Mate really??? Louis goes to a club and get raped? Come on mate! You guy are killing me with these stories! Stories need to have a realistic feel that regular people can relate to! You don't just get raped in a regular club! Or even a gay club mate! Unless i don't know what damn club they went to, and I live in New York City! So come on with that stuff! Please make it believable! I was good! I mean you have the right feel as to how sexual they are or were to each other so far! But I want more!
Waaahh! I just love fanfictions > . < . It shows your creativity in writing a story > ×
3:52 im crying so hard
0:32 omg me too harry!!(:
1:18 i laughed so hard
Loved it! Next please :))
More! I love it :)
I feel bad of Louis
Love it!! Next please :)
really good:)
im crying so hard!!!!!!!
I loved this one
Love Louis
crying
Haha louis hid in the closet XD get it? and i was crying too... :'(
Wow that musta hurt
i will post another part asap but there's something wrong with my laptop sorryy!! x
you better get harrys mind off that discusting girl and make him save louis and louis does not get anything else to happen to him
next plz
Please post I want to see what happens next
Where is part 2 ?????
What was the first song. Called
Jasmin Zarate read all about it part III :)
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Mate really??? Louis goes to a club and get raped? Come on mate! You guy are killing me with these stories! Stories need to have a realistic feel that regular people can relate to! You don't just get raped in a regular club! Or even a gay club mate! Unless i don't know what damn club they went to, and I live in New York City! So come on with that stuff! Please make it believable! I was good! I mean you have the right feel as to how sexual they are or were to each other so far! But I want more!