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  • The steely stare of the bitter and lone writer need not be in vane! Why struggle to write a hero when you can write an antihero instead? Antiheroes are way cooler which means a writer can put even less effort into them than other characters! Even better, maturity is optional when writing an antihero. The best antiheroes are the ones that conform to what a 13 year old thinks is cool! A writer can even skimp on dialog when it comes to writing an antihero! So dial your self-awareness back and get ready to brood up a storm as we write an antihero. Just be careful to not cut yourself on all the edginess. Read my honest thoughts on antiheroes here: jpbeaubien.com/...
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Комментарии • 4 тыс.

  • @TerribleWritingAdvice
    @TerribleWritingAdvice  7 лет назад +7392

    For the record, Berserk is my favorite story and I think that Guts is an amazing protagonist and antihero. I love his design which I referenced when making the character for the antihero in the video along with drawing inspiration from Image comics and 80s action films.
    Unfortunately, success spawns imitators who often fail to imitate the deeper themes and elements that make Berserk such a great character driven story. So no, this video is not a dig at Berserk or Guts. Instead, the video proposes what such a character might be like if a less skilled author read Berserk and decided to try to write an antihero by essentially copying the surface elements and ignoring the deeper themes of the story and more subtle nuances of characterization Guts receives throughout the story.

    • @DrArthurCGarp
      @DrArthurCGarp 7 лет назад +151

      Terrible Writing Advice
      What do you think of Kratos? He's an anti hero that a lot of people hate

    • @mkultraenjoyer
      @mkultraenjoyer 7 лет назад +269

      actually pretty ironic because i was gonna mention guts as an amazing antihero

    • @horricule451
      @horricule451 7 лет назад +58

      Needs more likes, it's a good explanation.

    • @drakeunderscoremason
      @drakeunderscoremason 7 лет назад +255

      I saw the thumbnail and thought to myself, oh boy he's gonna rag on my boi Gattsu isn't he.

    • @benevolentworldexploder5395
      @benevolentworldexploder5395 7 лет назад +176

      Honestly as much as I love Berserk and think Guts has some pretty deep character; it isn't something that needs justification even if you were to rag on it. Particularly since I was certain that your video wasn't about Guts, but about how antihero writing has become this trend that people follow without possessing the knowledge to understand how an antihero should work as an authentic part of their story.
      I have some news though, brace yourselves everyone, Guts isn't the only "antihero" worth discussing.

  • @agitodragoon3736
    @agitodragoon3736 4 года назад +4017

    "I'm morally ambiguous."
    *"You just killed hundreds of innocent people."*
    "You don't understand me."

    • @DonVigaDeFierro
      @DonVigaDeFierro 3 года назад +396

      You can still make it morally ambiguous:
      - By killing them, he saved MILLIONS of innocent people.
      - He was forced to do it by the bad guy.
      - It's part of a plan to destroy the bad guy that does worse things all the time.
      - The world is so garbage that mass murder is just considered a misdemeanor.
      - He did it on his past when he was an idiot, and he now must carry the weight of the dead in his conscience.
      - He was convinced they were not innocent at all.
      - He practices a religion that makes human sacrifices a regular part of life, but is a good guy in everything else.
      - The situation was so desperate that "collateral damage" was acceptable.
      - He did it to spare them a fate worse than death.
      - Uhhh... It really was an accident he caused, but he's convinced it was the bad guy's fault...
      - Uhhh...He literally can't tell apart good from evil and if he ever does good is because he's blindly following orders from the actual heroes...
      - Uhhh... He knows that is wrong, but he has been sentenced to summary execution for a crime he didn't commit, and after years of being on the run he no longer cares following the law... And the bad guy is worse.
      I don't know... Effort, amirite?

    • @Scout-164
      @Scout-164 3 года назад +42

      Sounds like The Punisher.

    • @wisemankugelmemicus1701
      @wisemankugelmemicus1701 3 года назад +100

      @@DonVigaDeFierro I got one, unbeknownst to most people those thousands of innocents were possessed by malevolent spirits and he's so broken from his past trauma that he simply could do what had to be done

    • @criticalthinkingconcubus
      @criticalthinkingconcubus 3 года назад +40

      That’s why I like Guts from Berserk. He is by no means a hero, but he’s not a completely terrible person.

    • @ametsunami4070
      @ametsunami4070 3 года назад +2

      Odin sphere in a nutshell

  • @LordSusaga
    @LordSusaga 7 лет назад +6552

    You missed the most important part of the anti-hero! Once he slaughters his way up to the villain with more corpses than have been used to show the villain as a monster, he proves he is NOT evil by refusing to kill said villain, showing everyone how much he has developed in the 5 seconds since his last kill! Bonus points if the love interest gives a quick speech about becoming "just like him" to make the situation appear more complex.

    • @Underworlder5
      @Underworlder5 7 лет назад +577

      standard mook, who was probably blackmailed into helping the main antagonist or is just trying to make a living: butcher him
      main antagonist, who is responsible for everything and wants to commit mass murder: spare, otherwise you are just as bad
      hero logic

    • @sleepingforest3979
      @sleepingforest3979 7 лет назад +69

      BCPowerhouse I absolutely love your comment It so true I hate that cliche too.

    • @Underworlder5
      @Underworlder5 7 лет назад +75

      +Veronique van Dijk selective justice

    • @raulrojas9253
      @raulrojas9253 7 лет назад +19

      that sounds like vegeta in majin buu saga

    • @wolfmatic399
      @wolfmatic399 7 лет назад +9

      Susaga I might have done a slight subversion on that. I hope it's subverted enough.

  • @aninjathtpwndu
    @aninjathtpwndu 7 лет назад +4213

    Anti heroes can be some of the best well written protagonist in any medium but also are some of the easiest to fuck up

    • @PainXIII12
      @PainXIII12 7 лет назад +57

      Joebroe

    • @aninjathtpwndu
      @aninjathtpwndu 7 лет назад +140

      Guts yes?

    • @tudorciubotaru3497
      @tudorciubotaru3497 7 лет назад +42

      Kratos?

    • @brandonontama2415
      @brandonontama2415 7 лет назад +126

      Tudor Ciubotaru Kratos is the antihero that they screwed up.

    • @calemr
      @calemr 7 лет назад +66

      Travis Touchdown (No more heroes) manages to avoid so much of this video, and he's one of my favourite antiheroes.

  • @thekaticorn99
    @thekaticorn99 5 лет назад +4568

    Antihero: *kills everyone*
    Comic relief character: *Z A P P E R S*

    • @randyrichmondiii3415
      @randyrichmondiii3415 4 года назад +34

      @Marc buck and fuck

    • @andrewveeable
      @andrewveeable 4 года назад +62

      “My name is Buck, and I came here to party” 😉

    • @Lapeno456
      @Lapeno456 4 года назад +83

      z o o w e e m a m a

    • @NexusKirin
      @NexusKirin 4 года назад +57

      *W O W Z E R S*

    • @l_rob420
      @l_rob420 4 года назад +15

      Red Hood and Robin basically

  • @katrinasis
    @katrinasis 7 лет назад +3302

    Too much work, just humanize Shadow the Hedgehog and you're good to go.

    • @boergerplays8353
      @boergerplays8353 6 лет назад +52

      Katrinasis LMAO

    • @WTFisTingispingis
      @WTFisTingispingis 6 лет назад +159

      Katrinasis you say "humanize" but now i want to do a fanfic where Shadow DOES get some depth. Or at least he's reacted to the sane way.

    • @orchideqvinox765
      @orchideqvinox765 6 лет назад +2

      Yup 😆

    • @arcticfox4013
      @arcticfox4013 6 лет назад +31

      i mean he had 4-ish games to get some depth

    • @darthvaderdylan
      @darthvaderdylan 6 лет назад +60

      his character was humanised well in the comics but humanising their characters is the last thing SEGA will do.

  • @highdefinitionapollo2189
    @highdefinitionapollo2189 7 лет назад +6071

    I'm gonna write a story about a young chosen one called Mary Sue fighting a war to save the world from an evil empire alongside an elf who went to a magic school with her and a brooding antihero who is also a werewolf set in a post apocalyptic dystopian world while battling slashers that just won't die and aliens that have laser guns but die from pollen allergy all while spreading the message of environmentalism. The story would of course, be resolved through a love triangle.

    • @Q_Tura
      @Q_Tura 7 лет назад +450

      Someone already made that book... How uncreative...

    • @blueflare7687
      @blueflare7687 7 лет назад +321

      High Definition Apollo *Perfusely vomits*

    • @rucealexander2848
      @rucealexander2848 7 лет назад +355

      High Definition Apollo i would read that ironically

    • @crazyinsane500
      @crazyinsane500 7 лет назад +185

      Replace werewolf with kangarooman and you've got Tank Girl.

    • @1992jkwj
      @1992jkwj 7 лет назад +178

      *visible fear*

  • @colbaltmind5696
    @colbaltmind5696 4 года назад +2608

    There’s nothing more of a turnoff than a man becoming a better person, amirite ladies?

    • @iliveinsideyourhouse3943
      @iliveinsideyourhouse3943 4 года назад +133

      Character development be likes

    • @hhh-bu3qj
      @hhh-bu3qj 4 года назад +329

      _The only character development you need is becoming _*_more_*_ edgy!_

    • @GeneralTantzu
      @GeneralTantzu 4 года назад +188

      "I can fix him dad!"

    • @brianaguilar8283
      @brianaguilar8283 4 года назад +132

      It’s only hot if they fix him themselves

    • @davidemura4444
      @davidemura4444 4 года назад +28

      gives you nothing to work with :((

  • @DinsRune
    @DinsRune 4 года назад +660

    My favorite part of Final Fantasy 7 is how Cloud acts exactly like this and everyone makes fun of him for it. What's more, it isn't even his real personality: he's literally just trying to act cool in front of everyone, and the whole party can tell.

    • @sodaftpm185
      @sodaftpm185 3 года назад +14

      The original or the remake?

    • @pedroaugusto-fw2yt
      @pedroaugusto-fw2yt 3 года назад +119

      @@sodaftpm185 both, but in the remake is more obvious

    • @arambles1
      @arambles1 2 года назад +6

      I find it also really funny how Tifa notices that Cloud's acting weird and basically decides not to kick him out because she thinks he's mentally ill

    • @nenmaster5218
      @nenmaster5218 2 года назад +4

      @@arambles1 Have you seen Critical Drinkers Video-Series "Why modern movies suckkk"?

    • @TupocalypseShakur
      @TupocalypseShakur 2 года назад +27

      @@nenmaster5218 isn't that just most of Critical Drinker's content? "So and so bad"

  • @jaiyapapaya
    @jaiyapapaya 7 лет назад +624

    If I buy your book, will you release my family from your dungeon?
    Please?
    It's been a year...

    • @Q_Tura
      @Q_Tura 7 лет назад +39

      Sorry but I called dips on them.

    • @jaiyapapaya
      @jaiyapapaya 7 лет назад +51

      ÈRPÉKA oh fuck. Just don't put them in a love triangle, ok?

    • @Q_Tura
      @Q_Tura 7 лет назад +77

      Jaiya Papaya Too late... I already shipped your parents together... And you won't know who the third one is...
      I am the embodiment of evil! *twirls a fake pair of mustaches*

    • @jaiyapapaya
      @jaiyapapaya 7 лет назад +52

      ÈRPÉKA NOT THE CLICHESSSS

    • @MrTohawk
      @MrTohawk 7 лет назад +10

      The book? You mean Aeon Legion: Labyrinth?

  • @asterluke
    @asterluke 7 лет назад +1014

    The best part of an antihero is they can get an anti-love triangle!

    • @Jasonwolf1495
      @Jasonwolf1495 7 лет назад +195

      asterluke you mean the hate triangle where they hate a character who wont hate them back and thus have to deal with their anger because if the other person hated them back they could be enemies and just fight.

    • @gregorhodson3741
      @gregorhodson3741 7 лет назад +72

      Nah, they usually just get a regular love triangle. Changing the formula is far too much work.

    • @Destroyahx2
      @Destroyahx2 7 лет назад +16

      Gregor Hodson But that doesn't fit with the anti in anti hero. We need not a love triangle, because as you said, can't change the formula. But an innocent, sheltered, and ignorant woman who is an heir to be a space empress, and is the most beautiful in the galaxy fall for him. This is obviously called the bad boy trope, and in no way needs any other explanation to why she manages to break through his tough exterior, and what actually made them meet. You only need to see the anti-hero's past and feel for him, which only makes that woman fall even more for him.
      Edit: I wrote that before the part where he says the love triangle part

    • @hayleybartek8643
      @hayleybartek8643 7 лет назад +15

      Anti-live quadrangles are better. Please refer to "Midsummer Night's Dream" for details.

    • @HonestMagpie
      @HonestMagpie 7 лет назад +8

      @Jeffrey Wasn't that the plot of Lego Batman?

  • @shrimpofdeath5199
    @shrimpofdeath5199 5 лет назад +1238

    "Slashfic writers would ship him with the main hero anyway" - if your books have reached a point when there's fan fiction based on them you already are a successful writer.

    • @brianaguilar8283
      @brianaguilar8283 4 года назад +18

      Lies

    • @princessdee-6580
      @princessdee-6580 4 года назад +191

      The standards of a slashfic writer are much lower than you think. They can and will write about anything. Even the most obscure novel/comic isn't spared or shown mercy.

    • @kompatybilijny9348
      @kompatybilijny9348 3 года назад +10

      @zipit flygirl you are writing a sequel to Don Kichot then?

    • @kompatybilijny9348
      @kompatybilijny9348 3 года назад +5

      @zipit flygirl Will this book of yours be dEeP?

    • @aikotitilai3820
      @aikotitilai3820 3 года назад +31

      @zipit flygirl that's mean that you're a successful writer I guess

  • @amethyst_dawn
    @amethyst_dawn 4 года назад +2488

    TWA: Anti-Heroes becoming full heroes would mean he loses his appeal to women
    Zuko: Allow me to introduce myself

    • @docrofreborn7497
      @docrofreborn7497 4 года назад +250

      Zuko, look, yer honor! *points somewhere*

    • @mahogania5536
      @mahogania5536 3 года назад +300

      I think he actually became *more* popular when he started to become better

    • @zhalosupercell2486
      @zhalosupercell2486 3 года назад +20

      Docrof Reborn she escaped! But how?

    • @DonVigaDeFierro
      @DonVigaDeFierro 3 года назад +104

      Ye, but this is _terrible_ writing advice.

    • @MT-zu2uq
      @MT-zu2uq 3 года назад +72

      @@mahogania5536 The hair helped 😂

  • @MagicalMaster
    @MagicalMaster 7 лет назад +2621

    You know... a good Anti-Hero idea would be one who looks like this guy you've described at first. But then you slowly develop him as simply socially inept so he compensates by trying to scare people off. He's actually painfully lonely but is so afraid of screwing it up that he's more afraid to stop. A painful self cycle that keeps him as the Anti-Hero that we know and loathe.

  • @ThePa1riot
    @ThePa1riot 4 года назад +575

    6:09 After re-watching it, you realize that Zuko has this exact story arc. He does learn to open up and does become a true hero. Still just as popular, Hell his most iconic line is a post-redemption consoling of a friend.
    “. . . That’s rough buddy.”

    • @lemonstarofficial
      @lemonstarofficial 3 года назад +5

      lol

    • @BasedZoomer
      @BasedZoomer 2 года назад +1

      @Crimson Outdoors Co. I rewatch it every two or three years

    • @kimifw58
      @kimifw58 Год назад +16

      That line is only "iconic" because it's weird and awkward. It shows that he tries to help but doesn't know how because he's new at it.

    • @yaqubebased1961
      @yaqubebased1961 10 месяцев назад +1

      Zuko is the actual MC of Avatar

  • @abandonator
    @abandonator 4 года назад +1745

    "..Hmm.." - Geralt of Rivia , Netflix adaptation

    • @clankymocha
      @clankymocha 4 года назад +87

      He's just like that in the games too !
      That's just how geralt is

    • @rayanemabrouki3524
      @rayanemabrouki3524 4 года назад +110

      @@clankymocha but not like the books tho. In the first book he is speaking for hours to a mute priestess, and even interpreting her reactions, to make up responses to his own storytelling.
      And in the games too you can have good dialogues and interactions. The Netflix show is despicable, it just presents an edgy and stupid Geralt.

    • @5Rogi
      @5Rogi 4 года назад +67

      Well, he is an interesting type. Deep down Geralt is a traditional hero, but because he is a mutant he wear a mask of the sociopatic profesionalist as a shield. He's also had the sarcastic view of the world, caused by learning and witnessing of cruel and dumb bahaviors of ,,intelligent" creatures. I don't blame him.

    • @johntimothyvalenzuela8146
      @johntimothyvalenzuela8146 4 года назад +27

      @@rayanemabrouki3524 yeah, they definitely made geralt too edgy on netflix, cavill is definitely good enough though, only character whose adaptation im satisfied with.

    • @chance79th77
      @chance79th77 4 года назад +45

      Don’t forget “Fuck”

  • @jstafriskyhusky2748
    @jstafriskyhusky2748 7 лет назад +299

    My god he covers every book stereotype there is and I love it

  • @FayeSomething
    @FayeSomething 7 лет назад +448

    The read any 90s comic book line is the truest statement I've ever heard all year

    • @kybercat7
      @kybercat7 7 лет назад +24

      I just recalled that chaos comics purgatory series was a thing, it was so cheesy but it was soooooo good, best cheese 1000/10

    • @Mailed-Knight
      @Mailed-Knight 7 лет назад +2

      Man 90's anti-heroe comics, my favorite will always be Deathstroke the Terminator!

    • @ProxyDoug
      @ProxyDoug 7 лет назад +18

      It was still better than what Marvel is doing today.

    • @CidGuerreiro1234
      @CidGuerreiro1234 7 лет назад +7

      Western culture in general was trying way too hard to be cool during the 90's. Music, cartoons, comics... everything.

    • @goodjobeli
      @goodjobeli 7 лет назад

      Douglas Rosa
      Do you mean with comics? Then I agree 100% (even though I quite like secret empire whoops)

  • @manospondylus4896
    @manospondylus4896 7 лет назад +2652

    The best anti-hero is still Wario

    • @retrogamelover2012
      @retrogamelover2012 6 лет назад +58

      What about Deadpool?

    • @cloudyskies2
      @cloudyskies2 6 лет назад +35

      No Ratchet from Ratchet and Clank

    • @Ditidos
      @Ditidos 6 лет назад +89

      It is Kirby.

    • @idkwayta1722
      @idkwayta1722 6 лет назад +12

      lem0n Cheif is a war hero, he is really sacrifice himself selflessly countless time

    • @bobjones4162
      @bobjones4162 6 лет назад +17

      Wario isn't an anti-hero, he doesn't really care about morals.

  • @SuperBatSpider
    @SuperBatSpider 4 года назад +533

    What if the antihero was played straight until he got revenge?
    Then a problem occurs. If he got his revenge, what is he going to do now?
    He didn’t make any plans and getting revenge brought nobody back. He doesn’t even feel better.
    The story keeps going.

    • @zapperil
      @zapperil 4 года назад +27

      There's some people who can turn these into find something that can bring someone back
      Or have him not moving on and preferred to stay alone ( if it's loved one )

    • @5Rogi
      @5Rogi 4 года назад +49

      Leaving him with trauma/PTSD/loneliness.
      Or his adrenaline needs to be satisfied during the battles and his lust for the blood forced him to find a new excuses to kick some ass. Like the Punisher.

    • @ChaosRayZero
      @ChaosRayZero 4 года назад +13

      Or what if he decided at the last moment that revenge wasn't what he wanted after all and he performs a heroic sacrifice to atone for his sins and stop his own revenge plot before it's too late. After his supposed death, it turns out _he actually survived after all,_ except *now he has amnesia* and one of the only things he actually remembers is the death of his loved one, so if he eventually remembers who she was and how upset he was over her death he runs the risk of going on a roaring rampage of revenge all over again! 😜

    • @gfilmer7150
      @gfilmer7150 4 года назад +2

      @@5Rogi Comic Punisher or Netflix Punisher?

    • @5Rogi
      @5Rogi 4 года назад +11

      @@gfilmer7150 Comic. If I remember correctly he has a plot, that deep inside him is the need to fight. Before he lost his family he even changed his surname in order to go to another war.

  • @t850terminator
    @t850terminator 7 лет назад +1489

    CRAWLING IN MY SKIN

    • @ENCHANTMEN_
      @ENCHANTMEN_ 7 лет назад +103

      heh, nothing personnel, kid

    • @yuriwheeler8633
      @yuriwheeler8633 7 лет назад +104

      *I'VE BECOME SO NUMB I CAN'T FEEL YOU THERE!!*

    • @CreeketsCreek
      @CreeketsCreek 6 лет назад +2

      ENCHANTMEN pffft

    • @heliodor7679
      @heliodor7679 6 лет назад +66

      t850terminator CRAWLING IN MY CRRRRAAAAAWLLLLL

    • @account8158
      @account8158 6 лет назад +60

      THESE CRAWLS THEY WILL NOT CRAWL

  • @cresentcube5898
    @cresentcube5898 7 лет назад +373

    I want someone to write a book with all the advises from this channel used.
    oh, wait. let me check.
    The Twilight saga? what's that?

    • @Invisiblelad
      @Invisiblelad 7 лет назад +6

      Moonlightpetal Cherry
      Thank you for the edit! I was really invested in the uncliche story.

    • @ZanathKariashi
      @ZanathKariashi 7 лет назад

      ...how that's VERY CLOSE to the Birth of Democracy propaganda story in Centaur's Worries.

    • @turquoisesnowflake4613
      @turquoisesnowflake4613 7 лет назад +8

      You mean YA novels in general

    • @leephillips4402
      @leephillips4402 6 лет назад +1

      Twillight has antihero's you just don't realise their antihero's cause their so uncool basically the exact opposite of this video

    • @aggressivepie6860
      @aggressivepie6860 4 года назад

      There's even a Love Triangle! :D

  • @monsouranda2822
    @monsouranda2822 7 лет назад +501

    Ahh Guts. The anti-hero done right.

    • @jtktomb8598
      @jtktomb8598 7 лет назад +21

      so goddamn right

    • @raulrojas9253
      @raulrojas9253 7 лет назад +21

      except his fan are fucking retarded. Griffith is bad guy not guts bla bla bla.....is like they dont even read berserk There isnt a BAD GUY ON BERSERK is a Super GRAY STORY in FANTASY and Gore.

    • @locastmincer
      @locastmincer 7 лет назад +6

      ever heard of the PUNISHER?

    • @ghostlobster6631
      @ghostlobster6631 7 лет назад

      was thinking of him too~

    • @youdontknowme2913
      @youdontknowme2913 7 лет назад +2

      Raul Rojas agreed, I don't know why Griffith is considered so evil . I found it irrelevance. What he did was in human but come on he is human too... And one of the best character writing ever .

  • @mixedbagmixesmusic1967
    @mixedbagmixesmusic1967 5 лет назад +342

    Of course you can give him a motive! His mortal enemy killed his father!

    • @brianaguilar8283
      @brianaguilar8283 4 года назад +19

      I’ve never heard that one before

    • @skyfeather5096
      @skyfeather5096 4 года назад +5

      MixingTheArts vegeta .

    • @ChaosRayZero
      @ChaosRayZero 4 года назад +6

      *@MixingTheArts*
      Or a SWAT-like team shot and killed his only friend while they were trying to abduct him.
      _Take your pick._ =^p

    • @stevenhiggins3055
      @stevenhiggins3055 4 года назад +21

      Not his father. His wife.
      It's always the wife.

    • @ChaosRayZero
      @ChaosRayZero 4 года назад +7

      @@stevenhiggins3055 I don't think Shadow The Hedgehog and Maria Robotnik were married. Heck, I don't think Maria was even old enough for that.

  • @corvidaeic2378
    @corvidaeic2378 7 лет назад +541

    A video about anti-heros
    By an anti-hero

    • @rawovunlapin8201
      @rawovunlapin8201 7 лет назад +64

      Whatever...

    • @BlueZeroThree
      @BlueZeroThree 7 лет назад

      I guess that makes it more sense they know what it's like

    • @kaziislam2785
      @kaziislam2785 7 лет назад +12

      Arriaah Ara yeah, by this antihero is one that the writing community (mostly Wattpad) needs, but not one it really deserves.

    • @TheMojaveLamp
      @TheMojaveLamp 7 лет назад +3

      Kazi Islam Truer words were never spoken

    • @corvidaeic2378
      @corvidaeic2378 7 лет назад

      Kazi Islam preach

  • @toasturhztoastbunz896
    @toasturhztoastbunz896 5 лет назад +1451

    "Anti-heroes should be edgy!!"
    Shadow the hedgehog *cough cough*

    • @lonelywolf5659
      @lonelywolf5659 5 лет назад +110

      You know he was never like that in Sonic Adventure 2 right they just turned him into that in Shadow the Hedgehog. Why he was not like that and o-6 but after that ya

    • @incrediblehobson8479
      @incrediblehobson8479 4 года назад +66

      Did you mean "Ow the edge"?

    • @ped3752
      @ped3752 4 года назад +54

      @@lonelywolf5659 Sega tends to fuck up some characters as time goes on, I'm sure this may end soon though.

    • @marianovelardez3771
      @marianovelardez3771 4 года назад +10

      "Shadow" best name ever xd

    • @matthewginman8397
      @matthewginman8397 4 года назад +32

      Edgy the Hedgy.

  • @shenotski
    @shenotski 7 лет назад +1205

    GRIFFITH!!!!

    • @wyattcamp6762
      @wyattcamp6762 7 лет назад +150

      shenotski Guts is the best antihero

    • @irishcream9004
      @irishcream9004 7 лет назад +79

      shenotski humans are weak and we die easily, but no matter how weak we are, no matter how much we are tortured or trampled upon, no matter how much pain we feel, we still want to live.

    • @irishcream9004
      @irishcream9004 7 лет назад +6

      lutin grognon then live long enough to swing back with double the force

    • @partydean17
      @partydean17 7 лет назад +11

      Wait isn't guts the anti hero here?

    • @renel8964
      @renel8964 7 лет назад +10

      CASCA!!!! 😠😱

  • @Spineless-Lobster
    @Spineless-Lobster 4 года назад +361

    “Antiheroes speak a special language consisting only of grunts and short sarcastic quips.”
    Geralt Of Rivia: * Nervous sweating *

    • @Karak-_-
      @Karak-_- 3 года назад +28

      Gervant oscilates between short sarcastic quips and long monologes.

    • @Aredel
      @Aredel 2 года назад +18

      “Sure, what do I know? I’m only a Witcher.”

  • @Meirstein
    @Meirstein 7 лет назад +976

    Now do one on an antivillain. Remember to make his backstory sufficiently sad that we feel sorry for them, and make their goals and motivation so understandable and relatable that we start rooting for them over the hero. Of course, we need the hero to win out in the end, so the antivillain needs to die in some fitting way. When you are going to kill off your antivillain, make sure to have them switch to the good guy's side a week earlier, because heaven forbid that the opposite side have characters that are idealists in their own right that we think maybe didn't deserve to die.

    • @hakuyowane4505
      @hakuyowane4505 6 лет назад +16

      Meirstein *_Did you mean:_*_ Mapleshade_

    • @manictiger
      @manictiger 6 лет назад +39

      So kind of like Magneto? (He dies fighting Sentinels before the time travel thing.)
      Alright, got it.
      A long time ago, in Auschwitz, a boy wanted his mother...

    • @randysavage2585
      @randysavage2585 6 лет назад +4

      Meirstein No such thing as anti villains. Only Heroes, anti heroes, and villains

    • @randysavage2585
      @randysavage2585 6 лет назад +7

      Naseeb Dhaliwal Doesn’t matter. Villains are villains. How well the author writes them determines how relatable they are

    • @randysavage2585
      @randysavage2585 6 лет назад +2

      Naseeb Dhaliwal Not quite

  • @doorto6152
    @doorto6152 7 лет назад +282

    Dare you spend an entire episode on the dreaded love triangle?!

    • @doorto6152
      @doorto6152 7 лет назад +34

      Though seriously, I think you should save the inevitable love triangle episode for your one-year anniversary, or a huge subscriber milestone, like a million.

    • @scottmantooth8785
      @scottmantooth8785 4 года назад +2

      the BERMUDA LOVE TRIANGLE™ (or BLT)...NOTHING ESCAPES its influence or devious grasp on FOOLISH HEARTS and DYSFUNCTIONAL/IRRATIONAL EMOTIONS!!...NO ONE!!!!!

  • @ThatOneLocalWizard
    @ThatOneLocalWizard 4 года назад +248

    He slaughters minions with realative ease
    Makes crushing empires seem such a breeze
    He may lack motive he can't fly
    But this hero's one *HELL* of a guy

  • @robbiebay8868
    @robbiebay8868 4 года назад +591

    Just remember: 'Griffith did everything wrong'

    • @valance10
      @valance10 4 года назад +6

      Robbie Bay shut the fuck up

    • @sandromain
      @sandromain 4 года назад +31

      You deserve Donovan

    • @ashuranero5721
      @ashuranero5721 4 года назад +2

      no

    • @DonVigaDeFierro
      @DonVigaDeFierro 3 года назад +29

      He did nothing wong.
      He put his grasses on.

    • @rango962
      @rango962 3 года назад +76

      Sir you slaughter all your friends to become a super demon and then brought chaos upon a world just to have some few life in peace while the rest of the world gets ravaged by monsters. What do you have to say to your defense?
      I did nothing wrong

  • @FlamraFire
    @FlamraFire 7 лет назад +1509

    The anti-hero you portray looks just like Guts, but that can't be right, Guts is great.

    • @yourmom9931
      @yourmom9931 7 лет назад +536

      Flamra Fire Guts is just a very typical looking antihero even though he's a very well written one.

    • @FlamraFire
      @FlamraFire 7 лет назад +488

      Yeah, Guts even hits a lot of the marks in this video, too. Always wins battles, is out for revenge, wins the love triangle, etc. I guess it just comes down to execution. Guts is more justified in his brooding than most anti-heroes, but he can warm up to people. It's not like he wants to be a mopy brood, the world of Berserk just fucking hates him.

    • @holycowitsdave
      @holycowitsdave 7 лет назад +412

      Basically what you're saying is there's a fine line between a well written Antihero (read; Guts), and a poorly written Edgelord (read; Kirito)

    • @FlamraFire
      @FlamraFire 7 лет назад +309

      Kirito's too bland to classify even as the worst anti-hero.

    • @ApocalypticBlades
      @ApocalypticBlades 7 лет назад +142

      Bret Ginn
      The black trenchcoat and dual wielded longswords disagree

  • @awobbie.3140
    @awobbie.3140 7 лет назад +546

    Terrible Writing Advice: RUclips Comments
    Write "first" if you get the first comment.

    • @SmileytheSmile
      @SmileytheSmile 7 лет назад +55

      Other options:
      "Notification squad where u at?"
      "Nobody cares that you're first."
      "Something sexual involving daddys."

    • @lydiarand4786
      @lydiarand4786 7 лет назад +23

      "Overused meme that no-one liked in the first place"

    • @jeremiaas15
      @jeremiaas15 7 лет назад +11

      Remember to randomly blame a politician!

    • @JC-om7nr
      @JC-om7nr 7 лет назад +3

      FURST

    • @leontrotsky7816
      @leontrotsky7816 7 лет назад +8

      For music videos, "I was brought here by "X"", where "X" is whatever film/TV show the song was most recently in.

  • @DarkThunderism
    @DarkThunderism 7 лет назад +112

    But... Guts is a good antihero...
    I mean... he's pretty stereotypical, but that's because he started the stereotype back in 1989.

    • @loreofmetal5604
      @loreofmetal5604 7 лет назад +24

      True berserk is the OG edgy black swordsman

    • @bloodmachine6049
      @bloodmachine6049 7 лет назад +15

      He is not stereotypical. He is kinda at the start, but it all starts making sense as it goes on.

    • @raulrojas9253
      @raulrojas9253 7 лет назад +1

      jotaro is EDGY AS FUCK and A BAD ANTI HERO XD

    • @youdontknowme2913
      @youdontknowme2913 7 лет назад

      Raul Rojas can't agree now though lol , we all know why his actions were too edgy at the beginning . It makes all sense now

    • @DarkThunderism
      @DarkThunderism 7 лет назад +3

      Raul Rojas
      Yare yare daze.
      You have a bad taste for Joestars.

  • @0mnicorn
    @0mnicorn 4 года назад +255

    Anti-hero? More like anti-social

  • @blueflare7687
    @blueflare7687 7 лет назад +372

    Just give them a dark and tragic past and then proceed to mess with their character to the point where it is unrecognizable to the original character. *COUGH* SHADOW *COUGH*

    • @voltscreamratty
      @voltscreamratty 7 лет назад +11

      HOW DO YOU WORK?!?!!?

    • @InkMossDragon
      @InkMossDragon 7 лет назад +36

      But Shadow's story was already--oooh you are talking about Shadow the Hedgehog. Eh, just pretend the True Route only exists and forget the other crap.
      I still love him tho.

    • @horricule451
      @horricule451 7 лет назад +13

      KING FREAKING CRIMSON. Remember when Shadow was edgy in a FUN way? Man I miss those days

    • @blueflare7687
      @blueflare7687 7 лет назад +10

      Horricule Nowadays he's just a throwaway boss battle. Lets hope Sonic Forces fixes that.

    • @InkMossDragon
      @InkMossDragon 7 лет назад +1

      KING FREAKING CRIMSON I really hope he's just brainwashed in Forces. I can't think of any foreseeable reason why he would be going against Sonic.

  • @TheRhetoricGamer
    @TheRhetoricGamer 7 лет назад +633

    So, Sasuke Uchida?
    1. Dark and brooding with no other character traits? Check.
    2. Has no motivation beyond revenge? Check.
    3. Part of a love triangle he didn't want to be a part of? Check.
    4. Begins with no superpowers compared to other characters until he becomes the focus of the story, where he gains incredibly overpowered abilities (coughSharringanEyecough)? Check.

    • @Supermateo97
      @Supermateo97 7 лет назад +3

      lmao

    • @littleblueclovers
      @littleblueclovers 6 лет назад +93

      cyrad I agree. But for the revenge part, I'm glad that the characters called it out early on. I remember Kakashi going up to him and asking "what are you planning on doing after your revenge plan?" And Sasuke didn't say anything.

    • @TheRhetoricGamer
      @TheRhetoricGamer 6 лет назад +60

      Aye, but putting a lampshade on it doesn't make Sasuke an interesting character. He's boring and cliche.

    • @Boss_Isaac
      @Boss_Isaac 6 лет назад +17

      +cyrad
      Sasuke most definitely isn't dark and broody. He was only eight years old when he returned home to find his clansmen slaughtered with his beloved older brother being responsible. Its not like he was a 12 year old child who knew who was responsible for the act and (understandably) desired to take action against them in order to gain justice for the deaths of his clansmen and move on from that part of his life.

    • @TheRhetoricGamer
      @TheRhetoricGamer 6 лет назад +43

      Boss Isaac So what's your argument that Sasuke isn't dark and brooding?

  • @bobjim4126
    @bobjim4126 7 лет назад +678

    dem berserk references.

    • @poego6045
      @poego6045 7 лет назад +31

      I'll admit, they get better as the manga goes along , but damn, yeah, for sure.

    • @muschkaelsergey4204
      @muschkaelsergey4204 7 лет назад +3

      *Bosporus interresperence!11!

    • @bobjim4126
      @bobjim4126 7 лет назад +10

      Muschkael Sergey
      Jojo referendums*

    • @Kaijuwolf137
      @Kaijuwolf137 7 лет назад +52

      To be fair, Berserk actually uses the strategies he mentions in this video. Guts does open up to others, he has failed, his goal is revenge, and he actually has a personality.

    • @bobjim4126
      @bobjim4126 7 лет назад +44

      Oh, I didn't mean references to the writing (well, mostly). But how he drew in this ep.
      I'm well aware Berserk is written splendidly and that it does uses the (opposite) advice in this vid.

  • @dbsommers1
    @dbsommers1 5 лет назад +114

    I'm proud to say I once had the hero defeat a villain by startling him at dinner and he choked to death on a chickenbone. His anti hero partner was not happy about being one upped like that

    • @milicadiy
      @milicadiy 3 года назад +14

      Where can I find this?

    • @tsm688
      @tsm688 Год назад

      but it remained a mystery

    • @bulletkin_etg
      @bulletkin_etg 10 месяцев назад +3

      probably dnd or something

  • @tuxyben7059
    @tuxyben7059 7 лет назад +210

    I think that after 18 chapters we are advanced enough to move to the next level of love triangle, there's not enough depth, I think we need to bring back the love The dodecahedron

  • @sailoritaly
    @sailoritaly 7 лет назад +567

    I'd like to see your "advice" on the Five Man Band trope

    • @echo5entertainment169
      @echo5entertainment169 7 лет назад +24

      Sailor Italy Look up Trope talk

    • @CidGuerreiro1234
      @CidGuerreiro1234 7 лет назад +30

      TV Tropes has a really good intake on that. It's basically the Leader, the Lancer (guy who constantly challenges the rule of the leader), the Heart (the girl to whom everyone softens up), the Smart Guy and the Big (and usualy dumb) Guy.

    • @TheWampam
      @TheWampam 7 лет назад +2

      That is exactly how a five Man Band should look like, otherwise it wouldn't be one ;)

    • @wakkaseta8351
      @wakkaseta8351 7 лет назад +21

      +lutin grognon
      *"words, words, and more words"*
      You forgot the love triangle! And the guy who joins up later, but was really a spy/traitor. But more importantly, the Love Triangle!

    • @sockclad9066
      @sockclad9066 7 лет назад +11

      So basically JoJo part 3

  • @Left4Cake
    @Left4Cake 7 лет назад +173

    "Where is that damn 4th chaos emerald" -Shadow the Hedghog.

    • @ChaosRayZero
      @ChaosRayZero 4 года назад +19

      *“ 'Bring hope to humanity,' huh? Kinda touching...”*
      *“There's no need to repeat past tragedies! Nobody else ever needs to go through the things that I have!”*
      *“It's all right. I... I will always be with Maria.”*
      *“[That chaos emerald,] I no longer need it. I have Maria in my heart.”*
      -all lines Edgy The Hedgie has canonically said in Sonic Battle, but nobody ever quotes for some reason.

    • @johnsalchichon777
      @johnsalchichon777 4 года назад +1

      Do you have diabetes.

    • @sergiorubens8475
      @sergiorubens8475 3 года назад +1

      Renember when shadow was wll writen? I do

  • @pappanalab
    @pappanalab 4 года назад +630

    anti-hero = Brody +Edge lord + asshole+ speaks only in grunts + lives for revenge + tragic backstory = Sasuke

    • @DonVigaDeFierro
      @DonVigaDeFierro 3 года назад +100

      *"SAUCE GAAAAAY!!!"*

    • @saffi_taffi
      @saffi_taffi 3 года назад +79

      Lol omg yes. There were so many overused tropes in Naruto. The helplessly in love female side character who gives nothing to the plot, the oldest and wisest mentor character for the hero’s, the main character being a shone protagonist that wants to become the best because?.... they want to become the best! There, now just make him super annoying and dumb, btu only when the plot needs him to be. At other times he’ll be smart enough to formulate a useful strategy despite having 0 brain cells shown beforehand. And even through all of this, EVERYONE respects him and says how good he is at making friends even though none of that would ever work in real life.

    • @pappanalab
      @pappanalab 3 года назад +71

      @@saffi_taffi Actually I think the protagonist thing wasn’t that common when Naruto first came out.
      Otherwise, yeah, so many tropes.

    • @maramsagheer3399
      @maramsagheer3399 3 года назад +58

      @@saffi_taffi I personally think tropes aren't necessarily bad, they just get a bad rep because some writers completely rely on them and don't develop the characters. Like casca from berserk is a tsundere but she's a fleshed out character

    • @saffi_taffi
      @saffi_taffi 3 года назад +26

      @Supreme Ace lol are you kidding me? Sasuke is literally the king of edge lords.

  • @ToriHiragana
    @ToriHiragana 7 лет назад +418

    I think Zuko is a perfect example of the anti-hero done right. Anyone else agree?

    • @midnight8341
      @midnight8341 7 лет назад +8

      toriloveSubarukun agreed

    • @Carewolf
      @Carewolf 7 лет назад +170

      I think he is more of a reformed villian. A well written one, but he wasn't introduced as a hero, so not really an anti-hero

    • @rgrimund2468
      @rgrimund2468 7 лет назад +57

      Carewolf, his conflict that caused him to go rogue very early was already there. He rarely followed orders to the "T" choosing his own path. I can't really say he is a reformed villain, but more of a vilified antihero.
      It's kind of like how Deadpool came to be. His reason was never conquest, it was money as a mercenary that drove him to do everything he did. He aided both sides of the conflict at different times. Not villain worthy material and not hero worthy either.
      Zuko has redemption that pushed him, not conquest. He was literally a pawn to the villain. Zuko chose a path that was neither good or evil instead. He played major roles in both sides making him more antihero in my book than anything.

    • @OSleeperTactical
      @OSleeperTactical 7 лет назад +9

      toriloveSubarukun I think he was always heroic but on the wrong side. Maybe I'm off base

    • @balabanasireti
      @balabanasireti 7 лет назад +3

      toriloveSubarukun
      He always cared for his crew and uncle and only wanted the Avatar.
      So I don't consider him an anti-hero.

  • @jordanhamann9123
    @jordanhamann9123 7 лет назад +331

    Could you do a video about breaking the 4th wall? I feel it's use is too common, or at least used enough to warrant some fun being poked at it.

    • @sweetpotatobestpotato9893
      @sweetpotatobestpotato9893 6 лет назад +11

      Yes!!

    • @oof-rr5nf
      @oof-rr5nf 6 лет назад +31

      Jordan Hamann You're so right. When it's done with thought, it's hilarious but when written into the story lazily it's like nails on chalkboard for me. Ugkhh.

  • @serialkillerassistant4251
    @serialkillerassistant4251 4 года назад +92

    "WHERE'S THAT DAMN FOURTH CHAOS EMERALD!?" - Edge 10/10

  • @lunariousmoon
    @lunariousmoon 3 года назад +92

    Anti-heroes: *Exist*
    Fangirls: Allow us to write Ourselves with you

    • @Xehanort10
      @Xehanort10 3 года назад +32

      Pure evil villains: Exist.
      Fangirls: Let us write stories about how you're a poor victim and all the terrible things you've done are everyone else's fault.

    • @barrytheflashallen3941
      @barrytheflashallen3941 11 месяцев назад +4

      Anti-Villains: *Exist*
      Fangirls: Let us write how much of a loser you are.

  • @ElvenRaptor
    @ElvenRaptor 5 лет назад +21

    Fiction needs more Han Solos. Not out for revenge, just a guy trying to get by in the world who gets swept up other people's baggage, but proves to be an asset through his grit, cunning, and pragmaticism.

  • @ScariestGhost
    @ScariestGhost 7 лет назад +59

    I see a lot of people bringing up Berserk already but I find that 1. The anti-hero character in this video to look more like an homage to image comics. and 2. While Guts fits some of these stereotypes, he completely contradicts others (vague backstory, lack of character development, lack of consequences to his behaviour)

    • @WTFisTingispingis
      @WTFisTingispingis 6 лет назад +4

      Internet Ghost Guts also isn't entirely glorified either. His life SUCKS and he's kind of a shitty dude even to his friends sometimes.

  • @walterthemighty7549
    @walterthemighty7549 7 лет назад +72

    One of my favorite tropes is when the antihero disappears early on, only to ultimately become an antagonist.

  • @CD-Gaming
    @CD-Gaming 4 года назад +37

    I'm almost tempted to write an antihero parody now, where he has huge swords but beats everyone with little more than the power of his scowls, his withering glare the most powerful weapon in his rather substantial arsenal which he only has to keep his trousers from falling down and his shirt from flying off in the wind and I am gradually growing more and more tempted with each word...

  • @greppim911
    @greppim911 7 лет назад +564

    Deus Ex Machina - Terrible Writing Advice

  • @Greyscal3Rainbow
    @Greyscal3Rainbow 7 лет назад +148

    Subscribing because it was a stab at Berserk imitators that didn't hold up rather than being a hit piece on Berserk that had no grounds. :P

    • @xzenitramx666
      @xzenitramx666 6 лет назад +11

      john chad john whisper in your ear*
      KIRITO

    • @abluetale1016
      @abluetale1016 4 года назад +6

      xzenitramx666 never mention that god for sakes name again.EVER.

    • @N3t0L1n
      @N3t0L1n 4 года назад +2

      goblin slayer manga, that "wannabe" Berserk crap

    • @vincecatubuan7689
      @vincecatubuan7689 4 года назад +12

      @@N3t0L1n Goblinslayer isn't an antihero.
      Have you even read it?

    • @quincy8093
      @quincy8093 4 года назад

      Cough solo leveling cough

  • @doctordoom85
    @doctordoom85 7 лет назад +1012

    Yeah, that's why writers who elevate Batman and Wolverine too highly annoy me. Wolverine was supposed to be more of an underdog but then they made his regeneration absurdly powerful (and while he does take the focus of the majority of the movies, at least they always have Magneto swat him around). And then some writers don't want to write Batman, they want to write BatGOD who can effortlessly take down virtually every superpowered character and has plans for every contingency even if specific situations are too vast to completely predict, because you know, a "normal" dude who got to inherit a massive fortune at a young age and managed before the age of 30 to become the world's greatest detective, one of the best martial artists outside of a few specific characters, well versed in most fields of science, and how to successfully run a company and be a playboy while not getting a wink of sleep during nighttime, clearly that's not pushing Mary Sue levels as it is.......

    • @banon9573
      @banon9573 7 лет назад +54

      With you 100%! I never understood the appeal of either Wolverine or Batman.

    • @whathell6t
      @whathell6t 7 лет назад +5

      B Anon Be glad that the writers did made Wolverines and Batman as a rape victims like Guts the Black Swordsman. That will be going to far here in mainstream media.

    • @manictiger
      @manictiger 6 лет назад +57

      That's why I've always liked Marvel more.
      Marvel has Magneto, which imo, is the real essence of the 'dark side'. It's not just his mother in Auschwitz, but he has everything taken away time and time again, always persecuted by the same people Xavier keeps telling him to open up to.
      His motives make a lot of sense, even if it is the genocide of the human species.
      Compare that to: Anakin gets dumped and then kills of a bunch of kids. Really, George?
      As for Batman-- my sister loves it and I don't have a clue why.
      Where'd the money come from? Does he resell bat droppings as Herbalife, or something?
      Where's his misery coming from? His parents? Millions of kids grow up fine after having lost their parents at a young age and they don't have a castle full of stolen Stark Industries toys.
      I enjoyed most of the Batman stuff (movies, cartoons, etc.), but the fundamental story is pretty crap. The best Batman films just straight up ignore his backstory, just like the best Starwars films just straight up ignore Darth Vader's backstory. No story is better than bad story.

    • @aileenzhao7951
      @aileenzhao7951 6 лет назад +45

      I've always liked how they made Batman and the crew have to hype up on super pills and do weird shit in order to gain a chance at defeating Superman in Gods Among Us. Because Batman cannot headbutt Superman into outer space, contrary to popular belief

    • @sertorrhenclegane
      @sertorrhenclegane 6 лет назад +42

      Well, Batman is normal by comparison of the company he keeps. Outside of that, yes, he's pretty much extraordinary by human standards. But, one must also recall that's a world where men can fly, magic lassos can force you to tell the truth and a ring can help you build giant constructs through sheer force of will.

  • @astrolinn
    @astrolinn 4 года назад +46

    I love how the guy that made the german subtitles translated edgyness with coolness

  • @ranieldale4842
    @ranieldale4842 7 лет назад +117

    Id love to right a story where the anti heroes ' motivation is something uncommon like a dog or someone stole his sandwich. He would be the grown up equivalent of 12 year old edge lords who think they're tough, brooding and cool but freak out if you sneeze round them. The other characters would call him out on his bullshit and the only woman whose interested in him is his mum trying to get him to move out.

    • @OctopusGrift
      @OctopusGrift 7 лет назад +30

      John Wick's motive is nominally to avenge his dog.

    • @yarpen26
      @yarpen26 7 лет назад +45

      Better yet: the villain's dog ate the anti-hero's sandwich. Now that's a quest for revenge I would sign up for.

    • @tejasvenugopal5183
      @tejasvenugopal5183 7 лет назад +8

      Rest in peace Shigechi

    • @loke5052
      @loke5052 7 лет назад +11

      you talking about doom guy from doom 2 xd(his reason for going on a demon slaughter was that they killed his pet bunny)

    • @calamaria3161
      @calamaria3161 6 лет назад

      I'd actually love that

  • @grinnylein
    @grinnylein 7 лет назад +78

    Anti-hero is just the name most mal Mary-Sues have...
    I'm pretty sure they tick of every box if you take any gender specific things out.
    -Dark mysterious past
    -good looks, despite some unusual optical features (scars ect.)
    -for unknown reasons everybody likes them
    -they are just the best
    -they bend the reality around them to make sure they end up on top
    -get the love interest even
    Did I forget anything?

    • @roberthasudungan1546
      @roberthasudungan1546 5 лет назад +6

      Do your research before typing bullshit.

    • @Draber2b
      @Draber2b 5 лет назад +2

      That's exaggerated/flawed but valid criticism.
      Do your's as well.

    • @jeskler
      @jeskler 5 лет назад +4

      Who else would like an anti-hero like that, but he’s self aware and questions why everything is going his way, then goes insane cause of it

    • @phulai4250
      @phulai4250 4 года назад +1

      You were described Mary sue not anti hero.

  • @Jcecil1035
    @Jcecil1035 7 лет назад +66

    This perfectly describes the punisher when being written incorrectly

    • @brodiecrain13
      @brodiecrain13 7 лет назад +8

      Remember that christmas comic where goes out his way to be a dick to a bunch of orphans after killing their sole benefactor right in front of them all because he was a former mobster?
      Seriously wtf!

    • @draconianwarking
      @draconianwarking 7 лет назад +7

      Brodie Crain and that time he literally became a Frankenstein monster

    • @Carewolf
      @Carewolf 7 лет назад +7

      The punisher is POV villian

    • @GigaChadh976
      @GigaChadh976 7 лет назад

      Or that time he was in archie

    • @imbreadth11r5
      @imbreadth11r5 7 лет назад

      Remember how Joss Whedon portrayed him in Runaways?

  • @theunreadyone
    @theunreadyone 4 года назад +105

    Everyone knows that in fiction there are absolutely no consequences to smoking

    • @logopolizer7602
      @logopolizer7602 3 года назад +16

      Unless you're in the original Metal Gear, where it kills you.

    • @johntumahab323
      @johntumahab323 3 года назад +15

      If it makes you feel any better, I did write a story once where a character who was a chain smoker eventually died of lung cancer.

    • @TupocalypseShakur
      @TupocalypseShakur 2 года назад +3

      Reminds of the fact that most Marvel characters who smoked were people who wouldn't die from it (Mr Fantastic, The Thing, Nick Fury Sr, The Hulk and Wolverine) with the few exceptions being Mary Jane and JJJ

    • @jackbloonisverycooltruefact
      @jackbloonisverycooltruefact Год назад

      ​@@logopolizer7602 or if you're in Madness Combat

    • @Batkenpre
      @Batkenpre Год назад

      Unless you're the question

  • @benbotka8010
    @benbotka8010 7 лет назад +752

    GRIIIIIFFIIITH

    • @Weeaboololislayer
      @Weeaboololislayer 7 лет назад +96

      Did nothing wrong

    • @d_wang9836
      @d_wang9836 7 лет назад +64

      Ben Botka Looks like a girl

    • @druffner
      @druffner 7 лет назад +60

      Ben Botka guts get characterized it's ok

    • @miguelrueda1291
      @miguelrueda1291 7 лет назад +8

      Griffith did noting wrong

    • @mason8467
      @mason8467 7 лет назад +12

      Ben Botka ha! But for real...f*ck Griffith

  • @nikkigin3093
    @nikkigin3093 7 лет назад +444

    Why did he just describe Sasuke from Naruto

    • @SmileytheSmile
      @SmileytheSmile 7 лет назад +50

      That guy has a personality,motivation and character development, so he isn't that bad.

    • @nikkigin3093
      @nikkigin3093 7 лет назад +3

      Smiley the Smile lol your right

    • @jedyzichterman358
      @jedyzichterman358 7 лет назад +59

      Smiley the Smile But only after like 300 chapters lol

    • @SmileytheSmile
      @SmileytheSmile 7 лет назад +19

      Patrick Murphy
      I haven't watched the anime in a long time,but as I recall,his personality was mostly shown in the first series in some brief scenes.He's supposed to be one of those "stoic" characters.
      His motivations are pretty clear throughout the series.Mainly because he constantly reminds us about them.
      And moving from "prick" to "murderous prick" is character development by itself.He doesn't become "murderous prick" just like that,without a reason.

    • @SmileytheSmile
      @SmileytheSmile 7 лет назад

      Jedy Zichterman
      I haven't watched the ending.

  • @nanchoparty
    @nanchoparty 7 лет назад +52

    I want some terrible writing advice on philosophy in fiction. Maybe talk about how it's the easiest way to be seen as super deep and pragmatic without understanding a subject at all.

  • @absolutecorrupt9983
    @absolutecorrupt9983 5 лет назад +468

    Nah dude you defintely didn't wear your grasses on
    nothin will be wong wouldn't it

    • @flynn659
      @flynn659 4 года назад +65

      I don't understand could you please
      *Tell me why?*

    • @ness6099
      @ness6099 4 года назад +46

      I wanted to have a convo about Berserk, but since this comment was made 11 months ago...
      *It’s too late, it’s too late!!*

    • @_sargentocoelho_4441
      @_sargentocoelho_4441 4 года назад +27

      You can see just how depressing berserk is when our only fanbase meme is about an opening with broken english

    • @flynn659
      @flynn659 4 года назад +6

      @@_sargentocoelho_4441 What about Griffith did nothing wrong.

    • @_sargentocoelho_4441
      @_sargentocoelho_4441 4 года назад +3

      @@flynn659 Yea that is the ultimate joke

  • @MarMarital
    @MarMarital 7 лет назад +438

    Talk about killing characters and resurecting them!

    • @ashem05
      @ashem05 7 лет назад +93

      Sorry, you misspelled "the comics industry"

    • @Intothevoid-NIB
      @Intothevoid-NIB 7 лет назад +1

      The only example of a character dying and then coming back in comics is (from what I can remember) The Death and Return of Superman and Knightfall (he may as well have died).

    • @Intothevoid-NIB
      @Intothevoid-NIB 7 лет назад +4

      Red Hood's death actually meant something, though, so I'm mot really going to count it. Green Lantern, no. When Lantern's die, they give their ring to a new Lantern. Lantern's do stay dead (if they're not revived as a Black Lantern).

    • @Intothevoid-NIB
      @Intothevoid-NIB 7 лет назад

      He didn't really die, though. He fused with the spectre and came back as Green Lantern later

    • @meavor
      @meavor 7 лет назад +16

      On the one hand: Resurrecting can make the threat of death meaningless, and will make any drama based on death from then on moot; On the other hand: In a character driven story, killing off a character that could still have interesting stories done with them limits the situations you can put characters in.

  • @xomanowar3988
    @xomanowar3988 7 лет назад +275

    You should do a collab with Overlysarcastic productions

    • @paxonite-7bd5
      @paxonite-7bd5 7 лет назад +25

      starnova42 but can he keep up with red?

    • @oof-rr5nf
      @oof-rr5nf 6 лет назад +17

      starnova42 Oh my LORD. Yes. Best idea ever.

    • @TheMamaluigi300
      @TheMamaluigi300 5 лет назад +10

      sagar chowdhary Yes. But can she keep up with him?

    • @TheMojaveLamp
      @TheMojaveLamp 4 года назад +9

      The sarcasm of such a collab would create sarcasm so thick and dense, it would cause a singularity

    • @Fluffkitscripts
      @Fluffkitscripts 4 года назад +1

      To quote emperor Palpatine: Do it!

  • @wunclerlaufenbumcorneliusu7047
    @wunclerlaufenbumcorneliusu7047 7 лет назад +35

    Make sure your anti hero has some hobby or secret quality that is juxtaposing to their overall character.

    • @redkingrauri3769
      @redkingrauri3769 7 лет назад +15

      Wuncler Laufenbum Cornelius Ulysses Albrecht LVX
      He's a loner. He's a mercenary. He's out for revenge and he will cut down anyone who gets in his way. He also knits. He's quite good at knitting.

    • @Deity1
      @Deity1 7 лет назад +4

      VauschthePuca
      Lol, that Demolition Man reference, you almost can't take Stallone's character seriously after that.

    • @redkingrauri3769
      @redkingrauri3769 7 лет назад +3

      If that was a reference, that was completely unintentional. I've never seen Demolition Man.

    • @sodaftpm185
      @sodaftpm185 3 года назад

      So out of character bullshit?

  • @frankdelgrosso8297
    @frankdelgrosso8297 6 лет назад +191

    I love the ending. Anti- heo grows, love intrest say "meh I only like bad boys" Priceless.

    • @ChaosRayZero
      @ChaosRayZero 4 года назад +21

      Love interest? I thought that was a fangirl- probably off to go write some fanfiction set "before he became good and dumb" or something.

    • @5Rogi
      @5Rogi 4 года назад +10

      And sad. But it's a Mary Sue. Shallow heroines longs for a shallow traits.

    • @annalisasauter7935
      @annalisasauter7935 2 года назад +3

      ...and then someone worthy of his affection comes into the fray, and they help one another become the best version of themselves.

  • @ng-lr4nl
    @ng-lr4nl 7 лет назад +115

    Is that Guts in the thumbnail?

    • @Gamefreak2998
      @Gamefreak2998 7 лет назад +3

      Neil Gallardo no, but resembles him slightly

  • @cristhianramirez6939
    @cristhianramirez6939 4 года назад +41

    Don´t forget that the antiheroes in his infinite brooding still has weakness for kids and will do anything to protect them because they remind them of his own children they lost,ex: Frank Castle with Amy, Kratos with Pandora and Joel with Ellie

    • @sodaftpm185
      @sodaftpm185 3 года назад +13

      Shadow the Hedgehog and Maria, Seto Kaiba with Mokuba, Wolverine and X-23, Bruce Wayne and Damian Wayne, etc.

    • @Blitzardø
      @Blitzardø 9 месяцев назад +2

      But that's actually kind of adorable.

  • @nightmarishcompositions4536
    @nightmarishcompositions4536 6 лет назад +33

    I love how you used Guts haha, he's one of the greatest examples of a dark hero/anti-hero ever. There's a lot of mental and emotional trauma, betrayal, abuse of sorts that make his actions and behaviors understandable and in some cases, even worthy of sympathy. He changes a lot over the course of the story, and now he's become almost like a father figure to a group of young folks. He realized the error of his ways without completely changing and losing what made him interesting and strong.

  • @couragew6260
    @couragew6260 4 года назад +59

    1:45 I love how the plan is to get the empire into bankruptcy, which is such a power move that is almost never used.

    • @CCLOSPINA
      @CCLOSPINA 4 года назад +2

      Except Rick in Rick and Morty.

    • @couragew6260
      @couragew6260 4 года назад +10

      Cristian Lopez
      Of course he’s the exception😂
      But seriously, you don’t see anything that involves politics or economy which I get can be sometimes be boring but can be effective if properly illustrated

    • @FreshZCORD
      @FreshZCORD 3 года назад

      Hella smart

    • @warmike
      @warmike 3 года назад

      Littlefinger in ASOIAF used that

    • @TupocalypseShakur
      @TupocalypseShakur 2 года назад +1

      This was a strategy the Hulk of all people considered using to defeat the Minotaur in the Immortal Hulk

  • @skullcrusade3436
    @skullcrusade3436 4 года назад +25

    I see morbidly crude drawing of Guts, I click faster than the speed of photons

  • @MrKago1
    @MrKago1 7 лет назад +1067

    Pssshh, why stop with one brooding, emotionally broken antihero? why stop at a team of them? lets make it, an ENTIRE UNIVERSE OF ANTIHEROES. of course, throw in the occassional mary sue with perfect morals and uncompromising goodness as contrast. hey, we're on to something. we have to name it something. war gets people's attention. War-something. i know, since we're beating people in the face with edginess and nihlism lets use "hammer". Warhammer. akmost, but not big enough. Warhammer 40,000. PERFECT.

    • @MrKago1
      @MrKago1 6 лет назад +47

      A R-R I know. Like the Iron Fists and Iron Warriors track record of avoiding collateral damage. And the BlackTemplars strict adherence to the Codex Astartes. And the Cacaradon's brotherly love. especially towards fellow spess mahreens that undergo minor mutations. I think I've listened to too much Terrible Writting Advice.

    • @manictiger
      @manictiger 6 лет назад +130

      Let's be honest, no one really cares about the writing. We just want to fuck shit up with spiky tanks and spiky machine gunners being shot out of spiky tanks so that spiky airships can suicide crash into the spiky tanks after getting shot down by spiky mechs.
      And also, meltaguns, because meltaguns.

    • @MrKago1
      @MrKago1 6 лет назад +20

      manictiger yes, but even if you want to twirl about as a space pixie killing people with glitter, we've got you you covered. if you like tossin back a few with the boyz while driving monster trukks recklessly, we've got you covered. hell we even have something for ICP fans. every possible iteration of bad writing advice in one setting. like love triangles? Slaanesh is the place, Slaaneshmas is the time. Like shitty emo poetry and wearing all black? You'll be right at home among the Raven Guard. We've got something for everybody at Big Emp's Cliche Emporium. Imperium. What ever. Something for everyone so come on down. Except Mccree, fuck that guy.

    • @WTFisTingispingis
      @WTFisTingispingis 6 лет назад +73

      To be fair, Warhammer was originally a gag. That said nerds took it so seriously that they got jobs writing for GW and took it UBER SERIOUS.

    • @MrKago1
      @MrKago1 6 лет назад +26

      AtticWarrior1994 was wondering where all the heresy was coming from. seems out of place in high scifi. "c'mon dude, its just a game."
      "HERESY! BURN THE HERETIC IN FIRE!" *proceeds t pelt people with dice*

  • @AstroLizard
    @AstroLizard 6 лет назад +773

    For anyone looking to study a great antihero, personally I would recommend Mr. White from Breaking Bad. One of the best examples from a TV series, in my opinion.

    • @leephillips4402
      @leephillips4402 6 лет назад +83

      Isn't he more of an antagonist in a story with no protagonists

    • @husseinbabakrt218
      @husseinbabakrt218 6 лет назад +51

      Closest thing to a protagonist is Jessie.

    • @leephillips4402
      @leephillips4402 6 лет назад +7

      Hussein Babakrt he's just slightly more anti-villain

    • @leephillips4402
      @leephillips4402 6 лет назад +12

      Maybe he should do a video on anti villains

    • @Cernunnnos
      @Cernunnnos 6 лет назад +60

      He's not an anti hero. The story is the birth of a viallain with a minor act of last act redemption.

  • @risottopasty4921
    @risottopasty4921 5 лет назад +243

    I just noticed that all his character's have no scleras (Whites around the pupils and iris), he and the guy from "Amazing writing advice" does, maybe it's some kind of metaphor for all his characters being one sided and non-multidimensional. And the polar opposite version of himself is just and extension of him. Even the people around him don't have scleras. Maybe it's supposed to be an analogy for narcissism, or him only valuing himself.
    That or I just think too much.

    • @yourfriendlyneighborhoodbi6207
      @yourfriendlyneighborhoodbi6207 4 года назад +29

      His personal avatar's a reference to a meme from like 100 years ago lol. That's why it looks the way it does.

    • @stevenhiggins3055
      @stevenhiggins3055 4 года назад +6

      Or maybe it's just because the characters are represented of fictional characters and the writer avatar is a representation of a real person.

    • @stevenstice6683
      @stevenstice6683 3 года назад +7

      A true anti-hero would have the inverse of having only pupils - they would have Youngblood's Disease, where you only have blank white orbs for eyes. Other symptoms include highly exaggerated muscles, constant gritting of teeth, and feeling the need to spout off one-liners that wouldn't be out of place in a Steven Seagal movie.

    • @jessicamartin1160
      @jessicamartin1160 3 года назад

      I don't think it's that deep

  • @grimmonarch521
    @grimmonarch521 7 лет назад +110

    Don't forget to give your anti-hero a badass name or moniker that highlights how badass he is. Like Guts, or shadow.

    • @ichide7
      @ichide7 7 лет назад +18

      Guts is just a name adaptation, he's called Gatsu in his original portray.

    • @PrekiFromPoland
      @PrekiFromPoland 6 лет назад +10

      Or Snake.

    • @Justsomegutswithamustache
      @Justsomegutswithamustache 6 лет назад +23

      Blaster Magician guts is confirmed canon

    • @randysavage2585
      @randysavage2585 6 лет назад +10

      Grim Monarch Hey, lay off on Berserk.

    • @LondonLock
      @LondonLock 6 лет назад +12

      Blaster Magican Gatsu is a common Japanese mispronunciation of guts the mangaka confirmed it to be guts himself

  • @PelinalWhitestrake36
    @PelinalWhitestrake36 7 лет назад +62

    SHIT IS THAT A MOTHERFUCKING BERSERK REFERANCE?!!!
    *CLANG INTENSIFIES *

  • @danielthemaniel7461
    @danielthemaniel7461 7 лет назад +47

    You can make a great comedy seversion by having all the characters react to the antihero's douchbaggary in a realistic way

    • @kimifw58
      @kimifw58 6 лет назад +1

      Like BoJack Horseman?

    • @manictiger
      @manictiger 6 лет назад

      Well, there's always the Steve Jobs movie. That was a realistic portrayal of an anti-hero being an absolute curmudgeon to everyone and being worshiped because of it. Or did you mean someone that isn't the CEO and founder of a mega-billion dollar corp in the middle of a full blown plutocracy?

  • @garycoleman115
    @garycoleman115 4 года назад +135

    To put it in a nutshell
    CORPORATIONS MAKE EDGY ANTY HEROS BECAUSE IT TAKES MINIMAL EFFORT AND THEIR EASLY MARKETABLE AND EASLY BECOME FAN FAVORITES BECAUSE FANS CAN “ IDENTIFY WITH THEIR NO CARE ATTITUDE”

    • @a_naotenhonome780
      @a_naotenhonome780 4 года назад +2

      Kids always like edgy things

    • @mekingtiger9095
      @mekingtiger9095 3 года назад

      @@a_naotenhonome780 Ah, olá pt/br randômico.

    • @megaalex6720
      @megaalex6720 3 года назад

      Well my anti hero wasn't easy nor minimal effort to make, it took quite sometime to fully create a good enough character to have redemption and reasoning.

    • @mekingtiger9095
      @mekingtiger9095 3 года назад +9

      @@megaalex6720 One (kinda obvious though) hint to make a good "edgy" anithero is to make them go through a lot of shit to justify their broken personality. The most obvious example of this is Guts. But of course, give them a human side too.cDon't make your entihero edgy for the sake of being edgy like Shadow.

    • @TupocalypseShakur
      @TupocalypseShakur 2 года назад +1

      Corporations won't lean to far into the character's negative aspects because they still want to make them marketable

  • @intergalactichumanempire9759
    @intergalactichumanempire9759 7 лет назад +1151

    This book is awful. There's barley any connection between chapters and it's all just insulting other books. 1/10.

    • @blueflare7687
      @blueflare7687 7 лет назад +148

      Intergalactic Human Empire
      ... I'm gonna choose to think this is a joke.

    • @d_wang9836
      @d_wang9836 7 лет назад +44

      KING FREAKING CRIMSON. Why the fuck are you here?

    • @CompletelyNewguy
      @CompletelyNewguy 7 лет назад +79

      It is, notice in the beginning of the video it says: Chapter 18?

    • @blueflare7687
      @blueflare7687 7 лет назад +24

      [Yoshikage_Kira] I'm everywhere.

    • @d_wang9836
      @d_wang9836 7 лет назад +19

      KING FREAKING CRIMSON. Same brotha

  • @edm2236
    @edm2236 7 лет назад +119

    The described anti-hero is basically Sasuke Uchiha

    • @ardius9777
      @ardius9777 7 лет назад +9

      Sirfancylot
      Still an ass, tho.

    • @filipferencak2717
      @filipferencak2717 7 лет назад +1

      Not even close due to his incredibly complex story. In fact, his story is the most well written one in Naruto.
      Think about it.

    • @filipferencak2717
      @filipferencak2717 7 лет назад

      And that has something to do with his complex story because?

    • @jonialanen864
      @jonialanen864 7 лет назад +7

      Filip Ferenčak What in his story was complex? He spent first two thirds of the entire story pinballed around on as shallow and pathetically overtheathrical revenge quest like in a game of pong between brooding emos. And then he just scooped himself up from that cesspool by asspulls made by an author out of ideas...
      edit: a few typos

    • @Geznoo
      @Geznoo 7 лет назад +3

      What Sasuke killed all those samurai and deserted the village (Something that used to mean death no questions asked, just ask Zabuza)? Well that's OK because he helped stop two bad guys (Before attempting to assassinate the Kage and his best friend...again.).

  • @dylanwight5764
    @dylanwight5764 7 лет назад +73

    A few years ago, before I'd ever heard of Breaking Bad (because really, the story of my anti-hero is quite similar), I decided that for a friend's super-serious DMing experience, I wanted to throw a curveball into his campaign by roleplaying as a kind-hearted alchemist trying to make enough to support himself and his daughter after his wife died in a goblin raid on his village.
    To do so, he turned to producing illegal substances on the side without regrets. After all, it was well within his skillset and there was an established market for it in our DM's intricately crafted world. He was most definitely the anti-hero of the group, and I was always attempting to derail the party from their mission to either look at some interesting plants or strike up trade arrangements with the bandits we were supposed to be taking care of. Things came to a head when my dude established a goblin slave market in the capital as a way of getting back at the feral creatures that had slaughtered his wife years earlier. This didn't go down well with the rest of the party, and my alchemist found himself left behind one night while the rest of the party went out to complete their mission as ordered. When they returned months later, my alchemist had managed to climb to the top of the criminal underground and had begun to create a drug empire, all within the full knowledge of the city guard whom he had in his pocket with the profits from his venture.
    To compound the issue and to piss off the party even more, he was also getting into the clinical business to treat the addictions his own substances were causing. Eventually, he nominated a successor to his empire and dedicated the remainder of his days to helping the victims of his own ambitious criminal establishment from his clinic, content in the knowledge that he'd seen to his daughter's well-being.
    And that's my anti-hero. A kind old man who put his talents to use in the best way he knew how, unshackled by common morality, in order to both provide for his daughter and to see his wife's killers brought to harsh justice.
    Anti-heroes aren't always who you expect them to be. Sometimes they can be the kind old man who runs the corner store, secretly operating a criminal empire to support a noble cause. Sometimes they can be the captain of the watch, corrupted by personal greed but stuck with an undying romantic notion of honour that saw them begin their career in the first place. But all anti-heroes share one common trait: A willingness to forgo common morality in order to achieve their goals. They don't need to be brooding or enigmatic, but they *must* be pragmatists who will seriously consider all available options without the restraint of society's often arbitrary moral stance.

    • @gabrielpadro5589
      @gabrielpadro5589 7 лет назад +18

      That was pretty cool. I agree that anti-heroes are far more flexible than many people think and that we need more varieties of anti-heroes than just the "Brooding, black wearing badass with a tragic pass" archetype.

    • @dylanwight5764
      @dylanwight5764 7 лет назад +15

      Personally, I feel that the greatest anti-heroes are the type you can't help but want to be around; the charismatic bastards who, despite you knowing that they lead a life that brings gleeful ruination onto those worse than them, are genuinely cheerful and funny characters. Those are the anti-heroes that need more of the limelight.

    • @MidlifeCrisisJoe
      @MidlifeCrisisJoe 7 лет назад +11

      Hmmm. Yeah, the problem is that "anti-hero" and "byronic hero" are usually used interchangably and they're really actually fairly distinct and need not appear in the same character whatsoever. The marks of the Byronic hero are the brooding and the cynicism with maybe a heart of gold under it all. The anti-hero is not necessarily any of that, just a type of hero who tends to reject heroic notions and motivations. A good example that the video gets wrong here is Batman. Batman is very much a byronic hero. He's not really an anti-hero. He definitely has heroic motivations, he's just super brooding about it.
      Like, pretty much ALL Westerns are about anti-heroes because the protagonists are usually in it for pretty selfish reasons. Whether it's just getting a payday on a bounty or finding the buried gold or personal revenge, they're after the villain (or not even after them, just competing with them or confronted by them) not for the sake of a heroic notion like saving the village or because it's about justice being done. If those things happen to occur at the same time, then fine, whatever. No skin off their back. They just wanted the money or that guy wronged them in the past so they needed to die.
      But Walter White wasn't really an anti-hero. More a Villain Protagonist. He goes well beyond the moral event horizons that separate the two and kicks many dogs and cats and kids to let us know that he is not only just morally flexible, but morally irredeemable by the end of Breaking Bad.
      This video also confuses "Anti-hero" with "Lancer" which is also a kind of different archetype in its own right though there is often a lot of overlap. Technically, a lancer (which is the archetype of the guy who is usually the second in command/prominance on a team story, like, if Superman is the leader of the Justice League, the Lancer is Batman on that team, or Wolverine is the Lancer to Cyclops on the X-Men) is just the second in command who has flaws that contrast with the team leader that make them not fit to lead the team even if they constantly talk shit about how they'd be the better leader or have a better idea of how to resolve situations (Wolverine did this CONSTANTLY in X-Men).
      This tends to fit Anti-heroes well, which is why it's done a lot. But there are Anti-Heroes (like, say Conan the Barbarian) who become fine leaders and have their own lancers, and lancers who aren't anti-heroes at all really (like, oh, say Wheeler on Captain Planet or whoever is second fiddle and in conflict with Cap on the Avengers at any given time - usually Hawkeye or Iron Man).

    • @dylanwight5764
      @dylanwight5764 7 лет назад +5

      Great point about Walter White. While he begins with a respectable goal (pay his way through his therapy) with a morally flexible method (use his skills to produce contraband and sell it for more than a few pennies), he slides into the role of a villain protagonist and the audience sees this downfall yet still roots for him despite being repulsed by his actions.

  • @Stynkrat
    @Stynkrat 4 года назад +21

    I had an idea for an anti-hero where he suffers from Emotional Detachment Disorder, so he’s quiet, dark, and brooding because he is mentally unable to be anything but.

  • @DoReMi123acb
    @DoReMi123acb 7 лет назад +52

    Best recent anti-hero= Jaime Lannister (book one not show one)

    • @loxodoncyclotis1823
      @loxodoncyclotis1823 7 лет назад +26

      Sandor Clegane is a pretty good antihero. He manages to check many of the boxes from this video while still being a great character.

    • @apo75018
      @apo75018 6 лет назад

      Yup, the Hound came to my mind first. Deep, interesting and badass character.

    • @ezequielstepanenko3229
      @ezequielstepanenko3229 6 лет назад +2

      If you think about it a lot of Martin's character have antihero qualities and they are all awesome characters, Jaime, Tyrion, Theon, Stannis, Mance Rayder, Victarion,

  • @bitingbison9793
    @bitingbison9793 7 лет назад +148

    I'm still waiting for the cyberpunk technological future type video so I can say I never asked for this. But seriously, all of these videos are great.

  • @Effluvial_Grime
    @Effluvial_Grime 4 года назад +22

    Guts is one of my favorite anti heroes, nothing like a loud CLANG to get your point across.

  • @a.dennis4835
    @a.dennis4835 6 лет назад +11

    I noticed a common problem with antiheroes is that the writer think that the reader will automatically root for the antihero if the antagonist is worse. This usually just results in a story where you can't root anyone.

  • @MrToBeEvil
    @MrToBeEvil 7 лет назад +59

    Wait a second... I'm starting to think this writing advice isn't actually very good.

    • @mauvedragontiddies9244
      @mauvedragontiddies9244 7 лет назад +52

      Nah, it's perfect.
      The author of Sword Art Online uses his advice and look how good it is.

    • @seanurbik5158
      @seanurbik5158 7 лет назад +2

      Matthew Leman and when did you figure this out, might I ask?

    • @magicalmelancholy970
      @magicalmelancholy970 7 лет назад +4

      Der Slendy
      You mean SomethingWitty? The SAO everyone knows is just a bad fanfic didn't you know?

    • @thezerfer9860
      @thezerfer9860 7 лет назад

      Der Slendy hey... sao was great for 14 episodes

    • @raulrojas9253
      @raulrojas9253 7 лет назад

      7 episodes.

  • @yehuda8589
    @yehuda8589 4 года назад +28

    Neku from The World Ends with You is one of my favorite anti-heroes, mainly because no one really likes him specifically BECAUSE of how obnoxiously standoffish and just plain edgy he is. It also helps that Neku doesn't have any tragic backstory or anything like that, he's just a very realistic portrayal of an edgy teenager who think's that he's smarter and more enlightened than everyone else and that other people are just simple-minded sheep.

    • @sodaftpm185
      @sodaftpm185 3 года назад +8

      Neku is legit a compelling anti-hero. I also like how he isn't a try hard unlike Shadow the Hedgehog or Akame. He's just kinda a little shit.

    • @applesandgrapesfordinner4626
      @applesandgrapesfordinner4626 2 года назад +4

      Dear God! I know a teenage coworker at work who is literally like this

    • @yoshisarethebomb
      @yoshisarethebomb 9 месяцев назад

      I like how he changes
      And that one time where
      **SPOILERS**
      He perceives one of the characters as simple minded, but when he finds out it’s actually his favorite artist Cat, it starts a development

  • @GoingSwimmingly
    @GoingSwimmingly 6 лет назад +257

    That moment when I realized that my writing is wonderful just because everyone gets a personality.

    • @benayakeenanhutagalung9798
      @benayakeenanhutagalung9798 4 года назад +15

      Publish

    • @FionaA17
      @FionaA17 4 года назад +2

      Yup

    • @GoingSwimmingly
      @GoingSwimmingly 4 года назад +16

      *I’m too much of a perfectionist but I’ll give it a try.*

    • @lau_taro0037
      @lau_taro0037 3 года назад +4

      It's been three years post the damn link

    • @GoingSwimmingly
      @GoingSwimmingly 3 года назад +13

      @@lau_taro0037 Sir I appreciate your dedication but unfortunately I gave up about a year ago-

  • @tinystank
    @tinystank 4 года назад +15

    “I love how you just sit in the corner and Brood™️”

  • @lohengramm6969
    @lohengramm6969 7 лет назад +137

    3/10
    Not eanough *CLANG*

  • @JustSomeDinosaurPerson
    @JustSomeDinosaurPerson 4 года назад +187

    I ended up preferring anti-heroes as I became adult largely because of how much more relatable they are, especially when you break out of the sheltered [but coveted] view of childhood innocence. The world is a fucked up place and the anti-heroes are generally the ones to explore that more than the heroes. Or, if the heroes do, it hardly ever seems to affect their unwavering judgement and they become less something to aspire to and more something to be perplexed about or irritated by.

    • @gfilmer7150
      @gfilmer7150 4 года назад +17

      Agreed, I'm writing a series where the main character is a vigilante anti-hero and guess what, I have him surrounded with people. When he's in a bar, he's hanging out with friends (old friends from his time in the Special Forces). When he's on a mission (taking on organized crime), he's sometimes working with people so he has someone to either coordinate him or watch his back. Just because he's morally grey, doesn't mean he's a total loner.

    • @Manglet762
      @Manglet762 3 года назад +8

      You make a good point, but your name is REALLY not helping you.

    • @DonVigaDeFierro
      @DonVigaDeFierro 3 года назад +54

      Nah. Optimism is a more difficult choice. Cynicism is an easy escape for the weak:
      The weak take refuge in cynicism, because if the world is a horrible shitty place, they are allowed to be horrible shitty people, right? And cynicism sanctions their greed, dishonesty, entitlement... Is merely an excuse to not be held to the same standards as heroes with pure morals.
      "I can't be Superman because I didn't grow up in a comic book! This is the real world! You can't judge me or what I do!"
      Because when they see a true hero with pure morals, they don't see an ideal to aspire to, but a standard they fall short of.
      People have really missed the point on what a "hero" is supposed to be and represent.

    • @ButterflyScarlet
      @ButterflyScarlet 3 года назад +38

      @@DonVigaDeFierro This exactly. It's fine for people to like anti-heroes, there is something appealing about someone willing to shatter the bureaucracy and get shit done. However people act as though being a cynical asshole who is cruel to others because the world hurt them is something to aspire to. Being kind is not perplexing, being optimistic is not childish, and being helpful is not naive. A sad upbringing is not an excuse to be an asshole, and I think too many writers and readers conveniently forget that in favour of acting as though being a cynical pessimist is something to aspire to.
      Antiheroes are first and foremost very unhappy people, but they do good things. They aren't always good people, but they try to make the world around them a little better. They aren't just cynical for the sake of being cool and edgy.

    • @ChaosRayZero
      @ChaosRayZero 3 года назад +14

      @@ButterflyScarlet "They aren't just cynical for the sake of being cool and edgy."
      *Or at least the **_interesting, well-written ones_** aren't.*

  • @elainetaylor-lewis5417
    @elainetaylor-lewis5417 10 месяцев назад +6

    What about Kanji Tatsumi from Persona 4? He could have easily been an generic angsty, edgy, angry teen, but he actually has depth to him, and is into cute feminine hobbies that leads him to get bullied by teen girls, hence having trust issues at first, but later on in the game sees the main character as his best friend, and even a hero 😭 He is one of my favorite characters not only in videogames, but in any media.
    They also do a lot of funny scenes with Kanji, and are not afraid to poke fun at him 😂 but he still is tough and shouldn't be messed with when there are serious scenes.
    Guts is a close second. He has a lot of depth, and goes through hell throughout his life, but he also keeps going, and is able to fall in love, have friends etc
    Heck, I am warming up to Cloud Strife as a character. The bond he has with Aerith and Tifa is just.... amazing ❤
    I wish all the other generic edgy characters had humanity to them, and are not just boring, miserable, hateful and grouchy all the time, because it "looks cool". Like would it hurt them to enjoy life once in a while, have a laugh, a giggle? Have a hobby? An interest? An interesting personality outside of all the angst and gloom? Shadow, Sasuke, Levi, etc I am looking at you.

    • @sasproject9519
      @sasproject9519 10 месяцев назад +3

      I am glad Kanji Tatsumi is brought up! He is one of my favorite characters too! The poor guy gets teased for being gay, or seen as a weirdo or a creep by girls 😭 all because he is into sewing. Talk about double standards.
      I do agree that Kanji's character is more three dimentional than any poorly written generic edgy character combined.
      Underneath the tough and 'manly' attitude, he is just so cute and adorable 😂 and also really funny 😂

  • @biggiecheese726
    @biggiecheese726 3 года назад +13

    Oddly enough, one of my favorite Anti-heros is Boone from New Vegas. Brooding, badass, and relatable

  • @SegaChamber
    @SegaChamber 7 лет назад +123

    It's kind of ironic that your anti-hero representation looks like Guts from berserk....an anti-hero that's pretty much the opposite of generic

    • @CCLOSPINA
      @CCLOSPINA 6 лет назад +62

      In fact Guts can be considered an example of "tropes are not bad".
      Guts can be considered a "cliche" antihero, but he is very well written.

    • @DxBlackDevilxD
      @DxBlackDevilxD 5 лет назад +39

      found the 13-year old. You know you could have told your opinion without being a dick about it. Even the dude, who made this video wrote, that berserk is one of his favourite storys. Eventhough your arguments are remarkably well written i gotta disagree with you on that one.

    • @kyodarkness9243
      @kyodarkness9243 5 лет назад +9

      To be honest, I think Guts is the original anti-hero

    • @venor2612
      @venor2612 5 лет назад +1

      @@Locksley108 nu

    • @sokkvabekkr5973
      @sokkvabekkr5973 5 лет назад +1

      @@Locksley108 have you ever looked at a single page of the manga

  • @alexpierce9319
    @alexpierce9319 7 лет назад +145

    Now that you've done the all muscle no personality type, how about you do the all brains no personality type. I think it's more common in eastern media but the "keikaku" type that is just overwhelmingly more intelligent then everyone around him.

    • @filipferencak2717
      @filipferencak2717 7 лет назад +17

      cough *Death Note* cough

    • @joseagustincuesta
      @joseagustincuesta 7 лет назад +18

      You mean like a Byronic Hero? Someone like Lelouch?

    • @miguelpereira9859
      @miguelpereira9859 6 лет назад +14

      The generic tech wizard guy.

    • @TheMamaluigi300
      @TheMamaluigi300 5 лет назад +1

      Alex Pierce T E C H N O B A B B L E

    • @Tyler-Kearney
      @Tyler-Kearney 5 лет назад +14

      Why not have both, like Kirito. He's better than anyone else in the game without ever joining a guild, apparently is physically strong enough after effectively having been in a coma for 2 years to overpower Sughou without having had much time to fully recover, was able to use his mad hacking skills to save Yui despite being a teenager and having no knowledge of the source code, and I could go on.

  • @blamblam7578
    @blamblam7578 7 лет назад +58

    Lol your channel has grown a lot since a few months ago. Great job!

  • @Dunmerdog
    @Dunmerdog 4 года назад +12

    An antihero that I find to be entirely overlooked outside of the fandom to which he belongs is Amos Burton from the Leviathan Wakes series/The Expanse. He’s such a brilliantly characterised character for whom people can’t help but feel sympathy anf affection despite his emotionless, violent, and blunt approaches to things.