critique: chops still bad 0:51 still can't get that right 1:05 the octave melody is nice 1:15 work on dynamics and timing 1:31 yum 1:45 C/Eb7 1:56 yum 2:05 probably the closest i'll get to getting the turnaround right 2:22 potentially cookery with chord rhythm in turnaround 3:24 yum stop doing the corny thing with the major thirds 3:45 yum turnaround was nice this time 4:09 the walkup into the melodic line is nice i either do the head shaking unconsciously or its genuinely me looking between my hands 6:30 mistake management (ie improvisation) is solid 6:45 whole tone run terrible overall 6/10 still gotta transcribe like 4 more choruses
critique:
chops still bad
0:51 still can't get that right
1:05 the octave melody is nice
1:15 work on dynamics and timing
1:31 yum
1:45 C/Eb7
1:56 yum
2:05 probably the closest i'll get to getting the turnaround right
2:22 potentially cookery with chord rhythm in turnaround
3:24 yum
stop doing the corny thing with the major thirds
3:45 yum
turnaround was nice this time
4:09 the walkup into the melodic line is nice
i either do the head shaking unconsciously or its genuinely me looking between my hands
6:30 mistake management (ie improvisation) is solid
6:45 whole tone run terrible
overall 6/10
still gotta transcribe like 4 more choruses