hi op :) this is my favorite dsmp animatic, i'm not even joking. it makes me feel SO bonkers, like, the potential 2 use songs like this for wilbur n l'manberg is SUCH an untapped market!! and when people do tap into it, genius like this comes out and it warms your heart 2 see it, it truly does!! songs that Haunt you with how well they fit, and you know op it just could not have happened without your effort and skill! so thank you. this won't be the last time i thank you either, like i cannot fully explain how i cannot stop thinking about this animatic. really a piece of art, through and through. very good job. narratives and character that i do not feel normally about: wilbur soot's funny little oc. god bless. ohhh the color theory. OH my god when it starts as blue in the beginning, and it's soft, wistful. reminiscing, yeah? [and the part at 'and we fought like it was all some silly game' where wilbur extends his hand and twirls. UGH it's so GOOD your transitions are so natural and smooth] and wilbur looks so tired, the poor man has been running at full capacity for so long now. and tommy just, snoozing. oh it's so calm and relaxed and even quiet, y'know? the calm before the storm, as the saying goes. AND THEN WHEN IT CHANGES 2 RED WITH THE TRANSITION OF HIM WALKINGGG op. op. i feel like this football fans with their foam fingers who scream SO loud. the Cinnamon Tography of it all. wilbur's violence. oh my godd the whole 'reinvention // fusion // freedom // her attention' and 'bold // precise // experimental' with all the. UGH it works so WELL for their characters. ohh the reinvention for quackity and fundy. the fusion for bad and skeppy. the freedom for eret and niki and the PRECISE AND EXPERIMENTAL FOR TECHNO AND THEN TECHNO N WILBUR!! GOD listen rebecca sugar you have created a perfect wilbur song and i wish i was joking, i really do. thank you so much op. also god, the 'who am i now in this world without her // petty and dull with the nerve to doubt her // what does it matter it's already done // now i've got to be there for her son' ALWAYS makes me tear up so bad. how fast wilbur moves around and his tears, and then when he reaches for the patch he doesn't even TOUCH it but the way he has his hand above it and the way he looks at it is so weirdly gentle. god. AND MAN, everybody talks about how fundy and wilbur were already strained bc of sally and how fundy was babied during l'manberg [bc fundy very much played him as An Adult by the time of the revolution. he's naive but he's still an adult and wilbur treats him like a child] and then fundy just! drops his dad when wilbur gets exiled! nobody TALKS about that and it makes me feel so [screams] bc it DEFINITELY made everything worse. like, relationships of any kind are a two-way street and seeing fundy destroy the flag wilbur designed/niki made, WHILE niki was stuck in manburg and WHILE wilbur was too at odds with himself and scrambled to be able to get her out of there are narrative choices that haunt me 2 this day. the little tears on wilbur's face when fundy confronts him, also. [covers my face] There's So Much In This. also the way you illustrate techno and fundy in specific is so good. genuinely i love when people draw them as actual furries, for lack of better terms. it just feels organic. the yellow for their victory, which is supposed 2 be happy, the transition 2 the eyelashes [which were drawn so pretty by the way. Hello] and they WON and it's so victorious and tommy and tubbo are celebrating with everyone!! GOD and all i feel is brokenhearted. the look on wilbur's face KILLS me and he's just standing alone! because he lost since the moment schlatt took the election! honestly, he'd lost since the moment he started the revolution but i don't think we have time 2 discuss that [pained] LMAO. god when he was like 'i'll be back in a second' in the stream. pictures taken seconds before disaster. AND THEN WHEN HE [DRAGS MY HANDS DOWN MY FACE] PUTS HIS HANDS ON THE WORDS 'MY L'MANBERG' wilburrrr. hey buddy, how is the illness? bad? [crying] can i also point out the way you draw tears is so good. it's Just So Good, Trust Me. and when it transitions 2 phil on 'loved you' it makes me feel so [starts pacing] and the!! the little detail of him grabbing his beanie. thank you, i feel like the beanie is very underutilized. it's a very good detail!! AGAIN THANK YOU. I'VE SAID THAT SO MUCH BUT I MEAN IT!!!
AHHHHHH thank you so much!!!! this was so nice to get back home to see, oh my gosh just....thank you so much, that really means the world to me. there was so much that went into this animatic and i am floored and honoured every single time people analyze it. but this,,, you made my day, dawg! you got me all teary eyed lmao :,)
So many words. I read them all. I am proud. Also I agree with the part where you said that you like it better when people draw techno and fundy as furries.
In the song when it says “Now I’ve got to be here for her son” and it shows Fundy, really got me thinking. Because to be honest, Wilbur always saw Fundy as L’manburgs son, not his. Thats why Fundy felt so neglected in the first place, he lacked that one on one bond with his father. And now Wil is finally realizing, yeah now I’ve *got* to be there for my son. I know this was probably unintentional but still cool.
nah dude, you got it! i'm actually a little surprise, cus i did slip up a bit on my part. thought the lyric was "now *you've* got to be there for her son" and i'd already animated it to fit fundy, but when i learned the lyric was "i" instead of "you" i was worried that it wouldn't make sense. glad it did tho lmao
Why does every line of the song make perfect sense holy crap, like I was thinking “who’s gonna be the ‘her’ in this song” and it was L’Manburg and with that context it just fits so well and saying “she’s gone” like the old L’Manburg is gone, at least to Wil, and I don’t know, but the way Ghostbur just peacefully floated up at the end to show that Wilbur died instead of showing the actual death was a nice change, and I think it fit this song. I have more thoughts but this comment be getting kinda long lol, great job :)
i love reading comments like these so much, you have no idea how much it means to me, thank you! it makes my frickin day, dawg, you can feel free to share more of your thoughts all you want
THIS. This is so brilliantly thought out. Wilbur not being able to move past all of his history with L'Manberg is so well portrayed here. I especially love how the strongest part of the song was fit with Wilbur blowing everything to pieces. Beautifully done.
as an SU fan I AGREE now i just need to wait for wahts the use of feeling blue do it for her other friends drift away love like you? (maybe) be wherever you are stronger then you and a few adventure time songs- and alot more su songs ofc
The fact that even if Wilbur finally relinquished his deluded dreams and possessiveness over L'Manburg in the end, him still remaining there as a ghost and never "moving on" may point to him never truly letting go of it. Edit: Fantastic Animatic btw!!!
@@c.mstudios I think it aged well considering how lmanberg is now gone and how wilbur is trying his hardest to find another purpose now, like the burger war
This song adds to the list of reasons why I love wilbur's character. He's so selfish and selfless at the same time its beautiful hypocrisy that I love in characters
Huh. This naiveté and possessiveness. God. This is just brilliant. And I like how 'Why can't I move on?' is his question all the time until it becomes rhetorical at the end. I got chills.
i didn't expect to be ugly crying about wilbur's death months after it happened but here we are,, the way you showed his dissent and breakdown at the button, and then ghostbur floating up,,, you reminded me how tragic his character was mANNNNN
holy shit i've been waiting for somebody to use this song, and it's absolutely glorious with your style and impeccable cinematography, definitely my new #1 favourite, holy shit
i’m being so genuinely honest when i say i could feel this in my heart. all of wilbur’s feelings i immediately understood in this animatic and i just have to give you SO many props for truly having and GIVING that vision and emotion in this video. truly spectacular
Goodness this is such a lovely style. The emotions are spot on and as perfect as can be, the song choice was genius and the smarts put in to make every lyric effortless fit like a glove is beyond impressive. EXCELLENT work. Im definitely subscribing anyone else reading this should do the same
you should definilty give steven universe a try for that matter also becuase rebecca sugar wrote theese songs and it makes me happy also she wrote songs in adventure time so that too :DD
Damn this animatic was genius! I was moved by it! The song really suits how Wilbur could never seem to move on from his defeat after the election. Maybe it was pride or maybe it was because he lost ''her'' (Aka L'manberg) to someone he didn't see worthy enough to take care of her. And that really shows in this animatic. How he threw away everything and thought only L'manberg mattered. perfect animatic!
Wow you connected two things I liked and thought about in a manner that I'd never thought of but also felt so natural. It's conceptually mind blowing and the drawings just build on it so well. The two JShlatt images at 0:35 really portrays how people who dislike him (in the story) see him. To do that with two shots with one that doesn't show the back is amazing. Love it and can't wait to see what you do next.
Good job, you made me cry over a block game. Perspective and art are perfect, the metaphors, ideas, it's beautiful. I'm so happy you drew that, I appreciate your work
It hurts 10x worse when you remember the whole reason he made L'manburg was for it to be a safe haven. It was his home, his family. And to think that he fought and sacrificed, only for it to turn on him? He was already cracking, but that *broke* him. Poor Wil
Honestly when I realized that the ‘her’ was L’manburg, or I guess just Marburg at that time, I just thought “oh this is going to be sad”. It’s really good, and really sad, and kinda made me think about Wilbur. He never accepts that the L’manburg he knew is gone and that it’s time to move on, he just trying to win it back even though he lost, ignoring his friends and his son. This is a really good portrayal of how he ended up losing his mind over it...
i never would have thought this song would be used in a dream smp animatic but heck, you really made me think twice about this song - never would i have thought of twisting "her" into l'manberg, ITS SO COOL. so creative
I would've never thought of this song fitting the narrative of Wilbur's character on the DSMP. I can't appreciate you enough for connecting the dots and bringing this animatic to life. Everything just fits so perfectly, every line could have a deeper meaning in the story of lmanberg and just, look at it! She (as in Lmanberg) chose jschlatt, shes gone, as in, well, we know what Wilbur did... I love how you made this work,, On a side note, I remember someone making a connection in the comment section of a different video saying that there are certain parallels between steven and ghostbur Steven, a genuinely nice and loving kid, being (low-key) blamed for the disappearance of rose and suffers the consequences of his dead mother (who may or may not have been a good guy, she was a grey character. Good and bad) that gave up her life for him to exist. Ghostbur, in the words of Tommy, is poggers. He got blamed for lmanberg being blown up, though he did not have his memories, he suffers from the consequences of alivebur and guilt of his past self's actions (alivebur being a supposed hero become villain) that asked to be killed, to escape this world. Also again Really, this was an absolutely beautiful animatic ❤️
you know when you have a realistic dream and you forget about it and then some months later it comes to life? and that is very specific? i just read the first part of the current top comment "The ‘her’ in question being L’Manberg is actually genius.", and it just clicked, and i was in that moment again in the past, before I even know what L'Manberg was. Anyways lovely animatic.
Ohhhhhh my god, this fits him so well. Especially capturing that fact that he went crazy initially from panic and grief. EXACTLY like how people would go crazy after someone they loves dies. UGH IT'S SO GOOD
DUDE I KNOW IM 3 WEEKS LATE BUT OH MY GOD I LOVE THIS. I LOVE THE SWITCH INTO THE “war and glory” PART THEN THEM WINNING AND HOW THE “gone” SYNCED UP WITH THE EXPLOSION. NOT TO MENTION GHOSTBUR AT THE END. I DONT KNOW IF ITS BECAUSE OF MY STEVEN UNIVERSE HEART BUT I ABSOLUTELY LOVE YOUR ANIMATICS WITH STEVEN UNIVERSE SONGS.
Okay I don't usually say this much but- That was incredible. The choice of song was perfect, I didn't realise how much it fit dsmp story until I saw your animatic. The expressions, especially how Willbour changed as the song progressed, it was just so on point. And the ending, the culmination of it all. All the emotions just pressing, you could cleary see it. I love the Ghostbour bit at the end, it shows that he's finally free of it all. Amazing job with this!
Wilbur does embody Pearl very well in the emotional sense up until he goes mad. All he wanted was so,etching for his people. Thereby neglecting his son when he only wanted a nation for him and forgot how to be there for him. It’s poetic, and tragic.
I didn’t know what to expect coming into this animatic, knowing what the original song is about, but when I realized it’s Wilbur talking about L’manburg I got CHILLS. Not to mention the art itself is really good. Great work here.
This is honestly one of my favourite animatics just because I love the crossover between su and dsmp, my past hyperfixation and my comfort show being mixed with my current hyperfixation brings me so much happiness
AHHHHHH THIS IS SO GOOD- there are many few DSMP animations/animatics that make me actually cry but by golly you got me. This is so good and the animation is amazing and ik someone has already said this but I love how you changed around the context of the song to make it fit perfectly for Wilbur, and even though it’s a small detail I like how you censored Will’s death by moving the shot up and then having Ghostbur float up, I cAnT iTs tO gOoD-
The duality in the phrase "It's over" hurts me wow XD It originally was about the election and their loss but then came to represent Wilbur's state of mind and belief that L'Manburg is over. GOSH this brings feels. Thank you for your song choice, symbolism, and character focus :,D This was lovely!
This is FANTASTIC. I don't normally comment, but my lord the storytelling in this is beautiful. You used the lyrics to perfectly match the story and the facial expressions are so pleasing. Absolutely well done, I really hope to see more from you.
OMG I WAS LISTENING TO THIS SONG COUPLE OF DAYS AGO THINKING HOW WELL IT WOULD FIT! thank you for making this. also the fact he is adressing Lmanburg as her, even when she says "who she'd chose" only shows how Wilbur is convinced whole Lmanburg has betrayed him. he adresses all of them as one person, one unity, he is unable to see past black and white and only sees the results. and results are that he lost. this tells alot about what he sees in Lmanburg. He sees his one country, one goal, his one creation, he doesn't see individual people in it, people who are all different and not necessarily everyone is against him. he doesn't care. he lost her, they don't matter, they are just a part of her.
So this is quite interesting. I watched a slowed down version of it's over isn't it on RUclips just before clicking on this video, Pearl actually sounded like Wilbur and I was so surprised. I was quickly having ideas of an animatic where Wilbur would call his country as "her". You did the EXACT same thing.. It's perfect. Good Job
from the beginning, this gave me chills. this animatic looks so thought out and probably took such a long time there are so many things I could compliment but all I can say right now is thank you :]
THIS IS SO AMAZINGLY DONE AND PLANNED AND EXECUTED THIS IS SUCH AN AWESOME IDEA OH MY GOD SOME FRAMES WERE LIKE A PUNCH IN THE GUT THIS IS INSANELY GOOD JOB DUUUUUUUUUUUDE
Wow, this was literally gorgeous- I'd be in tears if I wasn't in French class right now. You've truly captured the emotions of the story in a breathtaking way. I would've never thought to use this song for Wilbur but it literally fits so perfectly. What an amazing animatic!
Steven Universe, animatic and mcyt? Three of my favourite things in one? This is seriously amazing dude, the angles and the expressions are just perfect
This, I, this is so good ;-;. Like this song actually works so well for that arc and I love it. I don't understand how people take these songs and make them so relevant to the storyline. It is simply amazing. Thank you for blessing my life with this beautiful thing.
Yaaaa!!! All my favorite series and movies have something in common with Dream SMP, and I just LOVE finding those animatics of Dream SMP with songs or references from the series and movies i love!
HEY THIS IS AMAZING???? Like you used such an interesting song to tell the story of Wilbur and L'Manburg and the rebellion and Fundy and it all came together with the lyrics to make something to beautifully sad
"Who am I now in this world without her, petty and dull with a nerve to doubt her" That line fits way too well with "her" being L'manburg Wilbur was the president but without L'manburg who is he now? Petty and dull, "dull" his sadness towards losing L'manburg and his "pettiness" leading to doubts and turning on L'manburg And then the doubts he had about L'manburg, thinking if he was the villian now, leading him to destroy it since he can't have it.
I love the very end. (And the whole thing LOL.) It was like he thought it’d be done and he could move on once it was blown up, but realized he couldn’t. I don’t know if that’s what you were going for but that’s what I got from it and I thought it was a really interesting and different perspective to what I originally interpreted his motive for asking for what he asked Phil to do. Wilbur’s internal conflict is strangely under represented imo and I love this portrayal of it.
dude. dude holy shit this is so cool oh my god. !!!!! the song is so good!! and it fits super well!!! and the way you draw wilbur?? big pog!! also i like how you draw techno, too much anime boy techno, not enough pig techno dkfjjskfkskfkdf
This is really cool actually the way you potray her as lmanberg and how wilbur fight for lmanburg after all these years and somehow people choose schlatt over him to rule lmanberg and how wilbur never move on
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hi op :) this is my favorite dsmp animatic, i'm not even joking. it makes me feel SO bonkers, like, the potential 2 use songs like this for wilbur n l'manberg is SUCH an untapped market!! and when people do tap into it, genius like this comes out and it warms your heart 2 see it, it truly does!! songs that Haunt you with how well they fit, and you know op it just could not have happened without your effort and skill! so thank you. this won't be the last time i thank you either, like i cannot fully explain how i cannot stop thinking about this animatic. really a piece of art, through and through. very good job. narratives and character that i do not feel normally about: wilbur soot's funny little oc. god bless.
ohhh the color theory. OH my god when it starts as blue in the beginning, and it's soft, wistful. reminiscing, yeah? [and the part at 'and we fought like it was all some silly game' where wilbur extends his hand and twirls. UGH it's so GOOD your transitions are so natural and smooth] and wilbur looks so tired, the poor man has been running at full capacity for so long now. and tommy just, snoozing. oh it's so calm and relaxed and even quiet, y'know? the calm before the storm, as the saying goes.
AND THEN WHEN IT CHANGES 2 RED WITH THE TRANSITION OF HIM WALKINGGG op. op. i feel like this football fans with their foam fingers who scream SO loud. the Cinnamon Tography of it all. wilbur's violence. oh my godd the whole 'reinvention // fusion // freedom // her attention' and 'bold // precise // experimental' with all the. UGH it works so WELL for their characters. ohh the reinvention for quackity and fundy. the fusion for bad and skeppy. the freedom for eret and niki and the PRECISE AND EXPERIMENTAL FOR TECHNO AND THEN TECHNO N WILBUR!! GOD listen rebecca sugar you have created a perfect wilbur song and i wish i was joking, i really do. thank you so much op.
also god, the 'who am i now in this world without her // petty and dull with the nerve to doubt her // what does it matter it's already done // now i've got to be there for her son' ALWAYS makes me tear up so bad. how fast wilbur moves around and his tears, and then when he reaches for the patch he doesn't even TOUCH it but the way he has his hand above it and the way he looks at it is so weirdly gentle. god. AND MAN, everybody talks about how fundy and wilbur were already strained bc of sally and how fundy was babied during l'manberg [bc fundy very much played him as An Adult by the time of the revolution. he's naive but he's still an adult and wilbur treats him like a child] and then fundy just! drops his dad when wilbur gets exiled! nobody TALKS about that and it makes me feel so [screams] bc it DEFINITELY made everything worse. like, relationships of any kind are a two-way street and seeing fundy destroy the flag wilbur designed/niki made, WHILE niki was stuck in manburg and WHILE wilbur was too at odds with himself and scrambled to be able to get her out of there are narrative choices that haunt me 2 this day.
the little tears on wilbur's face when fundy confronts him, also. [covers my face] There's So Much In This.
also the way you illustrate techno and fundy in specific is so good. genuinely i love when people draw them as actual furries, for lack of better terms. it just feels organic.
the yellow for their victory, which is supposed 2 be happy, the transition 2 the eyelashes [which were drawn so pretty by the way. Hello] and they WON and it's so victorious and tommy and tubbo are celebrating with everyone!! GOD and all i feel is brokenhearted. the look on wilbur's face KILLS me and he's just standing alone! because he lost since the moment schlatt took the election! honestly, he'd lost since the moment he started the revolution but i don't think we have time 2 discuss that [pained] LMAO. god when he was like 'i'll be back in a second' in the stream. pictures taken seconds before disaster. AND THEN WHEN HE [DRAGS MY HANDS DOWN MY FACE] PUTS HIS HANDS ON THE WORDS 'MY L'MANBERG' wilburrrr. hey buddy, how is the illness? bad? [crying]
can i also point out the way you draw tears is so good. it's Just So Good, Trust Me. and when it transitions 2 phil on 'loved you' it makes me feel so [starts pacing] and the!! the little detail of him grabbing his beanie. thank you, i feel like the beanie is very underutilized. it's a very good detail!!
AGAIN THANK YOU. I'VE SAID THAT SO MUCH BUT I MEAN IT!!!
AHHHHHH thank you so much!!!! this was so nice to get back home to see, oh my gosh just....thank you so much, that really means the world to me.
there was so much that went into this animatic and i am floored and honoured every single time people analyze it. but this,,, you made my day, dawg! you got me all teary eyed lmao :,)
:)
Yeah this is what my brain is in words
So many words. I read them all. I am proud.
Also I agree with the part where you said that you like it better when people draw techno and fundy as furries.
In the song when it says “Now I’ve got to be here for her son” and it shows Fundy, really got me thinking. Because to be honest, Wilbur always saw Fundy as L’manburgs son, not his. Thats why Fundy felt so neglected in the first place, he lacked that one on one bond with his father. And now Wil is finally realizing, yeah now I’ve *got* to be there for my son.
I know this was probably unintentional but still cool.
nah dude, you got it! i'm actually a little surprise, cus i did slip up a bit on my part. thought the lyric was "now *you've* got to be there for her son" and i'd already animated it to fit fundy, but when i learned the lyric was "i" instead of "you" i was worried that it wouldn't make sense. glad it did tho lmao
Dude. I have never considered that, but that sounds absolutely right.
that’s what I thought!
everybody here making english paragraphs about the smp while i didnt even watch the smp im just here for the music
Ghostbur be like : WHaTS ThE USE Of FeeLing 🔷🔹BLUE 🔹🔷
I love that someone finally made an dsmp animatic with that song :D
Oh I get it the blue dye
OH MY GOD! THAT IS SO PERFECT!!! THE ANIMATOR NEEDS TO KNOW THIS!
Yuki Hana IKR ASHGHRZHRRSJ
OMGH YESFHH LET'S HOPE THEY SEE THIS COMMENT!
oh my god steven universe and dream smp fusion animatic
THIS IS SO PERFECT PLEASE YOU PICKED THE BEST SONG AND OH MY GOD THOSE COLORS AND EVERYTHING THIS IS INSANE
Omg kitsickles hiii
I AGREE
Any SU songs are perfect for the Dsmp tbh
@@starflet97 except for potlock cam's camshafts big fat zucchini mr mailman steven tag and everyother 5 second song
I asked for this he made this let's fucking go
It's Over, Innit? If Steven Universe was a british cartoon
Oh god no-
PLEASE 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Pffft
HAH 😂
ffs rose u wasteman, y u linking wiv greg
Why does every line of the song make perfect sense holy crap, like I was thinking “who’s gonna be the ‘her’ in this song” and it was L’Manburg and with that context it just fits so well and saying “she’s gone” like the old L’Manburg is gone, at least to Wil, and I don’t know, but the way Ghostbur just peacefully floated up at the end to show that Wilbur died instead of showing the actual death was a nice change, and I think it fit this song. I have more thoughts but this comment be getting kinda long lol, great job :)
i love reading comments like these so much, you have no idea how much it means to me, thank you! it makes my frickin day, dawg, you can feel free to share more of your thoughts all you want
THIS. This is so brilliantly thought out. Wilbur not being able to move past all of his history with L'Manberg is so well portrayed here. I especially love how the strongest part of the song was fit with Wilbur blowing everything to pieces. Beautifully done.
I love how dream smp animators are using SU tracks for the animatics. ITS SO GOOD.
as an SU fan
I AGREE now i just need to wait for
wahts the use of feeling blue
do it for her
other friends
drift away
love like you? (maybe)
be wherever you are
stronger then you
and a few adventure time songs-
and alot more su songs ofc
@@UwU-lm9or YES I NEED TO SEE THAT-
yeah I love SU songs they always finds way to make me cry but I love them sm
@@UwU-lm9or YES
The fact that even if Wilbur finally relinquished his deluded dreams and possessiveness over L'Manburg in the end, him still remaining there as a ghost and never "moving on" may point to him never truly letting go of it.
Edit: Fantastic Animatic btw!!!
the 7 stages of grief
Well this aged interestingly
@@c.mstudios I think it aged well considering how lmanberg is now gone and how wilbur is trying his hardest to find another purpose now, like the burger war
the way it pans up to ghostbur after a frame with phil and wil...
you know what happened
:') it was never meant to be
This song adds to the list of reasons why I love wilbur's character. He's so selfish and selfless at the same time its beautiful hypocrisy that I love in characters
Oh I get it
The "her" and "she"
That Wilbur was singing on the song was L manberg
this song actually fits so well-
Huh. This naiveté and possessiveness. God. This is just brilliant.
And I like how 'Why can't I move on?' is his question all the time until it becomes rhetorical at the end. I got chills.
The personification that was used to describe L'manberg as "her" and having feelings and being loved by Will was GENIUS
Her attention 1:24 makes it sound like Wilbur had an unhealthy obsession with lmanburg WHICH I LOVE
i didn't expect to be ugly crying about wilbur's death months after it happened but here we are,, the way you showed his dissent and breakdown at the button, and then ghostbur floating up,,, you reminded me how tragic his character was mANNNNN
WAIT. HOW how does this fit so well?!? She as is in le’manberg. “And she chose you (schlatt) and now she’s gone (gone x2)” BRUHHHH 😭
holy shit i've been waiting for somebody to use this song, and it's absolutely glorious with your style and impeccable cinematography, definitely my new #1 favourite, holy shit
When it shows techno and it says experimental is amazing because he’s experimenting trusting and teaming up with technoblade what an amazing detail
1:26 this sequence is absolutely beautiful !!!!
i’m being so genuinely honest when i say i could feel this in my heart. all of wilbur’s feelings i immediately understood in this animatic and i just have to give you SO many props for truly having and GIVING that vision and emotion in this video. truly spectacular
Goodness this is such a lovely style. The emotions are spot on and as perfect as can be, the song choice was genius and the smarts put in to make every lyric effortless fit like a glove is beyond impressive. EXCELLENT work. Im definitely subscribing anyone else reading this should do the same
you should definilty give steven universe a try for that matter also becuase rebecca sugar wrote theese songs and it makes me happy also she wrote songs in adventure time so that too :DD
This actually made me sad damn and i love how you draw Fundy and Techno as actual animals
Beautiful!! I love the scene of philza confronting him. So much emotion!!
Damn this animatic was genius! I was moved by it! The song really suits how Wilbur could never seem to move on from his defeat after the election. Maybe it was pride or maybe it was because he lost ''her'' (Aka L'manberg) to someone he didn't see worthy enough to take care of her. And that really shows in this animatic. How he threw away everything and thought only L'manberg mattered. perfect animatic!
Wow you connected two things I liked and thought about in a manner that I'd never thought of but also felt so natural. It's conceptually mind blowing and the drawings just build on it so well. The two JShlatt images at 0:35 really portrays how people who dislike him (in the story) see him. To do that with two shots with one that doesn't show the back is amazing.
Love it and can't wait to see what you do next.
Good job, you made me cry over a block game. Perspective and art are perfect, the metaphors, ideas, it's beautiful. I'm so happy you drew that, I appreciate your work
It hurts 10x worse when you remember the whole reason he made L'manburg was for it to be a safe haven. It was his home, his family. And to think that he fought and sacrificed, only for it to turn on him? He was already cracking, but that *broke* him.
Poor Wil
Honestly when I realized that the ‘her’ was L’manburg, or I guess just Marburg at that time, I just thought “oh this is going to be sad”. It’s really good, and really sad, and kinda made me think about Wilbur. He never accepts that the L’manburg he knew is gone and that it’s time to move on, he just trying to win it back even though he lost, ignoring his friends and his son. This is a really good portrayal of how he ended up losing his mind over it...
The man who loved his nation so muhc it cost him his 3 lives
AAAAA I LOVE IT SO MUCH
I’m not crying istg I’m not crying after the last stream this hits different- nope I’m crying this is genius man
i never would have thought this song would be used in a dream smp animatic but heck, you really made me think twice about this song - never would i have thought of twisting "her" into l'manberg, ITS SO COOL. so creative
I would've never thought of this song fitting the narrative of Wilbur's character on the DSMP.
I can't appreciate you enough for connecting the dots and bringing this animatic to life. Everything just fits so perfectly, every line could have a deeper meaning in the story of lmanberg and just, look at it!
She (as in Lmanberg) chose jschlatt, shes gone, as in, well, we know what Wilbur did...
I love how you made this work,,
On a side note,
I remember someone making a connection in the comment section of a different video saying that there are certain parallels between steven and ghostbur
Steven, a genuinely nice and loving kid, being (low-key) blamed for the disappearance of rose and suffers the consequences of his dead mother (who may or may not have been a good guy, she was a grey character. Good and bad) that gave up her life for him to exist.
Ghostbur, in the words of Tommy, is poggers. He got blamed for lmanberg being blown up, though he did not have his memories, he suffers from the consequences of alivebur and guilt of his past self's actions (alivebur being a supposed hero become villain) that asked to be killed, to escape this world.
Also again
Really, this was an absolutely beautiful animatic ❤️
Low key this makes me think that Steven is just Ghost Quartz-
THIS IS WONDERFUL!!!!!!! omg and the bit where fundy says “now i’ve got to there for her son”???? perfect!!!! i love ur animations sm
What if I cried- but seriously I remember watching this when it was posted, it still makes me cry, it’s so good
you know when you have a realistic dream and you forget about it and then some months later it comes to life? and that is very specific?
i just read the first part of the current top comment "The ‘her’ in question being L’Manberg is actually genius.", and it just clicked, and i was in that moment again in the past, before I even know what L'Manberg was.
Anyways lovely animatic.
Ohhhhhh my god, this fits him so well. Especially capturing that fact that he went crazy initially from panic and grief. EXACTLY like how people would go crazy after someone they loves dies. UGH IT'S SO GOOD
This is such an interesting perspective!
PLS DUDE I GOT CHILLS, WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS TO ME
DUDE I KNOW IM 3 WEEKS LATE BUT OH MY GOD I LOVE THIS. I LOVE THE SWITCH INTO THE “war and glory” PART THEN THEM WINNING AND HOW THE “gone” SYNCED UP WITH THE EXPLOSION. NOT TO MENTION GHOSTBUR AT THE END. I DONT KNOW IF ITS BECAUSE OF MY STEVEN UNIVERSE HEART BUT I ABSOLUTELY LOVE YOUR ANIMATICS WITH STEVEN UNIVERSE SONGS.
Okay I don't usually say this much but-
That was incredible. The choice of song was perfect, I didn't realise how much it fit dsmp story until I saw your animatic. The expressions, especially how Willbour changed as the song progressed, it was just so on point. And the ending, the culmination of it all. All the emotions just pressing, you could cleary see it. I love the Ghostbour bit at the end, it shows that he's finally free of it all.
Amazing job with this!
Wilbur does embody Pearl very well in the emotional sense up until he goes mad. All he wanted was so,etching for his people. Thereby neglecting his son when he only wanted a nation for him and forgot how to be there for him. It’s poetic, and tragic.
I didn’t know what to expect coming into this animatic, knowing what the original song is about, but when I realized it’s Wilbur talking about L’manburg I got CHILLS. Not to mention the art itself is really good. Great work here.
STEVEN UNIVERSE + THE DREAM SMP I THINK YES- THIS IS SO WELL DONE AND JUST VERY PRETTY YOU DID AN AMAZING JOB
THIS IS SO SO OS PERFECT AHHHHH THE POGTOPIA SCENE GAVE ME CHILLSSSSSS AND NOW IM SAD BUT ITS REALLY GOOD!
This is honestly one of my favourite animatics just because I love the crossover between su and dsmp, my past hyperfixation and my comfort show being mixed with my current hyperfixation brings me so much happiness
well you DIDN'T HAVE TO GO AND LAND THE FINAL BLOW WITH GHOSTBUR AT THE END! I WAS ALREADY CRYING!!
(this was really good i really liked it
AHHHHHH THIS IS SO GOOD- there are many few DSMP animations/animatics that make me actually cry but by golly you got me. This is so good and the animation is amazing and ik someone has already said this but I love how you changed around the context of the song to make it fit perfectly for Wilbur, and even though it’s a small detail I like how you censored Will’s death by moving the shot up and then having Ghostbur float up, I cAnT iTs tO gOoD-
Oh my god that transition when ‘it’s over’ is sung and the battle is actually over was genius. Everything about the transitions here is amazing!!
This is INSANE. The emotion is perfect, it's just... Augh I can't even describe how perfect it is
Now we need what's the use of feeling blue for Ghostbur
The duality in the phrase "It's over" hurts me wow XD It originally was about the election and their loss but then came to represent Wilbur's state of mind and belief that L'Manburg is over. GOSH this brings feels. Thank you for your song choice, symbolism, and character focus :,D This was lovely!
ahhhh thank you!! i was hoping somebody would mention that
This is FANTASTIC. I don't normally comment, but my lord the storytelling in this is beautiful. You used the lyrics to perfectly match the story and the facial expressions are so pleasing. Absolutely well done, I really hope to see more from you.
OMG I WAS LISTENING TO THIS SONG COUPLE OF DAYS AGO THINKING HOW WELL IT WOULD FIT! thank you for making this. also the fact he is adressing Lmanburg as her, even when she says "who she'd chose" only shows how Wilbur is convinced whole Lmanburg has betrayed him. he adresses all of them as one person, one unity, he is unable to see past black and white and only sees the results. and results are that he lost. this tells alot about what he sees in Lmanburg. He sees his one country, one goal, his one creation, he doesn't see individual people in it, people who are all different and not necessarily everyone is against him. he doesn't care. he lost her, they don't matter, they are just a part of her.
So this is quite interesting. I watched a slowed down version of it's over isn't it on RUclips just before clicking on this video, Pearl actually sounded like Wilbur and I was so surprised. I was quickly having ideas of an animatic where Wilbur would call his country as "her". You did the EXACT same thing.. It's perfect. Good Job
The detail, the song choice, the style everything about this is perfect...this has to be my favorite damp animation yet...
this song actually works so good for the storyline omg
The fact that L’Manberg is the her in this song makes this fit so damn well. Like my god this song was meant for Wilbur honestly.
from the beginning, this gave me chills.
this animatic looks so thought out and probably took such a long time
there are so many things I could compliment
but all I can say right now is thank you :]
from Hamilton... To Heather.. Beetlejuice.. Rapunzel and now
Steven Universe? AAAAAAAA this is getting su good :DDD
Dude this hits real hard after all that crap, also adding the audio from that one Steven universe episode I can’t remember-
Gives me memories.
bro this animatic is SO GOOD, i love your storyboarding and the idea of using this song with wilbur's character is so creative :OO
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR MIXING STEVEN UNIVERSE AND THE DREAM SMP IM CRYING ITS BEAUTIFUL
*[Oh stars, this animation is perfect in so many levels...]*
ITS THE MASTER OF SU COMMENTING-
oh bro the emotional beats in this almost made me cry bro omfgg this was done so well and ur art is incredible!!!
Fucking hell the symbolism. God I didn’t expect this would make me cry. Perfect song. Perfect animation.
Oh my gosh. This is so good!!
THIS
IS SO
AMAZINGLY DONE AND PLANNED AND EXECUTED THIS IS SUCH AN AWESOME IDEA OH MY GOD SOME FRAMES WERE LIKE A PUNCH IN THE GUT THIS IS INSANELY GOOD JOB DUUUUUUUUUUUDE
Wow, this was literally gorgeous- I'd be in tears if I wasn't in French class right now. You've truly captured the emotions of the story in a breathtaking way. I would've never thought to use this song for Wilbur but it literally fits so perfectly. What an amazing animatic!
AN ANIMATIC HAS NEVER MADE ME CRY BEFORE WHY AM I CRYING
Techno and Fundy’s designs are so good though?? Techno is so menacing and so stoic without going overboard, and Fundy looks so young. They’re amazing
That deserves some sort of reward because that was such a good portrayal of wilburs perspective
This matches so perfectly I'm in awe. AMAZING!!!!!
Steven Universe, animatic and mcyt? Three of my favourite things in one? This is seriously amazing dude, the angles and the expressions are just perfect
This is incredible!!! I love it, your art style is amazing and the song choice too. It’s wonderful!
This, I, this is so good ;-;. Like this song actually works so well for that arc and I love it. I don't understand how people take these songs and make them so relevant to the storyline. It is simply amazing. Thank you for blessing my life with this beautiful thing.
I never got into watching the Dream Smp thing, but holy damn do I love this video, Jesus it gave me major feels
The song fitted so good, I was just speechless..
ohhhh my god i never realised how well this song works for the vilbur arc... your art is so amazing too! it looks so fluid and dynamic!
Yaaaa!!! All my favorite series and movies have something in common with Dream SMP, and I just LOVE finding those animatics of Dream SMP with songs or references from the series and movies i love!
HEY THIS IS AMAZING????
Like you used such an interesting song to tell the story of Wilbur and L'Manburg and the rebellion and Fundy and it all came together with the lyrics to make something to beautifully sad
this is beautiful im gonna cry
I'm not okay.
You have upset me.
STOP MAKING THESE BLOCKY BOIS SO EMOTIONAL MY LITTLE HEART CANT TAKE IT.
Wow. This rlly just got better and better as time went on! And omg the on beat transition was SO GOOD. The perspective was amazing like wow.
Let’s be honest.
Kid’s show’s will always be the best place to get music for an animatic.
BRUUUHHHHHHHH IM CRYING AGAIN WHY ARE YOU ARTISTS ALL SO TALENTED
I love the colors to symbolize the emotions and just the overall poses and inter-activeness ahhhhhhhhh
bro the ending made me cry STOOPPP
A lot of Steven Universe songs, specifically Pearl's, actually fit quite well with the Dream SMP. This is great
ahhhh I got chills through the whole thing
I WAS WAITING FOR SOMEONE TO USE THIS SONG THANKYOUUUUUUUU
AWWW WHAT THIS WAS SO GOOD
I CRIED BUT THE ENDING MADE ME REALLY HAPPY
KUDOS, MY FRIEND!!
"Who am I now in this world without her, petty and dull with a nerve to doubt her"
That line fits way too well with "her" being L'manburg
Wilbur was the president but without L'manburg who is he now?
Petty and dull, "dull" his sadness towards losing L'manburg and his "pettiness" leading to doubts and turning on L'manburg
And then the doubts he had about L'manburg, thinking if he was the villian now, leading him to destroy it since he can't have it.
This is such an original way to use this song
I love the very end. (And the whole thing LOL.) It was like he thought it’d be done and he could move on once it was blown up, but realized he couldn’t. I don’t know if that’s what you were going for but that’s what I got from it and I thought it was a really interesting and different perspective to what I originally interpreted his motive for asking for what he asked Phil to do. Wilbur’s internal conflict is strangely under represented imo and I love this portrayal of it.
dude. dude holy shit this is so cool oh my god. !!!!! the song is so good!! and it fits super well!!! and the way you draw wilbur?? big pog!! also i like how you draw techno, too much anime boy techno, not enough pig techno dkfjjskfkskfkdf
literally in tears. amazing work
This is really cool actually the way you potray her as lmanberg and how wilbur fight for lmanburg after all these years and somehow people choose schlatt over him to rule lmanberg and how wilbur never move on
ITS PERFECT
WOAH
The art and the basic CONCEPT IS JUST-
AHHHHHHH POGGERS