Ahhhh it was so cute , sweet , possessive and Blushy Story!!!! Gosh i wanna kiss ur hands for typing those beautiful words and 90 degree Bow To ur mind 👀✨💜💟😊
Wohhhh soooo amajin unnie 💜 I love it but when your going to upload rich bully fall for poor boy waiting for your next masterpiece unnie 💜💫 love uuuuuuuuuuu soooooo muchhhhhhh my bun ❤️😊
@@bangtanclaimax8718 awww unnie u know what I really very love you soooo muchhhh ...u always the comments weither it is one sentences or long paragraphs always call with sweet sweet nickname... U know what your my favourite author ur not like other authors who didn't even reply to the comments if someone ask the questions too I am saying they are bad I understand they mab be have some conditions but I really thankful to you dear whenever you always reply me I feel very happy unnie 💜 u have so many subscribers still you never get tired of replying us we Love you so much unnie 💜💫😍 I just want to thanks to you that communicate with us ...btw unnie don't u have Instagram account plzzz send us your I'd...🥺❤️
@@bangtanclaimax8718 you always reply the comments 😁 it's miss the part in my imotional speech btw it's not speach it's my feelings 🥺 that how I feel when u reply us and call us with Nickname I feel very happy unnie 💜😊
@@sakshiingle-ol6mv ohh bun how can I not reply you all sweetys whome are so so sweet towards me🤧and it's totally my pleasure love.. Thank you again bun💕🥺
@@sakshiingle-ol6mv ohh hey love thank you so so much for your this wonderful comment 💞💞💞💞💞 And you know you all lovely readers Of mine is so so kind and sweet and How I not reply back you guys love You have right to talk with me and I Will always reply you guys back my lovelies...btw I love you more bun💕 And yes I have a Instagram I'd and I already posted it on my RUclips channel community lab go and check it out bun 💕
Unnie first of all thank you so much for this ff.. I am truly support you. Keep it up. You are such a beautiful author... I love your every story very much and also this episode. I want a special episode of this story and also I want the next episode of "when a cold mafia fall in love for a University student"....
Poor Hobi getting smacked by Jin 😂 I had a feeling the surprise was gonna be that i cant wait to see the special episode for this Please make Tae's moodswings hilarious and also the delivery part
Uniee....after a long time.....I missed you so much and for my waiting patience my uniee uploaded a very beautiful story which shows the emotions and love towards each other 🤩 but that jealousy part is on another level.....very nice story uniee...I can't able to describe how it attracted me and you are making me to fall very deeper with ur amazing stories and I hope there will be a special part😊and also eagerly waiting for the mafia King and the student remaining special episode...Hope you are doing well uniee..I hope you had a great day in ur college and also a great day in home ❤...Take care of yourself uniee..I don't want my uniee to fall sick and eat healthy and stay happy with great health ❣️..... Missing you sooo much my dear uniee....😊Take care and lastly SARANGHAE 💜...ur sis loving u so much....and missing you so much 💓 BORAHAE 💜uniee
Ohh bun your words always make me spaceless...🥺😭😭❤️❤️❤️❤️ You are so sweet and caring ❤️ thank you so much for your this wonderful comment love ❤️ and I am totally fine btw how are you?hope you having a wonderful day and from tomorrow my exam will starting...love you so so much..take care love💕💕💕💕💕💕❤️❤️❤️❤️
Ohhh...no worries uniee....let's rock the exam and keep on working but with little breaks also😀...All the best uniee.... 💜Hope u will give the best in ur exams...Rock it 💜
Ohh hey love happy birthday ☺️😚🥳🥳❤️❤️and I will surely make a new ff from today I will start to work on a new ff but love I can't change tae's gender you know...🥺
Why in all the fanfic's tae is some stupid, always blushing, don't know how to defend himself or reject someone's offer adult man? Just some tips on writing a fanfic you can use it, if you want to improve. 1. Learn english and how to use proper grammar (spelling mistakes are okay) 2. Don't always repeat the things and word or sentence over and over again 3. Make character act according to their age. If they are 25 make them act like a 25 year old not like some freaking kid. If a 25 year old character is childish, you can still make their personality and behaviour a bit childish without making whole person look like a 5 year old! You know. 4. Think before you write, means you should imagine what it would look like or feel like in real life. For example the scene when tae sat on jungkook's lap. Do you think that's mature for his age to act like that? Do you think it's professional for jungkook to allow it? They should have handled it with more maturity I think. Considering they are in public moreover in front of cameras. And are in a big professional celebration. 5. Don't repeat the character personality and behaviour. I have noticed in most of your video's, jungkook is always possessive and protective type who always just kiss tae's forehead 1000 times and smiles at every little thing tae does. Because if you repeat the same thing again and again it just gets boring. And Tae's character is always blushing and being shy at Every. Little. Thing. And he also gets emotional so damm easily. Like during jungkook's speech I don't think it was emotional moment. Even if jungkook thanked him and all the other things It should've been a proud and happy moment. So I don't get why tae is teary eyed and RAN towards him. His character is always like a 5 year old kid who don't know anything. it gets super annoying and uninteresting. You should change the character's personality and behaviour. 6. Do research. Like if you're doing a CEO fanfic, you should research how CEO's work and how the office work and how the event, celebrations, meeting, projects are done. Of course not fully in depth research but just some important things and parts. So it can look professional, well researched and over all best. 7. Read other's fanfic's. So you can learn when people get bored and annoying. Which character's people like the most. You can also learn different styles of writings. 8. Look for criticizing comments. When you read your comments or other author's comments section you should read criticizing comments rather than praising comments. It can help you a lot to improve as it's not sugar coating. 9. Watch k-drama and bl-drama. See how character interact with each other. See how romance is does in the drama. See how the character develops. For the moment that's all I can remember. If I remembered more important tips I'll tell you. Also I hope you read this as a criticism and not a hate fully comments, and really take this in to consideration and improve. I hope when I read you're fanfic's again you will be a little bit improved. Best of luck 👍
Well ow..ow..ow...dude first very much thank you and second you don't have to tell me this tips cause I already know of it and other please don't write this big comment like a paragraph or something like that if you don't like it just say it in two or three words but not write this much big what ever and English is not my own language so please don't do it from the next time I hope you understand 🙂
(Sigh) As I thought someone who can't take criticism for their own good. First of all, I didn't force you to take the tips. I said 'you can use it IF you want to improve'. You can continue writing without improving. Second of all, if you know all this tips and many other, why don't you use it in your fanfic's. I have not seen a single video of yours in which the character are not the same as the previous ones or in which you use proper grammar and english or even some little improvement. Also I didn't say in my whole comment that I didn't like the video. you just assumed that on your own, why? Just cause I wrote some criticizing comment for your OWN improvement that you can't even take into consideration without thinking I hate your videos, WOW! And here I thought I'll find someone mature and understanding enough to take the criticism in a supporting way or in a good spirit without thinking i'm spreading hate. But alas no luck here. Also just to let you know there are many taekook author's whose second language is english but they write just fine. Even though they learned english from scratch because they want to improve and they still make spelling mistakes ok! But who doesn't? So I don't think it's a barrier if you really want to improve! It will not only help you in videos but also in your school or college and even in future with your job or whatever. That's it! If you want to improve you can no one's stopping you and if you don't want to stay as you are. your choice! P.S: English is not my first language🙃
@@Ether875 first of all I understand your words second I have no time for follow your those tips bun and Second why you guys always have to Say us this long things...I have no hate towards you but dude please don't write this much damn long comment...you can just say it in three or five lines...and also I understand you...I just newly Open this channel of mine and there is a good damn story of mine behind it..ahh how can I say what ever sorry for my rudeness just I want to say you that I am not a good author or Something like that..🙂 andy writing skills are also not that good that you Expect bun...so just ignore it..
@@bangtanclaimax8718Well...I hoped at least this time you'll give me a point to point answer to the points I made previously. As you didn't in my last two comments....but okay whatever! Why was I expecting. And If you REALLY UNDERSTAND, then good I guess. If you're really busy and these fanfics is your hobby than no need I suppose? Your first video was 10 months ago all most a year, so...new?also the story part I don't know how is that related to the conversation between us, but nonetheless good for you. I didn't find your comment rude or something like that. I guess, I was just annoyed as nowadays no one can take positive criticism, all of them just want the sugar coated praising without the harsh reality. And that's really bad because if they just want to hear the praises they can never improve or be better of a person/human being in any scenario that is! And you not being a good author, you'll just learn in time. You can also improve if you put some hours in it but as you said you are busy. I'm not even in beginner level but thanks for the compliment?! I suppose. About your third point I will talk now. I don't think what I wanted to say or said could be said in THREE or FIVE line. I think if you want the other person to understand you or see things from your perspective, you NEED to say or write in more details. Also your both comments are fairly long, and some of the other praises comments are also long you don't seem to have a problem there. You only said this to me why?!🤔 And if you hate long comments this much! You could've just replied with yes or no earlier. But okay! And lastly I said what I wanted to say. you can do whatever you want, I'm no one to force you. But I still personally think you should learn english and grammar, not for the fanfic's but for your own good. I think your in school? So it would help you in studies and in future. But of course! the last say is yours. 😀
author when are you gonna write next part of when mafia fall in love with a student
I will upload it soon dear 🥺💕
I wait for that too😭
@@annclara9318 I understand bun I am now working on the badboy fall in love with a silent boy next part after that I will start to work on it 🥺❤️
@@bangtanclaimax8718 otayy👉🏻👈🏻
@@annclara9318 aish cuite😚
This was such a sweet and beautiful love story 🤨🤔🧐 both cute yet adorable just so romantic. 😘😍🥰❤️💛❤️🔥
Thank you so so much sweetie 🥰😘 I am glad that you enjoyed it bun 🥺❤️
Ahhhh it was so cute , sweet , possessive and Blushy Story!!!! Gosh i wanna kiss ur hands for typing those beautiful words and 90 degree Bow To ur mind 👀✨💜💟😊
Omo bun you just make me spaceless by your this wonderful comment ❤️😊🥺😭😭🤧thank you so so much love and love you so much 💋❤️
@@bangtanclaimax8718 Omo !!! Love uh deserve everything ❤️
Dear it was so cute😘😘😘;amazing 😍😍😍n wonderful story👍👍👍 luv ur work👌👌👌 thnk u💓💓💓 I💜U
Aww thank you so so much bun💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕love you so much ❤️
Unnie plz write next part of when the rich bully fall in love with the poor guy plz plz plz
Love really sorry for the late but don't worry I will upload it soon dear 🥺💕
@@bangtanclaimax8718 awwwiii okay sweet author 🥺🥺
@@hafsahafuuu1715 again sorry for it you know bun my exam is starting from tomorrow 🥲
@@bangtanclaimax8718 awwii unnie best of luck for your exam god bless you 💙💙
@@hafsahafuuu1715 omo cuite pie thank you so much ❤️🤗🥺❤️☺️
Wohhhh soooo amajin unnie 💜 I love it but when your going to upload rich bully fall for poor boy waiting for your next masterpiece unnie 💜💫 love uuuuuuuuuuu soooooo muchhhhhhh my bun ❤️😊
Aww thank you so so much sweetie ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️and don't worry I will upload it soon dear 🥺💕
@@bangtanclaimax8718 awww unnie u know what I really very love you soooo muchhhh ...u always the comments weither it is one sentences or long paragraphs always call with sweet sweet nickname... U know what your my favourite author ur not like other authors who didn't even reply to the comments if someone ask the questions too I am saying they are bad I understand they mab be have some conditions but I really thankful to you dear whenever you always reply me I feel very happy unnie 💜 u have so many subscribers still you never get tired of replying us we Love you so much unnie 💜💫😍 I just want to thanks to you that communicate with us ...btw unnie don't u have Instagram account plzzz send us your I'd...🥺❤️
@@bangtanclaimax8718 you always reply the comments 😁 it's miss the part in my imotional speech btw it's not speach it's my feelings 🥺 that how I feel when u reply us and call us with Nickname I feel very happy unnie 💜😊
@@sakshiingle-ol6mv ohh bun how can I not reply you all sweetys whome are so so sweet towards me🤧and it's totally my pleasure love..
Thank you again bun💕🥺
@@sakshiingle-ol6mv ohh hey love thank you so so much for your this wonderful comment 💞💞💞💞💞
And you know you all lovely readers
Of mine is so so kind and sweet and
How I not reply back you guys love
You have right to talk with me and I
Will always reply you guys back my lovelies...btw I love you more bun💕
And yes I have a Instagram I'd and I already posted it on my RUclips channel community lab go and check it out bun 💕
"When a rich bully fall in love with poor boy" next part pls unni
I will upload it soon dear 🥺💕
Woooow very very very oooosm story dear author🎉❤❤
Thank you so much sweetie 😘🥰🥺🌹💕
Unnie first of all thank you so much for this ff.. I am truly support you. Keep it up. You are such a beautiful author... I love your every story very much and also this episode. I want a special episode of this story and also I want the next episode of "when a cold mafia fall in love for a University student"....
Ohh baby thank you so so much 🥺
You know you are so sweet 😭🤧💗
Love you so much sweetie please take care and God bless you bun ❤️
💗💗💗💗💗💗❤️💗💗💗💗💗💗
Hi when you will upload its special episode
I will upload it soon dear 🥺💕
Dang, that baby is probably really shaken up from what they did that night 👀
Aish you cuite naughty pie👀🌚🤦🏻♀️
@@bangtanclaimax8718 hehe 😇
It's so good and Unnie when are you going to upload next part of rich bully fall in love with poor boy
First thank you so much bun❤️❤️ second I will upload it soon dear 🥺💕
I really love you love you so much and also your every story❤❤❤❤❤😊😊😊😊😊.....
Aww love you more my bun 🤗🤗❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️😘🥰💗💗☺️💕💕💕
this sooooooooooo Beautiful author
♥️💫😇
Aww thank you so so much sweetie 😘🥰
Sweet, loved it❣️
Aww thank you so much sweetie 🥰
Poor Hobi getting smacked by Jin 😂
I had a feeling the surprise was gonna be that i cant wait to see the special episode for this
Please make Tae's moodswings hilarious and also the delivery part
Did you enjoyed love?🤩and thank you bun💕and poor hobi🤣
And I will surely make a special episode like your idea 🥰😘
@@bangtanclaimax8718 it was so good and I cant wait for more
@@daniellebennis2126 thank you loveee💕💕
@@bangtanclaimax8718 your welcome
Uniee....after a long time.....I missed you so much and for my waiting patience my uniee uploaded a very beautiful story which shows the emotions and love towards each other 🤩 but that jealousy part is on another level.....very nice story uniee...I can't able to describe how it attracted me and you are making me to fall very deeper with ur amazing stories and I hope there will be a special part😊and also eagerly waiting for the mafia King and the student remaining special episode...Hope you are doing well uniee..I hope you had a great day in ur college and also a great day in home ❤...Take care of yourself uniee..I don't want my uniee to fall sick and eat healthy and stay happy with great health ❣️..... Missing you sooo much my dear uniee....😊Take care and lastly SARANGHAE 💜...ur sis loving u so much....and missing you so much 💓 BORAHAE 💜uniee
Ohh bun your words always make me spaceless...🥺😭😭❤️❤️❤️❤️
You are so sweet and caring ❤️ thank you so much for your this wonderful comment love ❤️ and I am totally fine btw how are you?hope you having a wonderful day and from tomorrow my exam will starting...love you so so much..take care love💕💕💕💕💕💕❤️❤️❤️❤️
Ohhh...no worries uniee....let's rock the exam and keep on working but with little breaks also😀...All the best uniee.... 💜Hope u will give the best in ur exams...Rock it 💜
@@susheelanalluri2938 aww my sweetie pie thank you so much 🥺🤗❤️❤️love you so much sweetie 😘🥰
Amazing ❤
Thank you so much bun ❤️
Special episode
I will upload it soon dear 🥺💕
Can’t wait to watch
❤️❤️🤗
Please make special episode 🥺
I will upload it soon dear 🥺💕
Thank you for making this amazing video! Please keep it up we're always here to support you author 💖❤️✨
Ohh bun you are most welcome 🤗🥺❤️and thank you so so much for the support 💗 love you so much 💗
Di my birthday is coming on 30 so will you make one shot story for me please if you want boy x girl taekook top kook boy tae as girl 😊
Ohh hey love happy birthday ☺️😚🥳🥳❤️❤️and I will surely make a new ff from today I will start to work on a new ff but love I can't change tae's gender you know...🥺
Ok but top kook bottom tae
Name for new ff bloody daddy tae cross dresser and not human devil and angle please please please please please 🥺
@@sumanyadav5954 ok I will make a one like this bun 🤗
Why your reading half only?
What are you saying I don't understand bun can you say it again pls?🥺
Why in all the fanfic's tae is some stupid, always blushing, don't know how to defend himself or reject someone's offer adult man?
Just some tips on writing a fanfic you can use it, if you want to improve.
1. Learn english and how to use proper grammar (spelling mistakes are okay)
2. Don't always repeat the things and word or sentence over and over again
3. Make character act according to their age. If they are 25 make them act like a 25 year old not like some freaking kid. If a 25 year old character is childish, you can still make their personality and behaviour a bit childish without making whole person look like a 5 year old! You know.
4. Think before you write, means you should imagine what it would look like or feel like in real life. For example the scene when tae sat on jungkook's lap. Do you think that's mature for his age to act like that? Do you think it's professional for jungkook to allow it? They should have handled it with more maturity I think. Considering they are in public moreover in front of cameras. And are in a big professional celebration.
5. Don't repeat the character personality and behaviour. I have noticed in most of your video's, jungkook is always possessive and protective type who always just kiss tae's forehead 1000 times and smiles at every little thing tae does. Because if you repeat the same thing again and again it just gets boring. And Tae's character is always blushing and being shy at Every. Little. Thing. And he also gets emotional so damm easily. Like during jungkook's speech I don't think it was emotional moment. Even if jungkook thanked him and all the other things
It should've been a proud and happy moment. So I don't get why tae is teary eyed and RAN towards him. His character is always like a 5 year old kid who don't know anything. it gets super annoying and uninteresting. You should change the character's personality and behaviour.
6. Do research. Like if you're doing a CEO fanfic, you should research how CEO's work and how the office work and how the event, celebrations, meeting, projects are done. Of course not fully in depth research but just some important things and parts. So it can look professional, well researched and over all best.
7. Read other's fanfic's. So you can learn when people get bored and annoying. Which character's people like the most. You can also learn different styles of writings.
8. Look for criticizing comments. When you read your comments or other author's comments section you should read criticizing comments rather than praising comments. It can help you a lot to improve as it's not sugar coating.
9. Watch k-drama and bl-drama. See how character interact with each other. See how romance is does in the drama. See how the character develops.
For the moment that's all I can remember. If I remembered more important tips I'll tell you. Also I hope you read this as a criticism and not a hate fully comments, and really take this in to consideration and improve. I hope when I read you're fanfic's again you will be a little bit improved.
Best of luck 👍
Well ow..ow..ow...dude first very much thank you and second you don't have to tell me this tips cause I already know of it and other please don't write this big comment like a paragraph or something like that if you don't like it just say it in two or three words but not write this much big what ever and English is not my own language so please don't do it from the next time I hope you understand 🙂
(Sigh) As I thought someone who can't take criticism for their own good. First of all, I didn't force you to take the tips. I said 'you can use it IF you want to improve'. You can continue writing without improving. Second of all, if you know all this tips and many other, why don't you use it in your fanfic's. I have not seen a single video of yours in which the character are not the same as the previous ones or in which you use proper grammar and english or even some little improvement. Also I didn't say in my whole comment that I didn't like the video. you just assumed that on your own, why? Just cause I wrote some criticizing comment for your OWN improvement that you can't even take into consideration without thinking I hate your videos, WOW! And here I thought I'll find someone mature and understanding enough to take the criticism in a supporting way or in a good spirit without thinking i'm spreading hate. But alas no luck here.
Also just to let you know there are many taekook author's whose second language is english but they write just fine. Even though they learned english from scratch because they want to improve and they still make spelling mistakes ok! But who doesn't? So I don't think it's a barrier if you really want to improve! It will not only help you in videos but also in your school or college and even in future with your job or whatever. That's it! If you want to improve you can no one's stopping you and if you don't want to stay as you are. your choice!
P.S: English is not my first language🙃
@@Ether875 I agree with you
@@Ether875 first of all I understand your words second I have no time for follow your those tips bun and
Second why you guys always have to
Say us this long things...I have no hate towards you but dude please don't write this much damn long comment...you can just say it in three or five lines...and also I understand you...I just newly
Open this channel of mine and there is a good damn story of mine behind it..ahh how can I say what ever sorry for my rudeness just I want to say you that I am not a good author or
Something like that..🙂 andy writing skills are also not that good that you
Expect bun...so just ignore it..
@@bangtanclaimax8718Well...I hoped at least this time you'll give me a point to point answer to the points I made previously. As you didn't in my last two comments....but okay whatever! Why was I expecting. And If you REALLY UNDERSTAND, then good I guess. If you're really busy and these fanfics is your hobby than no need I suppose? Your first video was 10 months ago all most a year, so...new?also the story part I don't know how is that related to the conversation between us, but nonetheless good for you. I didn't find your comment rude or something like that. I guess, I was just annoyed as nowadays no one can take positive criticism, all of them just want the sugar coated praising without the harsh reality. And that's really bad because if they just want to hear the praises they can never improve or be better of a person/human being in any scenario that is! And you not being a good author, you'll just learn in time. You can also improve if you put some hours in it but as you said you are busy. I'm not even in beginner level but thanks for the compliment?! I suppose. About your third point I will talk now. I don't think what I wanted to say or said could be said in THREE or FIVE line. I think if you want the other person to understand you or see things from your perspective, you NEED to say or write in more details. Also your both comments are fairly long, and some of the other praises comments are also long you don't seem to have a problem there. You only said this to me why?!🤔 And if you hate long comments this much! You could've just replied with yes or no earlier. But okay! And lastly I said what I wanted to say. you can do whatever you want, I'm no one to force you.
But I still personally think you should learn english and grammar, not for the fanfic's but for your own good. I think your in school? So it would help you in studies and in future. But of course! the last say is yours. 😀
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@@bangtanclaimax8718 💜💜💜😘😘🥰🥰