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  • Опубликовано: 12 сен 2024
  • #adrien #adrienette #fanfiction #marinette #miraculous #mlbtextingstory

Комментарии • 57

  • @miraculouslyzahra
    @miraculouslyzahra Месяц назад +1

    THIS IS SO GOOD OMG YOU ARE SUCH A GOOD WRITER

  • @Milki_the_chat
    @Milki_the_chat 2 месяца назад +1

    Amazing! It feels like the start of the show just with a main difference! Ladybug started to love Chat, and Adrien started to love Marinetteee?? I can't wait to see how this will turn out! It's nice seeing their personalities changed!

    • @miraculousofdoranette5103
      @miraculousofdoranette5103  2 месяца назад +1

      Really? Omg you got it right. I exactly wanted to do it. 😭😭Thankkk youuuuu😭❤️❤️❤️🫂🫂🫂🥹🥹🥹🤌🏻 But I stilll dk how will I do the next part😶

    • @Milki_the_chat
      @Milki_the_chat 2 месяца назад +1

      @@miraculousofdoranette5103 Haha don't worry! Take your time and you'll do it eventually. There's no rush! It'll be amazing as always :)

    • @miraculousofdoranette5103
      @miraculousofdoranette5103  2 месяца назад +1

      @@Milki_the_chat Thanks and I hope so🥹💗😭❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️🤌🏻

    • @Milki_the_chat
      @Milki_the_chat 2 месяца назад +1

      @@miraculousofdoranette5103 I'm sure it will!!

    • @miraculousofdoranette5103
      @miraculousofdoranette5103  2 месяца назад +1

      @@Milki_the_chat

  • @MissKittyAgreste
    @MissKittyAgreste 2 месяца назад +1

    Yay! New story! ❤

  • @girishgupta631
    @girishgupta631 2 месяца назад +2

    Next part

  • @Eun-Ae-Stories
    @Eun-Ae-Stories Месяц назад +1

    Me waiting for part 2 from a week 🥺✨

    • @miraculousofdoranette5103
      @miraculousofdoranette5103  Месяц назад

      😭🤌🏻 I'm sorry- uh... I shouldn't say it here- but.....I.. haven't started writing the part 2 yetttt😭😭🤌🏻🤌🏻🤌🏻 I'm writing something elseeee😭🤌🏻 and also there's a reason. I've made the part 2 too much complicated in my mind that I need more time😭🤌🏻 still idk if I can do it good or nottt😭

    • @Eun-Ae-Stories
      @Eun-Ae-Stories Месяц назад +1

      @@miraculousofdoranette5103 don't worry bro chill! Give yourself time! Focus on what you are doing rn! It's ok to take time! Don't take anything as pressure

    • @Eun-Ae-Stories
      @Eun-Ae-Stories Месяц назад +1

      @@miraculousofdoranette5103 even if it is taking time! It's fine! Ik doesn't matter how much long will it take! But it will be surely awesome!! You gonna nail it! So have confidence, and do things you like being careless about time! You are the author ofccc🥺✨

    • @miraculousofdoranette5103
      @miraculousofdoranette5103  Месяц назад

      @@Eun-Ae-Stories Thanks for the understanding 🥹🤞🏻

    • @miraculousofdoranette5103
      @miraculousofdoranette5103  Месяц назад

      @@Eun-Ae-Stories Hehe that's true. But I really don't like keeping my viewers waiting, I feel really bad that they have to wait a lot. That's why I prefer making onehshots. But the problem is I don't get onehshot ideas😭🤌🏻 My all ideas are hella longgg and that's also the reason I can't post often much

  • @Brownie621
    @Brownie621 2 месяца назад +1

    Thank you so much for making my request 😢❤❤

    • @miraculousofdoranette5103
      @miraculousofdoranette5103  2 месяца назад +1

      You shouldn't say thank you😭 I'm already a lott late! I should say sorry.

    • @Brownie621
      @Brownie621 2 месяца назад +2

      Why'd you say sorry?? everyone has to focus on their study ❤ you do too.😉 anyways good things take time you know what I mean ❤🎉😁

    • @miraculousofdoranette5103
      @miraculousofdoranette5103  2 месяца назад +1

      @@Brownie621 Tysm😭 I'm really lucky having you all!

    • @Brownie621
      @Brownie621 2 месяца назад +2

      ​@@miraculousofdoranette5103me too girly... I would have died of boredom 😂😂and without losing my innocence 👀💀

    • @Brownie621
      @Brownie621 2 месяца назад +2

      The punishment one was just🤯🥴☻

  • @HannahsMiraculousStories385
    @HannahsMiraculousStories385 2 месяца назад +1

    Can't wait to read this 👀✨✨✨

  • @Brownie621
    @Brownie621 Месяц назад +2

    When will next part come??😅(i am sorry that i might be annoying you by my comments😅😅😅)

    • @miraculousofdoranette5103
      @miraculousofdoranette5103  Месяц назад

      Noo you're not! Actually I've written it half. But idk how to continue that 😭 I mean I have made it tooo much complicated. I need to add more scenes of episodes from S1-S3 or maybe. And make them like this one, so yaaa

    • @Brownie621
      @Brownie621 Месяц назад +1

      ​@@miraculousofdoranette5103oh fine ❤

    • @miraculousofdoranette5103
      @miraculousofdoranette5103  Месяц назад

      @@Brownie621 mhm...

  • @Devaraj-mw1ic
    @Devaraj-mw1ic 2 месяца назад +1

    Hi, I am new to ur channel and I saw ur vids it was awesome, I don't know why RUclips didn't recommend ur channel earlier. So I will come to the point, can j please do a marichat texting story, I will give u the idea, so first, the name:marinette depressed
    The ship:Marichat
    So first, lila lied about marinette and everyone believed lila and everyone haterd marinette for that includes adrian and adrian tell marinette to die, principle gave marinette 2 week suspend she went crying, when she got home she saw a letter saying " We are away for a cooking competition in new York we will be back in 2 weeks - love mom, dad" After she saw that she went to her room crying, she did not eat that day and slept while crying. After school adrian was in his room while plagg staring at him and he asked "what plagg" Plagg answered back with " You're the stupidest person i know" Adrian answered "And y is that" Plagg replied " Are u serious, we know that liela girl lied and u still belived her over marinette" Adrian:"because she had bruises and slap marks on her face and kagami also saw that" Plagg: " Kid there is a thing called makeup and money for acting" Adrian:"how r u so sure about that" Plagg:"whatever kid"
    The next day, as soon as marinette entered everyone gave death glares, she got tears in her but controled it after school got over lila pinned marinette to wall and started hitting her on stomach, sholder, and slaping her, no one knew that because they shut her with blackmailing to beat even more, after hitting everyday, mari vomits blood and tries to stand but falls but she managed to get home everyday this continued for 2 weeks(btw she was crying every night to sleep and didnt eat for 2 weeks straight and only drank water) after she got a phone call saying her parents died because of plane crash after that call she fell down and started crying recolleting memories of her parents and ran home while crying(it was lunch break)
    Adrian:thinking"I don't like what see did to lila but I am also not sure she did that......" When he saw she was crying after a phone call he decided to go as chatnoir after school when he got there on the balcony he knocked on the trap door (btw marinette know chat from that one episode where chat saves mari) no answer knocked once more..... No answer he got irritated and opened the trap door there he saw.... Marinette laying on the floor with blood on her wrist he go inside and had tears in his eyes he got her head and Slapped her face( like doctors do for patient to regain consious😅)2-5 times calling her name, first" marinette... Mari.... Princess.....Wake up😢😢😭"then he saw her wrists with so many deep cuts, then he called for her parents but no answer he layed her on her bed and sprinkle some water on her face after some time she woke up and he was like " M-mari w-why u-u g-got s-so many c-cuts t-tell me what's b-bothering u-u, p-pls don't do it a-again(btw he bandaided her cuts while she was unconscious) as he said he hugged her and she started crying while telling all her problem and her parents death chat felt guilty, it was eating him, after crying and sharing all her problems chat said:"I know ghe pain of losing parents I have lost my mother too and dw u have me, don't care about these brats (he thinks:"yea brats😢) ( also chat was stuttering while saying that) mari:" Thank you so much chat now I feel a lil better" as she gave a weak smile, chat: now princess promise me that u will never cut urself again"mari:(had her other hand behind and crossed her finger and thinks:" Sorry chat can't do that) promise, chat smiled and stayed there. These continued for months chat was visiting her daily and r best friend( btw the beating continued and nothing changed between her and her class except adrian stopped calling names and tell her to die and also some time he tries to defend mari but she always rolled eyes at him and she always wear hoodies and jeans chat asked to wear somthing else but she would refuse but little did he knew she was cutting her self on he thighs) , until one day chat asked to be his gf and mari said yes( and alsi there would be lil lemon like kissing on lips, giving hickey on neck and like chat holding her waist like romantically and chat laying on maris chest like his head on her chest there would be no removeing clothes just some thing like I said above) after some months of dating mari wanted a part time job and was searching it and preparing resume and documents and they only spend a lil to no time together( I forgot to tell u that there is patrols and akumas can h just add it in between😅 and ladynoir has been close in the mean time) and chat thought she has lost intrest in him so on one day after patrol chat: milady I have to tell u something" Ladybug:( thinks: he don't call me that in this form, y now) ( and when mari and chat were dating chat stopped calling ladybug by names he would call so she got curious bout it) yes, chat
    Chat:I-I-i love u ladybug, ladybugs eyes widen and had tears in eye ladybug: b-but u-u have a-a g-gf chat: just say yes, I would dump her for u, any way she lost interst in me. Ladybug: c-chat i-i h-have to t-think a-about i-i.as soon as she said she said she left leaving chat in confuse and chat went to mari house to see mari on floor crying with her knees hugged chat got near and said,chat: what happened marinette(also at first Adrian and kagami are dating which caused marinette depressed before lila lies
    That's all I thought and can u finish the rest with emotional scenes and I want a happy ending. Pls pls....... Pls...... Pls.... Plss...... Do 😢it took me 1 and half hour to write it pls.. And can u do it in marichat plsss....... 😢 ur my 5th channel asking to do it but nobody answers plss... 😢plsssssss......... Pls... I beg u 😢plsssss...... Plss...... 😢🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 pls 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏😢😢😢😢😢😢😮lls....pls.... 😢

    • @miraculousofdoranette5103
      @miraculousofdoranette5103  2 месяца назад

      Yeah I can understand by this longgg paragraph 😭. I read it. The idea was trendy back then in 2021 ig. I still remember, most of the story writers writing this story. Well, tbh idk what to say.....
      Actually I was thinking of quitting soon since my college will start from this year. And....also I have a lot request stories before I got this one. So I'm gonna tell you the same thing that I told the others.
      Soo...I'm can't guarantee you that I'm 100% sure I'll make it, but I'll try. But before that, I've to ask a few story writers for their permission cuz they have also done the same story. I don't want to copy them. But I don't think that'll not be a problem. And if I make this story, I'm thinking of making it as my 2K special 😃. How's the idea??
      Well, but I'm afraid that you might have to wait patiently for this story to come out. Cuz....you can check or might already have seen that I don't post often now....Soo... I hope you can understand the pressures and all reasons.

    • @Devaraj-mw1ic
      @Devaraj-mw1ic Месяц назад +1

      Ok girl I understand that and I hope u hit 2k soon❤ it's just an option if want to do u can❤🎉

    • @miraculousofdoranette5103
      @miraculousofdoranette5103  Месяц назад

      @@Devaraj-mw1ic Thanks for the understanding!

  • @tigerxx-jy1hh
    @tigerxx-jy1hh 2 месяца назад +1

    Hey i have a story idea can i share it with you and if you like it can you do it ?

    • @miraculousofdoranette5103
      @miraculousofdoranette5103  2 месяца назад +1

      You can share your story idea! I would love to hear it! But I'm not sure if I'll be able to do it.. I'm sorry for that. But if you still want to share you can!😃👍🏻

    • @tigerxx-jy1hh
      @tigerxx-jy1hh 2 месяца назад +1

      It's ok I don't want to put stress on you I would share it if you want to ofc but if you don't feel like making stories right now it's ok :)

    • @tigerxx-jy1hh
      @tigerxx-jy1hh 2 месяца назад +2

      Alr so the idea I got is not completed it's just like bg info or somthing you can complete it if you want yk put your charming style in it 🙂

    • @tigerxx-jy1hh
      @tigerxx-jy1hh 2 месяца назад +2

      Alr so the idea I got is not completed it's just like bg info or somthing you can complete it if you want yk put your charming style in it 🙂

    • @miraculousofdoranette5103
      @miraculousofdoranette5103  2 месяца назад +1

      @@tigerxx-jy1hh Haha sure! I would really love to hear it!! You can tell be the "bg info" that you got😂🤚 I'll gladly hear it!