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How to write a first class essay & dissertation WITH EXAMPLES
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- Опубликовано: 18 авг 2024
- You only need ONE skill to write a first class mark essay and dissertation. In this video I’ll explain what this skill is with EXAMPLES! I WISH this video existed when I was studying…it would’ve saved me a lot of time, trial & error and research.
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I have a research paper due in 9 hours that I’ve just started working on (any other procrastinators here?!?!?) and this video is SO HELPFUL!!! Thank you queen 🙏🏻
I’ve finished uni but I remember I started working on my dissertation past the due date and my initial high mark was reduced. I’m so happy you are trying tho
😂 here!!
Girl me too due in 2 days
9 hours! Just check my bio, lol. This applies to anyone else that's struggling.
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For someone so young you're a brilliant life coach
literature review reading:
- have excel spread sheet. look at all existing info out there. have author, date written, title of paper, arguments made in it)
- make sure to write author's intention too, and also identify any biases in gaps and limitations section
- limitations such as if it is outdated or has bias from being from a certain medium or peer-reviewed
point (topic sentence and what you'll argue, highlight this in first sentence)
evidence (1 or 2 quotes from 2 authors, synthesis sources from wide range of academic sources, author A and B argues 'quote,' however (synthesis) author X and Y argued from recent research that X and y)
explain 1 (detail and depth, and include relevant course theories)
critical analysis (bringing in evidence that contradicts/contrasts first piece of evidence included in this paragraph with other authors and other sources that argue against the first paragraph. allows you tot talk about the limitations and gaps in existing knowledge. then talk about how the evidence contrasts or supports each other. use academic phrase banks to help. be analytical more than descriptive, explain why the evidence why it's significant, how it occurred, why did this happen, why is the author making the argument and why it is relevant)
explain 2 (showing nuanced and critical understanding of the field as a whole, tying all the info from beginning of para, made ur point and contrasted arguments and critical analysis with various viewpoints so in this final explanation you're going to show ur aware of everything already out there and tying it to your main point
link back (linking it back to the question and making sure it applies to your essay)
‘This is a gold mine’. That’s the thought in my head as come back to this video for the 3rd time.
Damn. I spent a year getting tutoring for essay writing, I still failed school, and not one person explained how to write an actual paragraph or even get close to explaining anything as practically as you did. Thank you.
This was so helpful! Straight to the point and very logical. It would be helpful to see a short example using the paragraph structure :D. Thank you so much Tam.
Thank you SO much for this, as a dyslexic student who feels like they're constantly drowning with essays this has made the whole process seem so much less daunting! :)
this is golden your literally saving everyones lives here
Hello and many thanks. I do not understand why lecturers and tutors on workshop do not teach us precisely what you taught us on this video. When i asked them, they always say i cant tell you or help. But thanks a lot of for your help. I have two essays each 3000 words in 10 days time. I appreciate it so much. I wish you Happy new year.
Hi I’m so glad you found this helpful! Thanks for watching and happy near year!
I must say this is the shortest yet most resourceful piece I have found since I started searching for resources that would help me write my dissertation which is like since the beginning of this year, 2023.
Thank you so much for putting this together out here,Tam. I would definitely include your video url in my references.
You are incredibly brilliant and beautiful.
this is more useful than any essay workshop i've attended lmao, thanks so much! this will save me while writing my final essay/diss
Glad it was helpful!🥰🥰
I can't agree more
I’ve unknowingly did that in my essays and it always works!
imagine if tam had this youtube channel throughout uni and we got to see all the vlogs!!! and all the guides
THANK YOU! I have an essay due to next week, with very few guidelines and this will helpe me tremendously. It's very hard to go back in school after a long hiatus and working full time.
I actually love you this just saved my degree 😭 why do they not teach us this at uni
The Point Evidence Explain and Critical analysis structure helped me get the highest grade in my first assessment 😊😊😊🎉🎉🎉💯💯💯
Your video is amazing, super detailed and at the same time straight to the point. Thank you!!
I am a writing consultant and you are saying some banger tips in this video! Good writing is all about being clear and demonstrating that you have exercised critical thinking on the topic and can explain it logically. Saved this for myself to remember later. The US has a different system for schooling, but it's still super valuable, and who knows maybe I'll end up across the pond for my graduate level education. 😊
I have 3000 words essies to write and also a dissertation waiting. Thank you so so much for these tips. I'm so putting them into practise.
I'm about to just my Master of Science in Computer Science and International Business at Robert Kennedy College / University of Cumbria and I am nervous as hell. I haven't been in school for more than a decade and I've forgotten how to write a critical analysis paper. These tips really helped. Thank you!
This advice is brilliant! I wish I found this 6 months ago 😭 Would you be able to go into a little bit more detail about what sections you had in your excel sheet? I’m wondering what sections would be advantageous to have
I did this for the first time and it does work! Thank you
Great to hear! X
Thanks sooo much for the content and value information. I'm in law course, in witch we have to do so many essays and university works. This excel ideia is brilliant!!! ✨💛
i can't express in words how helpful this video is!!! thank you so much
I have watched this video like twice if not thrice
It's a 10/10 eloquently...
Excellent, honestly as mature student I just wish I had found you at the start of my degree.
She did not stutter even once.
This video was the best thing I could have watched and Ik this is asking for a lot but do you have an example paragraph ❤❤❤thank you very much
Great piece of work. I have forwarded this to my colleagues. Thank you👏
I wish i saw this earlier. The single most important video on youtube. The only video i felt i needed to comment on. Thank youx
I would love to see how a paragraph looks like… I confess I don’t really understand how the Explain part needs to be written…
Thank you so much for sharing your knowledge with us. The information you provided in this video was explained in a way that I could understand and implement easily. I have not written my essay yet, but when I do I will try to remember to update this comment to share my experience and outcome.
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this is perfect!!! thank you
You changed my life! Thank you, this was very helpful.
This was honestly so helpful and informative, we need more uni related videos TAM!
This is so clear and easy to follow. Thank you!!!!
I really needed to know how to structure my paragraphs for my first essay, so thank you for this💗💗💗
Lifesaver!! I also study at Leicester and I will try this for my next essay. Thanks so much! I will update my comment!
This I better than the whole academic tubers on youtube ❤
This is brilliant 🎉 straight to the point and every tip is useful ❤
I cannot thank you enough, your advice is actually practical and has saved my behind for realll. I'll update when I get the results of my dissertation 🙏🏾🙏🏾
I'm glad I found this in my second year and not my third 😅
This was so helpful Tam thank you so much !!!
You're brilliant! Bless you!
You should be teaching these skills at university, soooo helpful. Thank you ❤
this is fantastic! gives me hope
This is such a saviour istg! thanks TAM .💗
You inspire me 💕🙌🏻
Well explained. My dissertation is due in 2 weeks. I am 90% on the same pathway and good point on synthesising evidence. Well done on your degree
Hey there, I am an Academic Consultant, I help out students with assignments essays and Thesis/dissertation. I would love to help you out with your dissertation. Can we connect?
@@NathanacAdemicConsultant no thanks Nathan
@@anirudhkaushik3643 Ok if you need any help with an academic task, or maybe consultancy about higher education I would love to help you out, can I have your contact info where I can reach you out?
You are amazing! Great video, this is useful
Thank you, SO much. You explained this so well and this is really helpful!
Thank you so much for your helpful information .You are really helpful ❤
I know this is a bit off topic- your make up is stunning!!
You’re brilliant!!! Thank you!!!
Thank you so much P' Tam. P'(Pi) in Thais means sis or bro. Sending love from Thailand🇹🇭❤️
Thank you :)
One more question at this ungodly hour. I'm a mature student with disabilities living unsupported in a university halls accommodation where even right now I'm being harassed by extremely noisy, younger, male students living directly above. I'm also being tormented by the students within my flat but they're not as bad as the ones in the flat above. I've complained to the manager, the one member staff on site and at my university but nobody is helping me. In fact if anything after my complaints it's only getting worse. I cannot cope. I am 28 years old. These kids are like 18 years or around that age. I deserve better. I have tried with all my might. And no I am not willing to live because I've endured years of moving including estrangement, living in temporary accomodations, horrific social housing and now this. If anybody should be moving it's them. So please if you or anyone reading has any helpful advice to effectively stop this violation of my rights as a paying, isolated, mature and disabled female student residing in these halls, tell me. Thank you, I
@tamkaur can you please help he
Thank you soo much omg!!!! You're a blessing honestly
Thank you so much, made it easier God Bless you!
I can not even begin to describe how helpful this was thank you so muchh ❤
Omg this was so helpful! Thank you ❤
PLEASE HELP ME!
HOW DO I FIND THE PREVIOUS DISSERTATIONS ON THE UNIVERSITY OF LEICHESTER SITE?
thanks for your fantastic explanation mate , you are awesome,
you saved my life thank you so much
Needed this thank you!
What were all the lit review spreadsheet headings?
Hey there, I am an Academic Consultant, I help out students with assignments essays and Thesis/dissertation. I would love to help you out with your dissertation. Can we connect?
This is great for undergrads... For grad students, especially PhD students, not so much.
so helpful, thank you so muchh!
New subscriber here thank for this the most helpful thing over seen and I've sent it to all of my friends at uni
I dont really get the critical analysis part? Are we the one who analyses? Or we find other academic sources that contradicts or shows the weaknesses? How is that not a literature review if we do so? Someone help please :)
Thank you for this ❤️❤️❤️
i don't quite understand explain 2
Thank You !
Thank you this is so helpful ❤
I wish this was around when I did my dissertation 😭
Normal people learn from their mistakes, smart people learn from the mistakes of others! It was a really useful and sharp advice, thanks!
How many words would each of your paragraphs be and and would each of your paragraphs be a completely different point or could you use the same point just with different evidence
This was so helpful , thanks so much! Xx
Do you continue to the point paragraph , after your introduction? Please let me know as I am confused ? I start uni in September 😮
Thank you for this
How and why are you SMART?! Argh! If I was this smart at your age I'd be a very liberated, wealthy and successful woman by now!
wow
how amazing this is
God bless you
Ur such a intelligent and beautiful lady❤❤❤. Lots of love from South Africa❤❤. Keep doing what u do best❤❤
Thanks you so much
Omg I am studying Marketing at The University of the West Indies. I have been looking for RUclipsrs that studied Marketing. New subscriber here.
amazing video! so are you saying that you're supposed to highlight the gaps/limitations of the sources raised to support your point when raising counterarguments?
Beautiful!!!!! ❤
Thank you! I love you ❤
Hey there, I am an Academic Consultant, I help out students with assignments essays and Thesis/dissertation. I would love to help you out with your dissertation. Can we connect?
@@NathanacAdemicConsultant Hi, sure.
@@bentinabire8052 Can you share a contact info or any social handle where we can communicate?
your amazing thank you
can you explain how to write review from podcasts i dont know how write this assignment
so beautiful and smart
Thank you
Thanks, you got a new subscriber
Thanks queen❤️
Hi!! I really LOVE youre content❤️ Can you make a vid abt youre investing journey.. im thinking about starting myself, but im not confident enough for that right now haha😊
if you use phrases from the academic phrasebank does it show up on turnitin :)
Most useful video on writing a good paper ❤
Thanks a lot 😊
oh goshhh your accent is amazing 😭😭💟
Hey there, I am an Academic Consultant, I help out students with assignments essays and Thesis/dissertation. I would love to help you out with your dissertation. Can we connect?
Do you have a sample of your excel spread sheet? 😀
Can i use this as an high school student? (11th grade)