I’ve walked thousands of miles for a smile that I never knew was fake You took my heart to the stake And like a demon ate it at your hearts content Oh god oh god I sit and repent Not to my sins, but to the sex we just made Thinking it was love again... hold me before I fall again Too late I’ve jumped off the cliff again Write this letter through icy tears Fake smiles showing you my true self even in the end... P.S.
Giving my honest opinion I think this beat is cool but I feel like you can do a lot better creatively , I’ve went through a lot of your beats and a lot of the patterns, progression and tempo are all very similar to each other and makes the beats not feel that refreshing after listening to 5 beats in a row, try using change ups or different sounds/instruments .I get the vibe your going for is r&b but there are so many subcategories of this sound I think you would do great in, a lot of people on here only comment how fire🔥 something is and never give any real feedback so there is no growth .again you make some great beats but I see your potential higher , much love and keep up the work🙌✍️🎶
Key: Gb minor
Tempo: 107 bpm
Prod. Arum x Makii hope yall like it !
This one feels different 😊 ! Gonna try to write on it 🔥
You and Makii made history with this one 🖤
Oppa oppa 🕺🏻
this is sick
🌊😌😌
I’ve walked thousands of miles for a smile that I never knew was fake
You took my heart to the stake
And like a demon ate it at your hearts content
Oh god oh god
I sit and repent
Not to my sins, but to the sex we just made
Thinking it was love again...
hold me before I fall again
Too late I’ve jumped off the cliff again
Write this letter through icy tears
Fake smiles showing you my true self even in the end...
P.S.
Giving my honest opinion I think this beat is cool but I feel like you can do a lot better creatively , I’ve went through a lot of your beats and a lot of the patterns, progression and tempo are all very similar to each other and makes the beats not feel that refreshing after listening to 5 beats in a row, try using change ups or different sounds/instruments .I get the vibe your going for is r&b but there are so many subcategories of this sound I think you would do great in, a lot of people on here only comment how fire🔥 something is and never give any real feedback so there is no growth .again you make some great beats but I see your potential higher , much love and keep up the work🙌✍️🎶
Thank you 🙏🏽