For the Agro and for the algo! I’ve been listen as many of you, for almost 2 months and I love falling asleep listening to Agro’s voice! The stories are great but the voice makes them better! Getting harder to find any I haven’t heard! LOVE IT!
To the writer of this story. Some constructive criticism. This is a good... well thought out story. A word of advice... saying things like "he always found himself gazing at it time-to-time." doesn't really make sense. The character can gaze at it time to time, but ALWAYS? He can't do both. Try saying he often found himself gazing at it, or something like it. Sometimes you repeat words too often. These are minor gripes, but I know you're probably improving your craft as time goes on.
you might want to go to the reddit link to the original story to post that. For as long as I can remember, I've caught myself glancing up at orion's belt - you could say I've ALWAYS had that quirk. Not bad for constructive criticism though, it's hard to pick a nit without coming off as an asshole, never mastered the skill myself.
legazy of slayers lingering to plunder the garden corpse.... and it will crave to consume you and nurture the festering wounds your past twisted it into... linger to heal it... and the embers of its spirits essence shall sooth your heart... endure to patch the wounds of old folly... and once the faint pulse of its embers sparks anew it will nurture thee's name part as of its rebirths everlasting legazy...
i tend to listen to you while doing work. i do it so much and so often that i struggle to do work without listening to your voice 😂
I know right! I've listened to so much that I am scrolling and scrolling for videos I haven't seen yet.
He has such a soothing voice, i often go back to his old videos to fall asleep to
For the Agro and for the algo! I’ve been listen as many of you, for almost 2 months and I love falling asleep listening to Agro’s voice! The stories are great but the voice makes them better! Getting harder to find any I haven’t heard! LOVE IT!
This one got me in my feels broski
To the writer of this story. Some constructive criticism. This is a good... well thought out story. A word of advice... saying things like "he always found himself gazing at it time-to-time." doesn't really make sense. The character can gaze at it time to time, but ALWAYS? He can't do both.
Try saying he often found himself gazing at it, or something like it. Sometimes you repeat words too often. These are minor gripes, but I know you're probably improving your craft as time goes on.
you might want to go to the reddit link to the original story to post that.
For as long as I can remember, I've caught myself glancing up at orion's belt - you could say I've ALWAYS had that quirk. Not bad for constructive criticism though, it's hard to pick a nit without coming off as an asshole, never mastered the skill myself.
@@muninrob what you wrote isn't the same as what he wrote. It's not a good analogy.
For the algorithm, the narrator, the author but mostly for TERRA SOL!
Well, this was sad af. But also inspiring af.
Great story and narration!
Greetings Mentlegent!
For the Rhythm that is Algo
Cleansing and Renewal
For Terra's Air!
legazy of slayers lingering to plunder the garden corpse.... and it will crave to consume you and nurture the festering wounds your past twisted it into...
linger to heal it... and the embers of its spirits essence shall sooth your heart...
endure to patch the wounds of old folly... and once the faint pulse of its embers sparks anew it will nurture thee's name part as of its rebirths everlasting legazy...
Damn Onion Ninjas, nice story
Someone paid attention in their college writing class
Thank you for the video.
For the algorithm!
To please the algorithm is all
neat
thumbnail seems a bit misleading at first but it's a wonderful story that seems a bit more true with current events
thanks for the story and narration
For the algorithm. Love this
Something something algorithm
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For the Algorithm11!
To please the algorithm is all
“The bæëänd”
For the Algorithm, For the Author(s), For the Disembodied Voice!
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Am i the only one getting the Titan AE vibes here
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It just seems less awesomely animated for some reason.
Reject osha, embrace progress
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