This was a really good story. I'm so glad that it didn't sink into becoming a cheesy romance novella between Emily and John. I really love how they kept their relationship in the professional realm; this helped the story remain good ☺️
The tale resonates with themes of loyalty, the cost of success, and the impact of one courageous act. Through her honesty, Emily not only saves David's legacy but finds herself on a path to personal growth and success. This story shows how bravery, even from an unlikely source, can expose deception and open doors to unexpected opportunities.
Wow, this story really takes you on a rollercoaster of emotions! The waitress, Emily, showed so much courage in warning David about his friend's betrayal. She didn't just sit back and let it happen, even though it could have cost her. Her actions ended up changing her own life too, and now she’s got the chance to make a real impact at the company. It’s a reminder that sometimes doing the right thing can have huge, unexpected rewards. I’m so glad David caught onto Ryan's schemes before it was too late, and now Emily is being recognized for her incredible bravery and talents. Truly inspiring!
Trials & tribulations, characters displaying verve and acumen. Betrayal, recovery and progress, this story has it all. Though long, enjoyed every bit 👍👌
only for the waitress David would have lost everything & Ryan' was sly how can a friend do that to someone that to anyone little alone 2 people who grew up together.. good on you David & the waitress. Ryan deserve's everything he gets nothing I hope, fantastic story & fantastic narrator Australia, thanks to the writer,❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
NOBODY with even an ounce of IT intelligence would just plug a USB drive into their computer without first having the IT department test it for viruses or malware. That was a really dumb move!
@@SusanBaileyAmazingEstate I know but if my comments will help save one computer then I stand by what I said! Having your data compromised or even completely destroyed by that one careless act is no fun!
I play these stories quietly when I’m trying to sleep. It gives me something to focus on so my mind doesn’t go all over. I didn’t think of their value to sight-impaired people. They could be good for people trying to perfect their language studies, too.
Wow, what can I say? Wow. This has been an awesome story and there really needs to be a part two or three or four. definitely this should be turned into a movie. Two thumbs up and a five star review. And the narrator was awesome. Best narrator I’ve heard yet in all these stories. If this is an AI, that’s telling them then I’m truly impressed! ❤❤😊
Why did she show up at his office. He didn't send for her. And now all of a sudden he's talking about her by his side. When the hell did that happen ???????????????
I always want to defend this author. Some stories aren't perfect when others are jewels. MAYBE she has to write one a day. Give her room. She's learning and some are SOOOgood!
My Head canon for part 2 Then, after some time, she was able to get David to think about something other than the company. After he finally agreed to her pursuit, eventually he proposed asking for her hand in marriage. After a few years, long enough for both of them to be completely comfortable around each other. She spent her time slowly waiting for David's guard to lower, so she could try to get around the walls he had been built up to protect himself from Ryan's betrayal. Finally, when they decided they'd try to conceive a child together, this gave her the perfect opportunity. So she told him she was going to start adding vitamins and supplements to his breakfast, lunch and dinners to help with their fertility. Slowly, over half a year, she had finally killed him, with the small doses of poison she had added to his meals, while still making it seem like he died from heart failure because he was always over working himself for so long.
Let me get this straight he offered her help to go back to school and even offered her a job but he didn't even offer to help her with her mother of get decent furniture or a decent place to live, what a chump she save his multi million dollar company and that is the best he can do ?????
johndickson435 you are definitely seeing this through a man's eyes. Some women go to a guy and want him to solve her problems. But there are those who will go to a guy asking his opinion or for advice. The guy offers the Moon. She's not after the Moon, she's weighing her options. This gentleman understood her character. He gave her a job, he has given her the means to help herself and her mother. He showed her respect and trust. She wasn't looking for a handout.
Great interesting story, different from most of the stories who have almost similar storyline about a millionaire with a missing daughter wearing a brooch, a necklace, earrings, and what not… same as their daughters’ that had vanished, lost years ago, and so on and so forth🥴😜 Kind of redundant, but this one is very engaging and uplifting 👏❤
Why would Emily keep getting in the middle of this? Her job was finished once she told him anything after that is bad. If she had been an old waitress. I bet he wouldn’t have gave her a 2nd look.
20:02 :The climax occurs when David confronts Ryan with evidence of his betrayal, and Ryan tries to justify his actions, only for David to reveal that Ryan’s accounts are frozen, ending Ryan's plan.
Erm, so how did Emily know about the private office space that David and Ryan often used for confidential discussions and just magically appeared after their confrontation?
So nice to listen to a story without divorce. Well written and narrated
And they didn’t demolish a house! That’s a nice change.
Oh my. This story and the narration was heart warming. So good to see two folks just helping one another!
This was a great story. Narration was crisp, different inflection for different voice.
Well done
. It means a lot to hear that the voices and inflections helped bring the story to life. Your feedback is truly appreciated!
This really a great story. You never people who you think you can trust. Always stay WOKE to every one.
This was a great story. Narration was crisp, different inflection for different voice.
A great story Thank You.💯/💯
A brilliant story.
It is wonderful and educational. Its creativity proves the genuis mind of the author. Thanks for sharing
This was a really good story.
I'm so glad that it didn't sink into becoming a cheesy romance novella between Emily and John. I really love how they kept their relationship in the professional realm; this helped the story remain good ☺️
Who’s John?
Just a mistake it is David
Who's John?
Thank you for a wonderful story. Enjoyed it
I loved the story. Well written and narrated!
Thnx.
Good story, well narrated 🎉
That was a brilliant story and was told with a great voice
A Very good story and well written .
This story should be a Hallmark movie with a sequel of David and Emily becoming romantically involved!!!
I agree. I love Hallmark movies
Very nice to hear a story where the man and woman do not become romantically involved but still play an important roll in each others lives.
Oh is getting there
A relationship based on trust.
You just can't thrust anyone
a little love for a peaceful life
" do not become romantically involved" That's what makes this boring and disappointing
A very good story, well narrated.
narrated the story with feelings and emotions ❤I love it.
Wow ❤ a beautiful story
Lovely story
I like this story
The tale resonates with themes of loyalty, the cost of success, and the impact of one courageous act. Through her honesty, Emily not only saves David's legacy but finds herself on a path to personal growth and success. This story shows how bravery, even from an unlikely source, can expose deception and open doors to unexpected opportunities.
Wow, this story really takes you on a rollercoaster of emotions! The waitress, Emily, showed so much courage in warning David about his friend's betrayal. She didn't just sit back and let it happen, even though it could have cost her. Her actions ended up changing her own life too, and now she’s got the chance to make a real impact at the company. It’s a reminder that sometimes doing the right thing can have huge, unexpected rewards. I’m so glad David caught onto Ryan's schemes before it was too late, and now Emily is being recognized for her incredible bravery and talents. Truly inspiring!
this is amazing story, i love it. thank you so much for sharing
this was very great story bro. well done
Trials & tribulations, characters displaying verve and acumen. Betrayal, recovery and progress, this story has it all. Though long, enjoyed every bit 👍👌
A line from an old movie. "The first step in avoiding a trap is knowing of its existence." It seems to apply in the this story.
Greedy can change a good person.
Well done good story
only for the waitress David would have lost everything & Ryan' was sly how can a friend do that to someone that to anyone little alone 2 people who grew up together.. good on you David & the waitress. Ryan deserve's everything he gets nothing I hope, fantastic story & fantastic narrator
Australia, thanks to the writer,❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
NOBODY with even an ounce of IT intelligence would just plug a USB drive into their computer without first having the IT department test it for viruses or malware. That was a really dumb move!
Lol
Come on! You can’t be that persnickety. Half of these story channels can’t keep pronouns and names straight.
@@SusanBaileyAmazingEstate I know but if my comments will help save one computer then I stand by what I said! Having your data compromised or even completely destroyed by that one careless act is no fun!
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Good story 👍👍
It's an incredible story . I loved it.
❤this story great story Rated 10 10
Yes, a really nice to listen to narrator.
I just wanted to thank you for your audio stories I suffer with poor vision so I no longer read books this is perfect for me ❤
I play these stories quietly when I’m trying to sleep. It gives me something to focus on so my mind doesn’t go all over. I didn’t think of their value to sight-impaired people. They could be good for people trying to perfect their language studies, too.
Excellent story 🎉😊
One of my favorite stories.
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Wow! Emily was so brave to warn David about Ryan. Not everyone would have the courage to speak up like that. 👏
Stories like this make me feel grateful for the little things in life. Thank you for sharing something so powerful.
Great story 👍🏼
Good story
This is proof that speaking up at the right moment can lead to something truly extraordinary. What a twist!"
finally a AI narrator that is easy on the ears.
Really good narrator
Wow, what can I say? Wow. This has been an awesome story and there really needs to be a part two or three or four. definitely this should be turned into a movie. Two thumbs up and a five star review. And the narrator was awesome. Best narrator I’ve heard yet in all these stories. If this is an AI, that’s telling them then I’m truly impressed! ❤❤😊
This was one of your best stories.
Good lesson learnt.. well heeded advise.. even ur best friend will betrayed for rank n for money.. greed
Everything is fine except that David couldn't stand in the doorway and talk with Emily for so long. Rest is fine. A very good story.
Ryan was in the doorway. David was at the table.
good story. I like this , please write more . thanks
For sure, I always look out for those. They make the lows a bit easier to handle, keeping you in the game longer
Don't forget that she has a lot of courage.
Exactly, that cashback has come in handy more than once for me. Turns a bad day around a bit
good story
That was a nice story…
Definitely considering it, especially with cricket season in full swing. Could use that bonus for some extra bets
Such a good story! I love it
Yes and their crash games are pretty cool too started on a recommendation from a friend and now I’m hooked
Heard from my cousin about their loyalty program he’s been getting rewards left and right
I used my bonus on roulette and a few slots. There’s something about that initial extra padding that makes it more fun
Yeah, it's great how they offer those. Helps smooth out the ups and downs a bit. Do you usually go for games of chance or strategy
Never trust anyone with your money , company or family.
I have learned that lesson
Ryan should have talked to David. He would have listened and made changes. Acting on jealous feelings never ends well.
Nice story without the usual romance, marriage, and divorce.
The Vegas trip was a clever way to set the mood for the story, but wow, the cheating reveal really hit hard.
Huh?
stories which i love most❤
"didn't quite reach his eyes...." In every story.....
Wow! Everything happened for good.
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Looks like that warning made a big impact! Wonder what the story is behind that luxury car showing up… 🚗💼👀
Nice movie loved it
Yeah, I claimed it right when I signed up. It really helps test out different games without too much risk. You thinking about signing up
Why did she show up at his office. He didn't send for her. And now all of a sudden he's talking about her by his side. When the hell did that happen ???????????????
How did Emily land up at David's office when he broke the deal with Ryan.
I love this story I don't want it to end I'm glad Rayan paid for he's betrayal
Also, there’s a referral bonus if you bring friends over. Good way to make some extra cash if you know people who’d be interested
How did 'Emily' get into 'David's' company/office?
I know right?!
She wasn't inside. She was waiting outside!
Wouldn't it be great if one of these AMAZING critics decide to write the perfect story?
great he is bringing emily on board.
They’ve also got cashback offers, which are great for those unlucky days. Have you used any of those yet
It would be nice if Emily and David got married
By the way, have you seen the reload bonuses? Perfect for keeping the momentum going
There are so many things that are just NOT explained in this story.
I always want to defend this author. Some stories aren't perfect when others are jewels. MAYBE she has to write one a day. Give her room. She's learning and some are SOOOgood!
A mazing story.
I was hoping getting in love😂❤🎉
Several wrong transcription errors -- lead is transcribed as LED; an apostrophe should stay with its s abs both should stay with their word;
Much better than most AI stories!
My Head canon for part 2
Then, after some time, she was able to get David to think about something other than the company. After he finally agreed to her pursuit, eventually he proposed asking for her hand in marriage. After a few years, long enough for both of them to be completely comfortable around each other. She spent her time slowly waiting for David's guard to lower, so she could try to get around the walls he had been built up to protect himself from Ryan's betrayal. Finally, when they decided they'd try to conceive a child together, this gave her the perfect opportunity. So she told him she was going to start adding vitamins and supplements to his breakfast, lunch and dinners to help with their fertility. Slowly, over half a year, she had finally killed him, with the small doses of poison she had added to his meals, while still making it seem like he died from heart failure because he was always over working himself for so long.
Them 2 should have gotten married.
Their live game shows are a blast got a bonus just for participating in a quiz
In these stories, beer and freshly brewed coffee seem to feature prominently.
Edit: Oh, and a lot of smirking too.
Yeah, got some cashback last weekend. It’s like getting a second chance which is pretty neat
Will Ryan ever know that Emily was the snitch? Nice story.
Let me get this straight he offered her help to go back to school and even offered her a job but he didn't even offer to help her with her mother of get decent furniture or a decent place to live, what a chump she save his multi million dollar company and that is the best he can do ?????
She would be able to afford to do that with her wage
johndickson435 you are definitely seeing this through a man's eyes. Some women go to a guy and want him to solve her problems. But there are those who will go to a guy asking his opinion or for advice. The guy offers the Moon. She's not after the Moon, she's weighing her options. This gentleman understood her character. He gave her a job, he has given her the means to help herself and her mother. He showed her respect and trust. She wasn't looking for a handout.
@@jeanneconners1177 Exactly for women need the means to be in control of their own lives.
Great interesting story, different from most of the stories who have almost similar storyline about a millionaire with a missing daughter wearing a brooch, a necklace, earrings, and what not… same as their daughters’ that had vanished, lost years ago, and so on and so forth🥴😜 Kind of redundant, but this one is very engaging and uplifting 👏❤
"a mixture of...".this and that sometimes up to 8 different times in one story
Nice…
Why would Emily keep getting in the middle of this? Her job was finished once she told him anything after that is bad. If she had been an old waitress. I bet he wouldn’t have gave her a 2nd look.
Modern day prince finds his princess, just doesn't know it yet.
Help others, you will be helped too by others
20:02 :The climax occurs when David confronts Ryan with evidence of his betrayal, and Ryan tries to justify his actions, only for David to reveal that Ryan’s accounts are frozen, ending Ryan's plan.
What about their referral program? Seems like a good deal if we get a few friends to join up
Erm, so how did Emily know about the private office space that David and Ryan often used for confidential discussions and just magically appeared after their confrontation?