The Queen B. ep.20 part 1"The Queen B and the blonde encounter at the party" (Fanfiction)

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  • Опубликовано: 3 дек 2023

Комментарии • 47

  • @hoppiegrey1868
    @hoppiegrey1868 7 месяцев назад +2

    “Just why are you doing this to me? Why are you turning my life so upside down?”….”Just why are you always in my mind and in my head?”……aaahhhh, the intense drama! Those lines are so good, author!! Gotta jump to the next episode now!!😃

  • @garfieldsiews
    @garfieldsiews 7 месяцев назад +4

    Oh man... I love the sentence that Lisa was like been hunted and don't know where the hunter was. 😅. Again... When Lisa saw the broken side of Jennie, she felt weak. This very scene set my emotion on high side. The fear, panic and the sudden breakdown... Literally felt it all. 🥺
    Thanks author for sharing 👍🏻
    JenLisa Forever ❤️ ❤️

    • @tatswriter1968
      @tatswriter1968  7 месяцев назад +2

      I'm really glad you guys got the flow of the story and I really appreciated it, every time I'm reading every comment from you guys it really makes me happy. thank you so much.

    • @garfieldsiews
      @garfieldsiews 7 месяцев назад

      @@tatswriter1968 love how you use words and description. Especially when JenLisa's part. This story make me wanted more. Sorry for been greedy, but is really good contents. Great job Author 🌹

  • @JenChuLiChaeng_4everblink2023
    @JenChuLiChaeng_4everblink2023 7 месяцев назад +3

    Hoping for ep. 20 part 2 today please author…your story makes me excited!

    • @tatswriter1968
      @tatswriter1968  7 месяцев назад +1

      as much as I can I'm still working on every episode and every day hopefully I can mange it but anyway thank you.

  • @margaretnovencido9744
    @margaretnovencido9744 7 месяцев назад +1

    I agree with those comments author pls don't let us wait .❤❤❤

    • @tatswriter1968
      @tatswriter1968  7 месяцев назад +1

      same page but I'm still working on evry episode and thank you.

  • @jmrafales5732
    @jmrafales5732 7 месяцев назад +2

    The best story author ❤️❤️❤️

    • @tatswriter1968
      @tatswriter1968  7 месяцев назад +3

      I'm very thankful for that. really makes me happy.

  • @hwarangrjlayola9780
    @hwarangrjlayola9780 7 месяцев назад +4

    Jennieyah she's always in your mind and head bcoz your falling for her already, both of you are falling for each other.. it's just both of you doesn't want to accept it or your both in denial because of your different status in life. But the truth is both of you are falling for each other and longingly wanted to be in each other's touch and presence. Author keep goin' the scene in the bathroom 8s exciting.

    • @tatswriter1968
      @tatswriter1968  7 месяцев назад +4

      I'm really glad you guys got the flow of the story and I really appreciated it, every time I'm reading every comment from you guys it really makes me happy. thank you so much.

    • @hwarangrjlayola9780
      @hwarangrjlayola9780 7 месяцев назад +1

      @@tatswriter1968 bcoz your story is always a good one.

  • @meherajulmallick-ot2bp
    @meherajulmallick-ot2bp 7 месяцев назад +1

    don't let lisa poor and mak lisa do something for Jennie like talking to her father about Jennie dance then after result did something for jannie happy.😊😊 wall can't wait for next

  • @barbarahurtado2190
    @barbarahurtado2190 7 месяцев назад +1

    Omg! I love it, I can’t wait for the next one, thank you for updating.

    • @tatswriter1968
      @tatswriter1968  7 месяцев назад +2

      Thank you so much, really makes me happy.

  • @manilynhagus1116
    @manilynhagus1116 7 месяцев назад +1

    Thanks author..godbless.

  • @itsmejeng3114
    @itsmejeng3114 7 месяцев назад +1

    Best episode 🤙🤙🤙

  • @ShabneezKNannoo786
    @ShabneezKNannoo786 7 месяцев назад +1

    I knew it that the results would be just exactly the same like you showed us,i knew it jennie's anger would bring storms in Lisa's life but i didn't know she would also break down in front of her,but the fact is no one's faults was over here,lisa only wants to save the club from demolishing and jennie wants to prove her father that she wanna be a dancer and wants to make a career in that field not on business,but however both can't win at the same time,one has to lose and the best has to win which lisa and her friends did,they not only dance but they sang too and which was a plus for them as everything was new and unique,their songs was also sang by rosé not from other singers,so everyone wants something new that's why the judges chooses Lisa's group as a winner but it's just that jennie's defeat and anger is eating her to understand that,also i know how it feels when you expect something but in returns when you don't get it,it definitely hurts,so jennie is certainly hurt right now as she couldn't believe that someone is being more talented than her,but doesn't mean that she's less talented,its just that it's hard for her to accept the situation,but hope there gonna be another competition in which lisa can help jennie win and also make jennie's father sees her daughter's performance,pls author make that happens so their love story can get on track...
    Anyway Author this is just awesome,the angry kitten when she turns to lioness,she's just too scary,anyone would feared her,lisa thank god she can tamed her,at first she let her take her angers out,only lisa can control jennie,but that part was funny when lisa was trying to hide in the crowd from jennie,the hunter can hunts anywhere no matter where you hide,lisa also felt that fears when she saw the fury in jennie's eyes,she don't want to die 😂 so it's better to went in a place where your hunter can't see you but unlucky lisa she couldn't hide from her predator,jennie's eyes is like searching for her prey to finish her and when she saw her,there dragging her to the bathroom,i wonder did anything else broke apart from Lisa's back 😂
    Thank you Author,waiting for next part,till then take care...❤❤❤

    • @tatswriter1968
      @tatswriter1968  7 месяцев назад +2

      I was overwhelmed and really glad that you understand the story, I mean in every episode and I'm really happy for that, sad to say few episode will be remaining and I'm planning to make a book 2 of this Love story but let me see soon how the story goes. until then let me hear your feed back about that. I'm really thankful for your comment and feedback I was enjoying to read your message it really makes me happy every time and I really appreciate every d@mn minutes..heheheh once again thank you so much.

    • @ShabneezKNannoo786
      @ShabneezKNannoo786 7 месяцев назад

      @@tatswriter1968 gosh thank you Author,I never thought that you would notice me,I'm kinda happy and thankful for that,well I would say you were so good at narrating the story that I couldn't stop myself from falling for it,even if the story is about to end soon but I know you've the potential to bring another great story,I also would love to see a second part of it cause it's just soooooooo amazing,I always wait for your story,just the way you appreciate my comments I also appreciate your greatest effort for bringing this story as an entertainment for us,also about jenlisa I really can't hold myself,I'm just so weak for them,don't worry I'll always give my feedback to you,thank you for enjoying my comments,nah I should thank you for sharing this lovely story to us,thank you Author,you really made my day by noticing me...❤️🥰

  • @MR-nf2ru
    @MR-nf2ru 7 месяцев назад +1

    Love the story Author, keep bring it.❤😊

  • @siyakumbla1220
    @siyakumbla1220 7 месяцев назад +1

    thank you so much for the update author......waiting for next ep

    • @tatswriter1968
      @tatswriter1968  7 месяцев назад +1

      thank you and still working on it.

  • @user-oi9zs5mt5h
    @user-oi9zs5mt5h 7 месяцев назад +1

    Thank you 😊😊

  • @nadingabriel5989
    @nadingabriel5989 7 месяцев назад +1

    Thank you so much author

    • @tatswriter1968
      @tatswriter1968  7 месяцев назад +1

      Thank you too I really appreciated and your comments guys really makes me happy.

  • @dinamarierudas682
    @dinamarierudas682 7 месяцев назад +1

    Next pls😊

    • @tatswriter1968
      @tatswriter1968  7 месяцев назад +1

      I'm still working on it bear with me guys...

  • @nhorvilan9874
    @nhorvilan9874 7 месяцев назад +1

    😢💔

  • @jassromanda6674
    @jassromanda6674 7 месяцев назад +2

    ❤❤❤

  • @user-hy1kw2xo3w
    @user-hy1kw2xo3w 7 месяцев назад +2

    Author can u make it Lisa is not poor in this ep.make it Lisa disguised poor...but in the twist she is the daughter of prince of the palace...😊PLZZZZ...

    • @tatswriter1968
      @tatswriter1968  7 месяцев назад +2

      I'm working on it, and thank you so much.

    • @ShabneezKNannoo786
      @ShabneezKNannoo786 7 месяцев назад

      Why do you want author to change lisa from poor to rich,do you think a rich can't fall for a poor or a poor can't fall for rich,I think the concept is already good,it's unique and different,you can't bring a twist at the last moment like every other stories of jenlisa,it'll be the same thing then,I think it's already better this way,author pls continue it the way it's,don't bring a change...

  • @eirelavikariabagat7356
    @eirelavikariabagat7356 7 месяцев назад +1

    Author can you please upload the episode 20 part 2 today ? 😢

    • @tatswriter1968
      @tatswriter1968  7 месяцев назад +1

      as much as I can, I will and I'm still working on every episode and hopefully I can manage to make it everyday, thank you.

  • @aurenicebraga-hy4qk
    @aurenicebraga-hy4qk 7 месяцев назад +1

    👑 👑 ❤❤ ฉันรักคุณ อยู่กับฉันนะ วิธีที่เธอโดนจับฉันโดยไม่รู้ตัวและไม่อยากจับ ฉันต้องการคุณ แต่ปล่อยให้มันเป็นหน้าที่ของฉัน มอบหัวใจของคุณ ฉันจะเพิ่มความหลงใหลให้กับคุณเป็นสองเท่า ฉันได้ลิ้มรส APPLE แล้ว และคุณคือคนที่ฉันต้องการ โอเค ฉันเป็นแฟนของคุณ ฉันสารภาพ พรุ่งนี้ฉันจะรอคุณ ความรักของเรานั้นสวยงาม งดงามมาก ไม่มีอะไรจะสวยงามไปกว่าความรักของเรา ฉันรักคุณอยู่กับฉัน ประโยค กระดาษแผ่นหนึ่ง พระจันทร์บนฟ้า แค่เราสองคน กับคุณ ไพ่ของฉันทั้งหมดอยู่บนโต๊ะ ฉันทำไม่ได้ และฉันไม่ต้องการเซอร์ไพรส์ใดๆ สำหรับเรา ความรักของเรานั้นสวยงาม งดงามมาก ไม่มีอะไรจะสวยงามไปกว่าความรักของเรา ความรักของเรานั้นสวยงาม งดงามมาก ไม่มีอะไรจะสวยงามไปกว่าความรักของเรา ความรักของเราช่างสวยงาม/ "ฉันแต่งเพลงนี้เพื่อเธอ" สวยจัง/"ขอหัวใจทั้งหมดหน่อย" ไม่มีอะไรจะสวยงามไปกว่าความรักของเรา "แด่เธอ ฉันคืนความหลงใหลเป็นสองเท่า"...
    C̄hạn rạk khuṇ xyū̀ kạb c̄hạn na wiṭhī thī̀ ṭhex don cạb c̄hạn doy mị̀rū̂ tạw læa mị̀ xyāk cạb c̄hạn t̂xngkār khuṇ tæ̀ pl̀xy h̄ı̂ mạn pĕn h̄n̂āthī̀ k̄hxng c̄hạn mxb h̄ạwcı k̄hxng khuṇ c̄hạn ca pheìm khwām h̄lngh̄ıl h̄ı̂ kạb khuṇ pĕn s̄xng thèā c̄hạn dị̂ lîm rs̄ APPLE læ̂w læa khuṇ khụ̄x khn thī̀ c̄hạn t̂xngkār xokhe c̄hạn pĕn fæn k̄hxng khuṇ c̄hạn s̄ārp̣hāph phrùngnī̂ c̄hạn ca rx khuṇ khwām rạk k̄hxng reā nận s̄wyngām ngdngām māk mị̀mī xarị ca s̄wyngām pị kẁā khwām rạk k̄hxng reā c̄hạn rạk khuṇ xyū̀ kạb c̄hạn prayokh kradās̄ʹ p̄hæ̀n h̄nụ̀ng phracạnthr̒ bn f̂ā khæ̀ reā s̄xng khn kạb khuṇ phị̀ k̄hxng c̄hạn thậngh̄md xyū̀ bn tóa c̄hạn thả mị̀ dị̂ læa c̄hạn mị̀ t̂xngkār sexr̒ phị rs̄̒ dı«s̄ảh̄rạb reā khwām rạk k̄hxng reā nận s̄wyngām ngdngām māk mị̀mī xarị ca s̄wyngām pị kẁā khwām rạk k̄hxng reā khwām rạk k̄hxng reā nận s̄wyngām ngdngām māk mị̀mī xarị ca s̄wyngām pị kẁā khwām rạk k̄hxng reā khwām rạk k̄hxng reā ch̀āng s̄wyngām/ "c̄hạn tæ̀ng phelng nī̂ pheụ̄̀x ṭhex" s̄wy cạng/"k̄hx h̄ạwcı thậngh̄md h̄ǹxy" mị̀mī xarị ca s̄wyngām pị kẁā khwām rạk k̄hxng reā "dæ̀ ṭhex c̄hạn khụ̄n khwām h̄lngh̄ıl pĕn s̄xng thèā"....

    • @tatswriter1968
      @tatswriter1968  7 месяцев назад +2

      I'm really glad you guys got the flow of the story and I really appreciated it, every time I'm reading every comment from you guys it really makes me happy. thank you so much.

  • @sabikaali1549
    @sabikaali1549 7 месяцев назад +2

    Author plz update next episode today part 2

    • @tatswriter1968
      @tatswriter1968  7 месяцев назад +1

      I'm really glad you guys got the flow of the story and I really appreciated it, every time I'm reading every comment from you guys it really makes me happy. thank you so much.

    • @sabikaali1549
      @sabikaali1549 7 месяцев назад

      @tatswriter1968 can u update new extra episode today plz I can't wail tomorrow plzzzz