Even on my worst days I’m working late Saving up For an upgrade Even on my down days I’m moving Numbers in my brain These Statistics Are ballistic All I can do is take it As they dish it Another day Added to the edition Another piece added To the vision Chemical monster They pump full of drugs Killing all my love Feeding me slugs That’s just lead in the mud What’s done is done I said fuck it I’m gonna live for fun I know you hate to see my face In the sun I can’t relate to your hate My soul escapes To ah higher space Success is an attempt away So what is pain You vs yourself Don’t blame anyone else Your days are cards Don’t fold or play your heart Be set apart Be the center piece That’s a lot of table to get to me
these are bad if i’m gonna be honest, just way too basic. try harder man. i’m not hating im just being honest with you, criticism makes you improve. so if you can’t see im tryna help you, ur not going anywhere
Too basic in what way, what didn’t you like about it? I usually just go off how I’m feeling, just off the top of my head I honestly wanted to keep it simpler than I normally do. But hey if I don’t get any likes on it after a few days I’ll delete it
@ don’t delete it, keep it for progress, i personally just thought it was basic because of the lack of metaphors, your lyrics will never catch any attention from anyone, if they aren’t unique. and original. you have to talk about a topic with very little light shined upon it. use metaphors, study rhyme scheme. hiphop can get so complex but people choose to see it in black and white, if that doesn’t make sense to you, i’m afraid this probably isn’t for you. i’m a 16 year old artist and this is my passion, i my writing when i was 14 is similar to what you’re doing now.
@@Luckyrecords08 I understand what you mean, I usually just write something just for food for thought for other people I haven’t been making music for a while I have a SoundCloud like everyone dose but I was locked out of it can still see all the music an listen but I lost motivation since then so I just post lyrics when I get motivated by a beat I hear plus if I really write something that gets maybe over 1000 likes I would buy the beat and make the song but music is a little complicated right now so even gaining popularity is kinda unappealing to me because I’m in a good position in life so extra money would be nice but the extra stress is just unattractive
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wonderful
This is awesome
Even on my worst days
I’m working late
Saving up
For an
upgrade
Even on my down days
I’m moving
Numbers in my brain
These Statistics
Are ballistic
All I can do
is take it
As they dish it
Another day Added
to the
edition
Another piece added
To the
vision
Chemical monster
They pump full of drugs
Killing all my love
Feeding me slugs
That’s just
lead in the mud
What’s done is done
I said fuck it I’m gonna
live for fun
I know you hate
to see my face
In the sun
I can’t relate to your hate
My soul escapes
To ah higher space
Success is an attempt away
So what is pain
You vs yourself
Don’t blame anyone else
Your days are cards
Don’t fold or play your heart
Be set apart
Be the center piece
That’s a lot of table to get to me
these are bad if i’m gonna be honest, just way too basic. try harder man. i’m not hating im just being honest with you, criticism makes you improve. so if you can’t see im tryna help you, ur not going anywhere
Too basic in what way, what didn’t you like about it?
I usually just go off
how I’m feeling, just
off the top of my head
I honestly
wanted to keep it simpler
than I normally do.
But hey
if I don’t get any likes on it after a few days I’ll delete it
@ don’t delete it, keep it for progress, i personally just thought it was basic because of the lack of metaphors, your lyrics will never catch any attention from anyone, if they aren’t unique. and original. you have to talk about a topic with very little light shined upon it. use metaphors, study rhyme scheme. hiphop can get so complex but people choose to see it in black and white, if that doesn’t make sense to you, i’m afraid this probably isn’t for you. i’m a 16 year old artist and this is my passion, i my writing when i was 14 is similar to what you’re doing now.
@@MR.CL3AN777 i love the message, you just need to add more, and make it more unique
@@Luckyrecords08 I understand what you mean, I usually just write something just for food for thought
for other people
I haven’t been making music for a while
I have a SoundCloud like everyone dose but
I was locked out of it
can still see all the music an listen
but I lost motivation since then so I just post lyrics when I get motivated by a beat I hear plus if I really write something that gets maybe over 1000 likes I would buy the beat and make the song but music is a little complicated right now so even gaining popularity is kinda unappealing to me because I’m in a good position in life so extra money would be nice but the extra stress is just unattractive