Hello :D I didn't have time to watch this part in the past few days because of work, so I'm very glad I finally had the time today! Firstly, I love how unpredictable you play the characters. While I have some guesses on where they will end up (Connor as a machine, Markus as a revolutionist and Kara captured), they are mostly based on how I think you want the story to go. I say “mostly” because I also think Connor can't possibly have enough software instability to deviate, so I'm fairly certain to see him as a machine. With Markus and Kara though, my guesses are more vague and also based on what I hope you'll do, haha ;D I love how the “a new case just came in” totally fits for Public Enemy, too. I was surprised we didn't get to see the cut dialogue options though, because I half-expected to hear them here! In the chapter itself, I love how you removed the deviant's heart so it looks like he put out Connor's heart in revenge. Also, I DID NOT expect Connor to rescue Hank here, because the other two options seemed more fitting, so my guess is that you wanted to boost Hank's relationship so he stays neutral overall? No idea though. In Midnight Train, I love how you basically picked all options that hint at Alice's true nature, even the arguably rare one where she fears she'll lose Kara's love. Saving Luther was expected tbh, but I have no idea if you'll save him overall or let him sacrifice himself along the way. I am still quite certain you'll visit the camp, though ;D Capitol Park is honestly my favorite Markus mission, but it was even greater here! All the scenes with North were PERFECT. How Markus kisses her and she understandably becomes enraged, how she looks at her own model, probably thinking of her girlfriend, HOW SHE KILLS THE COPS AFTER BASICALLY SEEING HER DEAD GIRLFRIEND AGAIN - that was so perfect, so fitting. And the editing …! Simply amazing! I have one question though, is Markus's speech in the store an unused version or something like that? He didn't sound the way I remembered. Either way, I love the different vibe you gave this chapter! Before Meet Kamski started, I suspected Connor would kill Chloe … but was completely shocked when I saw you replaced her model with North's! Holy shit. Oh my God. Another very fitting change, like a mirror image of the first time he could shoot her, but did not. And of course, he wants to prove himself to Amanda, wants to show that he CAN shoot her … and does so. The entire scene was so tense, the zoom-ins were great and I just love how you gave this chapter even more meaning! In Freedom March, I totally expected to hear North's backstory, but then I remembered that it's slightly different than the one she has now. I also love seeing Markus so conflicted, not able to make a clear choice. I guessed he would retreat because of that; he genuinely doesn't know which path he'll choose, but maybe he made up his mind now. After all, seeing how all his peaceful protests didn't work, will he really have the strength to continue with them? I doubt it, but we'll see. (Oh, the zoom-ins on the humans - including Leo! - were also great :D) So, until the next and final part! Very excited to see how it ends!
Hi. Thanks for the comment. :) You're right, I should've included the cut discussion about Kara with Amanda. I forgot about that. :/ I killed Connor at Stratford just to have the talk that he transfers his memory and comes back from the dead. Because I don't like that Connor can die multiple times in the final two chapters and just pops up again without an explanation about how he 'survived' whatsoever. Luther is precious and should be protected… But whether or not the small family will make it to the finish line together remains to be seen. Markus speech at Capitol Park is indeed a cut variation! I was a bit torn about what to do with North on that roof. In the end I didn't have North share her trauma with Markus because their relationship wasn't super close. There's a lot of anger inside North and I wanted to play her a little more stubborn and a little more colder in this AU. A little bit more like I think Tracy would've been.
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I love this human au 😊👑
These are awesome and seriously underrated. Good work.
Thank you!
North is so pretty omg great job Kayla!
Hello :D
I didn't have time to watch this part in the past few days because of work, so I'm very glad I finally had the time today!
Firstly, I love how unpredictable you play the characters. While I have some guesses on where they will end up (Connor as a machine, Markus as a revolutionist and Kara captured), they are mostly based on how I think you want the story to go. I say “mostly” because I also think Connor can't possibly have enough software instability to deviate, so I'm fairly certain to see him as a machine. With Markus and Kara though, my guesses are more vague and also based on what I hope you'll do, haha ;D
I love how the “a new case just came in” totally fits for Public Enemy, too. I was surprised we didn't get to see the cut dialogue options though, because I half-expected to hear them here! In the chapter itself, I love how you removed the deviant's heart so it looks like he put out Connor's heart in revenge. Also, I DID NOT expect Connor to rescue Hank here, because the other two options seemed more fitting, so my guess is that you wanted to boost Hank's relationship so he stays neutral overall? No idea though.
In Midnight Train, I love how you basically picked all options that hint at Alice's true nature, even the arguably rare one where she fears she'll lose Kara's love. Saving Luther was expected tbh, but I have no idea if you'll save him overall or let him sacrifice himself along the way. I am still quite certain you'll visit the camp, though ;D
Capitol Park is honestly my favorite Markus mission, but it was even greater here! All the scenes with North were PERFECT. How Markus kisses her and she understandably becomes enraged, how she looks at her own model, probably thinking of her girlfriend, HOW SHE KILLS THE COPS AFTER BASICALLY SEEING HER DEAD GIRLFRIEND AGAIN - that was so perfect, so fitting. And the editing …! Simply amazing! I have one question though, is Markus's speech in the store an unused version or something like that? He didn't sound the way I remembered. Either way, I love the different vibe you gave this chapter!
Before Meet Kamski started, I suspected Connor would kill Chloe … but was completely shocked when I saw you replaced her model with North's! Holy shit. Oh my God. Another very fitting change, like a mirror image of the first time he could shoot her, but did not. And of course, he wants to prove himself to Amanda, wants to show that he CAN shoot her … and does so. The entire scene was so tense, the zoom-ins were great and I just love how you gave this chapter even more meaning!
In Freedom March, I totally expected to hear North's backstory, but then I remembered that it's slightly different than the one she has now. I also love seeing Markus so conflicted, not able to make a clear choice. I guessed he would retreat because of that; he genuinely doesn't know which path he'll choose, but maybe he made up his mind now. After all, seeing how all his peaceful protests didn't work, will he really have the strength to continue with them? I doubt it, but we'll see. (Oh, the zoom-ins on the humans - including Leo! - were also great :D)
So, until the next and final part! Very excited to see how it ends!
Hi. Thanks for the comment. :)
You're right, I should've included the cut discussion about Kara with Amanda. I forgot about that. :/
I killed Connor at Stratford just to have the talk that he transfers his memory and comes back from the dead. Because I don't like that Connor can die multiple times in the final two chapters and just pops up again without an explanation about how he 'survived' whatsoever.
Luther is precious and should be protected… But whether or not the small family will make it to the finish line together remains to be seen.
Markus speech at Capitol Park is indeed a cut variation!
I was a bit torn about what to do with North on that roof. In the end I didn't have North share her trauma with Markus because their relationship wasn't super close. There's a lot of anger inside North and I wanted to play her a little more stubborn and a little more colder in this AU. A little bit more like I think Tracy would've been.
This will not end well
Possibly.
How did you remove hud? Its almost like a movie
Yey I had finish the previous one and now I'm watching this keep it up kayla you are the best ever like four!🤗🥰🥺🥰🥺
Seeing Connor on the non-deviant path is disheartening... :/