Look Ill be honest but the production value for the size of your channel is really high, and you have great potential. But you can't keep cutting away, it really-really fast paced. To the point you don't even know whats happening, like you get the 1st gym and you cut to the 2nd gym. Without context it makes no sense, and there is no breathing room, which would be important. Also you should be showing all encounters you have for the viewer to have a better understanding, and react to them the same way you do. And next time maybe add a death counter too. Overall a Good video, hopefully you take in account some of the criticism. Ps. Play Pokémon Reborn for a different challenge(not nuzlocke)
I genuinely appreciate your advice man and I totally agree. I sacrificed coherence for a shorter video but I do agree that in doing so the video came out weird. Thank you for the feedback🫶
@HimothyVonHim Yeah in terms of coherency there were none. You Need to add more character to it, be more confident in selling/presenting yourself. Because its a singleplayer game you Need to come up with your way of commenting. Either cut in more memes or add more commentary where you describe your plan on fights. But keep up the Good work because you NEED to make mistakes to progress. Also please play pokémon Reborn or Rejuvenation (I beg)
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Norman having a Rayquaza was not something I was expecting🤣
0:59 I shit my brains laughing… at least it was a stupid snivey
i love randomisers like this and LG/FR they literally make the series hilarious with just the outcomes
They can be a load of absolute shit sometimes though 😂
Dude that thumbnail is so sick! Great video to!
Appreciate you!🫶
Look Ill be honest but the production value for the size of your channel is really high, and you have great potential.
But you can't keep cutting away, it really-really fast paced. To the point you don't even know whats happening, like you get the 1st gym and you cut to the 2nd gym. Without context it makes no sense, and there is no breathing room, which would be important.
Also you should be showing all encounters you have for the viewer to have a better understanding, and react to them the same way you do. And next time maybe add a death counter too.
Overall a Good video, hopefully you take in account some of the criticism.
Ps. Play Pokémon Reborn for a different challenge(not nuzlocke)
I genuinely appreciate your advice man and I totally agree. I sacrificed coherence for a shorter video but I do agree that in doing so the video came out weird. Thank you for the feedback🫶
@HimothyVonHim Yeah in terms of coherency there were none. You Need to add more character to it, be more confident in selling/presenting yourself. Because its a singleplayer game you Need to come up with your way of commenting.
Either cut in more memes or add more commentary where you describe your plan on fights. But keep up the Good work because you NEED to make mistakes to progress.
Also please play pokémon Reborn or Rejuvenation (I beg)