This looks so good and was done on mobile!? You have real skills and talents and you did this in such short time! You better get in the gauntlet because this looks so amazing, keep it up! Also at 0:10 that Earth is so realistic!
nice work! couple bits of criticism tho the background is way more detailed compared to the rest of the shots in the ship and the particle spam is a bit much 😅 well done regardless!
So, a few tiffs I have with this. Just gonna give you some feedback, no harsh judgement here! 1: The Song seems a little too upbeat and goofy to fit the epic theme you are trying to set. I would suggest changing it into something darker to fit the mysterious and vengeance theme you want to show. 2: The Cubes and Ship are not as consistent with the quality as it is with the background. For the cubes, I would suggest making screenshots of the cubes you want to make. Then do your best attempt at making them, but make the lines a little thinner (For The Robtop Icon, just use the given default robtop icon and put a pixel block behind it). Change the colors you want to set on them, and then add some lined blending glow into the icons without the outside lines to make it smoother and more realistic. One other thing is maybe making them 3D, as it will add to the life and make the cubes seem less like a drawing and more life a character in the story line. 3: The Eternal Core scene lasts for too long without anything but a few glitch effects to make it more interesting. Suggestion: Give the core a dark abandoned lab background (Or whatever you want, just a suggestion) and remove the glitches, while also adding some movement effects and a few moving characters to add some defense and life to the scene. Then maybe have it glow and brighten, which overrides the orb which the cubes are using to see their core and glitches it out. 4: For The Ship the cubes are in, maybe add some glow, neon screens and machinery to add to the spacey effect. maybe also add some flying evil ships to the scene with the planet in order to make it seem more epic and action-packed. 5: Final word, the text seems to be kind of meaningless amongst everything else, so I would suggest maybe thinning it out, adding a tablet or another device behind it and add some glow onto the text to make it seem more mysterious. Sorry if any of this was mean (I am a very nice person in real-life🙂), I was just wanting to help you out with it! You seem very talented and I just wanted to help you push your entry to the full extent of its potential! It seriously is really cool! Good Luck!
Tips, make the ship more textured, and make the font custom, it'll be mythic trust, The ship just feels out of placed, like, imagine putting mickey mouse, in a super realistic world, it wouldn't fit, the ship looks like just plain block, while the bg has soo much umami textures, it honestly looks so cool, keep up!
Optimize it so Android users can complete it. I wish there was a layout mode for vanilla GD where you can complete levels as layouts and completions will count. Plus no lag
This is so fast, we still have 3 months and looking what people doing already!! This is so insane and i love it. I think this is going to be a really hard contest for me bc im so slow at deco, it looks good but i doing it soooooo slowwwwww
Every bit of struggle and effort everyone brings into this Contest means something big, every one of us Keep trying and do your best, because the only one who knows how much effort you put is only yourself
it's soo beautiful, GOOD LUCK bro! It is better to make it a Mythic Level because the competition will be fierce
Thanks bro
Nah bro I'm cooked 😭
The food isn't ready yet 😭
Nah WE are cooked 💀😭
We all are
@@chdragon but mine is going to be the worst one but I will still try :] plz support me
the food is overburnt oh no
This looks so good and was done on mobile!? You have real skills and talents and you did this in such short time! You better get in the gauntlet because this looks so amazing, keep it up! Also at 0:10 that Earth is so realistic!
Thank you
This is going to win! I can see the insane hard work you've put into this, and your effort will pay off. AMAZING JOB!
Thank you, i will do my best
@@xdcraftv157 best of luck!
Space Background is cool!. Nice Intro!!!
Thank you
...my gosh its soo beautiful, so much potential and good luck
Thank you
The announcement was like a week ago, and you cook this???
HOLY SHIT!!! Good luck for the next 4 months tho, my man!! :)👍👍👍
Thanks bro
nice work! couple bits of criticism tho the background is way more detailed compared to the rest of the shots in the ship and the particle spam is a bit much 😅 well done regardless!
Thanks for the feedback, i will do my best to fix it
@ your welcome! and don’t take what i said to heart as it is just criticism and not advice, i wish you the best of luck on your entry!
BANGER!
Thx
So, a few tiffs I have with this. Just gonna give you some feedback, no harsh judgement here!
1: The Song seems a little too upbeat and goofy to fit the epic theme you are trying to set. I would suggest changing it into something darker to fit the mysterious and vengeance theme you want to show.
2: The Cubes and Ship are not as consistent with the quality as it is with the background. For the cubes, I would suggest making screenshots of the cubes you want to make. Then do your best attempt at making them, but make the lines a little thinner (For The Robtop Icon, just use the given default robtop icon and put a pixel block behind it). Change the colors you want to set on them, and then add some lined blending glow into the icons without the outside lines to make it smoother and more realistic. One other thing is maybe making them 3D, as it will add to the life and make the cubes seem less like a drawing and more life a character in the story line.
3: The Eternal Core scene lasts for too long without anything but a few glitch effects to make it more interesting. Suggestion: Give the core a dark abandoned lab background (Or whatever you want, just a suggestion) and remove the glitches, while also adding some movement effects and a few moving characters to add some defense and life to the scene. Then maybe have it glow and brighten, which overrides the orb which the cubes are using to see their core and glitches it out.
4: For The Ship the cubes are in, maybe add some glow, neon screens and machinery to add to the spacey effect. maybe also add some flying evil ships to the scene with the planet in order to make it seem more epic and action-packed.
5: Final word, the text seems to be kind of meaningless amongst everything else, so I would suggest maybe thinning it out, adding a tablet or another device behind it and add some glow onto the text to make it seem more mysterious.
Sorry if any of this was mean (I am a very nice person in real-life🙂), I was just wanting to help you out with it! You seem very talented and I just wanted to help you push your entry to the full extent of its potential! It seriously is really cool! Good Luck!
You have given me some AMAZING advices
Thank you so much, I will do my best to apply these into the level :)
@@xdcraftv157 Means a lot to hear words like that, thanks bro! Good Luck!
Tips, make the ship more textured, and make the font custom, it'll be mythic trust,
The ship just feels out of placed, like, imagine putting mickey mouse, in a super realistic world, it wouldn't fit, the ship looks like just plain block, while the bg has soo much umami textures, it honestly looks so cool, keep up!
Also another example, the minecraft movie, realistic human, game, no fit fit
HAHA FINALLY
This is a good good feedback
Thanks :)
Wow this is sick!
@@cosmic2616 thx
@@xdcraftv157 song?
@cosmic2616 Savage - Paul Flint
@@xdcraftv157 Thanks!
Looking pretty good
Thank you
I was going to try to join the contest, but after seeing these entries, I am rethinking my choices
The choices are on you sir
Awsome!
Thank you
im cooked you deserve to win if you finish the level It looks rly good!
Thx :)
Goated
Thx bro
DUDE THIS IS INSANE
Haha, thx
this is fire🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
Thx
Compared to mine, yours is a five course meal and mine is a rotten moldy potato. Good job!
Yours is probably still uncooked, let's wait patiently and see how it turns out
Same bro I feel you
Fire 🔥🔥🔥
🔥🔥
So insane
Thx
Nah, you'd win (man is awesome, mythic worthy. You are gonna win, maybe not 1st place but something :D)
I hope so
Thanks :)
Insane
Thx
Damn I loved it
Me too
Optimize it so Android users can complete it. I wish there was a layout mode for vanilla GD where you can complete levels as layouts and completions will count. Plus no lag
I made it in potato android 💀
0_0 ok im definitely cooked u ate fr
The food isn't ready yet 🍳
those half-cooked ingredients still smell so good
Bro is cooking 🔥🍳
Still not ready sir 🍳
really good!
Thx
Awesome work
Thx bro
This better be in the top 10
I hope so
looks insane
Thx
straight fire
Thx :)
COOL
thx
Ok this looks actually amazing but having to sit through this every time you die would definitely get annoying
It's okay, it will only work in the 1st attempt
@@xdcraftv157 Oh well that’s really cool
@@xdcraftv157 or make it skippable with toggle orbs
@@dilonbeckles we dont wanna skip and skip every attempt, btw i am sure i will complete it on first 10 attemps :)
@@Mhamed-e1s but some people dont want the experience to be ruined
Level kamu bikin sy termotivasi XD
Baguslah
Underrated
Thx :)
This is amazing but can you guve the ship more shadows and glow coming in from the main door? It would be much better.
Thanks for the feedback, i will do my best
most underrated mobile creators
There are a LOT out there who are even 100x better than me
I’m a mobile creator that started creating
@@xdcraftv157I think kivvi is a mobile creator too
@@xdcraftv157I think kivvi is a mobile creator too
@Radioactive900 yea but he's not underrated
you know what, i'm cooked. i CANT even order this
It's free sir
Wowww
:)
nah I had such a similar idea for this contest with the intro and everything but yours is executed like ten times better
I’m cooked I think
Keep up your work
thx for the support, also gl on your entry
holy fricking crap bro, WAHT.
:)
Is very cool 👍
Thx
This is so fast, we still have 3 months and looking what people doing already!! This is so insane and i love it.
I think this is going to be a really hard contest for me bc im so slow at deco, it looks good but i doing it soooooo slowwwwww
I totally agree!
“Don’t make your intros to long”
- some dude I saw like 2 years ago on a RUclips short
Lmao
This looks so good, but why this song 😭
I chose the song for a reason bud
26 F**KING LIKES??? this is insanly underrated...
Haha thx
Dang it man I was already cooked when galofuf came now this
Me too
gg we're cooked
:)
Good
thx
WTF THIS IS AS GOOD AS RAGEQUIT?
It's not, but i'll do my best
PLEASE make it so that after the first attempt you can skip the intro
(It’s absolutely beutiful, it would just get annoying to watch every attempt)
Yes of course, i already made it
@ W creator 😎
GO
Let's goooo
One question HOW TF DID YOU DO THAT
Idk lol
hopefully it's playable on low end devices
I made it in a low end device
an unknown colony *HAD* invaded our planet. sorry i just didn’t wanna see grammar errors on a masterpiece
LOLOLOL THANK YOU
no problem lmao
You did this on mobile, HOW DO YOU DO THAT?!?!?!?!?!?
Idk lol
Anjir keren bgt
Thx
Competition is cooked give this guy a thousand dollars🤣😂
Lololol thanks
0:28 WAIT THIS IS MOBILE
Indeed sir
how many objects tho? thats the important thing
Check desc
@@xdcraftv157 ok
Imma give up bro.
No matter how hard, NEVER GIVE UP
I PROMISE you will get the next mythic
I wish so
I am done for
NEVER GIVE UP
Yooooooo
:)
Biar dia memasak 🔥
🍳
babababangerrrrrrr
Thx
Firts mythic rated level in Indonesia (Yes, hopefully)
I wish, but i think that's too far
@xdcraftv157 Don't give up
WHATTTT
Yes
damn😭
:)
please make it so that u dont have to sit through that intro every attempt
Of course, it only works in the 1st att
Bro...Are you kidding me!!?
I Didn't Know I Have Overpowered Opponent XD
Yeah, and it's Bli 🫣
dude im already cooked, my gauntlet level doesn't mean anything 😭🙏
Every bit of struggle and effort everyone brings into this Contest means something big, every one of us
Keep trying and do your best, because the only one who knows how much effort you put is only yourself
@xdcraftv157 yeah yeah I'll keep trying, just hope i get top 5.
Were cooked💀
Stop wit the "cooked" thing 😭
@xdcraftv157 why? Because your level is out of mind bruh😭😭
No way anyone’s winning this
But watch out for Bli
This would be a real competition
Nooo IAm COOKED
:)
Where is the gameplay
Well, the title says "intro"
AKU GOSONG WAK 😭😭😭😭
Telat angkat 😭
Bro Menyala Mrk Hp sama Tapi kok lu No lag :V🗿
Hpku kentang loh
Ram 4gb 128 internal
Sama Ram 4GB Doang, Kadang gw bikin Art Level juga Harus Tau Cara Bikin LDM biar Tepat Dan Ga NgeBug 😢😅😂@@xdcraftv157
İ gave up already 😭
Nah don't
@xdcraftv157 bro look at yours and mine there is a ton ofDifference
@@DashWithMahmut65 IT DOESN'T MATTER, TRY EVEN U KNOW YOU WOULD LOSE
(This isn't about this Creator Contest)
@@xdcraftv157 i will, and i will Dedicate it to you
I can't beat
You can
ajarin aku dong bang plis🥺🥺
Gk bisa ngajar orang gw bjir
I am going to get be cooked 💀💀💀
:)
INI DIBUAT DI HP?! no wei😱😭
Iya sja
make sure its skippable bc playing through that every attempt would be annoying
Yea of course, it only works in the 1st att
@@xdcraftv157 k :)
Effort banget😭
No effort 😔☝️
Stop scaring my team
I didn't do anything 😭
You finally think u have a chance and then this drops…
The fact is you have
HOW?
Idk lol
And I thought my black hole looked cool
Then it's cool also
Yeah everyone is already done for
Trust me they aren't
@@xdcraftv157 except BLI :)
I'm sorry for trying
Keep trying, u would be a good competitor
You stole my idea😭
Nah didn't 😭
My level has a bossfight btw😅
@YogeshwariGirase-tq6vp You stole my idea 😭
🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨
I'm glad I quit😭
Edit: my comment is now outdated since I'm trying again
:(
Way too long but cool looking
Thx, it only works in the 1st att
@@xdcraftv157 Good
Is this man on crack or am i?
Lol
what.
what
@@xdcraftv157 im just shocked
I quit
Don't
Too long unless for an very easy level
It only works in the first attempt