Kylo Ren meets Sith Master 'Tor Valum' Scene | Cancelled Ep 9 Script Audiobook #2

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  • Опубликовано: 28 сен 2024
  • An audiobook reading of an excerpt from the original script for Star Wars Episode IX written by Colin Trevorrow in which Kylo Ren seeks out Tor Valum on Remnicore, a Sith Master who once trained Emperor Palpatine.
    Narrator: Nick Preston
    Kylo Ren: Brandon Itzep
    Tor Valum: Ian-Luke Chenet
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  • @CinematicCaptures
    @CinematicCaptures  4 года назад +137

    More episodes coming soon, subscribe to make sure you don't miss them.
    Check out Ep 1 if you haven't seen it yet: ruclips.net/video/ujytO_elrws/видео.html

    • @milagro54
      @milagro54 4 года назад

      I like this music were can I find it

    • @kevinvassago
      @kevinvassago 4 года назад +1

      Yo this is so dope!! Can u plz make some more?? The dual of the fates script is so epic and you really bring it 2 life!

    • @raycreigh
      @raycreigh 3 года назад

      This is so good. I saw part #1 but missed the opening scroll. Did you do that and the star destroyer commandeering? I think that was the opening scene in DOTF script but can't remember?

    • @alexhenderson1312
      @alexhenderson1312 2 года назад

      Very good video, and I loved the voice made for Tor Valum - sort of like a combination of Snoke and Sauron 😎😉👏 and maybe Snoke should have been revealed as the humanoid avatar of Tor Valum rather than as a literal puppet of Darth Sidious! 🤔

  • @therookiewookiee3782
    @therookiewookiee3782 4 года назад +674

    Tor Vallum looks like what the Zeffo were in Jedi: Fallen Order.

    • @omegamaximus1727
      @omegamaximus1727 4 года назад +22

      I was going to say the same thing.

    • @80619Chris
      @80619Chris 4 года назад +77

      You know your comment made me wonder. Is this the spider-like appearance Tor Valum was given in the concept art what happens to Zeffo when they're corrupted by the Dark Side? Eno Cordova mentioned the Zeffo being a peaceful species, indicating that they may have favored the light side of the Force as a culture. So what if Tor Valum was one of the first victims of the Dark Side due to the pride that's mentioned by the vision of the Zeffo Sage you see in Jedi Fallen Order?

    • @yousephkarouni9540
      @yousephkarouni9540 4 года назад +14

      @@80619Chris Apparently that was Kujet. He was the Zeffo sage on Dathomir, who according to Wookiepedia fell to the Dark Side.
      starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Kujet

    • @80619Chris
      @80619Chris 4 года назад +4

      @IVAN NEGA As much as I find that idea interesting, I am admittedly finding a lot of fault with it. Firstly, where does it say that Palpatine had a sister in even Legends canon (one that survived the massacre of his family, anyway)? Second, even Disney has confirmed (so far as I know) that the Mortis gods were the first being with the Zeffo being what I can only suppose are the replacement for the Kwa from Legends canon which would make Tor Vallum more like the Rakata of Legends canon. Lastly, how could the Son have lived on through Palpatine if the Son died when Palpatine was already middle-aged in the Clone Wars? During the TV series, we see the Mortis gods die with "help" from Obi-Wan, Anakin, and Ahsoka. If the Son had any connection to Palpatine beyond being the embodiment of the Dark Side itself, you would think it would do something like diminish Palpatine's power somehow. Lastly, it's been confirmed (much as I hate saying this) that Snoke isn't Plagueis, thanks to TLJ having him killed and Rise of Skywalker revealing copies that Palpatine made. Don't get me wrong, your idea is unique but unless you have a way to effectively explain this all away, it doesn't really work, I'm afraid.

    • @80619Chris
      @80619Chris 4 года назад +3

      @@yousephkarouni9540 I stand corrected but only slightly. Yes Kujet fell but if this had come to film, who's to say he was the only one? The Zeffo had to fall somehow and I seriously doubt Kujet was powerful enough to do it alone. Still, I thank you for sharing this with me!

  • @HoustonSoto
    @HoustonSoto 4 года назад +57

    Great bits of throwback in the dialogue; “that name means nothing to me” - Tor Vallum
    “that name no longer has any meaning for me” - Vader
    & “your fate will be the same as theirs” - Tor Vallum
    “his fate will be the same as ours” - Anakin

  • @EmperorTechno
    @EmperorTechno 4 года назад +138

    I always thought Darth Tenebrous (the original master of Plagueis in Legends) was cool, but this guy that they had planned for Episode 9 is legitimately both intriguing and terrifying at the same time.

    • @ChristianProtossDragoon
      @ChristianProtossDragoon 4 года назад

      @Joseph Douek not really.

    • @puffin5864
      @puffin5864 Год назад

      @@TheStreamThatJakeBuilt Tenebrous is named Rugess Nome

    • @devwilson6301
      @devwilson6301 Год назад

      Darth plagueis could of meet tor valam after killing his sith master in his obsessed mission to live forever and later gave the location to his appearance Darth sidious

  • @ClintBandito
    @ClintBandito 4 года назад +745

    What I liked about Tor was that he wasn't just another bigger in charge sith to take over as villain, he's more of a dark Yoda. And obviously the scenes parallel Degobah too

    • @alexhenderson1312
      @alexhenderson1312 3 года назад +11

      Or even a Dark Side Bendu (Rebels)! 😎👍

    • @qr-code6334
      @qr-code6334 3 года назад +1

      @@alexhenderson1312 well Bendu wasn't strictly a light side user

    • @edchampion3720
      @edchampion3720 3 года назад +8

      That would've been pretty great. Kylo should've mirrored vader and should've been on the dark side until death

    • @alexhenderson1312
      @alexhenderson1312 2 года назад +1

      @@qr-code6334 Very true! 😉👍 The True Balance of the Force perhaps? 🤔😇😎✌️ Here's hoping the Bendu can reappear in some form in other Star Wars media - just as the Eye of Webbish Bog has featured in the Darth Vader comics! 😎😉👍 Maybe Tor Valum too can make a canonical appearance sooner or later? 🤔😇😎🤞🙏

  • @ZyderOfficial
    @ZyderOfficial 4 года назад +180

    The idea of Palpatine wanted Skywalker to achieve a power Darth Vader could not controlate because his state is super insteresting. Also, the fact Tor Valum is a ZEFFO is great (if you played JFO)

    • @azzyasbourne9107
      @azzyasbourne9107 4 года назад +3

      The Zeffo had 2 eyes, but Tor Valum has 6. He can't be a Zeffo.

    • @xaerofour1137
      @xaerofour1137 3 года назад +13

      @@azzyasbourne9107 Darkside powers are known to warp a persons appearance. Give it 7000 years and who knows what darkness and time will do to you.

  • @jlt-kjv2840
    @jlt-kjv2840 4 года назад +21

    This series is amazing. Well done. BTW, Tor Valum's voice is phenomenal.

  • @pastaguy7053
    @pastaguy7053 4 года назад +55

    Calling it right now we're going to get a whole fan film one day based on this script.

    • @kylemajerczyk8160
      @kylemajerczyk8160 4 года назад +2

      I hope so

    • @afterwalker6773
      @afterwalker6773 4 года назад +1

      I doubt it. I wish it were true, but it's not likely.

    • @pastaguy7053
      @pastaguy7053 4 года назад +1

      @@afterwalker6773 Hey this fandom has done stranger/more impossible things.

    • @bensherstinskymusic
      @bensherstinskymusic 4 года назад +1

      Lol!! I've been making a fan-film titled "Kylo Ren: The Supreme Leader" which is inspired by this script! It'll be on my channel soon :)

    • @pastaguy7053
      @pastaguy7053 4 года назад

      Ben Sherstinsky Nice.😊

  • @ninboy01
    @ninboy01 4 года назад +2

    I have the impression that the original scripts for episodes 7-9 were viewed as to “radical” for the studio, so they watered them down into the paint by numbers version of Star Wars that we got.

  • @pancakeface1038
    @pancakeface1038 4 года назад +5

    I got chills from this... oh man so much depth and mystery in this I wish we had more of that in TROS

  • @Marcow321
    @Marcow321 4 года назад +5

    This sounds so good, script and audio performance

  • @TheAutumnWind_RN4L
    @TheAutumnWind_RN4L 4 года назад +24

    So Tor is going to grant Kylo the power of The Son. This idea is far superior to TROS. I'm loving this reading. Thank you!

    • @rash1990ful
      @rash1990ful 4 года назад +3

      Funny, 'cause the Son already died in TCW, along with the Father and Daughter. So it'll be a bit of a stretch to pull a Mortis arc for Ep IX.

    • @TheAutumnWind_RN4L
      @TheAutumnWind_RN4L 4 года назад +2

      @@rash1990ful an avatar of the Daughter follows Ahsoka around for the rest of her life in the form of Morai, the convor, whom the Daughter poured her life essence into before she died. Trevorrow was going to have The Son be the main villain in Duel of The Fates, since they are netherworld entities, and the constructs that govern life and death in the netherworld of the force is different from the material world. Hell, TROS, and the ST even changed how force ghosts can interact with the physical world, so it's all up for debate.

    • @rash1990ful
      @rash1990ful 4 года назад

      @@TheAutumnWind_RN4L True. But it won't really be possible to pull a Mortis arc given that TCW and Rebels both pretty much already resolved it.

  • @Fulcrum_28
    @Fulcrum_28 3 года назад +2

    This is incredible, it just makes me sad though we didn’t get this

  • @BenLaurence
    @BenLaurence 4 года назад +5

    Love these! The artwork that goes along with the script reading is really cool. Looking forward to more!!!

  • @TerraStone
    @TerraStone 4 года назад +14

    I like TROS, but I feel I would of liked this more. This script sounds insane!
    I love how you are bringing it to life

  • @ClintBandito
    @ClintBandito 4 года назад +37

    Great work again. Dunno if I'm a fan of Tor's voice, kinda generic deep rumbly and echoy, don't feel like it portrays his humour either. I like the idea of it being more like Gabriel Woolf's Sutekh, but with a wry amusement. Kinda clam, clear and unfiltered yet cold and condescending with a slight breathiness (?) to it. Not the best at describing it, but you know something a bit more unique sounding to Star Wars. Kinda soft yet cold.

    • @totallyaaron1686
      @totallyaaron1686 4 года назад +9

      I actually find Tor Valum's voice to be intimidating, like he's more than just a physical body.

    • @TheAutumnWind_RN4L
      @TheAutumnWind_RN4L 4 года назад +1

      @@totallyaaron1686 kind of like Orson Welles's Unicron with an echo, and far more sinister.

    • @totallyaaron1686
      @totallyaaron1686 4 года назад +1

      @@TheAutumnWind_RN4L Yeah, like that.

    • @TheAutumnWind_RN4L
      @TheAutumnWind_RN4L 4 года назад

      @@totallyaaron1686 👌🏽

    • @DwightLivesMatter
      @DwightLivesMatter 4 года назад

      I liked and appreciated it...

  • @alexchain3782
    @alexchain3782 28 дней назад

    Tor Valum should be used in future projects! All his Lore, his past, his implications, his motives to stay hidden. It would be amazing to incorporate him in future projects

  • @80619Chris
    @80619Chris 4 года назад +1

    The voice you give Tor Valum sends shivers down my spine. It's ancient, it's gruff, and it's very clearly malevolent, like a long-lasting parasite, feeding on the Living Force. I love it and great job!

  • @UncleLad
    @UncleLad 4 года назад +15

    Had they used this instead, the movie wouldn’t be such a failure.

  • @robertpilgreen5962
    @robertpilgreen5962 4 года назад +2

    LOVE IT: where a distraught Kylo-ren out of desperation seeks new guidance his one ultimate goal and purpose to become more powerful even if it leads to his demise. One word BRILLIANT!! 👍

  • @h3ll_here
    @h3ll_here 4 года назад +3

    I'm happy that they didn't use Valum. If they wanted to show us Plagueis master then it should be Darth Tenebrous. I hate how Disney messes with the canon, why create a new character no one cares about? just use tenebrous.

    • @dangi6516
      @dangi6516 3 года назад

      In the old canon, the spirit of Darth Tenebrous is still "alive". They could use it.

  • @sergioagain8
    @sergioagain8 4 года назад +6

    Video comes out.
    Me: Laugh in sith lord.

    • @natldsbluedelta353
      @natldsbluedelta353 4 года назад +1

      Anyone knows the name of that ethereal, mysterious background music played in this video? Anyone, please? Please let me know, ASAP. Thank you!

  • @jerey2374
    @jerey2374 4 года назад +5

    For me thats mysterious Canon

  • @lukgraphics
    @lukgraphics Год назад

    imagine every movie in the sequels was awesome like this cancelled script. Man that would have been great....

  • @sergioagain8
    @sergioagain8 4 года назад +3

    Long.. have ... I waited.

  • @KingOfShadows1500
    @KingOfShadows1500 4 года назад +1

    Wait, who the hell is Tor Valum? The title says that he trained Plagueis, but we know that Tenebrous trained Plagueis. The description says that he trained Palpatine, but we know that Palgueis trained Palpatine. Can anyone explain this to me?

    • @gridcoregilry666
      @gridcoregilry666 4 года назад

      1: Tenebrous is not official canon
      2: Tor Valum might have trained Palpatine after or before Plagueis.

  • @secla_SC
    @secla_SC 4 года назад +1

    Can you PLEASE make a complete audio book for duel of the Fates? Please, I'll do anything, I'll pay to hear it!

  • @MichaelZillacraft
    @MichaelZillacraft 4 года назад +2

    This script is so good so far.

  • @ShahirHameed
    @ShahirHameed 4 года назад

    Very impressive, and I dig what you did with Tor Vallum. Also, you didn't do the Kuat scene? The Eclipse needs to be seen

  • @BATJAX
    @BATJAX 4 года назад

    Please, please, please keep doing these!

  • @ChristianProtossDragoon
    @ChristianProtossDragoon 4 года назад

    So you made your own canon. Nice!!

  • @hikingviking5069
    @hikingviking5069 4 года назад +3

    Disney: “nah scratch that, sounds too much like Star Wars. Let’s instead scramble in an awkward romance between Kylo & Rey and have every character be on their own social justice crusade.”

  • @Tom-vy3cb
    @Tom-vy3cb 4 года назад +1

    I wish we got this movie

  • @morsecode980
    @morsecode980 4 года назад +6

    So was Tor Valum supposed to be Darth Tenebrous?

    • @donnovandalusong266
      @donnovandalusong266 4 года назад

      Sweet

    • @andreiefectivuatafac1966
      @andreiefectivuatafac1966 3 года назад

      No, Tor Valum is more like a dark side Yoda. He is just a teacher for Kylo. And Tor isnt just Plagueis master, he was probably the master of many Sith for 7000 years

  • @ponchred
    @ponchred 4 года назад

    Evil Yoda throwing out the rule of two. How original...

  • @rightrepublicans133
    @rightrepublicans133 4 года назад +2

    So was this Plageuis’s master or sidious’s master????

    • @harrissyed1417
      @harrissyed1417 4 года назад

      Short answer: He trained both Hego Damask II/Darth Plagueis and Sheev Palpatine/Darth Sidious respectively back when he was the master of both Sith respectively.

  • @negative0zayne930
    @negative0zayne930 4 года назад +1

    Dude this is so cool

  • @xPadge112x
    @xPadge112x 4 года назад +1

    Amazing how a fan service script reads opposed to one that seems hell bent on breaking some sort of imaginary wheel in society.

  • @Ezc.
    @Ezc. 4 года назад

    I NEED THIS VIDEOS IN SPANISH! Good Job mate this account is Brilliant! Love your channel

  • @maceoperez4793
    @maceoperez4793 4 года назад +1

    Please do more kylo vids from duel of fates

  • @cutbygalileo270
    @cutbygalileo270 4 года назад

    Congrats your video is better than the whole movie

  • @Wilhelm_Vennable
    @Wilhelm_Vennable 4 года назад +1

    Wasn't plaguis master tenabrous?

  • @ZosKia523
    @ZosKia523 4 года назад

    Wish we couldve seen this come to fruition!

  • @beegnutzz
    @beegnutzz 4 года назад +1

    "There can only be 2..." Okay.

  • @doloreschansey9556
    @doloreschansey9556 4 года назад

    These are great. Very interesting. The only hole I see is no Plagueis. Palpatine could resurrect himself, why couldn't Plagueis? But his master is still around? Doing nothing for 100 years?

  • @WolfyboiRTCT
    @WolfyboiRTCT 4 года назад +2

    Is he a zeffo??

  • @emzonik8851
    @emzonik8851 3 года назад +2

    WTF Kylo Ren is not a sith and he never claimed to be the sith. He says even on TLJ that he is not one and doesn't wanna be.

  • @frownieclownie
    @frownieclownie 4 года назад +1

    To think we'll never get an episode 9 with as much depth as this

  • @SDguy3030
    @SDguy3030 4 года назад +1

    Disney needs to at least release the jj Abram cut. The sequels had so much potential.

  • @theengineer6213
    @theengineer6213 3 года назад

    And out of nowhere Gandalf pushes Kylo away and says, " Do as i I say! swords are no more use here! "

  • @Novel_X
    @Novel_X 2 года назад

    I thought his master was darth tenebrous and I'm glad it stayed that way

  • @crimlum5224
    @crimlum5224 4 года назад +6

    In TROS, Palpatine is Snoke’s daddy. In DOTF, Tor Valum is Snoke 2.0.

    • @thomasirizarry4401
      @thomasirizarry4401 4 года назад +4

      Tor vallum is implied to be plagueis(probably snoke's) master

    • @donnovandalusong266
      @donnovandalusong266 4 года назад +1

      Thomas Irizarry thats 10x better than what we got.

  • @The_Double_U
    @The_Double_U 2 года назад

    If This was The Real Episode 9, I would've wanted Tony Todd too voice Tor Valum.

  • @TedShatner10
    @TedShatner10 4 года назад

    This creature is much better than Palpatine being resurrected and Snoke being a clone (both which smacked of Small Universe Syndrome).

  • @jacktonzola4115
    @jacktonzola4115 3 года назад

    Great video!
    1:16 if there was one lifeforms detected, then why wouldn't Kylo Ren suspect Tor Valum saying "Reveal yourself."

  • @deadaccount5238
    @deadaccount5238 4 года назад +1

    *And Tor Valum master is Jar Jar Binks*

  • @jmgmarcus808
    @jmgmarcus808 4 года назад +2

    Episode 8 and 9 should be burned, then banned, then burned again.

  • @MarioLuigi2013
    @MarioLuigi2013 4 года назад

    I just found your channel and this video is exciting! I SUBSCRIBED

  • @YouCantKeepMeDown
    @YouCantKeepMeDown 4 года назад

    I like how everyone says Tor Valum is retconning plaguies by being palpatines master himself or everyone says that Valum is plagueis, when the script clearly says Valum was Plagueis’ master. Ironic.

  • @rickbradley5086
    @rickbradley5086 4 года назад +1

    Man, this would have been so cool.

  • @myballzich3270
    @myballzich3270 4 года назад +1

    This would have been really cool but I like dark plagus master in legends

  • @danyilsukaylo7189
    @danyilsukaylo7189 4 года назад

    That would be way more better , I like how they mixed original trilogy , prequels and old republic

  • @ModernLifeDating
    @ModernLifeDating 4 года назад

    MORE!!!!!

  • @pietroflamarion9620
    @pietroflamarion9620 4 года назад +2

    This gives me Dark Souls vibes😨

  • @SCOTGamingwithJack
    @SCOTGamingwithJack 4 года назад +1

    big brain time: make this DLC for lego skywalker saga

  • @DartagnanMagic
    @DartagnanMagic 4 года назад

    Great job.

  • @iceomistar4302
    @iceomistar4302 4 года назад

    Darth Plagueis's Master was a Twi'lek who opened a wound in the force so the Jedi could finally feel the Darkside 800 years after the Ruusan Reformation.

  • @alexschmidt7793
    @alexschmidt7793 4 года назад +1

    Tor Valum ist absolutely cool, I like him!!!!

  • @pbj4928
    @pbj4928 4 года назад

    Okay uhh I think this wouldve been really good?? Doesn't ruins Anakin's sacrifice, adds some interesting world building, Kylo being aware of mortis and trying to become a literal god is very interesting and a perfect goal for a Sith..

  • @plsdontbeahero
    @plsdontbeahero 4 года назад

    This was infinitely better than The Rise of Skywalker. This is what we should’ve got. Disney, y’all got up your game. Great work to the narrators btw

  • @rrensdenn4382
    @rrensdenn4382 4 года назад

    Dude this would have been fucking awesome to c in the movie and love the design of tor

  • @lettuce_boi6630
    @lettuce_boi6630 4 года назад +1

    That was amazing

  • @trodg
    @trodg 2 года назад

    can’t believe this got scrapped over the garbage we actually got

  • @goodmind4940
    @goodmind4940 4 года назад +1

    This script is superior just because Palpatine stays dead... even if I don't like retconning Tenebrous, wait if he is alive why he doesn't continue Rule of Two?

    • @goodmind4940
      @goodmind4940 4 года назад

      Maybe he's something like Abeloth?

  • @staraptorflock3661
    @staraptorflock3661 4 года назад +2

    Tenebrous: Am I a joke to you

  • @slikdeezyg8577
    @slikdeezyg8577 4 года назад +2

    Kyloe a sith? Uhh noo... Hes not a sith. Why did that dude call him a sith.

  • @hoonaticbloggs5402
    @hoonaticbloggs5402 4 года назад

    Episode 9 was a lesson in wasted potential

  • @matro2
    @matro2 2 года назад

    I covet a darker Star Wars so much. Three times darker than what we got in the Old Republic.

  • @JMVuko
    @JMVuko 4 года назад

    Very creative.

  • @emanuelmaquestioncultureau894
    @emanuelmaquestioncultureau894 4 года назад +1

    The sith really don’t care about the rule of 2 anymore

    • @dangi6516
      @dangi6516 3 года назад +1

      Because the rule of two is a product of Darth Bane and not everyone has accepted it. The best example, the fourth Sith after Darth Bane (Darth Millennial) questioned her, leaving him banished by his master (Darth Cognus), who got to know Darth Bane personally and was totally committed to Rule of Two.

  • @stianthomassen6693
    @stianthomassen6693 4 года назад +4

    The new movies was a mess without a red thread through trilogy. Then these gems pops up and you wonder what went wrong. If snoke had died earlier on in the last jedi and this creature came in the middle it had extended the lore much more. I don’t know if the planned for palpatin in episode 9, or if it was just a fan service, because there is no lead up, the read thread is no where to be found. It feels like three analogie movies.

    • @adrianstjarnfaldt395
      @adrianstjarnfaldt395 4 года назад

      Fan service for sure after so manny hated the last jedi Disney need money some will go and se it bechus of Palpatine

  • @Abygoneage
    @Abygoneage 4 года назад

    To be honest, this is really good. The only issue is that
    If episode 9 was good, than there wouldn't be a unifying hatred for the sequels. Thus having no possibility of removing the abominations that is the "sequels".

  • @DRnick2359
    @DRnick2359 4 года назад

    This is soooooo much better.....

  • @ethantrimble958
    @ethantrimble958 4 года назад

    I meant what would be the point of introducing Darth Plagueis’s Master if in the next scene he gets killed by Kylo Ren. Making Tor Valum completely pointless

  • @aidanortega1747
    @aidanortega1747 Год назад

    Disney should release this as a comic at the least

  • @tetsuonikurogane4375
    @tetsuonikurogane4375 4 года назад +1

    Im already making a script.. a fan script to be exact on making Episode 9 better....

    • @allround-dilletant
      @allround-dilletant 4 года назад +1

      oh, this is cool! May I read it, when you're finish?

  • @thomasf.1014
    @thomasf.1014 4 года назад

    This version would of been interesting..i wanna know more of Tor Valum..

  • @brotherhoodofgame
    @brotherhoodofgame 4 года назад +1

    Where's Tenebrous???

    • @luans.40
      @luans.40 4 года назад

      HaTeR ZEALOT In Legends

  • @Bottera82
    @Bottera82 4 года назад

    Can you do the whole
    script as one long video. Or break it up. Thank you

  • @mojo_joju
    @mojo_joju 4 года назад

    Why the heck wasn't this in the actual movie?

  • @Jeerin_
    @Jeerin_ 4 года назад

    i with colin would've stuck true to the original name of Plageus' master

  • @brickcraftproductions3065
    @brickcraftproductions3065 4 года назад

    This is the True Canon of Episode 9, because if Collin's Ship Design was in Galaxy's Edge, then this happened in the Timeline instead of the Non J.J. Cut Version of the Film

  • @devwilson6301
    @devwilson6301 3 года назад

    What if Tor Vallum was a prisoner of Rekata and was the last Zeffo and was mutated twisted by the rekekas horrific dark side experiments on Tor Vallum.

  • @legiongamerworkbruhben6058
    @legiongamerworkbruhben6058 4 года назад

    UGG I think most of us wanted this we "NEEDED Darth PLAGUES tor valin Yoda Luke and ..a better script ): this couldve been episode 8

  • @bradneece2409
    @bradneece2409 4 года назад +4

    There are certain scenes/moments from duel of the fates that are absolutely amazing and 100x better than anything we got in TROS... but overall I think it's a huge mess like the episode 9 that we got.
    If I was handed both scripts and had to choose which one to use as a starting point to make into something better, I probably would've chosen Collin's (and made HEAVY rewrites).
    But if I couldn't change anything and I had to choose between this leaked script and the final script for TROS... I'm picking TROS.
    😂I guess what I'm trying to say is that while I think the TROS we have is better than this leaked script, I do think that this had more potential to eventually be great.
    And who knows, this script was written back in 2016, so maybe there's a much better version of it out there that'll never see the light of day 🤷

    • @paulzenco6182
      @paulzenco6182 4 года назад +1

      Duel of the fates was too long and boring, like the whole prequel trilogy

    • @bradneece2409
      @bradneece2409 4 года назад

      @@paulzenco6182 I agree with you there man. (Mostly with episodes 1&2. I have a sweet spot for 3, but I do think that it drags in the middle until order 66 happens)

    • @paulzenco6182
      @paulzenco6182 4 года назад +1

      Brad Neece yeah. To me, episode 3, although very flawed, has a very compelling story, the creation of Darth Vader when Anakin goes to the dark side, so it makes it quite entertaining. But... George s direction and dialogues... sorry, can’t take them seriously in the prequels. One thing I value of the prequels are all the worlds and artistic designs. Cheers.

  • @AlanAvis
    @AlanAvis 4 года назад

    Awesome!!

  • @SilS_01
    @SilS_01 4 года назад +2

    Now this is what i want! Episode 9 was cool but this just make more sense to me?

  • @darthvocrum5719
    @darthvocrum5719 4 года назад

    Ben becoming an actual sith could've been 10000% better tha the entire ROS movie

  • @Ardiem3
    @Ardiem3 4 года назад

    Where is Part 3??

  • @victorpantojas9508
    @victorpantojas9508 4 года назад

    I thought the one who taught plaugeus was Tenebrae. But other than , great script. Much deeper than the last official film.
    I wish they would make a long series or multiple films on the Sith of the Old Republic. Darth Bane, Cognis, Malgus, Nihilus, Sion, Treya, Revan .... are so much more interesting and darker than Vader and Sidious, and powerful AF!!!
    HOPEFULLY DISNEY KEEPS THERE HANDS OFF FROM THAT HISTORY!!