swear it’s precious >:0!!
YESSS
Adorable to see that even as a city cat, Boon is always a good hearted guy.
I can’t stop watching this. The story is so amazing and all the poses and emotions shown in all the characters is awesome. Like the characters in the background for 2:24 and 2:41 you can still tell their emotions even if they’re made out of a couple of lines. And the part with the fire is epic, especially the part where he passes out in front of the fire. I love his confidence through the whole animatic and the outcome is amazing as well. It’s so creative instead of just making Rusty evil. Awesome job!!
Thank you so much!!
Wow this is such a awesome AU!!
Has to be one of the neatest takes on Fire and Scourge’s roles being swapped!
It’s so cool to see a thriving, caring clan in the city!
I’d definitely apply to join a map abt this AU!!
Thank you!!
Ive rewatched this about 4 times now, I'm gonna say this is my favourite scourgeswap AU because there is so much more thought put into it than just changing the colour of their pelts
I can see this being a more collaborative focused MAP if it were to ever release, kinda like manch's "this is halloween" MAP but more split into background artists and animators working together??
my god the sceneries that can come out of this one would look so gorgeous
Oh that would look so cool!! Yeah I definitely put a lot of emphasis on the environments in this storyboard, I wanted the city to really have a feeling to it
This is absolute amazing, excited to see what you'll do in the future and any MAPs that come from this!
This is incredible! I love to see things like this come out of the fandom.
Thanks!!
I actually cried towards the end lol, this is amazing!!
Genuinely teared up toward the end. I was so worried Yellowfang was there to take him to StarClan, not give him a life!
I would love to be a part of this MAP if it ever comes to be. This idea is soo creative and I absolutely love it.
Thank you!
I’ve said it before I’ll say it again
This could be the first movie of a super awesome trilogy
I’m super excited to see the finished product
This brought me to tears! It feels so hopeful and inspiring, I can tell you put a lot of love into it. Thank you for sharing!
Thank you!
this is amazing and other people are saying its cool boon (fire) keeps his kindness and gentle but strong personality here! this is one of my favourite videos, like, in the whole fandom ! keep it going!
Thank you!!
This is prob my fav au of this idea!! It keeps it unique and honestly so much more impactful!
Thank you! That makes me so happy I really love my AU
By far my new favourite Warriors AU. Actually nearly had me in tears from how well you made this animatic too. I'd love to see this if it ever got finished.
I absolutely love this concept it's such a cute au! And I enjoy how instead of the typical making firestar evil and stuff in the swap you considered his personality and it's great! I love how sweet this is and I want to see more of this for sure :D
(also if it was a map I would run headfirst into it)
Thank you!
Your story telling is absolutely FABULOUS! It had me hooked all they way
normally I’m pretty impartial to Warriors AUs but this one is amazing, reading through the comments you really took the time to understand the characters! if you make an MAP out of this i’ll definitely have to consider trying for a part!
Thank you!!
GOSH THIS IDEA IS SO GOOD!! you mapped this all out so well and the expressions, story, and everything looks fantastic. looking forward to seeing more of this AU!!
this is so cool oh my god!!! gotta admit this had me choking up. The music is great and the story is told so beautifully. I am so gonna throw my hat in the ring if you get to hosting this as a map someday. Great job!!
Thanks so much!!!
When I saw that they named it FireClan my heart broke with adoration.
Literally tho how do people come up with such amazing things as this? I could never.
Awww thank you!!
THIS IS SO FREAKING COOL! It's such a unique and intriguing AU, along with the visuals being absolutely stunning!
Thank you so much!!
Oh. My. God. This is the best thing I’ve seen in so long! The storytelling is beautiful, and I love the swapping so much!
Thank you!!
@@DragonwolfRooke I just rewatched it, and I could barely keep myself from tearing up. It really is beautiful!
I really enjoyed this.I wasn't waiting for some good story like this.Now i need a fanfiction about it.I love it,thats perfect ! Good job.
Thank you!!
this concept is actually gonna be all thats in my brain for the next 48 hours at LEAST i love thinking about how firestar and scourge are just, opportunity vs scorn basically
SAME
I teared up watching this AAA!!! This is such incredible work! I'm so in love with the story you told with it and how you constructed this au, it's SO fascinating and it made my heart all melty and warm!! :'')) I love this so much!! Amazing amazing work!!!
Thank you!!!
I adore this AU! Also this video just makes me tear up every time I watch it, it's just so amazing
I would love to see an actual warriors map of this!
If any sort of continuationof this AU, the song "Final" also by AJR would fit perfectly into this universe, i meam like the song is a direct continuation of Next Up Forever. Also just amazing idea for an AU! I cant qait to see the compleated nap :)