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  • Опубликовано: 29 ноя 2024

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  • @agnesulijn
    @agnesulijn Год назад +14

    I think it’s a very well made short horror film. Hat off to the main character! Love his performance!

  • @danthieman7858
    @danthieman7858 Год назад +11

    I'd box that demon up and take him to the nearest UPS store for a hassle free return and never look back.

  • @pennypincher7383
    @pennypincher7383 Год назад +44

    My mother's house was exactly like this. You would hear footsteps throughout the house after 3am. I told her about it, she didn't believe me. It wasn't until she had a friend stay with her for a year and her friend witnessed the same thing. My mother eventually had the house blessed by a priest inviting friends and family to help with the blessing. It helped because the footsteps stopped. I will never forget the terrifying experience.

    • @menziesproductions7758
      @menziesproductions7758  Год назад +10

      Wow, that’s very spooky. I’m glad the footsteps stopped and I hope you’re doing okay.

    • @pennypincher7383
      @pennypincher7383 Год назад +5

      @EyeComeInPeace2U My mother's house doesn't have an attic. The previous owner, who also built the house, hung himself in the garage.

    • @aivarasz
      @aivarasz 9 месяцев назад

      Stop lying 🤥🤥 you can believe your own legend, but don't try to convince anyone. Life is not a short movie.

  • @Elittarius
    @Elittarius Год назад +62

    The fact that you managed to scare the audience without actually showing any ghost.

    • @prophetofhorror
      @prophetofhorror Год назад +5

      Indeed. I was telling the character to not pull the sheet off because he would not see anything, and then it got worse for him.

  • @vadimc2144
    @vadimc2144 Год назад +3

    This guy's attitude was the scariest part. Good movie, thank you

  • @jeremiahstraight6301
    @jeremiahstraight6301 Год назад +1

    My "ENTITY 😶" protects me.....💯

  • @struggleboy2927
    @struggleboy2927 Год назад +8

    I'm so confused because I didn't understand the ending. He got in an argument with the entity. Got Beat up. Then He was driving wrecklessly down the road.
    I know there's a cold twist because this is such a good one. Can someone please enlighten me. I'm going nuts.

    • @annapapantidou1455
      @annapapantidou1455 Год назад

      The ghost got the house and the man left the house to save his life!!

    • @struggleboy2927
      @struggleboy2927 Год назад +4

      @Anna Papantidou Yeah I'm not sure that's all there is to it. That's alot of emphasis on someone just driving away. Why focus so much on the backseat? Why All the intense music as He's driving away? Yeah I think there's a little more to it than that.

    • @annapapantidou1455
      @annapapantidou1455 Год назад +4

      @@struggleboy2927 I've noticed that too.Probably the ghost was sitting on the back seat of the car!!!!

    • @struggleboy2927
      @struggleboy2927 Год назад

      @Anna Papantidou Yeah he kept looking back😨😱

    • @menziesproductions7758
      @menziesproductions7758  Год назад +6

      @@struggleboy2927 I think I can help. The ending is purposely ambiguous. Holding the shot for so long on the backseat creates a sense of discomfort and tension. The audience is left to decide if the entity is truly in the car or not as the man is forced to leave his home.

  • @vegasrocker58
    @vegasrocker58 Год назад +106

    I watch a lot of horror shorts, It's my favorite genre. I usually don't comment on horror shorts, but I must say the scene where the character gets pulled out of bed was very well done, and original. As a whole its definitely 4.5 stars out of 5. A must watch. 👍

    • @menziesproductions7758
      @menziesproductions7758  Год назад +11

      Thank you so much! That shot took a lot of work so your comment means a lot. I’m glad you enjoyed it.

    • @donniegreenway8401
      @donniegreenway8401 Год назад

      I agree a great scene, but who was the ghost, was he evil, or just didn't know he was dead and didn't like the guy in his house

    • @menziesproductions7758
      @menziesproductions7758  Год назад +8

      @@donniegreenway8401 The way I viewed it was that the former owner had passed away in that house, but his spirit was lost and confused. He didn’t even realize he was dead and didn’t take lightly to a new person living there.

    • @barback103
      @barback103 Год назад

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    • @dolz3112
      @dolz3112 Год назад

      Wats the actor’s name ?

  • @marjoriegoodwin9121
    @marjoriegoodwin9121 Год назад +4

    My favourite part was the tires squealing in the snow! 😂

  • @mr.mediocregamer9653
    @mr.mediocregamer9653 Год назад +18

    Just ask the ghost to either have rent on the table the 1st of every month or at least do the dishes and a few other chores to earn his keep. In this housing market you have to make things work.

  • @latifabakouri2241
    @latifabakouri2241 Год назад +10

    The Invisible man like the Movie he was watching in the beginning 😮 good work Amazing 🤩 👏👍

    • @coletteporee
      @coletteporee Год назад +1

      i know right? awesome work of foreshadowing lol

  • @miclowgunman1987
    @miclowgunman1987 Год назад +6

    was the blue light in his shirt his mic and they just forgot to tape the led? I thought it was a pacemaker at first and it would come into the story somehow.

    • @menziesproductions7758
      @menziesproductions7758  Год назад +3

      The blue light was indeed a mic. My lav mic broke on me on our shooting day and it was unfortunately the only option I had at the time to get clean audio. We taped over the light but it shined right through it. You live and learn.

    • @coletteporee
      @coletteporee Год назад +2

      hey but we could always say it was a pacemaker now😭

  • @konstantinoskaragiannis1596
    @konstantinoskaragiannis1596 Год назад +4

    This is an excellent and very well made short supernatural horror film!

  • @krista94official
    @krista94official Год назад +57

    The only comment I will make is that he’s running while it’s snowing with no jacket just with a hoodie and his chest is exposed! Omg brrrrrr I’m cold 🥶🥶🥶

    • @arbjful
      @arbjful Год назад +3

      It's bad for the heart

    • @amystewart4865
      @amystewart4865 Год назад +1

      Thanks for the pre warning lol 😂 no jump scare for me lol

    • @macamarlo6992
      @macamarlo6992 Год назад

      Aunque no lo crean no hace frio y menos porque hace ejercicio . El frío es cuando se derrite la nieve y se descongelan, tíos, lagos, etc.

    • @briannalovely-hz1pz
      @briannalovely-hz1pz Год назад

      He'll catch pnemonia

    • @MrBennieagray
      @MrBennieagray Год назад

      I lived in Minnesota for a few years. I would be out in a t-shirt sometimes. As long as it doesn't get windy and it's only snowing. It feels pretty good. Once a slight breeze comes up. Your nipples get hard and you want to run back inside the house for a Jacket.

  • @jamesmccoysr.3595
    @jamesmccoysr.3595 Год назад +3

    OUTSTANDING!!!👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾

  • @HorrorGameLibrary
    @HorrorGameLibrary 10 месяцев назад +2

    Somehow it is really very Simple and full of Quality! The acting , Atmosphere , Story Everything is Fine! :) Great Job

  • @chaucerparks1713
    @chaucerparks1713 Год назад

    GOOD HORROR SHORT
    😳Inside the house Ghost = Outside the house Human..🏃😁..💯💯✌

  • @shraddhalodhi2542
    @shraddhalodhi2542 Год назад +17

    It was just like a full movie in fast forward manner. Starting from buying new house and feeling of someone's presence, then using cameras, consulting priest and finally trying to resolve your problem by Ouija board. 👻

  • @pjfoltz8810
    @pjfoltz8810 Год назад +3

    When he bought the ouija board, I knew something bed was going to happen! That is something you do not mess with!

  • @jcsantana6947
    @jcsantana6947 Год назад +2

    😍😍

  • @FilmmakerSpace
    @FilmmakerSpace Год назад +1

    Wow 👌

  • @Meteosquad
    @Meteosquad Год назад +1

    A very good short movie and the aching also good 👍

  • @brianeleary
    @brianeleary Год назад +10

    I enjoyed watching it instead of getting scared , the fight , the confrontation with the entity was epic 100 % 👍👍👍

    • @kurtweiand7086
      @kurtweiand7086 Год назад +1

      I bought this house and you know l'm boss! Ain't no hank gonna run me off!

  • @KAZ132
    @KAZ132 Год назад +2

    Absolutely loved this.. Great video and very scary.. Thank you for sharing!

    • @menziesproductions7758
      @menziesproductions7758  Год назад +1

      Thank you so much Karen!

    • @KAZ132
      @KAZ132 Год назад

      ​@@menziesproductions7758 I've just subscribed to your ChanneI and looking forward to watching what you have posted.. I'll be doing that today! Many thanks ✨

  • @cherrym6599
    @cherrym6599 Год назад +2

    I have a ghost inside me ...I dont know where to go and reedem this bad soul ...He use to tortured us since 12 years..He can change the our face hair,body,bones,etc.I got pain in my body since 12 years .....

  • @johnshields6852
    @johnshields6852 Год назад +9

    I couldn't even imagine living in a haunted house, my worse fear is thinking it's right above my face while I sleep. No way.

  • @SusanNoulton
    @SusanNoulton 9 месяцев назад +1

    Wow that was very scarrrry and brilliant acting by the young man fantastic.

  • @bezoticallyyours83
    @bezoticallyyours83 Год назад +3

    Dang that's a nice house! The acting and camera work are well done.

  • @ilaanisdead
    @ilaanisdead 6 месяцев назад

    7:05 did the priest just say "no wait" LMFAO. so funny

  • @PunchBuggyDreams
    @PunchBuggyDreams Год назад +5

    That entity was just a big bully. I would've manned up to it and stood up to it and fought it tooth and nail to get it out of my house. I have zero tolerance for such things.

  • @Anonymous-qy8ss
    @Anonymous-qy8ss Год назад +4

    Before the ghost would of come in to the bedroom I would have jumped out the window hearing that noise coming up the stairs would be terrifying

  • @Kapok-Bush
    @Kapok-Bush Год назад +6

    I did love it! It's "Paranormal activity" with a more energetical atmosphere, with a tougher dark touch, what makes it be a bit scarier. I like it very much. It could easily become a length film.

  • @benrumble383
    @benrumble383 Год назад

    Very, veryyyyy well done/original supernatural thriller, hats off to you guys!!!...

  • @timothypage252
    @timothypage252 11 месяцев назад

    Love how he puts on the reading glasses to look over them the whole time...

  • @Kryptic1046
    @Kryptic1046 Год назад +7

    Well-acted and nicely shot.

  • @nathanpayne9903
    @nathanpayne9903 Год назад +1

    I love the deliberateness of your backward heel drop to the table with the lamp 😂

  • @countryboy39051
    @countryboy39051 Год назад +7

    I really enjoyed this one! The scene where he got smacked around was very well shot and acted!

  • @-Daily.Bible.Verse1
    @-Daily.Bible.Verse1 Год назад +1

    Keep up the great work !!!!!

  • @shashank7208
    @shashank7208 11 месяцев назад

    Awesome story 👍
    Wait for more horror content from This channel.

  • @shawnc1716
    @shawnc1716 Год назад +1

    Whats the blue lights on his chest is it a Bluetooth microphone.havent finished move maby it well be explained

  • @Tater4200
    @Tater4200 Год назад

    The shot where you zoom by him while he's on the phone. Veddy nice

  • @angiemd8920
    @angiemd8920 Год назад +16

    Did you just tell the ghost to "wait"? Haha!
    This gave me heavy Paranormal Activity vibes. Awesome!

    • @coletteporee
      @coletteporee Год назад

      I know! i honestly found it refreshing how he just ordered the ghost around😭

    • @TalkBack17
      @TalkBack17 Год назад

      That’s what I said 😂 “did he just say ‘wait’??”

  • @finalomega8894
    @finalomega8894 Год назад +1

    LMBO at how the lamp was purposely kicked over, and how the entity was already not visible at the bottom, but the cloth was removed.

  • @poppabearskitchen1769
    @poppabearskitchen1769 Год назад +2

    Excellent story, thank you.

  • @richardsalley9848
    @richardsalley9848 Год назад +2

    Hell yeah!
    That was dope.

  • @LaLa-xh7bz
    @LaLa-xh7bz Год назад +7

    I was waiting for the twist like he killed someone or he was the ghost 😂 But no twist. Just a ghost whoopin his ass! Well done 👍🏽

  • @Aziza_Nyxie_Jynx_Ashling
    @Aziza_Nyxie_Jynx_Ashling Год назад

    The way he knocked ov the table with the watering can plant pot and lamp

  • @shelleypenn7577
    @shelleypenn7577 Год назад

    Oh my, what a great actor! I’m so impressed with the acting and the psychically acting.👏👏🍿

  • @ElizabethMills1955
    @ElizabethMills1955 Год назад +42

    You made a short horror film without a single cheesy jumpscare. I'm impressed beyond words. Just last week, I'd resolved to stop watching YT horror shorts. In the space of two days, every single horror short I watched ended with a "jumpscare."
    I don't know how some (most?) YT indy "filmmakers" think they're going to rise to fame by presenting a string of "horror" shorts that end with the Big Bad jumping out at the protagonist and/or viewers. JUMPSCARES AREN'T SCARY ANYMORE. The trope has been done to death.
    The end of your video is scary for anyone who has an imagination. The best horror is that which you invent in your own mind. You know that, and that makes you a good filmmaker. I look forward to more of your films.

    • @menziesproductions7758
      @menziesproductions7758  Год назад +6

      Thank you so much Elizabeth. We definitely didn’t want to have to rely on cheesy jumpscares to deliver an impact. Thanks for the kind words.

  • @juliesolano4902
    @juliesolano4902 Год назад +8

    The worst thing he could have done. Is gat the Ouija board involved.

  • @StumpyJoeTV
    @StumpyJoeTV Год назад +4

    "Dude, let's try to get some free North Face and Amazon shit!"
    Jokes aside, great job. Had a very pro feel in every aspect.

  • @scottricci5063
    @scottricci5063 Год назад +2

    A ouija board from a dollar store. How poetic. For a guy who just bought a three story mansion. Lmao

  • @sirvazo1633
    @sirvazo1633 Год назад +3

    At 7:20, I thought he was off to buy a can of Ghost-B-Gone spray

  • @pheobusapollo4305
    @pheobusapollo4305 Год назад +1

    I have a ghost problem. ....better grab the quija board to invite more

  • @arbjful
    @arbjful Год назад +2

    He broke so many ouija rules in such a short time

  • @hazelmadalane2029
    @hazelmadalane2029 Год назад

    I love the interaction with the priest. Great film

  • @macatron69
    @macatron69 Год назад

    This was fantastic! Wow!

  • @PavonesChildBride
    @PavonesChildBride Год назад +5

    Guy is so stupid, I was actually feeling sorry for the entity lol

  • @nillieable
    @nillieable Год назад +2

    The acting is of top class

  • @coletteporee
    @coletteporee Год назад +16

    fantastic film! you really got some interesting shot comps in here, and your editing skills when it comes to sound design and color grading. awesome job!

    • @menziesproductions7758
      @menziesproductions7758  Год назад

      thanks colette! we definitely made sound design and shot composition a priority for this project.

  • @andysdestination8671
    @andysdestination8671 Год назад +3

    That’s a very good video. And background music is spot on. Love it. Cheers 😎😎😎🔥🔥🔥

  • @LogacysAquaticLove
    @LogacysAquaticLove Год назад +1

    This was pretty god for a short horror film. I liked it! 🤙🏼💯

  • @Venserql
    @Venserql Год назад +1

    Why was the Ouija board in the LEGO section? XD

  • @ElvenRaptor
    @ElvenRaptor Год назад +1

    One thing I'd have pointed out to the ghost is that even if he chased me out, the realter would just sell the house to someone and he'd be chasing people out of his house endlessly. And if he did it enough times, they'd send people who get rid of him. So either way, he was never going to have the house to himself because the living were never going to give up on it.

  • @anniebananie7887
    @anniebananie7887 Год назад +1

    Beautiful house!

  • @kaladar5377
    @kaladar5377 Год назад +1

    Omg its too scary when he dragged out by spirit from the bed

    • @coletteporee
      @coletteporee Год назад

      it was!! zak posted a behind the scenes video explaining how he did it if you’re interested👀

  • @Msmary98-98
    @Msmary98-98 Год назад +2

    He’s cute❤ I’ll keep him safe.. 😂😂😂

  • @taracollins5597
    @taracollins5597 Год назад +3

    What a gorgeous house. Is that the house from one of the Paranormal Activity films??

  • @sharonshin4574
    @sharonshin4574 Год назад

    Awesome horror short!!

  • @zero_bs_tolerance8646
    @zero_bs_tolerance8646 Год назад

    Very good. Thanks. 🍻

  • @endlessperceptions
    @endlessperceptions Год назад

    Great production. Very effective acting. I subscribed. Thanks.

  • @ronaldwilliams4954
    @ronaldwilliams4954 Год назад

    Dammit this was good 10/10 👏👍💯💯

  • @Tater4200
    @Tater4200 Год назад

    I'm waiting for a person to yell "FUCK OFF I GOTTA GUN!!" Like I do when I'm alone in the dark and hear a noise lol

  • @melb2086
    @melb2086 Год назад +2

    This is so cool and well done,this has to be full movie,if it's possible. 🙂👍

  • @mainmaam
    @mainmaam Год назад +2

    Hey! This is pretty good!

  • @paullevine1813
    @paullevine1813 Год назад +2

    Loved it , just cause you have money which this guy seems to surely have doesn't always mean you own everything . That ghost was already there & you can't buy them off or fight what you can't see. In the end it was just claiming what was it's home . What guy that lives alone & watches horror films is scared of something he can't see & something that belonged there first. Good for the entity ,adios amigos to sissy boy , at least till he realizes it's in the vehicle for a ride. Who doesn't love a good ghost tale & i must say the sheet was a brilliant bit of tension . Thanks for the ride

    • @menziesproductions7758
      @menziesproductions7758  Год назад +1

      Thanks for the kind words Paul!

    • @paullevine1813
      @paullevine1813 Год назад

      @@menziesproductions7758 Thank you that was fun & i couldn't help but notice the graveyard he drove by on his attempt to get away hmmm , nice of him to give the ghost a ride in his nice expensive Jeep , yea we know who's in that backseat. The sheet segment was awesome & simple ,straight up & out of the ballpark. Nothing as good as fine ghost story. Yea we are the ones to thank you & all the great storytellers that have the knack to gives us great little tales of wonder.

  • @katkelly870
    @katkelly870 Год назад +2

    Nicely done. Great acting❤

  • @BarkFishOutdoors
    @BarkFishOutdoors Год назад

    dope , i like this

  • @magnetdesignandadver
    @magnetdesignandadver Год назад +2

    Very well done. Great actor

  • @byernlack6868
    @byernlack6868 Год назад

    Lego ouija looks fire 🔥🔥🔥🔥

  • @gretchent7750
    @gretchent7750 Год назад +1

    Can so,done explain to me what was cashing him at the end, and in detail?

  • @simonl4523
    @simonl4523 Год назад +4

    Thank you for this movie! I think as a genre, horrors adapts really well to a short movie, and your movie here really shows that. The thing I found that really drew me in was the camera work: it was very fluid and active in a way that almost made it another character. It really helped me empathise with the person being haunted, because I think that is how he was feeling with this entity that was circling around him. The sound of the ghost and all the creaks and bangs worked really well too. The creepiest moment for me was when the two doors opened at the same time. There were a few moments that felt a bit cliched I suppose, with the useless priest one of them. Acting is really, really hard, especially when you are the only character on set but you have to act out as if you are engaging with another character. So super well done to him as well. I think there were some flashes of overacting. I guess like most things there are ways to make something better, but that should never stop us from working with what we’re given, and this was put together really well and I am super thankful for everyone who helped to make it happen.

    • @menziesproductions7758
      @menziesproductions7758  Год назад

      Thanks for the kind words Simon. For majority of the scenes it was just myself (the director) and the main actor. We had no crew of any kind. I would set up some lights and then we’d just shoot it run and gun style. Overall I wrote, shot, edited, and even composed the music on this project. So I’m happy to hear you enjoyed it. Plenty more to come!

    • @simonl4523
      @simonl4523 Год назад

      @@menziesproductions7758 That’s amazing to hear. I hope you get to do more films.

  • @valiantwarrior4517
    @valiantwarrior4517 6 месяцев назад

    Nice job. Keep at it!

  • @aishwaryavijoy1931
    @aishwaryavijoy1931 Год назад +2

    That's some real horror 🥲🥲🥲

  • @victorjohn9826
    @victorjohn9826 8 месяцев назад

    Well made film. We Indians do poojas for new or old house b4 start living there, to drive away bad vibes or just for our spiritual belief 😊

  • @Arsenicosis
    @Arsenicosis Год назад +1

    Impressed by the leading actor here! Looking forward to more from them.

    • @coletteporee
      @coletteporee Год назад

      me too! david is such a talented actor and is gearing up for some amazing roles! 👀

  • @dulanyemz29
    @dulanyemz29 Год назад +6

    Well done in so many aspects I loved it!

  • @dollysen644
    @dollysen644 3 месяца назад

    Gosh!!!
    So scary in the end

  • @ilaanisdead
    @ilaanisdead 6 месяцев назад

    4:52 did bro just say "wait" LMFAO

  • @amthonymcd3898
    @amthonymcd3898 Год назад +1

    😱🏃🙏

  • @thenebraskan6977
    @thenebraskan6977 Год назад

    Awesome film! Especially you being pulled out of bed, and meeting with the pastor. Incredible film!!👻👁

  • @hoorejannathealthbeautytip792
    @hoorejannathealthbeautytip792 Год назад

    acting skill is superb

  • @talentfilmstudiousa4691
    @talentfilmstudiousa4691 Год назад +4

    Congratulations sir good Project nice very good

  • @digontasaikia4001
    @digontasaikia4001 Год назад +1

    ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️

  • @rosalynredwood4542
    @rosalynredwood4542 Год назад +1

    Absolutely loved the acting!ecery expression was literally perfect!tge fact that we don't see the entity makes it even more scary!

  • @simranlahot3576
    @simranlahot3576 Год назад +4

    Too good but I can't believe how only one person stay in a big house😂 I'm scared to stay alone like in a big house 🏡 but I like it💜

    • @menziesproductions7758
      @menziesproductions7758  Год назад +1

      I agree Simran! Filming in this house was a little creepy haha.

    • @simranlahot3576
      @simranlahot3576 Год назад +1

      @@menziesproductions7758 But I appreciate your work💜 well done🥰

    • @odysseja
      @odysseja Год назад +1

      It's just a horror movie cliché - a family is in trouble so they bought a new house twice bigger than they need, as like it can help them somehow.

  • @Drone_PilotSG
    @Drone_PilotSG Год назад +3

    He is that 35 year old whose managed to keep his voice like a teenager to sound younger

    • @coletteporee
      @coletteporee Год назад +1

      david’s a very talented actor, and not 35 i can assure you😭

    • @lunalgabal7899
      @lunalgabal7899 Год назад +1

      @@coletteporee Who is he? There are no credits. Is it bad that I think he does not only have extraordinary acting skills ("fighting" with the ghost) but also is very attractive. :)

  • @JRodriguez-o1i
    @JRodriguez-o1i 6 месяцев назад

    Very good! I'm surprised there are no credits. At the very least, they needed several people for the effects, and the priest actor...

  • @image0987
    @image0987 Год назад

    New subscriber. Love the movie! Thx you 😊😊😊😊😊

  • @comofazervideosanimadospar6206

    Good job. .....................Brasil