I could hardly concentrate on this story once she said she was impregnated by her father and drink copious amounts of alcohol during her pregnancy. I was a nurse in a neonatal unit and saw the effects of both the genetic defects caused by incest and fetal alcohol syndrome from mothers having abused alcohol during pregnancy (as well as the poor premature babies of drug users). You cannot imagine the horrifying results of any and all of these abuses. It is heart wrenching! All most of these poor children will know is misery for the rest of their lives.
Hell, if she remained in that other reality long enough, maybe someone would of drawn her memories of pain away and she could of become better off for it
I don't know what we creepy pastor fans have done to be treated to such great stories this year so far. Thank you for all the hard work narrator and author alike so much appreciated 🌟🌟🌟🌟
Yay another amazing video. Thank you for all your hard work. My life has been one disaster after another for 2 years, your content has been such a light in the dark. From the bottom of my heart, thank you 💜
*** SPOILER ALERT *** When we learn about the prophecy, I feel like it’s obvious we’d think it her child. Although it’d be interesting if she was actually the person the prophecy was about. I can’t decide if I love this story as is or if it would be better for another part. I enjoy not knowing. Quite often in real life, we meet people and they have a very interesting story up to when we meet them. For whatever reason, they aren’t in our life anymore and we wonder what happened. We finish their story in out mind and maybe we only create 1 future for them but sometimes we create 5. Sometimes those people pop back up for whatever reason and their future was more grand than we expected or maybe it’s similar to one of the futures we created but sometimes it’s boring and ordinary and we’re bummed. The writer may have more to share. It could be close to one of my ideas or it could be much less interesting (doubtful) than anything I thought of. If either of those occur then I’d be kinda disappointed. OR MAYBE it could be much more fabulous than anything I could have ever imaged and that would be fanatic altho expected. So additional story to tell or not.... idk But there are other works written by this author so I kinda feel like i get to have my cake AND eat it!
I’m back! I forgot which story I started earlier today. It was the 3rd or 4th, doesn’t matter. At the beginning of the story we were told that there were other stories that went with it so I didn’t listen and started with #1, Henry bought the house. I continued through to learn that Sun Not Star (already listened) was apart of this world. I listened again and was able to know more about some things mentioned. Like the Protectorate. I just kinda assumed the Protectorate was just a made up agency that could be like CIA, NSA, MIB (movie). I greatly appreciate that it seems like all the stories can be stand alone. Anyway.... Gonna listen to this again bc I’m sure I’ll hear some things that I’ll have a greater understanding of.
Also, when hearing abt Lockhill Road that area kinda reminded me of The Fork In The Road story which I believe is apart Devil’s Due series. I was wondering if this was a kinda cross over. I’m not sure who wrote the other series so I guess I’ll go look it up
Man must have been a massive effort to get that bath ready if she was using a hand water pump for water , let alone heating the water . Not exactly a relaxing time doing that at 8 month pregnant ! Fun times ....;)
I wonder if the subway scene is related to that other story in this channel with the guy that got stuck in a train that doesn't stop. I mean, the train passed by stations that had creatures that reminded me of the humanoids here. 🤔
I strongly dislike the stories people are writing these days. They do little beyond capture and put a particular spin on human misery and dysfunction. Some of them are based on non-fiction most people don't know about (Trash_Tia), some of them amount to broader allegories, but none of this genre are particularly useful or creative. The characters are barely 2D cardboard cutouts, and not in the contrived and deliberate sense to put you in the mindset and perception of the narrator. I'm 10 minutes in, what's next within this deconstructed pit of despair symbolic space, she meets and marries a new version of her father? Give me a break. The tragic backstory is extremely lazy and ill formed. They always are. Sorry, but I view this as little more than a sort of creeping covert mind poison. I write (and say) things that probably make most people shudder in how twisted it is. Likewise I have written horror stories, but at least disguised as something beautiful and variable with layers and windows to the core. This story is soulless. I want the cold, not an imitation.
@@dumpsterpsycho2894 I like threshold. Didn't finish the story lol. Incest misery wasn't really the sleep vibe I was after. This comment just struck me as unique among comment section complain-y hot takes, and such conviction! #based? Also, spookpilled. If it's not a thing, I want it to be. I think it means youve realized politics and Hollywood are pretty dull and sucky and pointless, so now you just do ghost stories, nap, clean, and talk about gas stations a lot.
We are not worthy of this magnificent piece of art. We, mere mortals bow to you, oh Great One - Viidith22. Forgive us our sins, for we also forgive everyone who sins against us. And lead us not into temptation.
I won't give away too much, but this story is more significant than you can possibly imagine. Thanks for the read Viid my bud
Gotchu fam. ❤️
That was so good, I'd love another especially since this one possibly could have a part two?
Thank you. CC
Yeah this was really good man. Great job. I can only imagine what the significance could be. We live in a strange yet magnificent world. LoL
@@Viidith22 ur the real G
Excellent story. There has to be more... right???
I could hardly concentrate on this story once she said she was impregnated by her father and drink copious amounts of alcohol during her pregnancy. I was a nurse in a neonatal unit and saw the effects of both the genetic defects caused by incest and fetal alcohol syndrome from mothers having abused alcohol during pregnancy (as well as the poor premature babies of drug users). You cannot imagine the horrifying results of any and all of these abuses. It is heart wrenching! All most of these poor children will know is misery for the rest of their lives.
What a brilliant story. I would adore to hear a continuation told from the child's point of view! Very cool storytelling. Thank you. 🫶
I REALLY loved this story- it’s great & V’s voice & production is fabulous ♥️♥️♥️♥️😎🇦🇺✌️
This story was awesome. The sound of your voice, though, made it even more eventful.. You're one of my favorite narrators on RUclips...❤
This was pretty darn good so he'll yeah I'd like to hear more from this author. Great narration as always thank you Viidith 22. 💯👍🇺🇸
Thank you Viidith for all you do that makes my life so exciting when I am alone 💃🥰💜 You are literally a gift that keeps on giving!
Yeah V 22! 🤗 I Always get so excited when you upload! Thanks for All your hard work! ✝️💜☮️🌝
Yay!! It's 7:30 here in Portland Oregon, first smile all day when i saw my favorite story teller on my feed and it's not a day old. 😊
This was seriously creative and the descriptive imagery was absolutely rad
THANK YOU SIR, MAY I HAVE ANOTHER!! ❣️
#BestNarratorEVER 🙌🙌🙌
Hell, if she remained in that other reality long enough, maybe someone would of drawn her memories of pain away and she could of become better off for it
Nice! Thank u for sharing! By the way, my 16 yo daughter finally made it all the way thru 'Alesta', and she loved it almost as much as I do!!😘
Thank you V. for the excellent narration as usual.
Yay! Always makes my day when you put a new story out. 🤗🤗
Wow that was triggering start to finish! Another great DARK as hell story.
Excellent Thank You So Much For All The Great Stories!! ❤❤❤
That was beautifully morbid indeed. Loved it 👍👏😊
💙❤💜
Such an awesome channel!
I don't know what we creepy pastor fans have done to be treated to such great stories this year so far. Thank you for all the hard work narrator and author alike so much appreciated 🌟🌟🌟🌟
Yeah I hate pastors... lol they always tell me I'm going to hell
@@erikd7383 that's why I prefer the creepy ones they actually take us there and not just tell us 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Creepy pastor would be a good channel name... But not as scary as creepy rabbi
I'm just super happy we got the end of the Devil Series.
@@techieplague6476 no no😢😢 no😢😢 I want more I love these characters
This was really good! Nice one!
That was very good V, thank you.
Oo my night just improved. Once again, thank you V 💜
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Your voice is so smoothing. I've been away for too long. So glad to be back to listen to the stories you read. ❤❤
The alternate universe was very well described, painted a vivid picture in my snoozing head 👍🏼👍🏼
This channel is too damn good
LETSGOOOO best story telling fella :D
Good stuff.
My old 'hood never sounded so good.
Kudos to the narrator and author.
Great story!
Yay another amazing video. Thank you for all your hard work. My life has been one disaster after another for 2 years, your content has been such a light in the dark. From the bottom of my heart, thank you 💜
Hello viidith you rock brother
*** SPOILER ALERT ***
When we learn about the prophecy, I feel like it’s obvious we’d think it her child. Although it’d be interesting if she was actually the person the prophecy was about.
I can’t decide if I love this story as is or if it would be better for another part. I enjoy not knowing. Quite often in real life, we meet people and they have a very interesting story up to when we meet them. For whatever reason, they aren’t in our life anymore and we wonder what happened. We finish their story in out mind and maybe we only create 1 future for them but sometimes we create 5.
Sometimes those people pop back up for whatever reason and their future was more grand than we expected or maybe it’s similar to one of the futures we created but sometimes it’s boring and ordinary and we’re bummed.
The writer may have more to share. It could be close to one of my ideas or it could be much less interesting (doubtful) than anything I thought of. If either of those occur then I’d be kinda disappointed. OR MAYBE it could be much more fabulous than anything I could have ever imaged and that would be fanatic altho expected.
So additional story to tell or not.... idk
But there are other works written by this author so I kinda feel like i get to have my cake AND eat it!
I’m back! I forgot which story I started earlier today. It was the 3rd or 4th, doesn’t matter. At the beginning of the story we were told that there were other stories that went with it so I didn’t listen and started with #1, Henry bought the house. I continued through to learn that Sun Not Star (already listened) was apart of this world. I listened again and was able to know more about some things mentioned. Like the Protectorate. I just kinda assumed the Protectorate was just a made up agency that could be like CIA, NSA, MIB (movie). I greatly appreciate that it seems like all the stories can be stand alone. Anyway....
Gonna listen to this again bc I’m sure I’ll hear some things that I’ll have a greater understanding of.
Also, when hearing abt Lockhill Road that area kinda reminded me of The Fork In The Road story which I believe is apart Devil’s Due series. I was wondering if this was a kinda cross over. I’m not sure who wrote the other series so I guess I’ll go look it up
Love your work man… seriously can’t thank you narrators enough.
Like many Americans...I'm trapped in Morbid Obesity!
Would say more, but my breakfasts are ready.
Love this universe!
Man must have been a massive effort to get that bath ready if she was using a hand water pump for water , let alone heating the water . Not exactly a relaxing time doing that at 8 month pregnant ! Fun times ....;)
Fantastic!
Sheer Genius!
Imagening how the human-hybrid with a human father and oil skin mother came to be is deeply disturbing. He must have been crazy desperate xD
He wanted a slime girl 😱
O.o.o. part 2 pretty please!?
Thank you VII.
I wonder if the subway scene is related to that other story in this channel with the guy that got stuck in a train that doesn't stop. I mean, the train passed by stations that had creatures that reminded me of the humanoids here. 🤔
Well... that story got heavy really fast...
Aliens and the apocalypse ❤❤❤❤❤
Dadpa sounds like a dead beat… get it… I’ll log out now
Yessir!!! Let’s go 💯
The title alone has me very interested. Starting now. Edit: that was wild
There are other worlds than these
I want to go to the red world. If only to try that meat dish. It sounded amazing!
AMAZING
Awesome 🇧🇷
Demons took my souls 😔
This was really good, but the low gravelly voice really made it hard to remember the main character is a woman. 😂😂😂😂
Fu$$in loved it!👊💀
I strongly dislike the stories people are writing these days. They do little beyond capture and put a particular spin on human misery and dysfunction. Some of them are based on non-fiction most people don't know about (Trash_Tia), some of them amount to broader allegories, but none of this genre are particularly useful or creative. The characters are barely 2D cardboard cutouts, and not in the contrived and deliberate sense to put you in the mindset and perception of the narrator. I'm 10 minutes in, what's next within this deconstructed pit of despair symbolic space, she meets and marries a new version of her father? Give me a break. The tragic backstory is extremely lazy and ill formed. They always are.
Sorry, but I view this as little more than a sort of creeping covert mind poison. I write (and say) things that probably make most people shudder in how twisted it is. Likewise I have written horror stories, but at least disguised as something beautiful and variable with layers and windows to the core. This story is soulless. I want the cold, not an imitation.
I'm 30 seconds in, so no idea if you're right. Regardless, this take seems pretty based and spookpilled.
Bruh, finish the story first, James Caligo usually delivers. Although I’d say his Threshold series is better constructed if we’re honest
Yeah, but some of his other stories are really good
@@dumpsterpsycho2894 I like threshold. Didn't finish the story lol. Incest misery wasn't really the sleep vibe I was after. This comment just struck me as unique among comment section complain-y hot takes, and such conviction! #based?
Also, spookpilled. If it's not a thing, I want it to be. I think it means youve realized politics and Hollywood are pretty dull and sucky and pointless, so now you just do ghost stories, nap, clean, and talk about gas stations a lot.
@@youtubeconnollyfamily true, I Stan for “The Sun is not a Star.”
God, you know you spent too much time on the internet, when instead of "morbid" your brain reads "Morbius"
Nice
Sounds like this author has some heavy duty multi imagination going on
Does this book have a sequel?
more?
Trapped in a morbid reality? Aren't we all 🤣
Literally my life.
I don't want 2 finish book 1
Same
Shouldn't it say " *listener* discretion is adviced" ?.
No. It should say “listener discretion is advised”.
@@marktomlinson838 Right, thanks for noticing the typo.
Ayo, I’m early 😂 Benefits of staying up till 4am
Does he also do some of the female voices
Dark....
The original draft was originally going to show what her father did to her.
I hate the “rain” sound
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We are not worthy of this magnificent piece of art. We, mere mortals bow to you, oh Great One - Viidith22. Forgive us our sins, for we also forgive everyone who sins against us. And lead us not into temptation.
Is this apart of the Threshold of evil universe?