The One Where I Nerd Out About Story Structure ✨ROUGH DRAFT DIARIES

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  • Опубликовано: 28 ноя 2024

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  • @HeartBreathings
    @HeartBreathings  23 дня назад +35

    November vlogs continue! Let's do our best to keep this space writing focused. Hope your projects are going well. ❤

  • @923GTB
    @923GTB 23 дня назад +22

    I feel so spoiled with these fab daily vlog updates from Sarrah! ❤

    • @ashleyemma4954
      @ashleyemma4954 22 дня назад

      Me too, I look forward to them every day!

  • @ghostyplans
    @ghostyplans 23 дня назад +12

    HAPPY WRITING!
    Hit 8k out of 30k yesterday! Wrote almost 2k words yesterday-which NEVER happens.

  • @GailColette
    @GailColette 23 дня назад +18

    Thank you Sarra for all of the knowledge you share and for creating the Roughdraft Challenge! The RDC structure has been so freeing and motivating, I've written more in the past few days than I have in a lllooonnnggg time! I reached my Emerald Tier goal and upgraded to Sapphire!
    You're a great inspiration to all of us aspiring writers! And I hope you and your eyes continue to get the rest you need! ❤
    P.S. Sadly we don't have 7Brew Coffee here in the PNW, which is surprising because we love our coffee up here! I'll have to stick with Dbros for now, their Sweater Weather and Golden Eagle are my favorites.

  • @princesspersia
    @princesspersia 23 дня назад +16

    The way you casually dispense knowledge and inspiration makes watching your videos so fun and insightful! 💜

    • @RK-yx6ir
      @RK-yx6ir 23 дня назад +2

      Yes I love how these are so helpful even if you're not a fiction writer, but taking a creative business and running it like a business without crushing the soul of it is definitely her gift. I love these!!

  • @jaquelinemythril2602
    @jaquelinemythril2602 23 дня назад +7

    I just did my first writing today and got 2100 words!! 😵‍💫
    All of them are just summaries of the upcoming chapters, but I'm figuring out so much of my story and it feels so good. I was at this barrier for writing the story b/c I'm thinking of changing to 3rd person instead of 1st person. I didn't want to have to re-write all the new chapters (along with the already written ones), so I was really holding myself back. Your vlog from the 4th gave me the grace and courage to follow what I needed for my story-writing, and I am so happy for it!!

  • @demiblaize
    @demiblaize 22 дня назад +5

    Today I really needed Sarra’s videos. Going to start from diary number 1 and rewatch now

  • @RemonaGreen
    @RemonaGreen 23 дня назад +8

    I signed up for this Challenge but between working a full time job and being sick I have been too exhausted to do anything. Hopefully I can get on track soon. I am really enjoying these vlogs. They are informative and so relatable.

    • @HeartBreathings
      @HeartBreathings  23 дня назад +3

      Feel better and take the time you need! You can always adjust your goal too if you want to.

  • @JessicaNWheeler
    @JessicaNWheeler 23 дня назад +10

    I realize this wasn't the point of the video but thats a good idea for the kids chore system.

  • @msmwriter
    @msmwriter 20 дней назад +1

    Looking at the entire process as fun keeps me from feeling overwhelmed. Great tips and advice, as always!

  • @curiositystoryer
    @curiositystoryer 23 дня назад +6

    The vibe of your outfit is giving me all the good feels today.🤩 Loved this episode- hearing structure and process breakdowns are always massively motivating.

  • @garcher9718
    @garcher9718 22 дня назад +1

    One thing I'm learning from you, Sarra, is how to take it easy on myself. I'm one to beat myself up if I don't reach my goal, if I can't get it all done on time. I see you happy, dealing with stuff as it comes, taking time or a health/nurture day, and still succeeding. I don't know if you realize how healing this is for someone who's been under the pressure at a job for 22 years then lost it. I feel like I've been sitting and spinning and getting nothing accomplished, until now. So thank you for sharing the work, scheduling, healing time, and the little bits of play. They're making such a difference. ❤

  • @stephaniecarter973
    @stephaniecarter973 21 день назад +1

    I just wanted to say that I loved that you explained that to us. It made sense to me. As a pantser I don’t plan but I want to get into fantasy one day so I see the value of preplanning the story.

  • @LeahWriter
    @LeahWriter 23 дня назад +2

    Your fall look suits your colouring so well...makes me want to go shopping hehe

    • @kalikuz
      @kalikuz 22 дня назад

      I was here to comment this as well!

  • @JanetKB
    @JanetKB 23 дня назад +4

    I received your book yesterday and can't wait to read it!!!

  • @elliestephenson4146
    @elliestephenson4146 20 дней назад

    Love the nerding out! Feeling so inspired by your daily vlogs. Like you, the first week of RDC has been about figuring stuff out. I’m only 15/120 sprints into my target, as I’ve been working, but I have 12 days holiday from the 11th. Gonna be nerding my heart out 😊

  • @mariajromaley
    @mariajromaley 23 дня назад +3

    happy to see you better. Kisses from France !

  • @eeveequeen25
    @eeveequeen25 23 дня назад +2

    Glad to hear your energy is still high ❤ I got another chapter edited today, but I'm moving slower than expected! I appreciate your words about slow and fast creative phases

  • @cassiemerson7789
    @cassiemerson7789 22 дня назад +1

    ahh it was so cool to see the thought process behind structuring the books - thank you for sharing that!

    • @HeartBreathings
      @HeartBreathings  22 дня назад

      It might all shift but that's where I am right now 😂.

  • @bwellnourished
    @bwellnourished 22 дня назад

    I just love watchings these vlogs… watching you thrive gives me permission to devote myself to both my family and my passion project. It’s hard to explain but I genuinely appreciate you being so real. ❤

  • @BelleGardener
    @BelleGardener 23 дня назад +2

    I’m planning/plotting as well and I’m counting all the words. lol keep the vlogs coming as much as you can handle. You’re such a hardworking woman. *Back to work I go *

  • @augustinaiturra8037
    @augustinaiturra8037 18 дней назад

    I've been enjoying this Rough Draft process. It feels so much more approachable the NaNoWriMo did. Cute fall look 😍 i can't believe Dutch Bros has made it to Texas, I feel like I grew up with them here in Oregon.

  • @Hartleal13
    @Hartleal13 22 дня назад

    You put out vids so fast. My hero.

  • @Laura-ti2tm
    @Laura-ti2tm 23 дня назад +1

    You've motivated me to read more fiction too! I get a bit obsessed reading more and more craft books

  • @mikwrites
    @mikwrites 21 день назад

    this was so helpful for me and my books im writing right now - i also love to nerd out on story structure 😂

  • @jenniferbaumer1654
    @jenniferbaumer1654 22 дня назад

    Love the project board. I love your videos and the inspiration to keep going, keep working. My HB90 is in a classic Happy Planner and am in process of finishing a project list of every single unfinished writing project and its status. It will move daily to always be the first thing I see so that when looking for something to do I can do small things, and when finishing a big project, I know everything I could be working on and can pick from it. There's lots to pick from!

  • @Zeengkd
    @Zeengkd 23 дня назад +3

    I'm currently 5000+ words into my RDC project. My goal is probably 25K or 30K, I'll see how it goes.
    Go Sarra🎉 I love your blogs.
    I also had a very slow beginning (138 words for Day 1). I hope you have a great November ❤

  • @KimtheElder
    @KimtheElder 22 дня назад +1

    Really love this style of video. Learning, the family, sharing your day - it's like hanging out with you - thank you!💜
    Edit: Love the plaid shirt. The colors are so soothing. Looks cozy :)

  • @KellysCreativeDreams
    @KellysCreativeDreams 23 дня назад

    Hi Sarra.
    I haven't started writing either. I'm fitting in at least 1 hour every day for just mapping things out. Reminds me, I need to watch your mapping video yet. May do that as my hour today and do some sketching.
    I LOVE not having the pressure to just puke words on a page. Instead, I can let things flow as they need to. Thank you for this challenge!
    Creative Blessings 7 Hugs!

  • @katem7607
    @katem7607 23 дня назад

    So far so good, a little behind but will get those words added up as the times goes on. Thanks for being awesome!

  • @Kat_Author2021
    @Kat_Author2021 23 дня назад +1

    On day 5, I reached the 25k milestone while writing in two projects. ❤ I’m loving this Rough Draft Challenge!

  • @ghettoskrub
    @ghettoskrub 23 дня назад +1

    Yay dutch bros! They originated near my home town in oregon. We don't have a 7brew around here as far as I know.

    • @mariahsmall487
      @mariahsmall487 22 дня назад

      Oregon resident and Dutch Bro’s lover here too! I don’t know why but it made me excited to hear that there was going to be a location near Sarra.

  • @isabellajuanitalyn
    @isabellajuanitalyn 22 дня назад

    This is so cool, love seeing your planning process!

  • @ashleyemma4954
    @ashleyemma4954 22 дня назад

    I'm on chapter 11 of TDOVS. I LOVE IT!!! I just want to shirk all my responsibilities and binge read it lol😅

  • @thitpoulsen352
    @thitpoulsen352 23 дня назад

    I loved your outfit in this one! - Thank you for the reminder that a successful day isn't necessarily about how many words you write. I'm trying to catch up since i had a bad health day yesterday and i'm over 2600 words now, but i feel like the last 600 minimum have been forced. I'm only 960 ish words off-target so i think i'm gonna call it good and just enjoy some self care and read TDOVS instead.
    I started reading it last night and i really just intended to read a chapter or two, but i could not put it down and ended up stopping at chapter 17 when the need to sleep started winning and the book nearly smacked me in the face. I've never been super interested in this genre of books before, but i'm genuinely really enjoying it. I can't wait to see what happens with the memory business!
    I hope you're doing well ♥

  • @tampagirl7533
    @tampagirl7533 23 дня назад

    Thank you for sharing!!

  • @AdventuresInFantasy
    @AdventuresInFantasy 23 дня назад +1

    Your work area is so cute! Wow, I am always impressed when people have so many things going and plan so well. I am more of a chaotic fling into the universe and hope-for-the-best kind of person, haha.

  • @nightlady2001
    @nightlady2001 15 дней назад

    I wanted to do a jar with little crystals to move over like you have. Found on temu "40 piece halloween decor vase filler" comprised of a spooky assortment of acrylic bats, spiders, ghosts, pumpkins, skulls and witches hats. I'm doing a witchy series and don't mind spooky all year. But I might order other assortment for different seasons or months. There's a fall one and a Christmas one I like. Cost was only 2.65.

  • @frogponddreams
    @frogponddreams 23 дня назад +3

    I'm currently at about 7200/7300 out of 50K words for my RDC project, which isn't the fastest writing I've ever done, but it's been a busy Bonfire Night weekend for me in the UK and school takes up a lot of my time atm as I'm prepping for A-Levels next term - so not too bad considering!
    Edit: at 16:30, the subtitles transcribe 'serial' as 'cereal' and it's making me laugh so hard lol

  • @DawnMontgomeryAuthor
    @DawnMontgomeryAuthor 22 дня назад

    So many things I want to say!!!
    I love that lipstick!!! I love your rough draft diaries. Do you feel more relaxed with your writing challenge than following NaNoWriMo in the past? Those stickers are awesome too (from the lunch writing date). Thank you so much for explaining your nesting doll structure. Seeing your process is so amazing! Your episode breakdown was also incredible.
    This is the best month ever! Thanks for being so generous with your time and joy of writing.

  • @hannahheart1254
    @hannahheart1254 22 дня назад

    I’ve been wanting to do what you’re doing but have each of the steps of the story structure as 27 books. And now since I’ve watched this video about how you’re doing it, it’s making me want to get back to try it my own way

  • @karinampohlmann
    @karinampohlmann 23 дня назад

    read tdovs SO fast! such a great read!! thank you, thank you^^
    and now my favourite thing about november, watching your diaries 😍
    aaaand you look great in the brown shirt and hat btw, classy vibes going on^^

  • @kiakuresman5789
    @kiakuresman5789 22 дня назад

    I'm rewatching Buffy and this process sounds a lot like the first two seasons. Since you also like Buffy, maybe add that to your gaming and reading for inspiration? I am Loving watching your videos this year. Thanks for bringing us along!

  • @jessatlife
    @jessatlife 23 дня назад +1

    Hi Sarra! I wanted to recommend The Serpent and the Wings of Night, by Carissa Broadbent, for your TBR. It is a fantasy romance with competition and enemies to lovers, and one of my current favorites in the genre.

  • @bridgetgiles7560
    @bridgetgiles7560 23 дня назад

    George never smiles like my husband lol😂

    • @HeartBreathings
      @HeartBreathings  22 дня назад

      😂 so true. We're opposites in so many ways

  • @CM-fo2he
    @CM-fo2he 22 дня назад

    Pink Hello Kitty just hanging out on the floor.

    • @HeartBreathings
      @HeartBreathings  22 дня назад +1

      Evie is constantly taking things off my shelves. Hello Kitty is a frequent floor visitor 😂

    • @CM-fo2he
      @CM-fo2he 22 дня назад

      @HeartBreathings :)

  • @KHWriting
    @KHWriting 23 дня назад

    No worries. You explained that structure so well. It just makes me look forward all the more to your Plot Your Novel update. Yesterday was a 0 day for me too. I gotta get to work shortly today and get stuff done. Even a little bit.
    Edit: I meant to ask if you could link or give the full name of the tablet. I have hopes of getting one for myself as a treat. And I want one that works well for writing with a stylus. And I need a Samsung bc that's all my stuff too.

  • @katendress6142
    @katendress6142 22 дня назад

    🎵Get this plotty started on a Saturday night...🎶

  • @jstimagin
    @jstimagin 18 дней назад

    PNW we have Dutch Bro's everywhere. They have amazing iced tea. No 7 brews. Wish Dutch had a sit-down location instead of just drive through.

  • @psychedianic
    @psychedianic 23 дня назад +3

    Unrelated, but what is that lipstick colour? It is so pretty! Does anyone know?

    • @HeartBreathings
      @HeartBreathings  22 дня назад +1

      Thank you! It's Kylie Jenner lip duo in "sweater weather"

    • @psychedianic
      @psychedianic 22 дня назад

      @HeartBreathings Love it! Not that you need more video ideas or side projects but your makeup game is on point and I'm sure lots of hearties would love to know what products you use. 😊 No pressure though! Do what you can and want to do, friend!

  • @PolkadotSparrow
    @PolkadotSparrow 23 дня назад

    I loved seeing your plot written out- that makes sense and makes me want to try serialized! I'm curious as to how you're naming each book- Will each be called A Mirror of Shadows w/the #?

    • @HeartBreathings
      @HeartBreathings  22 дня назад +1

      I'm toying around with ideas and haven't decided yet!

  • @Neil-writer-author
    @Neil-writer-author 23 дня назад +4

    I have over 1,000 words out of 10k

  • @marinafinlayson6131
    @marinafinlayson6131 22 дня назад

    Oh, Sarra, my heart sank when you mentioned putting this on Kindle Vella. The Vella program is closing in February 2025.

    • @HeartBreathings
      @HeartBreathings  22 дня назад +1

      Oh no I'm not putting this on Vella! You misunderstood! I was giving an example of a place where people have published serialized stories in the past. That's why I said "kindle Vella rest in peace" ✨

    • @marinafinlayson6131
      @marinafinlayson6131 22 дня назад

      @HeartBreathings thank goodness! Sorry, I must have got distracted at the crucial moment 😁

  • @SM-yd8hq
    @SM-yd8hq 22 дня назад

    27,000 words into editing. I try and do at least 2 chapters a day and there is a lot of rewriting in there. I'm loving the push I get from this.

  • @LarissaThePhoenix
    @LarissaThePhoenix 23 дня назад

    Sarra you should be able to load up your digital planner also into the Samsung notes

    • @HeartBreathings
      @HeartBreathings  22 дня назад

      Yes it goes into Samsung too! But I like the Penly app for the sticker features 😂

  • @shanshangalan8074
    @shanshangalan8074 23 дня назад +1

    I am at 5,250 so far

  • @GeekGirlPlans
    @GeekGirlPlans 23 дня назад +2

    Hi! I filled out the google doc to get an autographed copy of DOVS, but I have not received the email. Did I miss it or is it still on the way? - Thanks!!

    • @HeartBreathings
      @HeartBreathings  23 дня назад +1

      Invoices started going out today! On the form we said first week of November for invoices so they are just going out. Lots of work behind the scenes but thank you for your order

    • @GeekGirlPlans
      @GeekGirlPlans 23 дня назад

      @@HeartBreathings Yay! I can't wait!

    • @GeekGirlPlans
      @GeekGirlPlans 21 день назад

      @@HeartBreathings I got it today! Can't wait to read the book!

  • @nightlady2001
    @nightlady2001 15 дней назад

    All that structure stuff confused me. Lol. But I'm not doing a serial so hopefully it will be OK.