The clock counter footage you used for the video would’ve been better if you had it start at 1 hour, 4 minutes and 21 seconds with the timer counting down from there until the end of the story instead of it just constantly repeating.
I've only just started the story. But if it was me, and all the countdowns are going to end at the same time, I would have had the timer longer, and hitting zero when the (first) ones in the story hit zero.
Exactly it would've been a nice touch. The dark somnium has a video where the story is that the protagonist creates an AI that gains sentience and the AI thinks it has created the protagonist. Which leads to the protagonist questioning her life and asks the AI the reboot yhe systems at the same time as her. The narration ends there. But the caption actually repeats from the start. Which I think is a really great touch and I wouldn't even have noticed if I didn't have the captions accidentally on while I was changing the vid.
Nice, Love it! I know this is probably gonna get buried and you won’t see this, but I just wanna say thank you for the great content; you’ve inspired me to start my own RUclips Channel!🎉 Love your stuff, keep the horrors coming!
Great reading, but at about the 40 minute mark I was like “girl just walk out! Hit da bricks!” Screw resignation letters just leave the state in the middle of the night lmao
Extremely annoying protagonist, how the fuck do you ever step foot in that place again? Afraid of a bad reference? And why did they tear that check? Take the money and leave the country, it's not like not accepting the money is gonna allow them to just speak freely anyway
I found myself yelling "just don't go to the meeting! Dont go! What are they gunna do _fire_ you? Just do g- ok i hope the countdown is to an explosion and youre in it"
Thank you for another excellent narration Mr. Creeps! It's an odd one for sure but I hope people enjoy it! To be clear this video contains both a re-narration of "The Zippers on People's Skin Are Becoming Undone" (which Mr. Creeps originally narrated in in February 2021) and a new narration of its sequel "The Countdowns on People's Foreheads Are Getting Closer to Zero". My goal with them was to present a weird horror story on the surface level while using that setup to explore these characters and how they deal with soul-draining jobs and life circumstances during the timeframe in which I wrote them, which was early 2021 when a lot of lockdowns were in place. If you enjoyed it, these characters reappear in supporting roles in a subsequent series "Ever since I woke up from surgery, everyone tells me that I’m married to a man I’ve never met," which you can find on my subreddit link in the description above. (Also it's totally fair game to point out if a concept from these stories has appeared elsewhere before! But for what it's worth, I'm not familiar with the music video or game a few people have mentioned below.) Thanks for giving it a listen, and have a nice day/spooky night everyone!
I loved this story, but after I read this comment I just went and read all of “I’m married to a man I’ve never met” and wow! You are a phenomenal writer, and that story is incredible!
Thank you Mr Creeps for another awesome pasta. This definitely made my morning. I've already heard that story about the zippers before, but I don't think I've heard the rest of it. Glad that it was extended and incorporated a bigger story of what was behind it. I definitely loved it. Props to the author on the update, and your excellent narration of it.🖤🖤🖤🖤
"Why didn't you tell me you were still seeing them" uuuh, because the last time you said "they're not real" and left what appeared to be signs of schizophrenia at that? And never checked back up? Jeeze I wonder why her boyfriend was having problems with her
But…why. This story was so good but then transformed into doggy doodoo those last 10 minutes. Why did everyone turn into the same balding low level corporate manager. With thorns. And the random man that saved her, who the heck was he even and why’d he give a crud about her? Like dang what a waste, the first part about the zippers had so much potential.
Mr creeps. can you please do more stories with multiple characters in it. those are the best. like left right game, smile, and the fire tower watch one
Reading the title alone reminds me of the movie “In Time” where people’s looks stop aging after their 20s and whatever time they have left is on their forearm
Thank you good sir for the excellent content and narration again today, the author did an outstanding job with the lead character - behaved like a real corporate wage slave
22:45 that's way you bring a gun, get 6 feet away point at him, say to put his head on the ground, stump on it, if he grebs you it is an excuse to shoot him, if he gets knocked out you call the cops and file r@pe charges
Thumbnail Image- The giant head entities have come to watch the countdown to mankind's damnation. Considering how badly the MC was treated by the company, I'm surprised they stuck around for so long.
47:32 a non disclosure agreement is voided if they thing they forbid you from talking about breaks the law. She could have signed it and IMMEDIATELY went and told a new station without any repercussions!
Dumb ending. Take the money because your roommate and her boyfriend saw things and didn't sign a non disclosure agreement. Take the money and use it to spy, infiltrate, or fund any other means to expose the company that gave you the money. Your non disclosure wouldn't prevent the two other witnesses from making a difference. Now you have to find a new job which takes 40+ hours a week away that each person could be working towards your actual goal. 120 hours a week all together. Sometimes a line that you thinks sounds good actually calls into question the intelligence of the main characters stated and their obvious life goal to "not let it go". Or wait is that the point? Holy fuck me that would be a wicked, inception style, mind fuck I didn't see coming.
Meanwhile, in anime land... "I'm a monster hunter attached to the sheriff's department working undercover. The vampire crime syndicate I've infiltrated doesn't realise they've kidnapped a wedigo."
The mob boss hates humanity and tolerate people. He found a beautiful connection to nature and ended up becoming a nature enthusiast worships Wendigos.
Please what is the background music at the beginning 12 minutes of this story I notice you've used it on many previous stories and it's the perfect accompanant to your great narrations😮
Holy crap, this was the most terrifying nosleep story I've heard in months or even longer. A content warning for SA would have been nice, I didn't expect it from a story about countdown timers. Please consider CWs for things like SA, children being harmed/dying, etc. I understand that these are meant to be horror stories, but real life horror is something else.
The clock counter footage you used for the video would’ve been better if you had it start at 1 hour, 4 minutes and 21 seconds with the timer counting down from there until the end of the story instead of it just constantly repeating.
I've only just started the story. But if it was me, and all the countdowns are going to end at the same time, I would have had the timer longer, and hitting zero when the (first) ones in the story hit zero.
I don't think most people watch these videos the same way they watch others but it would've been a nice touch
I legit play this on my tablet then place the tablet face down.. and fall asleep listening to it.. the complexity of the background doesn’t matter
Exactly it would've been a nice touch.
The dark somnium has a video where the story is that the protagonist creates an AI that gains sentience and the AI thinks it has created the protagonist. Which leads to the protagonist questioning her life and asks the AI the reboot yhe systems at the same time as her. The narration ends there.
But the caption actually repeats from the start.
Which I think is a really great touch and I wouldn't even have noticed if I didn't have the captions accidentally on while I was changing the vid.
Today everyone around me became an alarm clock. I should have woken up by now.
Nope, the only way to do that is to unplug. Once that happens your eyes will open.
Today everyone around me became an alarm clock, they are all flashing 12:00
😂😂😂😂😂😂
VERY entertaining! I had no idea where that one was going. Keep up the amazing work - good tales and a fantastic voice keep me coming back.
Tried watching this to go to sleep but I got too invested 😅 great story and narration as usual
Workplace Zipperventures can be so unpleasant.
Kudos to the writer for some interesting ideas. Kudos to the narrator 🎉
Nice, Love it!
I know this is probably gonna get buried and you won’t see this, but I just wanna say thank you for the great content; you’ve inspired me to start my own RUclips Channel!🎉
Love your stuff, keep the horrors coming!
Good luck with your channel
I'm going to your channel as soon as Mr Creeps finishes this tale.
Damn, that countdown clock would be very distracting.. I would think I had slipped into a psychosis or something..
Thank You 💜
You... will... send... me... 500... dollars...
@@rejack2liferejack32
Affirmative
Yes, new content, thank you Mr. 🙏
Great reading, but at about the 40 minute mark I was like “girl just walk out! Hit da bricks!” Screw resignation letters just leave the state in the middle of the night lmao
Extremely annoying protagonist, how the fuck do you ever step foot in that place again? Afraid of a bad reference? And why did they tear that check? Take the money and leave the country, it's not like not accepting the money is gonna allow them to just speak freely anyway
I found myself yelling "just don't go to the meeting! Dont go! What are they gunna do _fire_ you? Just do g- ok i hope the countdown is to an explosion and youre in it"
She was completely irrational lol
Thank you for another excellent narration Mr. Creeps! It's an odd one for sure but I hope people enjoy it! To be clear this video contains both a re-narration of "The Zippers on People's Skin Are Becoming Undone" (which Mr. Creeps originally narrated in in February 2021) and a new narration of its sequel "The Countdowns on People's Foreheads Are Getting Closer to Zero". My goal with them was to present a weird horror story on the surface level while using that setup to explore these characters and how they deal with soul-draining jobs and life circumstances during the timeframe in which I wrote them, which was early 2021 when a lot of lockdowns were in place.
If you enjoyed it, these characters reappear in supporting roles in a subsequent series "Ever since I woke up from surgery, everyone tells me that I’m married to a man I’ve never met," which you can find on my subreddit link in the description above. (Also it's totally fair game to point out if a concept from these stories has appeared elsewhere before! But for what it's worth, I'm not familiar with the music video or game a few people have mentioned below.) Thanks for giving it a listen, and have a nice day/spooky night everyone!
Great stories, you’re very talented! Thank you for sharing them, and for the additional info. I’m going to have to check out your subreddit :)
I loved this story, but after I read this comment I just went and read all of “I’m married to a man I’ve never met” and wow! You are a phenomenal writer, and that story is incredible!
Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it!@@realmsofreading
Am honestly glad you said thus cause I was about to skip..SO glad I didn’t ! :)
Thank you Mr Creeps for another awesome pasta. This definitely made my morning. I've already heard that story about the zippers before, but I don't think I've heard the rest of it. Glad that it was extended and incorporated a bigger story of what was behind it. I definitely loved it. Props to the author on the update, and your excellent narration of it.🖤🖤🖤🖤
This really reminds me of a story that creeps narrated a few years ago
Great listen as always!
the zippers seem to be like stress tearing someone apart or falling to pieces with it. She broke jacobs with stress and fixed her own stress too
The timer on screen is very accurate. Good job Mr Creeps.
10:31 That moment when you casually ignore a close friends extremely obvious symptoms of psychosis. 😏
"Why didn't you tell me you were still seeing them" uuuh, because the last time you said "they're not real" and left what appeared to be signs of schizophrenia at that? And never checked back up? Jeeze I wonder why her boyfriend was having problems with her
@@bloodyneptune Really though!
Nickleback - Savin' me
Music video had count down red digital clock numbers above their heads.
“I think-my boss is losing his mind we get off at 4:30 pm it’s 6pm now” 😮🙄🙄🤣 mf wouldn’t let me go home 🤣🤣
But…why. This story was so good but then transformed into doggy doodoo those last 10 minutes. Why did everyone turn into the same balding low level corporate manager. With thorns. And the random man that saved her, who the heck was he even and why’d he give a crud about her?
Like dang what a waste, the first part about the zippers had so much potential.
BRU I love thinking about the funny version of this like imagine a bunch of Jacob zombies just coming after you😭😂😂😂
That was great! Thanks Mr. Creeps!
If ya take the poke don't be surprised when your heart gets smoked
Im sorry but i wouldn't have signed any NDA. Nor would I have worked a second past my resignation.
🎶Say it for me, say it to me, and I'll leave this life behind me; say it if it's worth savin' meeeee🎶
27 minutes in no countdown only zippers 😂
Edit 5 minutes after this comment was made the countdown starts lol
Yeah, wtfs with that? The title said timers, not zippers.
@@GredelsRage the timers do come in during like 5 minutes later then I posted that comment
@@NEMOfishZ92 yep thats about how it worked for me too. Lol now im in the nickleback video part w timers.
idk for some reason the title made me start laughing lol
No. You need to see a doctor
Same lol
@@Rambogner *pulls out uno card*
That would make an entertaining story!
The first half of this story is from the video "The Zippers On People's Skin Are Becoming Undone"
I thought i had heard it before
Yesss
Awesome story. Thank you
The stories you narrate are excellent. Thank you writers, but I come back for your voice. Just perfect. Thank you
Id have cashed it and still blabbed lol
37:19, I usually listen to this while working and the way my jaw dropped in my office with everyone looking 😅. I just didn’t expect it!
This was awesome
Mr creeps. can you please do more stories with multiple characters in it. those are the best. like left right game, smile, and the fire tower watch one
I hope for a sequel to this story.
ah, I was invested most of the part, but near the ending everything looks like the author didn't know what to do at all. still entertaining tho.
Yes another story
Reading the title alone reminds me of the movie “In Time” where people’s looks stop aging after their 20s and whatever time they have left is on their forearm
What a bizarre and wildly fantastic story!😃 loved it!! Thanks !
Meow.
Always right on time
I can't wait to see what The jek porkins guy thinks up this time. I love that guy and respect his dedication to his craft.
Thething that is the most unbelievable about the story is her ability to make out for an hour, and still have interest in moving forward with the guy.
Thank you good sir for the excellent content and narration again today, the author did an outstanding job with the lead character - behaved like a real corporate wage slave
13:30 real tell tale heart by poe vibes
Physical contact after a long period of going without hits different, I haven't cuddled anyone in a long time and it's rough out here
This is scary.
I know a sequel would answer a lot of questions but to me it just seemed like a whole lot of nothing in this one hour story.
Everyone around me has no forehead, they are attached to screens.
Just as I was sad about not have a video to listen to, Mr. Creeps for the win. ❤
Bro really said "I always come back"
This sounds a little bit like devil survivor from the countdown concept 🤔
I remember a creepy pasta with a similar name thought it was the same one
Hiya Again Mr Creeps 🤩
Its me again. 👉🤩
This is my bedtime cat nap story 🤩
THANK YOU ♥️♥️♥️
🔥🔥
Clocks? I’m 11 mins in and it’s all about zippers. I’m pretty sure I’ve heard this one before
Did she naturally possess the ability to see these anomalies, or was that a side effect?
Also I would have cashed the check and moved on with my life.
Someone liked the Nickelback film clip then 😂 Great narration Mr Creeps
Great job! ❤
22:45 that's way you bring a gun, get 6 feet away point at him, say to put his head on the ground, stump on it, if he grebs you it is an excuse to shoot him, if he gets knocked out you call the cops and file r@pe charges
That escalated really fast lol
Awesome work. All too real a horror story for countless women in pretty much any industry.
Let me guess the "author" watched death Note series and also the Nickelback video for "someday". Quite original
So becoming a lecherous, balding low level manager is what happens when one becomes too invested in maintaining the corporate structure?
Ayeee
Thumbnail Image- The giant head entities have come to watch the countdown to mankind's damnation.
Considering how badly the MC was treated by the company, I'm surprised they stuck around for so long.
Yoo, another Creepy man video
Part 2 when??
29:45 the zippers may be affecting the soul, so like a guy can split in half and jn the real world he would became catatonic but whole
Wow!>> 2 min. Ago..!! 👍👍👋
297th!!!! That's still good right?
The people in my town started buying strange rings.
*I haven't seen any on their fingers.*
47:32 a non disclosure agreement is voided if they thing they forbid you from talking about breaks the law. She could have signed it and IMMEDIATELY went and told a new station without any repercussions!
Yeah crazy is that this is true in a sense 🤔.
crap, im turning in my 2 weeks resignation tomorrow. im afraid now lol
Blud got sticky fingers 😂
I miss the shorter videos, im not able to keep up with so much :( i keep falling asleep 💤
Death Note vibes. Is the main character's name Amane Misa?
Good thing I just listen mostly. That countdown would have driven me bonkers with anxiety!!!
Cheers 😊
Wait is this a sequel to that one you did years ago?
This is like the last joke from "Joyner Lucas - 24 hours"
✅
People and their Covid obsession lol
This person was clearly inspired by Devil Survivor
Thanks to male pattern baldness, many people around me have a five-head 🤔
How is this comment relevant?
When he see his colleagues with zippers on their skin, my first thought is “psychosis” but….
Why do these new Jacobson clones have cacti like her plant?
So did the writer just give up on the zipper thing and thought a timer would be cooler?
Dumb ending. Take the money because your roommate and her boyfriend saw things and didn't sign a non disclosure agreement. Take the money and use it to spy, infiltrate, or fund any other means to expose the company that gave you the money. Your non disclosure wouldn't prevent the two other witnesses from making a difference. Now you have to find a new job which takes 40+ hours a week away that each person could be working towards your actual goal. 120 hours a week all together. Sometimes a line that you thinks sounds good actually calls into question the intelligence of the main characters stated and their obvious life goal to "not let it go".
Or wait is that the point? Holy fuck me that would be a wicked, inception style, mind fuck I didn't see coming.
I hope this continues
Reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Reeereeereeereeereeereeereeereee
Rerererererererererererererererererere
REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
Yeayy
That was quite literally the dumbest ending I've ever heard. It's so embarrassing.
Today I woke up in a Nickleback video.
Tune in next week for "A Mob Boss Kidnapped My Daughter. He Doesn't Know We Are Wendigos."
Meanwhile, in anime land...
"I'm a monster hunter attached to the sheriff's department working undercover. The vampire crime syndicate I've infiltrated doesn't realise they've kidnapped a wedigo."
@@src6339 Monster Hunting Skinwalker
The mob boss hates humanity and tolerate people. He found a beautiful connection to nature and ended up becoming a nature enthusiast worships Wendigos.
@LeeroyPorkins and they just found an odd set of rules you say?
“A wendigo kidnapped my wendigo he did not realize we are wendigos”
Me when The Three Body Problem
Absolutely love your narrations, but I gotta ask… why do you say “must’ve” like that??😅
Whoop Whoop, lo's and let's, homies
Smokem if you got them
✌🏻🐵✌🏻
Please what is the background music at the beginning 12 minutes of this story
I notice you've used it on many previous stories and it's the perfect accompanant to your great narrations😮
Most of the music creepy story narrator's use is by Myuu, I think that ones one of his called 'A Deep Voice'
@@bloodyneptune thank you bloodneptune
Nice
Holy crap, this was the most terrifying nosleep story I've heard in months or even longer. A content warning for SA would have been nice, I didn't expect it from a story about countdown timers. Please consider CWs for things like SA, children being harmed/dying, etc. I understand that these are meant to be horror stories, but real life horror is something else.
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Oh god. It does? Shet. Thx then. Might have to stop
Why are you re-releasing this? Am I tripping? Am I mixing you up with CreepsMcPasta?