only for the waitress David would have lost everything & Ryan' was sly how can a friend do that to someone that to anyone little alone 2 people who grew up together.. good on you David & the waitress. Ryan deserve's everything he gets nothing I hope, fantastic story & fantastic narrator Australia, thanks to the writer,❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
Wow, this story really takes you on a rollercoaster of emotions! The waitress, Emily, showed so much courage in warning David about his friend's betrayal. She didn't just sit back and let it happen, even though it could have cost her. Her actions ended up changing her own life too, and now she’s got the chance to make a real impact at the company. It’s a reminder that sometimes doing the right thing can have huge, unexpected rewards. I’m so glad David caught onto Ryan's schemes before it was too late, and now Emily is being recognized for her incredible bravery and talents. Truly inspiring!
The tale resonates with themes of loyalty, the cost of success, and the impact of one courageous act. Through her honesty, Emily not only saves David's legacy but finds herself on a path to personal growth and success. This story shows how bravery, even from an unlikely source, can expose deception and open doors to unexpected opportunities.
This was a really good story. I'm so glad that it didn't sink into becoming a cheesy romance novella between Emily and John. I really love how they kept their relationship in the professional realm; this helped the story remain good ☺️
Trials & tribulations, characters displaying verve and acumen. Betrayal, recovery and progress, this story has it all. Though long, enjoyed every bit 👍👌
I play these stories quietly when I’m trying to sleep. It gives me something to focus on so my mind doesn’t go all over. I didn’t think of their value to sight-impaired people. They could be good for people trying to perfect their language studies, too.
Wow, what can I say? Wow. This has been an awesome story and there really needs to be a part two or three or four. definitely this should be turned into a movie. Two thumbs up and a five star review. And the narrator was awesome. Best narrator I’ve heard yet in all these stories. If this is an AI, that’s telling them then I’m truly impressed! ❤❤😊
NOBODY with even an ounce of IT intelligence would just plug a USB drive into their computer without first having the IT department test it for viruses or malware. That was a really dumb move!
@@SusanBaileyAmazingEstate I know but if my comments will help save one computer then I stand by what I said! Having your data compromised or even completely destroyed by that one careless act is no fun!
Why did she show up at his office. He didn't send for her. And now all of a sudden he's talking about her by his side. When the hell did that happen ???????????????
I always want to defend this author. Some stories aren't perfect when others are jewels. MAYBE she has to write one a day. Give her room. She's learning and some are SOOOgood!
Why would Emily keep getting in the middle of this? Her job was finished once she told him anything after that is bad. If she had been an old waitress. I bet he wouldn’t have gave her a 2nd look.
My Head canon for part 2 Then, after some time, she was able to get David to think about something other than the company. After he finally agreed to her pursuit, eventually he proposed asking for her hand in marriage. After a few years, long enough for both of them to be completely comfortable around each other. She spent her time slowly waiting for David's guard to lower, so she could try to get around the walls he had been built up to protect himself from Ryan's betrayal. Finally, when they decided they'd try to conceive a child together, this gave her the perfect opportunity. So she told him she was going to start adding vitamins and supplements to his breakfast, lunch and dinners to help with their fertility. Slowly, over half a year, she had finally killed him, with the small doses of poison she had added to his meals, while still making it seem like he died from heart failure because he was always over working himself for so long.
Great story I look forward to, Listening more of your beautiful stories! Maybe you have a love story to share and read to us, we all need dreams to sleep on Amen.❤❤🫶🫶 Kind regards, Danial Earls From New Westminster, BC, Canada
Erm, so how did Emily know about the private office space that David and Ryan often used for confidential discussions and just magically appeared after their confrontation?
20:02 :The climax occurs when David confronts Ryan with evidence of his betrayal, and Ryan tries to justify his actions, only for David to reveal that Ryan’s accounts are frozen, ending Ryan's plan.
Money and power are a real bitch, and the chance at more more apparently a lot more money and power sometimes people just can’t resist. It’s because they are weak!
Let me get this straight he offered her help to go back to school and even offered her a job but he didn't even offer to help her with her mother of get decent furniture or a decent place to live, what a chump she save his multi million dollar company and that is the best he can do ?????
johndickson435 you are definitely seeing this through a man's eyes. Some women go to a guy and want him to solve her problems. But there are those who will go to a guy asking his opinion or for advice. The guy offers the Moon. She's not after the Moon, she's weighing her options. This gentleman understood her character. He gave her a job, he has given her the means to help herself and her mother. He showed her respect and trust. She wasn't looking for a handout.
Great interesting story, different from most of the stories who have almost similar storyline about a millionaire with a missing daughter wearing a brooch, a necklace, earrings, and what not… same as their daughters’ that had vanished, lost years ago, and so on and so forth🥴😜 Kind of redundant, but this one is very engaging and uplifting 👏❤
simpele greed from someone were you in believed and that you were friends but your friend did realy hate you becors he always thought he was better then him and not deserves too be number 2 but number 1 😢
For goodness' sake, if you must do photo support, use the SAME ACTORS and keep continuity. David wearing a wedding ring early on was weird. No mention of his family. 😮😮
Oh my. This story and the narration was heart warming. So good to see two folks just helping one another!
This really a great story. You never people who you think you can trust. Always stay WOKE to every one.
So nice to listen to a story without divorce. Well written and narrated
And they didn’t demolish a house! That’s a nice change.
This was a great story. Narration was crisp, different inflection for different voice.
I loved the story. Well written and narrated!
Thnx.
A great story Thank You.💯/💯
A very good story, well narrated.
It is wonderful and educational. Its creativity proves the genuis mind of the author. Thanks for sharing
A Very good story and well written .
This was a great story. Narration was crisp, different inflection for different voice.
Well done
. It means a lot to hear that the voices and inflections helped bring the story to life. Your feedback is truly appreciated!
narrated the story with feelings and emotions ❤I love it.
That was a brilliant story and was told with a great voice
Great story !!!❤❤❤
Good story, well narrated 🎉
Thank you for a wonderful story. Enjoyed it
this is amazing story, i love it. thank you so much for sharing
only for the waitress David would have lost everything & Ryan' was sly how can a friend do that to someone that to anyone little alone 2 people who grew up together.. good on you David & the waitress. Ryan deserve's everything he gets nothing I hope, fantastic story & fantastic narrator
Australia, thanks to the writer,❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
Wow, this story really takes you on a rollercoaster of emotions! The waitress, Emily, showed so much courage in warning David about his friend's betrayal. She didn't just sit back and let it happen, even though it could have cost her. Her actions ended up changing her own life too, and now she’s got the chance to make a real impact at the company. It’s a reminder that sometimes doing the right thing can have huge, unexpected rewards. I’m so glad David caught onto Ryan's schemes before it was too late, and now Emily is being recognized for her incredible bravery and talents. Truly inspiring!
A brilliant story.
Lovely story
The tale resonates with themes of loyalty, the cost of success, and the impact of one courageous act. Through her honesty, Emily not only saves David's legacy but finds herself on a path to personal growth and success. This story shows how bravery, even from an unlikely source, can expose deception and open doors to unexpected opportunities.
Wow ❤ a beautiful story
It's an incredible story . I loved it.
This was a really good story.
I'm so glad that it didn't sink into becoming a cheesy romance novella between Emily and John. I really love how they kept their relationship in the professional realm; this helped the story remain good ☺️
Who’s John?
Just a mistake it is David
Who's John?
Trials & tribulations, characters displaying verve and acumen. Betrayal, recovery and progress, this story has it all. Though long, enjoyed every bit 👍👌
Stories like this make me feel grateful for the little things in life. Thank you for sharing something so powerful.
this was very great story bro. well done
Well done good story
Good story 👍👍
Great story 👍🏼
One of my favorite stories.
Yes, a really nice to listen to narrator.
I just wanted to thank you for your audio stories I suffer with poor vision so I no longer read books this is perfect for me ❤
I play these stories quietly when I’m trying to sleep. It gives me something to focus on so my mind doesn’t go all over. I didn’t think of their value to sight-impaired people. They could be good for people trying to perfect their language studies, too.
I like this story
Good lesson learnt.. well heeded advise.. even ur best friend will betrayed for rank n for money.. greed
A line from an old movie. "The first step in avoiding a trap is knowing of its existence." It seems to apply in the this story.
good story. I like this , please write more . thanks
This was one of your best stories.
Really good narrator
Wow, what can I say? Wow. This has been an awesome story and there really needs to be a part two or three or four. definitely this should be turned into a movie. Two thumbs up and a five star review. And the narrator was awesome. Best narrator I’ve heard yet in all these stories. If this is an AI, that’s telling them then I’m truly impressed! ❤❤😊
Greedy can change a good person.
Good story
This story should be a Hallmark movie with a sequel of David and Emily becoming romantically involved!!!
I agree. I love Hallmark movies
NOBODY with even an ounce of IT intelligence would just plug a USB drive into their computer without first having the IT department test it for viruses or malware. That was a really dumb move!
Lol
Come on! You can’t be that persnickety. Half of these story channels can’t keep pronouns and names straight.
@@SusanBaileyAmazingEstate I know but if my comments will help save one computer then I stand by what I said! Having your data compromised or even completely destroyed by that one careless act is no fun!
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Wow! Emily was so brave to warn David about Ryan. Not everyone would have the courage to speak up like that. 👏
Very nice to hear a story where the man and woman do not become romantically involved but still play an important roll in each others lives.
Oh is getting there
A relationship based on trust.
You just can't thrust anyone
a little love for a peaceful life
" do not become romantically involved" That's what makes this boring and disappointing
Everything is fine except that David couldn't stand in the doorway and talk with Emily for so long. Rest is fine. A very good story.
Ryan was in the doorway. David was at the table.
Such a good story! I love it
finally a AI narrator that is easy on the ears.
good story
Don't forget that she has a lot of courage.
That was a nice story…
Ryan should have talked to David. He would have listened and made changes. Acting on jealous feelings never ends well.
Wow! Everything happened for good.
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great he is bringing emily on board.
Nice story without the usual romance, marriage, and divorce.
How did Emily land up at David's office when he broke the deal with Ryan.
How did 'Emily' get into 'David's' company/office?
I know right?!
She wasn't inside. She was waiting outside!
stories which i love most❤
Much better than most AI stories!
"didn't quite reach his eyes...." In every story.....
I love this story I don't want it to end I'm glad Rayan paid for he's betrayal
Why did she show up at his office. He didn't send for her. And now all of a sudden he's talking about her by his side. When the hell did that happen ???????????????
Never trust anyone with your money , company or family.
I have learned that lesson
The Vegas trip was a clever way to set the mood for the story, but wow, the cheating reveal really hit hard.
Huh?
Nice movie loved it
Several wrong transcription errors -- lead is transcribed as LED; an apostrophe should stay with its s abs both should stay with their word;
Looks like that warning made a big impact! Wonder what the story is behind that luxury car showing up… 🚗💼👀
Wouldn't it be great if one of these AMAZING critics decide to write the perfect story?
It would be nice if Emily and David got married
But.kt would be nice to see them falling in love. I'm a sucker for happy endings.
Will Ryan ever know that Emily was the snitch? Nice story.
Part two?
There are so many things that are just NOT explained in this story.
I always want to defend this author. Some stories aren't perfect when others are jewels. MAYBE she has to write one a day. Give her room. She's learning and some are SOOOgood!
Help others, you will be helped too by others
"a mixture of...".this and that sometimes up to 8 different times in one story
A mazing story.
I was hoping getting in love😂❤🎉
Why would Emily keep getting in the middle of this? Her job was finished once she told him anything after that is bad. If she had been an old waitress. I bet he wouldn’t have gave her a 2nd look.
My Head canon for part 2
Then, after some time, she was able to get David to think about something other than the company. After he finally agreed to her pursuit, eventually he proposed asking for her hand in marriage. After a few years, long enough for both of them to be completely comfortable around each other. She spent her time slowly waiting for David's guard to lower, so she could try to get around the walls he had been built up to protect himself from Ryan's betrayal. Finally, when they decided they'd try to conceive a child together, this gave her the perfect opportunity. So she told him she was going to start adding vitamins and supplements to his breakfast, lunch and dinners to help with their fertility. Slowly, over half a year, she had finally killed him, with the small doses of poison she had added to his meals, while still making it seem like he died from heart failure because he was always over working himself for so long.
Great story I look forward to, Listening more of your beautiful stories!
Maybe you have a love story to share and read to us, we all need dreams to sleep on Amen.❤❤🫶🫶
Kind regards, Danial Earls
From New Westminster, BC, Canada
Erm, so how did Emily know about the private office space that David and Ryan often used for confidential discussions and just magically appeared after their confrontation?
20:02 :The climax occurs when David confronts Ryan with evidence of his betrayal, and Ryan tries to justify his actions, only for David to reveal that Ryan’s accounts are frozen, ending Ryan's plan.
In these stories, beer and freshly brewed coffee seem to feature prominently.
Edit: Oh, and a lot of smirking too.
Money and power are a real bitch, and the chance at more more apparently a lot more money and power sometimes people just can’t resist. It’s because they are weak!
Let me get this straight he offered her help to go back to school and even offered her a job but he didn't even offer to help her with her mother of get decent furniture or a decent place to live, what a chump she save his multi million dollar company and that is the best he can do ?????
She would be able to afford to do that with her wage
johndickson435 you are definitely seeing this through a man's eyes. Some women go to a guy and want him to solve her problems. But there are those who will go to a guy asking his opinion or for advice. The guy offers the Moon. She's not after the Moon, she's weighing her options. This gentleman understood her character. He gave her a job, he has given her the means to help herself and her mother. He showed her respect and trust. She wasn't looking for a handout.
@@jeanneconners1177 Exactly for women need the means to be in control of their own lives.
Great interesting story, different from most of the stories who have almost similar storyline about a millionaire with a missing daughter wearing a brooch, a necklace, earrings, and what not… same as their daughters’ that had vanished, lost years ago, and so on and so forth🥴😜 Kind of redundant, but this one is very engaging and uplifting 👏❤
Modern day prince finds his princess, just doesn't know it yet.
Them 2 should have gotten married.
Nice…
Ryan is so greedy.. you have to tell him!
Hopefully it's a genuine human lector. I am so fed up from artificial voices.
simpele greed from someone were you in believed and that you were friends but your friend did realy hate you becors he always thought he was better then him and not deserves too be number 2 but number 1 😢
Why can't we have a male voice for the male protagonists
Notice David has a wedding band
Emily was such a busybody ...
An author should NEVER use the same phrase more than once
Just curious, why would the waitress be at his meeting with his partner and hiding in the other room? That in itself is wierd.
Wow Is what a story
David looks as if he is married ring on Left hand. Oops !!
For goodness' sake, if you must do photo support, use the SAME ACTORS and keep continuity. David wearing a wedding ring early on was weird. No mention of his family. 😮😮
WELL DONE INDEED. BUT THE SAME Obnoxious MUSIC PLAYS ON IN THE BACKGROUND.